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I am very grateful for you to review my essay, you really focused on the details and it's just awesomeee. You are really sweet and helpful. I will love to guided by you further. Thankyou so much Kailey>>>.
@@alwaysshrey OMGGGG I’m so happy that you found this video helpful. Even if it was one sentence I think it’s worth the time filming and editing this. I’m just so happy to have a subscriber like you 🥺❤️
time stamp: 00:00 intro 01:15 first essay 01:49 second essay 2:06 why first essay is better 03:27 grammar 03:43 strength 03:57 vulnerability 04:21 lovable character traits (getting readers to root for you) 05:06 mistakes (food for though) 05:27 deleting paragraph 06:12 second paragraph 06:30 third paragraph (show don't tell) 07:31 GO DEEPER 07:56 THE WHY 08:24 my suggestions 09:27 vague 09:56 transitions
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Your advice on crafting a strong essay is super insightful, Kailey. Thanks for offering free reviews too!
@@ridwanulhaque209 I’m glad my advice helped you!! ❤️
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I am very grateful for you to review my essay, you really focused on the details and it's just awesomeee. You are really sweet and helpful. I will love to guided by you further. Thankyou so much Kailey>>>.
@@alwaysshrey OMGGGG I’m so happy that you found this video helpful. Even if it was one sentence I think it’s worth the time filming and editing this. I’m just so happy to have a subscriber like you 🥺❤️
Thankyouuu soo muchhh!!!
time stamp:
00:00 intro
01:15 first essay
01:49 second essay
2:06 why first essay is better
03:27 grammar
03:43 strength
03:57 vulnerability
04:21 lovable character traits (getting readers to root for you)
05:06 mistakes (food for though)
05:27 deleting paragraph
06:12 second paragraph
06:30 third paragraph (show don't tell)
07:31 GO DEEPER
07:56 THE WHY
08:24 my suggestions
09:27 vague
09:56 transitions