Writing a personal statement

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  • Let us take you through the difficult world of writing your first personal statement. For more advice on how to write a personal statement and thinking about your future in general, visit www.ucas.com/progress

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  • @sinxalbo5630
    @sinxalbo5630 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1370

    No joke a girl at our school mentioned a book in her personal statement but didn't read it and her interviewer turned out to be the author of that book! Busted!

    • @caelenm1
      @caelenm1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +119

      You've posted this on another post you bleeding crackhead , I like it , relentless

    • @darthvader2994
      @darthvader2994 4 ปีที่แล้ว +31

      @@shammab8889 i saw someone else write it maybe it's just a copypasta

    • @sully555
      @sully555 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      What kind of coincidence is that lol

    • @KaizerBeatz-vf9wf
      @KaizerBeatz-vf9wf 4 ปีที่แล้ว +79

      She deserved to be turned down then. What kind of insecure prat pretends to read books they haven't? Leo Tostoy wrote about similar themes of insecurity in his sci-fi novel War and Peace

    •  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Kaizer.Beatz 😂 top comment this

  • @cannonball117
    @cannonball117 5 ปีที่แล้ว +678

    ngl the more you told me to get excited the more anxious i got

    • @isabellawall3241
      @isabellawall3241 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Eyyyyy where my anxiety buddies be at??

    • @m-dog5015
      @m-dog5015 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Same

    • @Dead_in__side__
      @Dead_in__side__ 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Literally

    • @daisymaisy1616
      @daisymaisy1616 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      Exactly, she's like you wanna do this and you're gonna thrive but I don't know what I wanna do and I'm not very good at anything.

  • @willienilliemcnamara1236
    @willienilliemcnamara1236 3 ปีที่แล้ว +166

    "Figure out what makes you stand out!"
    Ever since I was a child.....

  • @peregrine5533
    @peregrine5533 3 ปีที่แล้ว +173

    “Don’t waffle, don’t be arrogant, don’t use flowery language but DO bullshit about how terribly excited you are about studying an exams!!” Oh joy

    • @akizuki2971
      @akizuki2971 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      yeah... thats the spirit! lmao

    • @lordgustav6227
      @lordgustav6227 ปีที่แล้ว

      "But DO bullshit about how terribly excited you are studying an exams" 😂😂

  • @keb82
    @keb82 4 ปีที่แล้ว +332

    Exactly what I was looking for, thank you.
    -A stressed Uni Applicant

    • @emilycarter8922
      @emilycarter8922 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You might want to check this out th-cam.com/video/5ZUgT5cgTg0/w-d-xo.html

    • @KoenigOne
      @KoenigOne 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      did you get into the uni bro

  • @peregrine5533
    @peregrine5533 3 ปีที่แล้ว +54

    Gonna be real, I just want to study at uni. I’m not thrilled and excited and overjoyed about doing something I probably have to do to get a job now, this whole thing kind of just seems like bullshit. A helpful video in telling me what unis give a shit about, but the entire personal statement thing feels like bullshit and just feels like being overly positive about something I feel like I’m obligated to do.

    • @ems9445
      @ems9445 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      same way i’m feeling. i need to have one for sixth form but i don’t have any plans for my future. i only chose the subjects i want to do because i’m good at them and enjoy them. but how am i supposed to go on about them to make it into a paragraph. also i’m not very good at wording so this just feels so panic inducing. i’m not excited, i don’t have a reason tbh why i picked the sixth form i picked, probs because it’s just closer to me, and hobbies? i don’t get how they have any relevance but okay

    • @WillowSeren
      @WillowSeren ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Going into higher education with a view like that won't make you happy, and it won't make your abilities stand out. There are alternative routes into a career that don't include studying something you dislike for 4 years. If you _are_ going to get a job, you should look for something you love. There is literally a whole world of work out there for you to choose from. You don't have to settle for second-best.

    • @beanie2571
      @beanie2571 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      exactly! what tf do you mean why am i excited to do the course? im not? i need a job and thats it lmao

  • @aminur14
    @aminur14 4 ปีที่แล้ว +213

    "forget your friends"
    me: What friends ? 😐

  • @prodcorreikamir
    @prodcorreikamir 3 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    The only thing I got from this was “Verbal Diarrhoea”

  • @emiramosaco7268
    @emiramosaco7268 4 ปีที่แล้ว +51

    I am 14 but getting ready and studying hard to apply one day to college. Helped a lot

    • @emiramosaco7268
      @emiramosaco7268 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Papa Stalin Thank you

    • @kikethewhat9474
      @kikethewhat9474 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Damn enjoy early highschool as much as you can 😂

    • @isabellawall3241
      @isabellawall3241 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Keep going, you can get there!!

    • @noornazir7620
      @noornazir7620 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      thats great earlier the better

  • @sippin1877
    @sippin1877 3 ปีที่แล้ว +113

    This shits so annoying
    “Hi I don’t really care about this course or about going to university but I’m going to do it because my parents want me to and I want to be able to make a decent wage in the future and get a job , I play games and do stuff but it has absolutely nothing to do with my course”

    • @jinorism
      @jinorism 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      ME. I just want to go play Genshin Impact and watch anime but my parents are making me apply for a law course I have no interest in and barely care about, just so I can work my arse off so I just barely survive in the future.

    • @kajab855
      @kajab855 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@jinorism be realistic in your life, do something not for yourself but for the society at least. Being lawyer is always been amazing, though I am not pursuing law myself but believe me lawyers and judges can make the society a better place to live in. Watching cartoon and animes won't do you any good. These are the creation of humans and think for the moment that you are living in these human made fantasies. You would be either in late teens or early twenties and believe me this is time for character building and do, desire, pursue something that makes the lives of others and your's better. However, it's not necessarily be a degree holder from some university but do something productive; such as learning skills like programing, digital marketing etc. to make your life better. Respect your parents because they have experienced life and saw the ups and down in their lives and therefore they always think for your good. I am writing this long essay instead of writing my own personal statement with 3 days remaining for deadline, so better bother your a$$e now than ever and try to alleviate the addiction of this sort of cartoon, animes etc. My humble advice.

    • @kajab855
      @kajab855 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@harrison9861 if you read my comment properly where I mentioned that being lawyer isn't necessary but I emphasized on rather wasting time on cartoons and animes, one should consume time on learning something new or something that one is interested in. Though I don't value degree much but I love to be an economist.

    • @albiex6315
      @albiex6315 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      @@kajab855 what you've said is completely arbitrary to your experiences in life. Let people live how they want to live, if you want "consume time on learning something new" then go do that. If my guy wants to watch anime and play games let him. Don't try and hold people to your ego. If I want to cover myself in Vaseline and lick doorknobs you sure as hell aren't stopping me. Check yourself. My humble advise

    • @NA-hk4rm
      @NA-hk4rm 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@albiex6315 can I add you on something that was amazing!

  • @MunkyChunk
    @MunkyChunk 5 ปีที่แล้ว +76

    Watching this despite having submitted my application already 😂

    • @KaizerBeatz-vf9wf
      @KaizerBeatz-vf9wf 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      thats like me watchin Mr Gruff GCSE exam prep vids to curse bad luck on the year 11 commenters

  • @yeemotrash3952
    @yeemotrash3952 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Excellent learnt a lot, enjoyed the visual cues tips that was insightful thank you so much.

  • @sonyalambcomer1369
    @sonyalambcomer1369 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you. Thank you. And thank you again! This video help spark something in me when you started talking about say something exciting about me.

  • @Thecautionrecording
    @Thecautionrecording 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    This was SO helpful! Thanks!

  • @zetyaziz6400
    @zetyaziz6400 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you for the helpful tips

  • @naomicoleman7996
    @naomicoleman7996 3 ปีที่แล้ว +34

    "Forget your friends"
    Me: *Dang Gina*

    • @isabellawall3241
      @isabellawall3241 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Nice B99 reference :D (I hope that's what it was otherwise I'd look rlly stupid haha)

  • @summerscoming123
    @summerscoming123 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Killed it!

  • @shotspurfect6738
    @shotspurfect6738 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Why do I feel like that I just became double anxious after this video

  • @dajour21
    @dajour21 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    thank you so much

  • @adiletdaniyarov5737
    @adiletdaniyarov5737 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Far and away the best

  • @SohailKhan-mk8zh
    @SohailKhan-mk8zh 6 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Very helpful

  • @justsomeguywithoutapenis1133
    @justsomeguywithoutapenis1133 3 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Chat all the sh** you want, but this video was absoulutely amazing and useful. Thank you very much! (Trying to get into King Ed's Stourbridge in here, wondering why this is so important when I and most applicants did well in GCSE's. It's just stress I don't need rn ngl...)

    • @thegodofflashiness4390
      @thegodofflashiness4390 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm currently applying to there and I'm struggling to write a personal statement

    • @khvlil6803
      @khvlil6803 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      That sixth form is horrendous but good luck

    • @justsomeguywithoutapenis1133
      @justsomeguywithoutapenis1133 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@khvlil6803 I went to the stourbridge college version m8, it's just as crp tho lol

    • @khvlil6803
      @khvlil6803 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@justsomeguywithoutapenis1133 are you onna bout KEST Birmingham? My friends have said they weren’t supported there and that teachers didn’t give a shit about you or your mental health

    • @justsomeguywithoutapenis1133
      @justsomeguywithoutapenis1133 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@khvlil6803 no its a college in stourbridge, not five ways, my friend goes to the one ur talking about tho.?

  • @binteriaz1970
    @binteriaz1970 7 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I was looking thing like this. I loved it!!! awesome :)

  • @deez6296
    @deez6296 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    No but how do I start it, what should I open with?

  • @skiiiye298
    @skiiiye298 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    appreciate it

  • @neptgem_1398
    @neptgem_1398 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Team work that still exists every one I've met in sports are nothing but jerks who have caused me to punch walls through anger

  • @elizabethcarroll3364
    @elizabethcarroll3364 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Hello, I'm writing on behalf of ILC, a distance learning organization from Ontario, Canada. We'd like to include this video in one of our courses. Would there be a good email to reach you at?

  • @CodyMellor
    @CodyMellor 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    what is the structure of a personal statement

  • @iyedtheboss7372
    @iyedtheboss7372 ปีที่แล้ว

    what if you’re not sure what studies you wanna do at uni?

  • @user-mk8nk5hb1f
    @user-mk8nk5hb1f ปีที่แล้ว

    Thaaaaank u💓

  • @lisonghao5833
    @lisonghao5833 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am wondering whether requesting my father to give me a position in his company is a part of honour and privilege because the law in our country does not allow me to work unless I am 18 years old.😭

  • @oblivionfang2403
    @oblivionfang2403 3 ปีที่แล้ว +31

    Isn't very helpful lol. Just crammed a load of shit into my head and now I'm even more confused

    • @AL-tr7vj
      @AL-tr7vj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Since you wrote this a while ago, I assume you managed to write a personal statement?? How did it go??????

  • @Djofminecraftia
    @Djofminecraftia 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    What makes you stand out? Idk b I can roll real good and eye out a line easy

    • @GeeseAreJustBastardizedSwans
      @GeeseAreJustBastardizedSwans 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I have good hand I co-ordination and a fascination for plants I mean technically the truth

  • @alecwhitehawk5449
    @alecwhitehawk5449 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Thanks Mam

    • @kieranfnr
      @kieranfnr ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Mr Whitehawk

    • @alecwhitehawk5449
      @alecwhitehawk5449 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@kieranfnr how did you find me😳

    • @kieranfnr
      @kieranfnr ปีที่แล้ว

      @@alecwhitehawk5449 Procrastinating writing my personal statement in college rn and scrolling through yt comment section while my teacher left the class

    • @alecwhitehawk5449
      @alecwhitehawk5449 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@kieranfnr 😂😂 I see

    • @kieranfnr
      @kieranfnr ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@alecwhitehawk5449 pleasure meeting you Mr Whitehawk

  • @stillwithjas
    @stillwithjas 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    sometimes you get inspiration from your friends tho-

  • @loskrem
    @loskrem 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I'm getting so anxious omg

    • @emilycarter8922
      @emilycarter8922 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You might wanna check this out th-cam.com/video/5ZUgT5cgTg0/w-d-xo.html

  • @dibrisco4694
    @dibrisco4694 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    how am I meant to write essays at uni if I can't even write a personal statement :(

  • @Hypnopotimus27
    @Hypnopotimus27 6 ปีที่แล้ว +51

    This is a comment

    • @haqhaziq
      @haqhaziq 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      This is an edited reply

    • @mohamedessam2906
      @mohamedessam2906 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      @@haqhaziq this is a reply to a reply

    • @inhort8644
      @inhort8644 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @Mohamed Essam this is a reply of a reply of a reply

    • @haqhaziq
      @haqhaziq 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@mohamedessam2906 U sure?

    • @elizabethmcglynn1797
      @elizabethmcglynn1797 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Papa Stalin this is a reply to a reply to a reply to a reply to a reply....

  • @m-dog5015
    @m-dog5015 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    What the hell I wrote a paragraph and thought I’d watch this to see if it’s okay and she says to write multiple paragraphs

  • @JackoStudios
    @JackoStudios ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am a person. That was a statement.

  • @FLAMEalan
    @FLAMEalan 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi what do I do with grade Es :/

  • @kiarashkhayyat4773
    @kiarashkhayyat4773 ปีที่แล้ว

    👍

  • @kingxxgalaxy2949
    @kingxxgalaxy2949 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Me because I have to do this for school work but I really don’t because my dad owns his own company and I already work for him and I’m already good at the job but I still have to do this because if I fail I’ll still get yelled at even tho my dad said he wants me to work for him lmao 💀👁👄👁

    • @cooper3869
      @cooper3869 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      That's funny ahahah

  • @fahadrehman9950
    @fahadrehman9950 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    can you asses my essay?

  • @fadingnoodle
    @fadingnoodle 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    God I just wanna make music not this bullshit, but I’m going to college to be safe, I got wanna do this shit man fuck being a doctor, a lawyer, etc. Only making 100k a year and being in debt

  • @waterlemon5434
    @waterlemon5434 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    2 days to go . SHIT

  • @ohno6044
    @ohno6044 ปีที่แล้ว

    im so screwed hahaha x

  • @Wondermass
    @Wondermass 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

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  • @Sa_mmy-sr4fi
    @Sa_mmy-sr4fi ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Lol❤❤❤❤❤

  • @hxruna4256
    @hxruna4256 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    thank u ma nigga
    here take an n pass u need it more than i do

  • @bo61
    @bo61 3 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    This isnt very helpful

  • @michaelcooper2383
    @michaelcooper2383 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Her voice is very irritating I can’t bear this sorry sir

  • @MrAlex3461
    @MrAlex3461 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    she is hard to listen to

    • @sadiesof
      @sadiesof 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      No she's not? She's being enthusiastic

  • @die9904
    @die9904 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    its just doomed