Wow! Made my eyes leak! A couple of things to note; if Sarah had a car, why did she struggle with a bus journey at the beginning when she went to submit her resume? It doesn’t detract from the story which is beautifully written. Several mispronunciations but, again, it doesn’t matter. Thank you. You have no idea what pleasure your work brings to me. xx 🎉
When you say everything about yourself in the letter then what remains for the interview? And if you can take the letter in person why not just go and do it verbally?
A fascinating story however, too many flaws I would have liked to hear why Emma died and how Sarah dealt with her job and another thing Sarah wrote an application was given the job without an interview how is this possible. A story have to be real different level of people listens to these stories I personally don't mind finishing or even fill in the blanks this is not one of them even the old mn that gave Sarah the Coldwell's info to reavh them is forgotten about and a well thought out story. 😍 As usual the Narrator did a splendid job with what she was given.
Thank you for the pointers! I agree with your comments. Are you interested in helping me edit stories sometimes by any chance? Send me an email if yes lifenarrated_feature@proton.me
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Beautiful story. Thanks.
What a wonderful story ❤❤❤ Thank you for sharing
Thanks for listening
What a heartwarming narrative. A family made up in unfamiliar territory.
How humbling
What an amazing story ❤❤ loved it.❤❤❤
Always loved your stories ❤️ ♥️. Thank you
It's a heart warming story I love it🎉
So beautiful and heart filled❤
I was teary eyed reading this. I love all the stories here thats why i subscribed...stories done by professionals not by newbies
Thank you!
Your stories are always so beautiful thank you
Thank you!
All is well that ends well.
Wow! Made my eyes leak! A couple of things to note; if Sarah had a car, why did she struggle with a bus journey at the beginning when she went to submit her resume? It doesn’t detract from the story which is beautifully written. Several mispronunciations but, again, it doesn’t matter. Thank you. You have no idea what pleasure your work brings to me. xx 🎉
Superb! I was hooked to the story the entire time 🙂
Beautiful and Sad 😢
I like this story.
Yes
Wonderful story ❤
Many many thanks
Beautiful story ❤️ but didn't say how her sister died
When you say everything about yourself in the letter then what remains for the interview? And if you can take the letter in person why not just go and do it verbally?
A fascinating story however, too many flaws I would have liked to hear why Emma died and how Sarah dealt with her job and another thing Sarah wrote an application was given the job without an interview how is this possible. A story have to be real different level of people listens to these stories I personally don't mind finishing or even fill in the blanks this is not one of them even the old mn that gave Sarah the Coldwell's info to reavh them is forgotten about and a well thought out story. 😍 As usual the Narrator did a splendid job with what she was given.
Thank you for the pointers! I agree with your comments. Are you interested in helping me edit stories sometimes by any chance? Send me an email if yes lifenarrated_feature@proton.me
So did Sarah go back to cleaning their home to support her family?
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Why is she taking the bus if she has a car......how did Emma die....does Sarah still work at the manner