she died because she was a dam fool,but great horror ..... she playing sherlock holmes n leaving doors open after 2 scary incidents .. umm hell naw.....working night shift automatic door unlock please.... n once i couldnt open it ...run...
I'm going to have to agree with you on that one! If she locked that back door and brought the keys when she took the trash out, none of that would have happened. I kept saying who the eff takes that long to find the key to their car. Even if you're scared, you know which one the car key is!!! She kept fumbling around with every single one of them lol
This was actually pretty decent, I liked the shot at the beginning of the girl running the counter and clocking out and the keys getting blood on them was cool too
Uhh you really need to redo the audio mix - when people speak it's way, way too soft and when we hear either there's music or jumpscare, it's suddenly high. Pump up the volume for all the dialogue and you should be good. An imbalance audio mix is very/ too common among indie horror shorts. I recommend editing with headphones, never with actual speakers. PS: Was a little upset that Haunted Hippie wasn't the main star lol
Loved it. Loved the cinematography, pacing, story but what happened to the voice track? Seriously, remix it and upload it again. You will get even more likes. Nice job, regardless. You production value keeps getting better on every film.
Just came here, after watching the Haunted Hippie video. This was a good fun watch, just before my bedtime. My only criticism is that I really had to crank the volume on my tv, to hear what people were saying. I presume that’s that’s just something to do with the file/ how it’s uploaded to youtube. Other than that, I look forward to seeing more 👍🏻.
Who tf stands at their car with their back turned as a psychotic maniac approaches and proceeds to smash their heads off the car window????? who??? normal people would flee, screaming in terror....
I love horror movies but that's not because I don't know what most of them are. This had all the ingredients of a professionally done but bad horror short with a creative team that could potentially go on to make feature length bad horror movies.
Was there a reason for her car key to suddenly fail to open the door? Not that we saw. Would've been less of a plot hole if she'd just been caught. Otherwise, good job. Creepy atmosphere throughout. Think I would've just come in early and cleaned. Too much vulnerability at night, especially for girls.
This is an inspirational masterpiece of modern horror, I hope there is a sequel made . I would love to see the follow up story to this, the "Eerie Girl" rocks 🤟
great acting set and monster .stupid actions leaving the door propped open to take the trash to the other side of the building .as well as closing alone , though ive done that, not the door closing alone lol, i guess this was paranormal because it was out side killing the blonde when the door was shut .how it got in had to be not norm..i would think natural would be while fighting with keys to look to the bar ,but panic had set in .she could have given up and just ran the thing moved slow .any way the main actress was very good , needs to go hollywood i wish her well
Stupid should of called the cops and locked herself in, after the loud banging and the writing on the window. All that ground and she trips over the girls body.
Loved this film!!! Very good 👍 no offense but typical horror movie, but very well done, can see the talent with this crew! I do like not using the typical jump scare, much appreciated 👍
This was well done but the scary ghost girl with long dark hair has been over done. I never have found that type of character scary and I've seen it too any times.
NEVER LEAVE THE BACKDOOR, OR ANY DOOR OPEN WHEN EMPTYING OUT THE TRASH. ALWAYS LOCK THE DOOR BEHIND YOU AND TAKE THE KEY!
she died because she was a dam fool,but great horror ..... she playing sherlock holmes n leaving doors open after 2 scary incidents .. umm hell naw.....working night shift automatic door unlock please.... n once i couldnt open it ...run...
I'm going to have to agree with you on that one! If she locked that back door and brought the keys when she took the trash out, none of that would have happened. I kept saying who the eff takes that long to find the key to their car. Even if you're scared, you know which one the car key is!!! She kept fumbling around with every single one of them lol
Yes because demonic ghosts can’t get through doors that are closed and locked!!
who knew opening a car was such an arduous task...
If I heard and noise that like,I'M OUT OF HERE!! Screw the cleaning!!!
Looked good but she had 1 key n couldnt get the car door open lol
Kylie Johnson/Haunted Hippie as Eerie Girl! 👍👍🙌 🙌 👏 👏
I personally think she should've played the main girl lol
@@plisskenetic I agree
Good music
Working "alone " at night would be a. NO for me .....but I guess someone has to do it love the movie
This was actually pretty decent, I liked the shot at the beginning of the girl running the counter and clocking out and the keys getting blood on them was cool too
Uhh you really need to redo the audio mix - when people speak it's way, way too soft and when we hear either there's music or jumpscare, it's suddenly high. Pump up the volume for all the dialogue and you should be good. An imbalance audio mix is very/ too common among indie horror shorts. I recommend editing with headphones, never with actual speakers.
PS: Was a little upset that Haunted Hippie wasn't the main star lol
C grade budget short movie...lol cant expect much 😆
@@christianwag3015 Nah it actually costs nothing to just adjust the audio levels / mix lol. I'm an editor I can tell u that for sure
Good story. Agree with the sound suggestions
I’m hearing impaired and would really appreciate closed captions if it’s possible . I love these shorts but my neighbors need their sleep 😊
She was really safe inside....but one bloody that dumping mistake finally made her a fool of herself...and she lost her precious life.
Continue making and more viewers will be getting in ! rated 9.5/10
Homegirl just couldn’t close the coffee shop in peace. 🤦♂️ Love you Jared and Kalene. Great film!
Bet the creepy lady wanted a coffee also, but because the store was closed the murdering happened.
This is awesome!
Really well directed, acted, and shot!
I'm sleeping with the lights on tonight! 👏👏👏
Lol
😂😂😂😂lol
OMG. I watched it last night and didn't know Kylie was involved! I love her channel Haunted Hippie.
Especially the shot of the intruder standing in front of the glass door.
So now not only can we not sleep in peace, but now we can't even close a coffee shop? Demons are disrespectful nowadays smh.
This was amazing!!! Really creepy!!!! 🥺❤️
This was so fun!
This was very creepy & horrifying at the same time. 🤯😱
✅️
is it only me who barely hear the voice but very loudly other sounds? Nevertheless, first half good the second part pretty bad.
The color grading looks great 👌
Holy shit...that was freaking awesome! Literally had the creepy vibe down from beginning to end! Great job!!! 👍👍💯
Probably, worst audio sound ever. Please fix 😁
That was really good! Haunted Hippie was really creepy!
Loved it. Loved the cinematography, pacing, story but what happened to the voice track? Seriously, remix it and upload it again. You will get even more likes. Nice job, regardless. You production value keeps getting better on every film.
Thanks for pointing out the voice track. That's why I down voted it. Impossible to hear the lead and the villain even though I had it cranked up
Retail truly do be this horrific 👏😭
Woooo Epic job Kylie! AKA HauntedHippie
Oh, Hell No! Dumping The Trash At Night All Alone. Leave It For The Morning Shift.
Always in horror or any crime related movies, car key never works, phone never works or battery is down, same old bull shit. Boring to the core.
Out of all people she attacks minimum wage barista girl. Some entities are just as$holes. Go haunt some wealthy lawyer.
All this fear could be avoided if these people would arm themselves. Then and only then would see these types of robberies decline.
The story is even after a wellknown Lover girl rediscovers herself, her Word and for why her work is mercilessly asking to be busted open in Peace ..
Good movie horor
Do you realize how completely pointless your movie is?
I was hoping she off got away a nice ending for change 😢🥺
This looks good closed for the night the shop
Just came here, after watching the Haunted Hippie video. This was a good fun watch, just before my bedtime. My only criticism is that I really had to crank the volume on my tv, to hear what people were saying. I presume that’s that’s just something to do with the file/ how it’s uploaded to youtube. Other than that, I look forward to seeing more 👍🏻.
One of the best shots I've seen.
The movie was good. camera angle, atmosphere, clarity are fine. I think it is well thought that the voices of the characters are low.😻😈
Her phone was in her pocket. Y didn’t she call for help?! Other than that, it was great!!
Nice... this was seriously creepy and awesome 💀💀💀
Who tf stands at their car with their back turned as a psychotic maniac approaches and proceeds to smash their heads off the car window????? who??? normal people would flee, screaming in terror....
excellent. just mentioned to my best friend i really need a good new video. and well here it is. keep it
up.
Bro I’m obsessed with the way Kylie portrayed eerie girl
The key fob would have saved her 😐🤣
I love horror movies but that's not because I don't know what most of them are.
This had all the ingredients of a professionally done but bad horror short with a creative team that could potentially go on to make feature length bad horror movies.
Was there a reason for her car key to suddenly fail to open the door? Not that we saw.
Would've been less of a plot hole if she'd just been caught.
Otherwise, good job. Creepy atmosphere throughout.
Think I would've just come in early and cleaned.
Too much vulnerability at night, especially for girls.
Very well put together and I really enjoyed the camera work, Awesome!
Wow. Zero plot, no connection between scenes, and the audio mixing was absolutely horrible, sounded like the dialogue mistakenly got turned down 10db.
Nice ..
Such a horror movie , I really like it. Thanks for such a good production.
Jared im loving the cinematography.
Almost every frame is a painting.
Very good. Some volume problems however. Overall beautifully done
This is an inspirational masterpiece of modern horror, I hope there is a sequel made . I would love to see the follow up story to this, the "Eerie Girl" rocks 🤟
great acting set and monster .stupid actions leaving the door propped open to take the trash to the other side of the building .as well as closing alone , though ive done that, not the door closing alone lol, i guess this was paranormal because it was out side killing the blonde when the door was shut .how it got in had to be not norm..i would think natural would be while fighting with keys to look to the bar ,but panic had set in .she could have given up and just ran the thing moved slow .any way the main actress was very good , needs to go hollywood i wish her well
Well done 👏
Not ok! So when can we let our heroine win? Check out the short one "Nice to finally meet you".
If l had been this girl , l would have escape running to the street left
terrible sound mixing - dont't care what the movie was about
🙄🙄
Perfectly creepy 😳 I love it.
This was great! It totally creeped me out!
Moral of the story… Always renew the battery in your key fob😂
hm, I'd like to try a thin mint mocha
too much bacground noise movie kill
Never say "hello" twice - hang up.
OMG loved this awesome 👌
Pretty good short! I enjoyed it!!
Creepy!!!! Good short movie!!!!!!
7:18 Is that a third leg or am I trippin....
What a splitting headache
Very predictable.
Love this ☺️
Not bad! I dug the cinematography and the concept. Good work all around.
Stupid should of called the cops and locked herself in, after the loud banging and the writing on the window. All that ground and she trips over the girls body.
Loved this film!!! Very good 👍 no offense but typical horror movie, but very well done, can see the talent with this crew! I do like not using the typical jump scare, much appreciated 👍
This was well done but the scary ghost girl with long dark hair has been over done. I never have found that type of character scary and I've seen it too any times.
next time plz make sure we could hear, ihad my sound all the way up could barely hear the talking
ATERRADORA y ESPELUZNANTE el FILME!!! 🖤🖤🖤💯👌🖤🖤🖤
🏪💈🌃🌃😁🤔🤔
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️✔
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Wheat kind of films do you work on?
Beautiful work, guys!
Nice work y’all 🔥👏
sound is bad
ｐｒｏｍｏｓｍ
Omg
She is beautiful 😍
Loved the short feature by the way! I have a serious inquiry and would like to know is there a business email we can chat through?
ashestoashesproductions@gmail.com , We look forward to hearing from you!
Great story, but please shut the door, or the evil dead will come after you. 🥹🥹