Spoken Word Poetry - Life goes on
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 4 พ.ย. 2017
- Hey guys! I hope you like this video. It´s my first here on TH-cam, so be nice. :)
I wrote this text. It´s important for me to never give up!
See you soon :)
Emily
Music: • Sad Piano Music (THIS ...
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I love that there’s no music in the beginning and then it builds. Very powerful. I’m trying to get better with my spoken word.
Same here.
Hi Emily. I was touched by just listening to your beautiful words. Spoken poetry indeed is a retelling of the story of our lives. A life that is painful, but still there is still hope to move on and realize that God is greater than us. So, c'est la vie. Life is still beautiful after all. Forget the past and move on.
how beautifully you have written it and with your voice every person can feel for you're saying.
True words hurt us , because of our dids
God bless u 🙏🙏🙏🙏
Wow. Just. Wow. Thank you for your heart. To know I am not alone.. feels graceful. Healing. Pure.
Alive ....
*just wondering how bts' life goes on would go well with this in the end*-
U literally made me to cry😭😭😭
I am an avid #MentalHealthAwareness advocate and award-winning spoken word performer, and I love this so much. I travel the country trying to bring that awareness on stages, in classrooms, hospitals, and on my TH-cam channel, so I get excited when I see other advocates. 💙❤
Wow, A.S. Minor. I am also a psychologist and an advocate of mental Awareness. Life is indeed more beautiful out there. I will also follow you.
Your writing literally changed my life tysm tysm
Omg! I could kiss you! That was beautiful!! I'm impressed writer your work is out standing,! Brillant, moving, warm , sensitive, thanks for the love in this message. ❤👍👍😘
what you did was very emotional and I cried while listening because you said life is right even though there are many sorrows and failures that go through our lives we still have to move on
I just love the way you laid out your video!! Very beautifully done ,sad and inspiring .And the song you picked is one of my favorites on TH-cam !! I love Jorge Mendez music!! Keep up the beautiful creations!!!
This is so heart-touching, you're such an inspiration! Keep going love x
This is a Real masterpiece
A powerful piece 💚
Wow!! I have no words 😭😭. I connected with the poem.
Life goes either in positive way or negative way That depends on your Thoughts....
i really need these words. thank you so much for sharing.💖🤟
woooaaahhh. i love it.
What beautiful content. well said and so stunning.
it's so heart-touching and your voice imma cry 😢
I have liked it and am expecting more from you dear, thanks for that work.
Wow! You are amazing, I really needed this. Thanks for sharing💋
Cindi C Thank you !
Wow this is great!
AMAZING !! Keep it up !!
Exactly True!
Amazing work 💖
Nearly made me cry
It takes courage, sincerity´and care to write such poetry. Your voice and the way you recite it even added to the quality of your poem. It made it more original, more real, more human. This was not only your poem, but the heart talk of many. Thank you for being the voice of many.
nasrin bird Thank you, it feels so good to hear this!
This is everything. You're an amazing poet, keep making more content.
Kozmic Thank you so much! It’s good to hear that.
You have all the time in the world to not be productive, but it's only when you stop being productive that you truly know what you want in this world. Be the voice for what others want to say, and others will speak to you so you can Yell them out for the world to hear! lol Cheesy but there's a meaning in there somewhere.
Kozmic I think I know what you mean!
That is so well said and awesome. Life goes on for sure
Joanna Wofford, some knowledge, watch this poetry too if u like once findable as Dreamer - A Visual Poetry - Travel & Poetry Awaj !
I love this. It is making me cry in the inside
Thank you that was beautiful and painful and everything I needed
so great lines,,,very superb
Hi! I'm a fan of your voice🤗
This is so beautiful and hits home 🤍
Thank you so much, means a lot. 🙏🏼
Touched
Yes you are right
Wow your delivery is soooo emotional and touching i felt this right through my soul. Amazing work Emily keep this going.
Thank you so much for your kind words!
Your welcome. Your very talented
Priscilla Joseph Diary of a Poet what is the title of the music background?..
"grab your own things and try to get rid" awesome not many people know to do that
Also I would like to tell you that you're on point with your piano playing and vocals
Very profound, intense, and inspiring words! I also loved how you presented the poem with such emotion and vulnerability in your voice; the hesitation and pauses occur just at the right moments, and the melancholy music perfectly complements the piece. Outstanding and beautiful work! Super like 294! You're extremely talented! Best regards, Michelle (P.S. I already signed up for you a few days ago.)
Forever MPH Thank you so much! When I read comments like yours it just makes me so happy! Thanks!
Cokg
life goes on like this again
Wow amazing 👌
delhi vlogger, watch a poetic video if u like It's my sky at th-cam.com/video/3nnNJYHi9Vs/w-d-xo.html !
This video came up randomly on my screen, and that's why i find myself here.
Emily, it's not enough to tell you that this piece was well written, well spoken (and it was), because all that means is that someone got entertained for about 4 minutes, wanted to clear their conscience, and having written a comment, forgot what you presented here.
You're correct: This is not interested in the painful and not so pretty side of us; they don't care because each and everyone is hurting, some more than i do, others much less.
The question is: What will you do about it, and for that matter, what will i do about it?
Yeah, we're all those things you illustrated, that each and every one of us wants to keep in the shadows, lest others see those facets of us, and choose to reject us.
Someone called Jesus was despised, rejected of men, HE was a man of sorrows. But HE completed HIS task in spite of the rejection, both past, current and future.
You don't have to remain in those blemishes, you can walk a different path. And yeah, there will be that voice that reminds you, just as it reminds me about what has happened, but you can still overcome it.
Overcome it.
Spoken Word Illusions Wow. I don’t know what to say. Thank you for your kind and lovely words and your deep thoughts.
i forgot that we've never formally met.
my primary reason for leaving a comment is to let the author of the video know that i viewed the video in question (after all, i upload videos, and wonder many times whether anybody has seen them). i don't know about other people (particularly those who function in spoken word), but i don't seek the applause, but only to reach somebody; give them something to ponder.
To simply tell you "Cool video!" is kind of like saying "Thank you for entertaining me.", when you're looking to do more than just entertain. So i sought to answer with specifics, and sometimes i forget to make clear of what parts of the video i did like.
What i liked about your videos i've seen thus far is first and foremost, they were original, not just something mimicked from someone you admire. Second, your verse is current, not from the past, and therefore, third: Your message hit home. Not only could i relate to it, but it kept me alert from beginning to end.
Because you replied, i now can return to the channel and view your other videos. If the rest are anything like the two i viewed, i will eventually subscribe to this channel.
Don't change who you are; i like these facets of you, even if others consider them less than pretty.
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I love you!
very nice english spoken word poetry...I had been write on an spoken word peotry....but in tagalog..
Thank you for this it really mean a lot to me.
BANTEI K. KONGOR Good to hear that!
This is too powerful that I cried...and also the music as well is too sad...pls tell me the song
"Don't blame other people for what they did, grab your own things and try to get rid." That was the line that really got to me. This was an amazing piece and the way you performed it just made it so much better. I loved the way it made me feel ... emotional. Well done.
Thank you so much! I appreciate that! :)
thanks
How I feel about having to confess that I did fully believe I had move on because the beautiful woman that I promised that I give you a few years to get your life where you want it and where we both need for us. It's hard to deal with depression living in regret and only in hindsight do you see where you went wrong. For myself it was realizing that I was holding so much hurt sadness pain from not just my mistakes but the person that I love mistakes with us that isn't living at all but now I can smile again because for the first times in quite awhile I have alot to be grateful for a bunch of new friends and yes even possibly family. But I always want my most beautiful to know how proud I am of her and how much I do truly love her. I miss you am very excited for our new start
Promises are air to me. But I love the truth in having better an new. I have been turned inside out .i f try not to focused on my past but slowly I try to see where I see myself.. This is kid a hard for me because I never think in future I lived more in the now. But that u for this I can focused more on getting better
You made me cry 😭😭😭
Hope your doing well ❤️
😢💔life is tough
Im too much connected on all words😭😭😭😭😭😭
Hey i loved this poetry. Keep up the good work 👍👍
Can i use your words in my video?
Thank you so much! Yes, of course, if you link me ;)
Damnn I can relate
Hi, watch a poetic video if u like It's my sky at th-cam.com/video/3nnNJYHi9Vs/w-d-xo.html !
I am present in the souls of the miserable souls
I LOVE YOUR POEM!!! What’s the background music?
Thank you so much!! You can find the link in the description:)
wow. I have no words left.
I was wondering if you'd like to use some of my pieces as background music if you think it fits?
bena's music thank you a lot! Maybe I’ll use some of it, thanks for the offer.
I like to show happy side of
Here everyone wants to overcome depression but what the hell is wrong with me ?why i want my depression back?why i want that feeling back when i successfully overcame it😭
I love you with all my heart
Is this it are u pushing me bcz u are my happines but if that is what u want well never expect this ending so sad 🌻
God Bless, Romans 3:23
“For all have sinned, and come short of the glory of God;”
Romans 10:9
“That if thou shalt confess with thy mouth the Lord Jesus, and shalt believe in thine heart that God hath raised him from the dead, thou shalt be saved.”
hello .. can i use this spoken poetry ? i want my students to perform
this .. hoping you reply
Of course you can do that!
Where are you now?
I haven't the faintest clue wtf is going on.. but alas I get reset every day, so what u say today only makes sense in the words it was written..
pa shout out po
May I know what's the background music? 😭
There’s a link in the description:)
Hi, can I use this on my English Project?
Of course :)
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Ate can i request? HAHAHAHA gawan mo naman po ako spoken poetry 😔😊
Lyrics please
"NO IT 'DOESN'T "!!!..
Watch the cartoon of adventures of tintin.
I want to be happy with you
Your voice is like Jennie from blackpink
ang galing in english(so better)hahahahಠ_ಠ
You make it prove to me that the reality who you are. If I give you a truly loved that is your reply for me .it was last night. I will make it promise. I can lived alone ever since
Ok bye
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