I feel like Arthur as the “first character” was a good idea in my mind. It’s nice that it’s not the main cast and it strays away from that. And I’m glad that people are starting to do that.
I actually wrote this story, it was really my first attempt at making one and I'm just surprised it did so well for what it is. I definitely agree with the criticisms since I wasn't really trying that much. I might continue this, I just wasn't feeling motivated at the end but now I kind of want to revisit it and finish the story. Thanks for checking it out though! I actually really enjoyed hearing narration over it!
Y'know, for a first go at story writing, I'll give you credit. It's pretty good. Though, I'd urge you to move away from the Sodor Fallout-esque stories and try to write something more original.
This is pretty much the only one I've written. I've made some AU stories and some TVS based stories that are private. I'll probably go back to it after I finish the 8 stories I'm making right now that I'll put on my twitter later.
I recently heard of a story called Deep Sink, seems to be a realistic take on Sodor experiencing dam failures and shows how the island recovers from it
This reminds me of a crack-treated-seriously fic idea I have where Sodor is affected by Thanos' finger snap. I've never seen Infinity War; I just think "half of everyone dies and the survivors have to deal with it" is an interesting premise.
1:32 I guess I’m one of those people then because of “S.C.P 1 and 2 outdated” because those came out like a day after each other I think? I do hope to make S.C.P somewhat more original
I feel like Arthur as the “first character” was a good idea in my mind. It’s nice that it’s not the main cast and it strays away from that. And I’m glad that people are starting to do that.
I actually wrote this story, it was really my first attempt at making one and I'm just surprised it did so well for what it is.
I definitely agree with the criticisms since I wasn't really trying that much. I might continue this, I just wasn't feeling motivated at the end but now I kind of want to revisit it and finish the story.
Thanks for checking it out though! I actually really enjoyed hearing narration over it!
Good on you brother 👍
Y'know, for a first go at story writing, I'll give you credit. It's pretty good. Though, I'd urge you to move away from the Sodor Fallout-esque stories and try to write something more original.
This is pretty much the only one I've written. I've made some AU stories and some TVS based stories that are private. I'll probably go back to it after I finish the 8 stories I'm making right now that I'll put on my twitter later.
So is there a reason as to what caused the black eyes? Is it a body snatcher scenario?
@@greninjazac4577 I never finished the story so I don't really know what I was thinking
I recently heard of a story called Deep Sink, seems to be a realistic take on Sodor experiencing dam failures and shows how the island recovers from it
This reminds me of a crack-treated-seriously fic idea I have where Sodor is affected by Thanos' finger snap. I've never seen Infinity War; I just think "half of everyone dies and the survivors have to deal with it" is an interesting premise.
“Sir handle was chained to a post” was funny
Great Ad at the beggining.👍
I'm Surprised You're Even Analyzing This!
That was a great point at the end about the dialogue flow. Great video!
love to listen to this while playing games
can you read and review sodor decay?
1:32
I guess I’m one of those people then because of “S.C.P 1 and 2 outdated” because those came out like a day after each other I think? I do hope to make S.C.P somewhat more original
Could you read Sodor left for dead?
When is the next one
Good vid!
4:34
Spooky
poor quality
Hi, TTTE Guy.
You understandably criticise the grammar but you're also misreading or full-on skipping lines.
Uhhhhhh maaaaybe? I dunno. I read this a while ago. If I missed lines, then...whoops.
@@PlayDontPause I opened the fanfic in another tab to read along, so that's how i noticed the missed bits. :P
Can you please do sodor mist au
I may take a look at it at some point, yes.
@@PlayDontPause alright
@@Dustinthemaroon9Flocomotive No. *Sets off pipebomb*
@@Andrea_the_Collector925 wth are you talking about what pipebomb
@@Dustinthemaroon9Flocomotive (Reference to another video -_-)