Twilight's reaction to "large meaty hooves" reminded me of when Peter Griffin narrated his life and got punched by Lois for mentioning out loud how she was aging badly. XD
I walked into the kitchen and sat down at the table. I looked with a grimace at the questionable meal Lois had placed in front of me. Of course, I never tell her how disgusted I was with her cooking, but somehow I think she knew. Lois had always been full of energy and life, but lately I began to grow more aware of her aging. The bright, exuberant eyes that I had fallen in love with were now beginning to grow dull and listless with a long fatigue of a weary life *punch* I awoke several hours later in a daze.
nlw1000 yeah. Not sure if Spike's the best voice for guti to try, but maybe he just needs the right pitch for it. After all, Spike's voice isn't as high as a lot of readers try to make him sound
Kačka Berkova Actually it would get tiring to be able to hear a voice repeating everything you say and do. And besides that, the Narrator would just Narrate that, not give you the answers. It'd be like this. "Kačka Berkova went onto the last question of the math test. *What does two plus two equal?* They stared at the problem, thinking of the possible answers, but after a few minutes passed, nothing came to mind. Frustrated, they guessed and circled answer B "four". Class ended and they went home. Kačka Berkova went to school the very next day. They were checking the test they did yesterday for class. Seeing that they missed almost every question, they were devastated. Then they finally came to the very last question. They hoped they got this right at least. They looked down at the question, hoping to see a check mark. But they were quickly filled with grief to see an X by their answer. The correct answer was actually D "fish". Then the whole world exploded and everyone died. The end. :D
I loved this fanfic reading. It gave me a lot of laughs, I loved Twilight's persistence to find out who -or what- he is, and the voice acting was well done. Stratocaster actually created a sequel to this story, and it's a lot longer to this one. You should give it a read.
Emogak that was too funny lol. You have twilight down pretty well and your other voices are excellent too. And Gutiuserenade was hysterical. I'm still laughing now, and will be for quite awhile :-). Thanks so much for a brilliantly executed comedy.
Speaking of that party loving pony, she was so underly used in this story. If only Twilight would have been more patient with Pinky, she would not have gotten mad at the narrator.
Honestly was expecting something more nuanced than "Discord playing a trick" (my first guess). If it was a real narrator that would have been interesting! After writing this halfway through I was happily surprised!
(Halo 3 never forget song playing in the background) That made me tear up. Twilight may let things get to her and lash out, but it meant so much that she made things right. She really does have a heart of gold. That's why everyone loves you Twilight.
hahahah damn I know kagomae aka Emogak had way too much fun with Gudiserrinade on this comissioned fanfic right here!!!=) .You guys did a great job working on this project
I think Twilight had a right to shout angrily at him near the ending. He did mess with Celestia's magic, change Twilight's form a few times and invaded her "privacy."
He was just doing his job and trying to have fun. I would do the same thing. He didnt do anything to Celestia's magic, plus they were about to put him into a bottle and none of us want that. How is he suppose to give her privacy if he is stuck to her. He is stuck to narratating twilight
a very amusing reading. does make you wonder, where exactly was fluttershy when the narrator was giving twi the silent treatment? What facial expressions were they making? What body movements? We can't know, for the narrator had gone silent.
This. is. hilarious. I have to say for anyone that enjoys this sort of story, I highly recommend looking into the 3 main books in the Ever After High series. It has several funny moments where one of the wacky Wonderland characters converses with the narrator and frequently tricks the narrator into giving important plot points away. I could not stop laughing throughout these moments. Highly. Recommend.
I really enjoy this story of the narrator. It was fun and great! Even though it was my first time listening to it. I'll be checking out more stories on here and as well as others. Thanks E. You and others like you who put out great stories! Later bye!🐺😄😆😃
OMG, Spike sounds like he's trying to do an impression of Mickey Mouse. That, or he sounds like Big Mac when he tried to attend the Sisterhooves Social. LOL XD
*clap* *clap* *clap* *whistle* "yay!" "that was an amazing story!" said Runa "are there any other stories like this?" she asked with a smile. As Runa finished typing and clicked the post button she stairs at the top right corner of the computer. "hmm" she wondered and moved her mouse over a video that said (MLP Cupcakes)
Good thing i checked FimFiction out, sadly i haven't found any Readings for the Sequels and similar ones to this, OR ELSE I MIGHT DIE FROM COMEDY LAUGHTER OF INSANITY
Oh good golly...*wild applause*I have no words. Completely insane and I loved every minute of it. ^^Okay, fine, I had a few words. It's just an expression!
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Twilight: "Spike, am I crazy?"
Spike: "Well, yes, but you could be worse."
You gotta love the dynamic those two share. (:
This was five years.........
Absolutely!
Pinkie's suspicions and senses are sure!!! THERE IS A FOURTH WALL!!!
+Taco Blend (Joshua Simpson) yES, I KNOW RIGHT?! :D HAAH.
You just found this out?
I'm sitting in that big GROVE crane with a huge wrecking ball on the end of steel chain...someone has numbered the walls and this one is #4
*the fifth wall*
She broke it!
I would love to see an accurate animation of this fic, that would be funny
oh yes that defnitly would be cool
YES
if Twilight Sparkle were to be in The Stanley Parable
Yessss! 😂😂😂
+Schizo Equinox That`s what I thought when I read the title too XD
Schizo Equinox yyyyyaaaaassass
Schizo Equinox Haha you're right! XD
Schizo Equinox
the twilight parable
he went to go make a sandwich lol i can't. its too good.
Is he Heavy wepons guy's cousen or Mine?
"LIKE, SHE SAID!" narrarator: "she said." me: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ~Jasmine
Twilight's reaction to "large meaty hooves" reminded me of when Peter Griffin narrated his life and got punched by Lois for mentioning out loud how she was aging badly. XD
I walked into the kitchen and sat down at the table. I looked with a grimace at the questionable meal Lois had placed in front of me. Of course, I never tell her how disgusted I was with her cooking, but somehow I think she knew. Lois had always been full of energy and life, but lately I began to grow more aware of her aging. The bright, exuberant eyes that I had fallen in love with were now beginning to grow dull and listless with a long fatigue of a weary life *punch*
I awoke several hours later in a daze.
Spike sounds like Micky Mouse
nlw1000 Haha, HELLO KIDS!!
nlw1000 I told Kago the same thing but she doesn't BELIEVE MEEEE ;___;
nlw1000 yeah. Not sure if Spike's the best voice for guti to try, but maybe he just needs the right pitch for it. After all, Spike's voice isn't as high as a lot of readers try to make him sound
+nlw1000 I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE.
HO HO!! Come on Twilight, Lets visit Disney Land!! HO HO!!
Large.Meaty.HOOVES.
Luke Ingle THESE HOOVES AIN'T JUST FOR ATTRACTING MATES
@@wardedthorn6523 BRING IT ON, OLD MARE, BRING IT ON
TheBUCfifty no ponies! Let’s be smart and bring it off!
WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?
@@joehumpston7937
I WANNA DO SOME KICKING!! *kicks you*
I want a narrator in my life , it would be great in schools exams if he would tell me if i was riggt or not xD
Kačka Berkova Actually it would get tiring to be able to hear a voice repeating everything you say and do. And besides that, the Narrator would just Narrate that, not give you the answers. It'd be like this.
"Kačka Berkova went onto the last question of the math test. *What does two plus two equal?* They stared at the problem, thinking of the possible answers, but after a few minutes passed, nothing came to mind. Frustrated, they guessed and circled answer B "four". Class ended and they went home.
Kačka Berkova went to school the very next day. They were checking the test they did yesterday for class. Seeing that they missed almost every question, they were devastated. Then they finally came to the very last question. They hoped they got this right at least. They looked down at the question, hoping to see a check mark. But they were quickly filled with grief to see an X by their answer. The correct answer was actually D "fish". Then the whole world exploded and everyone died. The end. :D
But this fanfic shows that the Narrator can actually reply to you
It would be hard to masturbate, too.
Uniloof Jester Not if my narrator were female and had a sexy voice...
@@humblecicero4903 Know it's three years too late, but I would have said, "cursed asf."
Yay! Another amazing job. Gutiu was perfect to be "The Narrator"
"I made a sandwich what do you want?!" i love how he goes super casual after being so serious the whole time.
I loved this fanfic reading. It gave me a lot of laughs, I loved Twilight's persistence to find out who -or what- he is, and the voice acting was well done. Stratocaster actually created a sequel to this story, and it's a lot longer to this one. You should give it a read.
or what*
Hey, I know I'm 5 years late, but what's it called? Hehe
*Hears spikes voice* MICKY IS THAT YOU?!?!XD
YAS IT ME!!
Surprised Emogak didnt voice him to be hones since Spike is voiced by a woman IRL in the actual show.
"haha a g-g-ghost oh boy thats to scary for me"
This was actually kind of cute.
Omg this story is amazing! I couldn't stop laughing at the way Twilight was like "Shut up!" And the narrator is hilarious XD Best story ever!!!
spike sounds like micky mouse not that it matters the reading was very good excellent even
Emogak that was too funny lol. You have twilight down pretty well and your other voices are excellent too. And Gutiuserenade was hysterical. I'm still laughing now, and will be for quite awhile :-). Thanks so much for a brilliantly executed comedy.
If this were to be a game, it'd be on par with Stanley's Parable level in terms of character vs. narrator.
6:57 For the billionth time Twilight Sparkle! GO. TO. PINKIE PIE! Her 4th wall awareness could help!
Didnt work this time
Finally, a good fanfic. And one that works, and feels like it could’ve been a real episode
🎼S-P-I-K-E-Y
M-O-U-S-E! 🎶
THATS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS THINKING
When u haven't gone through puberty when your going through a mooting effect
I entered this expecting to laugh my head out.
I did, but I left with a tear to my eye.
A welcomed surprise, this is beautiful
Imagine all the swears you could say to her, she'd never know what they ment~ muhahaha!
O.o twilight broke the fourth wall like pinkie pie lol 😁😄😂😂
Rukia Kuchki iK LOL
🤧🤢🤣🤣🤣
Speaking of that party loving pony, she was so underly used in this story. If only Twilight would have been more patient with Pinky, she would not have gotten mad at the narrator.
I love this story. I come back to this story every once in a while for a good laugh.
Honestly was expecting something more nuanced than "Discord playing a trick" (my first guess).
If it was a real narrator that would have been interesting!
After writing this halfway through I was happily surprised!
(Halo 3 never forget song playing in the background) That made me tear up. Twilight may let things get to her and lash out, but it meant so much that she made things right. She really does have a heart of gold. That's why everyone loves you Twilight.
Great job Pinkie your 4th wall break powers are contagious
Man, Guti being the narrator just makes this even funnier, but that ending though is real heartbreaking.
that was hilarious, i want another one badly, great job in this masterpiece 😁
This hurts my brain. It's funny, weird, and complicated.
If my life had a narrator:
Friend: how you doing bro?
Me: ah, everything is just okie doki Loki!
Narrator: but you see, things were not okie doki loki
i love the ending and pretty much EVERYTHING ELSE!!
:D omg this is just perfect....SIMPLY PERFECT!!! ty so much for doing this :D :D :D HAHAHAHAHA
Ha ha ha. Twilight losing her shi*...im cracking up..the one with a.j. is really funny too.
Best fan fic
Basset Hunter Studios Stanley opened the first door to his left
Oh my gosh that was amazing, I love freakin fourth wall breaks.
hahahah damn I know kagomae aka Emogak had way too much fun with Gudiserrinade on this comissioned fanfic right here!!!=) .You guys did a great job working on this project
there's actually a good lesson here, you dont get that often in a story like this
Why is this not an actual episode yet?
I love this! You did great, you guys. This is so wholesome :)
I think Twilight had a right to shout angrily at him near the ending. He did mess with Celestia's magic, change Twilight's form a few times and invaded her "privacy."
He was just doing his job and trying to have fun.
I would do the same thing.
He didnt do anything to Celestia's magic, plus they were about to put him into a bottle and none of us want that.
How is he suppose to give her privacy if he is stuck to her.
He is stuck to narratating twilight
Narrate me Narrator Sempai!!!!
Silvrblud27 uh I think you have a problem
Ashley Trautman so true
she said
Why does Spike sound like Mikey Mouse.
...............................I'm just gonna say it, I ship Twilight and the Narrator!
Deadly Ponys whaaaaaaaat P.S. I think your right BUT how will she can kiss him and to SEE him
Deadly Ponys can you do a Twilight Sparkle x narrator fabric please I would love it❤
Do I even need to say anything?
(Say he's an idiot!)
If I say that, then a bunch of people will gang up on me.
(I know.)
🤣🤣🤣🤣😍😍
Lol he's eating s sandwich
"I made a sandwich, Waddaya want?"
line of the year
Wow. I applaud the voices of Rarity and Twilight
a very amusing reading. does make you wonder, where exactly was fluttershy when the narrator was giving twi the silent treatment? What facial expressions were they making? What body movements? We can't know, for the narrator had gone silent.
first 3 minutes when twilight questions the narrator: Twilight. Stuff happens, he's the narrator. There is no explanation needed!
Wonder if Nate will request her to read the sequel, "Twilight Shares The Narrator?"
Yeah, look it up.
maybe nate could post the story twilight vs the narrator
Breaking that 4th wall too! XD I LOVE IT.
I just watched 2 grim darks time for something funny!
Same
Exactly what I was thinking. I'm been watching the lost narrator
Omg same here! ☺️☺️
My limit to watch a grim dark fanfic is 3 😬😬
"With her non-manish hooves"
"Oh no you don't!"
"Bacawk!"
"Oh no, that wasn't supposed to happen!"
"MUHAHAHAHAAHHA!"
IT JUST GOT INTERESTING!
LMAO!
This. is. hilarious. I have to say for anyone that enjoys this sort of story, I highly recommend looking into the 3 main books in the Ever After High series. It has several funny moments where one of the wacky Wonderland characters converses with the narrator and frequently tricks the narrator into giving important plot points away. I could not stop laughing throughout these moments. Highly. Recommend.
28:04
What the- What the heck are you eating!? 😂
It sounds like he is chewing on a bone or some plastic toy LOL.
Now i really want to listen a clopfic reading involving Rarity and her voice done by whoever did it in this video. it's just perfect darling !!!
Wow Guti. I can literally imagine Guti just walking away and making a sandwich in the middle of a reading!
"I made a sandwich.....whadddya want." Best. Line. Ever.
I couldent stop laughing when he was fucking with celestias magic. I had a hard time breathing I laughed so hard.
Stanley opened the left door
Every time I listen to this it makes me laugh. Yes, every time( three times so far, i think)
And please to the sequel!
“This fanfic should have been called The Twilight Parable”
Said Epic Brony Gamer
This was a well written story! It also gives me an idea for a video!
Personally I thought it would’ve been hilarious if a female narrator chimed in while Twilight was in the restroom
THIS MUST BE THE WORK OF AN ENEMY STAND !!
I love how they got along at the end
“Large meaty hooves” 😂😭
Good job Guti for narrating
I really enjoy this story of the narrator. It was fun and great! Even though it was my first time listening to it. I'll be checking out more stories on here and as well as others. Thanks E. You and others like you who put out great stories! Later bye!🐺😄😆😃
The voices are awesome, really c: *subs*
Mister Thibs strikes gold again! :3
2:43 lol
this is a well told story !
Every fandom needs one of these. Or three.
i almost teared up when the narrator was gone bro. why me man
Beautiful and funny!a rare and wonderful combination.
This reminds me of that Pink Panther cartoon where the narrator verbally roasts the panther throughout the episode.
The way he did to twilight it was priceless
genial el video, gracias por subirlo, te quedo genial, sigue asi que tienes mucho talento
espero con ansias ver mas
:3
Oh man that ending was both sweet and then hilarious.
Man i really want a part two of this story :D
OMG, Spike sounds like he's trying to do an impression of Mickey Mouse. That, or he sounds like Big Mac when he tried to attend the Sisterhooves Social. LOL XD
Recently, I listened to "Narrator can hear Twilight" and this just came in full cycle 🤣
Of all your Mane six voices, your Rarity voice is my favorite!
*clap* *clap* *clap* *whistle* "yay!" "that was an amazing story!" said Runa "are there any other stories like this?" she asked with a smile. As Runa finished typing and clicked the post button she stairs at the top right corner of the computer. "hmm" she wondered and moved her mouse over a video that said (MLP Cupcakes)
16:35
Well, im getting popcorn now because this is going to be fun
The only way to beat the Narrator is by breaking the 4th wall
BRUH Spike over here sounding like Mickey Mouse
Oh gosh... the Spike voice.
"Hey kids!!! It's me! Spikey mouse!!!"
Mickey iz dat u
lol that made me laugh so hard!!! I need to breathe
Celestia is so calm and cool
Good thing i checked FimFiction out, sadly i haven't found any Readings for the Sequels and similar ones to this, OR ELSE I MIGHT DIE FROM COMEDY LAUGHTER OF INSANITY
Oh, that was good. Nicely read, well emoted. I liked.
"I actually know how to say it this time! HAH!"
3:39 That's the point, Twilight! Does the episode "Lesson Zero" remind you of being a real lunatic?
At the beginning my brain was having trouble wrapping it up XD
Oh good golly...*wild applause*I have no words. Completely insane and I loved every minute of it. ^^Okay, fine, I had a few words. It's just an expression!
This was a fun way to start the day.
now THAT WAS AWESOMEEE!!!!!!
This was hilarious. She should have asked Pinkie with this problem though.
Have you ever noticed how often Twilight seems to go crazy?