soshi - Pizza

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 27 ส.ค. 2024
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  • @Crinkle_Mouse
    @Crinkle_Mouse 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This was pretty good, I liked the intro's soft start and its transition into the chorus. The only suggestion I have is that at around 1:13, you should have the instruments be more apparent than your singing, or at least have them on the same level rather than leaving the instrumental in the background. Otherwise, keep at it.

    • @soshi7869
      @soshi7869  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank you so much I'm glad you liked an I appreciate your feedback