"I Became A Bus Driver For A Local School, I Found A List Of Rules To Follow" Creepypasta

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  • @LIQUIDSOLID6655
    @LIQUIDSOLID6655 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3338

    "If any student doesn't thank you for the ride , Immediately shoot him with the m9 under your seat"
    "Reason : that bastard......that ..bastard disrespected you"

    • @z-0-x584
      @z-0-x584 3 ปีที่แล้ว +87

      @Matthew Stemen Pow!
      You are ded
      Not big souprice

    • @leviathan6365
      @leviathan6365 3 ปีที่แล้ว +50

      It's okay everybody I got a Snicker

    • @tylerturnbull8747
      @tylerturnbull8747 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      I am one of those demons that whatever happens to me happens to u x100 worse

    • @LIQUIDSOLID6655
      @LIQUIDSOLID6655 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@leviathan6365 you better do

    • @leviathan6365
      @leviathan6365 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Okay who wants the Snicker

  • @spacefreak5064
    @spacefreak5064 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5130

    Don't leave the bus! Don't make unnecessary stops! Only stop at the designated stops!
    Bus Driver: Hey kids wanna steal some wire and make a few bucks?

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +646

      I feel the need to make it clear that I purposely made George an idiot.

    • @love_ricaxoxo2887
      @love_ricaxoxo2887 3 ปีที่แล้ว +257

      “Hell yeah we wanna steal some wires and make some cash!” Lol I loved this story!

    • @SmeagstheGremlin
      @SmeagstheGremlin 3 ปีที่แล้ว +158

      @@jd_kreeper2799 lol nice story btw enjoyed it

    • @_---_feathers_---_8054
      @_---_feathers_---_8054 3 ปีที่แล้ว +78

      @@jd_kreeper2799 i really loved this story

    • @CalsGirl97
      @CalsGirl97 3 ปีที่แล้ว +131

      @JD_Kreeper that part made me so annoyed lol he was pretty fine until that point tbh. The descriptions of things didnt really need the references but the story was really good. The part where they got out and started talking about scrapping was just really mood breaking.

  • @jared8002
    @jared8002 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1801

    This is by far one of the funniest narrators I've seen. Mf ignored every rule he was told that strictly advised him not to open the doors, just for the sake of some cats being held by unknown entities in a mansion that he was told to avoid. Accompanied by a group of children. Then he casually watched the police battle wire snakes driving a school bus and a fucking marauder like it was just another slow tuesday. He's way too fit for this job.

    • @joey00198
      @joey00198 2 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Indeed

    • @Madame_Talos
      @Madame_Talos 2 ปีที่แล้ว +73

      Sounds like a normal bus driver; like mine, at least

    • @deveshmahajan4151
      @deveshmahajan4151 2 ปีที่แล้ว +70

      Exactly as they said
      He fits *perfectly* for the job

    • @blizzard1198
      @blizzard1198 ปีที่แล้ว +41

      Bro turns the scariest horror into comedy

    • @sirtopoftheworldegg
      @sirtopoftheworldegg ปีที่แล้ว +30

      Normal Ohio day 💀

  • @MethuselahWinter
    @MethuselahWinter 2 ปีที่แล้ว +387

    I love how George completely disregarded the sensitivity of the situation and just like, stole wires from a supernatural mansion with owners who could literally melt steel.

    • @vreed8755
      @vreed8755 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      He didn't know they could melt steel at the time.

    • @shashwatjaiswal2288
      @shashwatjaiswal2288 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      He knew they were dangerous and can/would kill him@@vreed8755

    • @g1sunstreaker584
      @g1sunstreaker584 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      Dude for real, I was wondering why this dude thought it was a good idea to steal from supernatural entities.

    • @wolfboy2222222222222
      @wolfboy2222222222222 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@g1sunstreaker584$20 an hour just doesn't cut it 🤷‍♂️

    • @glovere2
      @glovere2 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      I thought that was a poor choice for the writer. People driving children through dangerous hellscapes don’t usually further endanger the kids to steal private property from spooky mansions with deadly intent toward anyone simply driving by. It’s wrong on so many levels and a strange thing for the character to do unless they needed the wire to defeat a monster.

  • @itztokeyo
    @itztokeyo 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3894

    " i wanna investigate the cat room" mans has his priorities straight.

  • @d4n737
    @d4n737 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2675

    "Ah, yeah, that "creature" running next to your bus, it's just Steve, he wants to ask you if you have any crack. Don't bother trying to outrun him, he snorted himself to hell and back, he doesn't get tired. Just run him over, yeah, don't worry, he'll be fine. he survived worse things."

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +168

      I love that backstory, was planning for it to be something similar.

    • @WinterPains
      @WinterPains 3 ปีที่แล้ว +81

      @@jd_kreeper2799 THE MONSTERS HAVE BACKSTORY!?!?

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +99

      @@WinterPains Yes. We'll start exploring that in episode 3.

    • @WinterPains
      @WinterPains 3 ปีที่แล้ว +67

      @@jd_kreeper2799 THERES AN EPISODE 2!?!?!?!?

    • @d4n737
      @d4n737 3 ปีที่แล้ว +37

      @@jd_kreeper2799 Wait, you're the writer?

  • @simonottosson7294
    @simonottosson7294 2 ปีที่แล้ว +341

    ”I don’t think we’ve never gotten a good look at the mansion before. This is the first time anyone’s managed to distract the owners”
    I felt so damn proud of them.
    He saved the cats too :’)

    • @rhunter42dragon
      @rhunter42dragon ปีที่แล้ว +23

      And then he decided to rob the place.
      ...
      ...
      Because what could go wrong?

    • @blizzard1198
      @blizzard1198 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      Bro is literally built diffirent this man does not know horror

    • @newpatick117
      @newpatick117 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      what can anything go wrong when you rob something and stealing their cats

    • @pipthewarrior3738
      @pipthewarrior3738 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      The cats were likely some sort of supernatural entity, or many supernatural entities, whatever the Red Maw Auction company is or whatever it was called sells and auctions is likely supernatural in nature, as the wires prove. I was hoping that there would be a later date in which it detailed a man reading a newspaper or a news article online about wild cats ravaging or growing large and so and so or just being overly aggressive and strong.

    • @woIfhaley
      @woIfhaley 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      the scary monster guys probably ate those cats

  • @ItsWednesdayMyDudes3
    @ItsWednesdayMyDudes3 2 ปีที่แล้ว +434

    Wow! A horror story where the authorities actually get involved and help out. You know how refreshing that is to hear from these kinds of stories!?

    • @TheBluePhoenix008
      @TheBluePhoenix008 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      They felt like GTA police ngl

  • @kennethford3550
    @kennethford3550 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1894

    "Boy why was you late coming home"
    "Our bus driver had a schizophrenic break 🤷"

    • @angrypomeraniantrainer618
      @angrypomeraniantrainer618 3 ปีที่แล้ว +163

      “Sorry...🤷 our bus driver went a bit coocoo y’know? He stole some wires from old man Jerry’s mansion and then decided to call the cops about them stealing the bus.”

    • @kinginferno934
      @kinginferno934 3 ปีที่แล้ว +51

      a read this in a halfmad/half worried black moms voice

    • @AmazingAutist
      @AmazingAutist 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      @@kinginferno934 Dear god, that is so goddamn accurate--

    • @laz981
      @laz981 3 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      @@kinginferno934 don't forgot the finger snaping sometimes.

    • @MrTigriuS
      @MrTigriuS 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      Dude. Story was great. But your comment was amazing.🤣 I started laughing IRL. Good thing that i'm alone in my schak.😁🤭

  • @orlandoriley1464
    @orlandoriley1464 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1519

    This man literally described a
    actual woodland mansion from minecraft

    • @szabojulia6290
      @szabojulia6290 3 ปีที่แล้ว +73

      Yeah fr the bit where he says the house has wooden walls and a stone foundation I knew straight away

    • @anthony04_21
      @anthony04_21 3 ปีที่แล้ว +37

      Fr and I'm playing Minecraft while watching this Lol

    • @katkrew903
      @katkrew903 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@anthony04_21 I have been too lmao

    • @kingnickolus
      @kingnickolus 3 ปีที่แล้ว +25

      Yeah, I feel this story had too many visual references...3 minecraft references? Lol

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 2 ปีที่แล้ว +43

      This was my first and currently only story I ever wrote, and I was, and still am, really into Minecraft.

  • @MarlenaJade
    @MarlenaJade 2 ปีที่แล้ว +179

    Greg or George or whatever his name is really showed up on his first day and chose chaos.
    This story is a hidden gem. I love that everyone gets pulled in. The cats, the paramedics, the officers, the damn kids. I’m done 💀

  • @thefrogmonarch4404
    @thefrogmonarch4404 3 ปีที่แล้ว +52

    "The bus was stolen by copper snakes" is such a funny line
    I loved this one it made me laugh

  • @marioballinas6346
    @marioballinas6346 3 ปีที่แล้ว +628

    “A collision at that speed probably broke something important under the hood.”
    Yeah the fucking driver lol

    • @bearstacean
      @bearstacean 3 ปีที่แล้ว +28

      bye this sent me

    • @gamerman022
      @gamerman022 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      LMAO this is exactly what I thought when he said that

    • @darkspirit193
      @darkspirit193 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I laughed way too hard at this

  • @JacksonCallen
    @JacksonCallen 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4142

    This went from a horror story to a horror action thriller in two seconds.

  • @ramirezthesilvite
    @ramirezthesilvite 2 ปีที่แล้ว +65

    These kind of "follow these esoteric rules or risk supernatural consequences" stories are really cool. This is a horror genre I didn't know I wanted. It has the vibes of dealing with Fae creatures, where you have to be very careful about what you do or you could end up lost forever or something

    • @Lizzyjaeger
      @Lizzyjaeger ปีที่แล้ว +3

      agreed!! just found these and I’m hooked!
      WHAT are we calling this ‘genre’?! 🎉

  • @wiiblii8584
    @wiiblii8584 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    The idea of a town where every building and job has a different set of rules to follow is actually pretty cool, could make a cool show where every episode is about a different Job/Residence

  • @VexedVergil
    @VexedVergil 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2018

    "Hey kids! Wanna help me free cats and burglerize the house? Thanks!"
    Kid: wanna loot that truck too?
    "Nah, I wanna look at it"
    10/10 role model XD

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +173

      I actually made George an idiot on purpose.
      He is based off of me. This could be related to me being autistic, but I commonly do things I wasn't supposed to do that weren't specifically on the rules. For example, when I was in second grade, I was told not to throw the toys. So I built a catapult to launch wooden blocks across the room. I then argued with the teacher how I wasn't throwing things, and was instead catapulting them, and nowhere on the rules does it not say I could launch things with a catapult.

    • @VexedVergil
      @VexedVergil 3 ปีที่แล้ว +59

      @@jd_kreeper2799 hey! I hope you didn't take offense to my comment, i was bring silly and it wasn't a complaint! I enjoyed the whole thing, I envy you, im really shy I want to post post my own stories, but I don't for fear of getting judged, keep up the good work!

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +38

      @@VexedVergil yeah but some of the comments of this video are really bothering me.

    • @VexedVergil
      @VexedVergil 3 ปีที่แล้ว +40

      @@jd_kreeper2799 the internet will always have haters, I know its easier said then done, but just ignore them! There will always be people you can never make happy no matter your efforts, it's best to ignore it! If you want proof your story is good, look no further than Mr creeps making a video on it! Not every author gets their story on his channel :)

    • @WinterPains
      @WinterPains 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      @@jd_kreeper2799 You did fine, dude. Take it from me, an 18 year old Aspie, you did great.

  • @karlsvinkov4576
    @karlsvinkov4576 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4352

    Feels like grandparents story of "How I came and went from school every day"

    • @love_ricaxoxo2887
      @love_ricaxoxo2887 3 ปีที่แล้ว +102

      LMAOOOO!!!! I love how we live all over the world but all grow up similar ways / hearing similar stories! That is always so funny to me!! 😆😂

    • @noahclarke9615
      @noahclarke9615 3 ปีที่แล้ว +140

      “When I was in school I had to walk through 6 dimensions, up hill both ways in -300 degrees, while fighting off lions”

    • @memelord1502
      @memelord1502 3 ปีที่แล้ว +37

      @@noahclarke9615 yeah thats about right

    • @pongotwistelton2051
      @pongotwistelton2051 3 ปีที่แล้ว +49

      "When I was a kid I had to fend off demons with a broken shotgun going mach 3 in the dark ontopp of a half finished bus, I died 15 times, a dragon gave me swervy, And a giant shadow ginger-bread man flung me through hell giving me permit brain damage."

    • @memelord1502
      @memelord1502 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      @@pongotwistelton2051 thats pretty much what they say

  • @realmsofreading
    @realmsofreading 3 ปีที่แล้ว +57

    I love this so much. It starts out so typically for a rules story, but subverts expectations in one of the most exciting and fun ways I’ve heard in a creepypasta in a long time.

  • @Alaskovi
    @Alaskovi 2 ปีที่แล้ว +28

    This story was legitimately impressive. I loved the twist. Hope there is a sequel at some point.

  • @RenTully
    @RenTully 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1582

    *opens bus door.
    "SEATBELTS, EVERYONE!"
    "please let this be a normal trip back home.."
    "In this road? NO WAY!"
    "aw..."

    • @gearsfan553
      @gearsfan553 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      XD

    • @jeffbob9632
      @jeffbob9632 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      lol

    • @HolyCrusader6420
      @HolyCrusader6420 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      MAN

    • @godzilla1966
      @godzilla1966 3 ปีที่แล้ว +37

      Cruising down the road terrified next thing that you know you’re “AHHHHH” in human aliens!

    • @LomTheWise
      @LomTheWise 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      What is this FEVER DREAM of a story???

  • @deadguy775
    @deadguy775 3 ปีที่แล้ว +323

    Driver: Steals some wires
    Every rule within 50 miles: So, you have chosen death

  • @ItsJoever4now
    @ItsJoever4now ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Please let this be a normal field trip! With the frizz? NO WAY!

  • @jonathanjackgoodman2764
    @jonathanjackgoodman2764 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Two years later and no one has come up with a better rules story. This thing is creeping into legend.

  • @jd_kreeper2799
    @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2497

    It feels weird hearing you narrate my own story. As I listen to this, I not only imagine what's going on, but I also think of my experience writing this, I remember what inspired certain parts of the story, and how I discovered your channel when you first contacted me about my story etc.
    That or I write so much more differently than other authors you featured that it makes me feel different.

    • @marshalhyde5
      @marshalhyde5 3 ปีที่แล้ว +47

      What was this story based off of if you don't mind me asking?

    • @Kazmll229
      @Kazmll229 3 ปีที่แล้ว +82

      @@marshalhyde5 brain

    • @wyatt048
      @wyatt048 3 ปีที่แล้ว +30

      make a part 2 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    • @balls_balls6050
      @balls_balls6050 3 ปีที่แล้ว +41

      You really like Minecraft lmao

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +157

      @@balls_balls6050 the only things consciously inspired by Minecraft were the herobrine eyes of the creatures in the cruiser and the mansion but I must've subconsciously added more.

  • @peachytoast2787
    @peachytoast2787 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1549

    20:00 “I’m going back to my seat so I don’t get yeet’d out of the windshield” Caught me SO off guard. A horror story with modern elements is a masterpiece

    • @Partyhatmassacre
      @Partyhatmassacre 3 ปีที่แล้ว +66

      Hate the fact, that the kids dialogue is at least natural to current day kids.

    • @bunnizx104
      @bunnizx104 2 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      LMAO SAME SAME

    • @wil-ba8043
      @wil-ba8043 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      @@Partyhatmassacre either im reading this wrong or ur a 40 year old parent who hates kids

    • @PercydeRoloFangirl
      @PercydeRoloFangirl 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Isn't that what a creepypasta is.

    • @mttynan4690
      @mttynan4690 2 ปีที่แล้ว +36

      @@Partyhatmassacre I agree, I think it takes away from the creepiness because they try to add humour. I suppose it shows how the kids are so used to the trip, but it feels like an attempt at comedy. So is comparing the monster to herobrine or Stickmen

  • @AndrewKing238
    @AndrewKing238 ปีที่แล้ว +32

    I came back to listen to this story and I surprisingly remembered how it ended. It still amazes me how it ended and I still wish for a continuation of this story. What I mean is like, how would it be at the school, the bus yard, living on that road, and whatever other creepy places that have rules from this one story. The writer has an extremely creative mind and wish so much they would expand on it.

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I tried that but I just didn't like the story itself. I considered rewriting it altogether but eventually I just decided to move on.

  • @isaacg4511
    @isaacg4511 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    These rules really be like:
    1. If someone farts run as fast as you possibly can

  • @M0VIE
    @M0VIE 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1252

    "I forgot to thank the bus driver, I will never see the light of day again..."

    • @enzooofficial9370
      @enzooofficial9370 3 ปีที่แล้ว +76

      " my wife wouldn't let me smash, i realized i lived alone"

    • @GenderlessFurry_They-Them
      @GenderlessFurry_They-Them 3 ปีที่แล้ว +74

      "I forgot to put pickles on Bubble Bass's order. Now I only have 3 days left to live"

    • @tinashifflett1359
      @tinashifflett1359 3 ปีที่แล้ว +20

      A friend of mine is a bus driver. I'm sure he will like this

    • @glados5065
      @glados5065 3 ปีที่แล้ว +21

      @@tinashifflett1359 one of these is not like the others.

    • @Yoyozlitt20
      @Yoyozlitt20 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      @@GenderlessFurry_They-Them This comment is way too good for it to be in a reply section 😭

  • @Tragic_Hooway
    @Tragic_Hooway 3 ปีที่แล้ว +842

    the idea of a setting where everyone has to deal with the "rules" story archetype instead of just one random person is really interesting

    • @mirandamanga9083
      @mirandamanga9083 3 ปีที่แล้ว +39

      Agreed. I hope this is expanded upon.

    • @AstraOG
      @AstraOG ปีที่แล้ว +26

      @@mirandamanga9083 i need an action movie like this story with this setting it would be SICK

    • @ocamoriechan
      @ocamoriechan ปีที่แล้ว +11

      It would be interesting to see/hear about the houses as well. Wonder what they’re rules are.

    • @EllesGhost13
      @EllesGhost13 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@AstraOG i think a - love death and robots- style series for some horror stories

    • @tattut5950
      @tattut5950 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@AstraOGor a video game would also be cool. It would definitely play like fnaf in that ur stuck in one spot and u have things to fend off but it’s a driving game

  • @cat-jv2yt
    @cat-jv2yt 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    what if the demons have rules too “if you see a school bus driving along the road begin to run alongside it keep pace with it or it will run you down” idk i just like to think of it that way lol

  • @halfasleepvampire7545
    @halfasleepvampire7545 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    "I heard it dragging across the ground, sounding like a mixture between wood and metal"
    *garry's mod prop banging noise ensues*

  • @charlieyes4946
    @charlieyes4946 3 ปีที่แล้ว +922

    I had a feeling that these weren’t real kids until I heard: “I should probably get back to my seat, so I don’t get yeeted through the windshield”
    No more doubts

    • @charlieyes4946
      @charlieyes4946 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      @Kari Sieh same for a sec

    • @Holistic-Hallucinations
      @Holistic-Hallucinations 3 ปีที่แล้ว +55

      Me too lmao! Angela kind of seemed like a fake kid until she said yeeted and I was comforted immediately

    • @ThePumpingiron27
      @ThePumpingiron27 2 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      When I heard night school, my mind immediately went to...vampire high school. 😹😹

    • @rafaelanim8
      @rafaelanim8 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Finally a comforting way to hear the verb to yeet

    • @HtNRun
      @HtNRun ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Agreed, no Ancient Folk Lore Monster would say Yeet

  • @the44thcosmic_galaxy25
    @the44thcosmic_galaxy25 3 ปีที่แล้ว +649

    The kids in the story be having full blown conversations with this new bus driver like they are adults chatting with an old friend.

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +92

      These are high school students. I'm 15 and that's how I communicate with other students and my teachers so I'm not entirely sure what's so strange here.

    • @darkylord2545
      @darkylord2545 3 ปีที่แล้ว +45

      Don’t know why I assumed they were elementary school students lmao

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@darkylord2545 even when I was in elementary school I spoke like that.

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +28

      @Caleb Pierce I thought everyone else my age talked like that but I'm fairly isolated from the rest of my school by being in special ed, and am in a very good school at the moment.
      I am self-aware that I will do dumb things in my teenage years and commonly go to adults for guidance.

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      @Caleb Pierce I know you were complimenting me om my conversation skills, I was just confused how it was that impressive.

  • @rae5164
    @rae5164 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I listen to a lot of horror stories and creepypastas but I have to say I'm absolutely obsessed with this one. I'm not even fully done with the video yet and I've already told my friend that I hoped there was a part two or that there would eventually be a part two. The feeling of this story is very different than most others and I love that about it, how the main character embraces the chaos rather than being shaken by it the entire time. It almost feels like a story that could easily become a horror video game with all the different rules to follow and actions to take. I love it.

  • @glizzygobbler8012
    @glizzygobbler8012 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I love these stories where the main character finds a weird list of rules. They usually have a spooky and interesting story. Can't wait to listen!

  • @iamyes9676
    @iamyes9676 3 ปีที่แล้ว +336

    I feel like this story very quickly turned from a horror to a comedy.

    • @kktyr4580
      @kktyr4580 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      indeed, tbh in my opinion the start of the story was good but the ending is bad, it just starts throwing everything at once like a child's dream or fantasy and its hard to understand or make sense of anything

    • @scrittle
      @scrittle 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      The beginning was making Minecraft references and he pillaged a mansion, you can't make this shit up

    • @TheBluePhoenix008
      @TheBluePhoenix008 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      ​@@kktyr4580wdym bro it's hilarious

  • @angrypomeraniantrainer618
    @angrypomeraniantrainer618 3 ปีที่แล้ว +556

    The entire story: my bus got hijacked by a bunch of copper wires that I stole, and now someone is trying to get them back!

    • @heartcaptorkitten705
      @heartcaptorkitten705 3 ปีที่แล้ว +28

      And even though i definitely don't want the copper wires.. I'm fighting the person who came to get them off..

    • @angrypomeraniantrainer618
      @angrypomeraniantrainer618 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@heartcaptorkitten705 yup

    • @GrifoStelle
      @GrifoStelle 3 ปีที่แล้ว +20

      Though that 3rd party never did me any kind of wrong and infact just inadvertently saved the lives of everyone on the bus; my only option is to break in, release their indoor cats and a baffling amount of copper. (Because I should have more money and these random strangers should foot my bill... come one kids let me teach you the ways of burglary)
      Then NOT call the boss who has an idea of what's going on but ill prepared people who wouldn't believe the situation I was dragging them into.
      This won't kill anyone!

    • @jackdurden466
      @jackdurden466 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      @@GrifoStelle you’re absolutely right, what could go wrong? But why did they have so damn much wire? Why so many cats? Something unnatural is going wrong here. ☠️👽

    • @ants7279
      @ants7279 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Omg right🤣

  • @SquirrelMasterAsh
    @SquirrelMasterAsh 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I always read the comments to decide if i want to read a creepypasta and ive been gravitating to rules stories lately. The comments for this one have me weak. I have to listen now.

  • @_YouTube-User_
    @_YouTube-User_ 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The scariest thing is those loud ads jumpscaring me every 15 minutes

  • @ghostwalker3192
    @ghostwalker3192 3 ปีที่แล้ว +331

    I love how freaking crazy everything got starting off with copper wires stealing a bus

    • @nate7LP_my_dog_found_the_knife
      @nate7LP_my_dog_found_the_knife 3 ปีที่แล้ว +38

      I have the keys, they can't possibly *bus vrooooms away* oh my God, how the fuuck
      Me who knows how to hot wire: 😆

    • @michaeledmunds7266
      @michaeledmunds7266 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      @@nate7LP_my_dog_found_the_knife so the bus was hotwired and stolen by the stolen wires. Classy.

    • @synystergates2804
      @synystergates2804 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Me and the boys gettin the liquor money 😂

  • @didosauce6008
    @didosauce6008 3 ปีที่แล้ว +598

    I like how the author uses some modern slang to hint at the protagonist is either a gamer or has a good grasp of pop culture. Also the slang used by the students makes them feel more like kids which is something I don’t get a lot of in other stories

    • @johnjeff17
      @johnjeff17 3 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Or maybe the author is younger and dose talk like that. (Which would be impressive)

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +41

      @@johnjeff17 I am 15 after all and have played video games before.

    • @Holistic-Hallucinations
      @Holistic-Hallucinations 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Slang does not hint at someone being a gamer lol

    • @cureholly.
      @cureholly. 2 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      I didn't like that aspect of the story. It kept breaking my immersion.

    • @WinterPains
      @WinterPains 2 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      @@cureholly. How? How did adding realistic elements like slang break immersion?

  • @jarviswilson4593
    @jarviswilson4593 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This would be an awesome movie

  • @among_us953
    @among_us953 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    My favourite story on this youtube channel.

  • @dolphin6756
    @dolphin6756 3 ปีที่แล้ว +156

    I love how batshit insane this story is. almost like its making fun of how unstable the 'rules' in these kind of stories can be. kinda changed into an action story at the end there just from the rules domino-ing eachother

  • @Creepypasta_Kyle
    @Creepypasta_Kyle ปีที่แล้ว +1

    These list of rules creepypastas are my all time favorite stories to listen to. You always find the best stories!

  • @nagisa3523
    @nagisa3523 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The copper wires stealing the bus is hilarious

  • @byproductofcheese
    @byproductofcheese 3 ปีที่แล้ว +259

    This place seems like this town would fit perfectly as a SCP itself as people move in and are given rules while scientist study it then the poor officers and medics are called in not knowing what is happening.

    • @sagesage7167
      @sagesage7167 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      It is the scp I don’t get it

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      That's kind of the idea.
      The school and the houses were there before the strange activity was first detected in the area, and George became the bus driver for a skeleton community that keeps the creatures from leaving the area.

    • @valcapone7433
      @valcapone7433 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Sounds like the road up hunter lol

    • @sprenzy7936
      @sprenzy7936 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Eh I like to keep creepy pastas a list of rules genre separate from SCP
      Because it's a creepy pasta, the story is supposed to creep you out with the environment your in and the rules.
      I always feel incredibly uneasy when the rules are read and that is just not what SCP is about
      SCP is basically contained by security guards and survllianced

    • @prig1557
      @prig1557 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@jd_kreeper2799 If you said that the houses were there before the strange activity, which you did, then there must've been a moment where the monsters took over the town. I, for one, would like to see the story of that takeover.

  • @freindlyspicerun4424
    @freindlyspicerun4424 3 ปีที่แล้ว +103

    "So i got the children to help me steal the wire" is such a wild fucking line oml

  • @EmileA239_from_Halo_Reach
    @EmileA239_from_Halo_Reach 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Definitely my favorite story you’ve covered on your channel. Amazing narration for an amazing story.

  • @DMGSL
    @DMGSL 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I wish this gets a part 2, it has great story potential and even the ending could be a hint at a sequel

  • @nekakonjina6283
    @nekakonjina6283 3 ปีที่แล้ว +130

    This went from horror to comedy/thriller in about half an hour

  • @IzztGoBzzt
    @IzztGoBzzt 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1254

    I am a simple girl with simple needs. If I see something in the title about "rules" I am clicking on it. *wheeze*

  • @bearilliantbear1769
    @bearilliantbear1769 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    These list horror stories are so in depth and self aware that it feels like there's a List world and sometimes people with different lists meet eachother.

  • @ArcanineEspeon
    @ArcanineEspeon 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Despite all its flaws, I genuinely enjoy the story and has come back to listen to it a bunch of times, and I think it's because of the funny behavior of the narrator, as well as all of the other characters. I really appreciate how the other kids and the bus lot guard have their own sets of rules they have to follow and their own parts to play in the SRCU (Strange Rules Cinematic Universe); my favorite part was when the bus lot guard showed George and all the kids his own set of rules, and we got to read them and then even see them in action.

  • @singularityunleashed6529
    @singularityunleashed6529 3 ปีที่แล้ว +168

    Damn, this went from a 0 to 100 REAL F*CKING QUICK...😂😂

    • @cadbane7780
      @cadbane7780 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Cartman was right

  • @NurseAmamiya
    @NurseAmamiya 3 ปีที่แล้ว +286

    "I found a list of rules on the internet with a set of rules to read before reading the rules"

    • @nate7LP_my_dog_found_the_knife
      @nate7LP_my_dog_found_the_knife 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      The rules read, that you must read the rules before you read the rules, in that specific order.

    • @lyleslabyrinth21
      @lyleslabyrinth21 3 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@nate7LP_my_dog_found_the_knife Then as you're reading the rules you read the rules, after you've read the rules you read rules before reading the rules.

    • @Ruined._.Garage
      @Ruined._.Garage 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      lmao

    • @omori3703
      @omori3703 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Alright I’m writing this story

    • @bunnizx104
      @bunnizx104 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      This hurts my brain

  • @datjatv3838
    @datjatv3838 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    For your viewing pleasure here is a list of the rules, this is not a 100% accurate copy, but i believe it covers all of it:
    These are mentioned in the first 10 minutes of the video, so no real spoilers here. Enjoy the tale!
    1. Do not use any electronic devices for navigation - they will try to deceive you, we have printed out a map for you to follow.
    2. The bus stops you can drop kids off at are labeled 1,2,3,4 and 5, these stops resemble a bench with three walls, and the opening in the front. The bus stops number will be on both sides of all three walls. If you stop at a stop that is not marked as one of your bus stops, leave immediately, try not to look at anything nearby that is fixed up, aside form the walls to see if it is a valid bus stop.
    3. The road is supposed to be very old and windy and unmaintained, if the road suddenly appears to be a road recently paved and is straight, and the scenery starts repeating, immediately slam on the brakes and turn around before it is too late. Once the road has returned to normal, and is no longer straight, you can turn around and continue your journey. If turning around is not possible, but the bus in reverse and drive backwards until you find a place to turn.
    4. 4 if you run into a dead end, stop and put the bus in reverse or turn around, and go back until the end of the road is no longer visible. Similar as to rule 3.
    5. If the road merges with another road, remember what side you came from, this will be important if you have to turn around, do not drive on the side that you did not come from.
    6. If any other vehicles appear on the road, disable them by any means possible, I don’t care about minor damage to the bus. You can easily bash through any type of cars or light trucks, but be careful around larger vehicles that could put up a fight. Do not drop off any kids if your bus is currently being pursued (?) by any type of vehicle or if you disabled one recently and it crashed near a bus stop.
    7. If your bus gets stuck by whatever reason, alert the students, they will know what to do. There is a handgun in the glove compartment near the steering wheel, use it to defend the bus if they attempt to get in. Wait in the bus until dawn and then contact us to get you out of there, no pay will be deducted if this happens.
    8. If you hear a church bell avoid going near its source. If it is behind you, you’re good. If it is on your side or in front of you, turn around and get as far away as you can until the ringing stops, once you can no longer hear the bell, you can turn around and continue your journey. This usually doesn’t last long.
    9. If you see a creature on your right, running alongside the bus, do not under any circumstances open any doors or windows. While it will always run at the speed of your bus, you can confuse it by constantly accelerating and decelerating. Doing that might get you in a position in which you can run it over. This is the only known way to stop it.
    10. If the engine stops for seemingly no reason, immediately start it up again and floor it. Do not look at what is behind the bus. If that doesn’t work, refer to rule 7 for everyone’s safety.
    11. If you see a human on the road, run it over, even if it resembles a loved one, it is not a human. If you fail to run it over skip any remaining stops and return to the bus yard as fast as possible. Do not under any circumstances open any doors or windows. If you have to turn around for whatever reason, do so as quickly as possible. Despite the fact that you will likely not see it again, it is still following you. Once you arrive at the bus yard, alert the guard. They will know what to do.
    12. If you see a mansion in the distance, turn off all lights and floor it, none of the students live here. It’s position on the road changes often, sometimes not appearing at all. The owners are deaf but they can still see. And the part of the road in front of the mansion is straight, you can turn your lights back on once you are surrounded by forest again, sop you will be fine. This mansion is at least twice as tall as the forest and it emit lights from the rooms, so if you pay attention you can spot it from far enough away that you can turn of your high beams and headlight before they notice the light. If you see a ridiculously bright light behind you - they saw you. If this happens put on the modified sunglasses in the glove compartment and get out of there as quickly as you can. The students are prepared with sunglasses against the light, so don’t worry about them. If you are forced to turn around for whatever reason, do so as quickly as possible. Do not drop any students off when the owners are chasing you and return to the bus yard if necessary. When the light disappears and you’ve lost them, you can continue your journey. Keep all doors and windows closed during this time.
    13. The true end of this roads merges with another road at a 3-way stop. If any students are still on the bus once you have passed all 5 of the stops go back to the front of the road and try again. Keep doing this until all students have reached their stops or if you get too tired to continue.

  • @wendymartin6479
    @wendymartin6479 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    'The snakes just hijacked the bus' is the best line I have ever heard.

  • @ZmanAdventurez88
    @ZmanAdventurez88 3 ปีที่แล้ว +246

    I was sketched out about him getting out of the bus to save some cats but it's humane so I saw it as being a good person, but then he goes to steal some copper wire... Smh...

    • @sadserenity573
      @sadserenity573 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      They are literal monsters who cares lol

    • @ThePolecatProcess
      @ThePolecatProcess 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@sadserenity573 I thought they was fixing to die

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      @@sadserenity573 George thought the same until he stole the wires and all the crazy shit happened.

    • @johntom6002
      @johntom6002 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Bro what are they gonna use it for lamo

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      @@johntom6002 sell it.
      George, being based off of me, is both an idiot and was having some sort of mental breakdown at the moment, causing him to impulsively steal the wires.

  • @abosedejohn749
    @abosedejohn749 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    man these stories never fail to send chills down my spine. hope you keep making creepy videos

  • @aaronlefebre5060
    @aaronlefebre5060 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    That transition from horror to action comedy is just gold! 🤣🤣🤣

  • @sociallyawkwardpotato9242
    @sociallyawkwardpotato9242 3 ปีที่แล้ว +170

    this was more of a comedy than a horror, and i love it, the whole thing with the copper wires was fucking hilarious

    • @WhatIsLove170
      @WhatIsLove170 2 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      "A bunch of copper wires I stole hijacked my bus!" The story

  • @ants7279
    @ants7279 3 ปีที่แล้ว +152

    Man the part when they stool the copper wire from the house just killed me😂Then he wanted one of them to go inside the house and they all said No!Like one of does movies when the Dad is a bum and tries to make his kids do something clearly dangerous.

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      George is the idiot dad. I didn't intentionally portray him like this, but just went with it shortly after writing the story.

    • @arf6899
      @arf6899 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@jd_kreeper2799 and it was an amazing choice

  • @Xellx3
    @Xellx3 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I absolutely LOVE creepypasta's with sets of rules and stuff like that
    They're AMAZING

  • @lizweber4996
    @lizweber4996 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    2 sets of rules in 1 story!!! Awesome!! Made things more interesting!!!

  • @sebastianacevedo9444
    @sebastianacevedo9444 3 ปีที่แล้ว +144

    This is one of the best Rules Creepypastas I've ever heard. The protagonist follows the rules, we figure out how much they're getting paid, we figure out why people live in such areas, and most importantly we saw a rule be made

    • @bigboymalloy2261
      @bigboymalloy2261 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      He followed some of the rules dont forget he left the bus just to free some cats and steal copper wires from some unknown entities which by itself is crazy and hilarious but the icimg on the cake is that stealing the wire backfired im such an unfathomable way

    • @VioletMilks
      @VioletMilks ปีที่แล้ว +5

      rule 14 or 12: don’t hire a man named George, he is insane.

  • @-Dr.Plague-
    @-Dr.Plague- 3 ปีที่แล้ว +235

    Those dastardly bus demons just won’t go away
    Edit: I forgot how much I liked this story, this needs a sequel.

    • @TheDestructor04
      @TheDestructor04 3 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Bus demons as in, children? In that case I fully agree.

    • @leviathan6365
      @leviathan6365 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I have seen you everywhere

    • @kiemades7437
      @kiemades7437 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@TheDestructor04 If you wanted to you could uh "accidentally" hit a convention tree.

    • @ChipsDubbo06
      @ChipsDubbo06 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      What’s your favorite type of bus demon? Mines the ones that burn the bu- wait shit my schizophrenia is kicking in again, it’s just me with a Molotov don’t worry

    • @ihateonions6911
      @ihateonions6911 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Mr plague we miss you back a site 19 come back

  • @hairymagician7551
    @hairymagician7551 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    rules: dont stop the bus for no reason
    bus driver: hey kids lets go break some cats out

  • @gearboxsys9313
    @gearboxsys9313 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I love that freeing the cats had literally no consequences, it was just the wires that were a step too far

  • @KGBBooks
    @KGBBooks 3 ปีที่แล้ว +351

    Broke: Using the Infinity Stones to wipe out half of all life in the universe
    Woke: Using the Infinity Stones to make lists of rules

    • @Dezmen300
      @Dezmen300 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      facts

    • @jackdurden466
      @jackdurden466 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Grant I’m with ya on that. I currently have the time stone on layaway at Macy’s. I can’t wait to use it! Hope it doesn’t kill me.

    • @pinkuuinkuu1441
      @pinkuuinkuu1441 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      “My infinity stones came with a weird set of rules”

    • @russiannpcbot6408
      @russiannpcbot6408 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Funny thing is Thanos was an environmentalist. Over population is destroying the planet. Removing half of it would solve a lot of problems. It's the only real solution to climate change.

    • @charmingcthulhu6544
      @charmingcthulhu6544 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@russiannpcbot6408 not when you also wipe out half of all plant life. His goal *was* to wipe out half of *all life* afterall.

  • @howlinghellgar2214
    @howlinghellgar2214 3 ปีที่แล้ว +35

    Can I just say this is probably my favorite “list of rules” type of creepypasta? Idk what it is about this one specifically, but maybe that the weird rules aren’t just in one building or small area, but widespread. Like it’s a “normal” thing in this community to have wack rules and strange occurrences, and the people living there are just like “yeah, but rent’s cheap”.

  • @zerogaming0000
    @zerogaming0000 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    person: "like herobrine"
    subtitles: "like carol bryan"

  • @rush9188
    @rush9188 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This entire story is a roller coaster

  • @Lex60
    @Lex60 3 ปีที่แล้ว +184

    ME: All this trouble and his life and sanity being in constant danger just for $20USD by the hour? That is horrible! The exploration of the working class must stop! AHH!
    THEM: "Is actually $200USD each hour... and a bonus for the troubles if it is any."
    ME ALREADY PACKING LUNCH AND MY DRIVER LICENSE: SIGN ME THE F-UP!

    • @odeo5691
      @odeo5691 3 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      I'm willing to gamble my life for 200 dollars an hour

    • @daileygaming9488
      @daileygaming9488 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@odeo5691 better pay than a doctor, so why not lmao

    • @daileygaming9488
      @daileygaming9488 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@odeo5691 and sometimes you're driving all night and some of the following day? Think of the time and a half overtime :p

    • @TheDrewcifur
      @TheDrewcifur 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I'd take that deal. I've risked my life for much less.

    • @Adr16n1122
      @Adr16n1122 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Dude, same. I wouldn't mind doing the guards job for those rates at all. And I get to smash TVs occasionally. I see this as an absolute win.

  • @SonarClash
    @SonarClash 3 ปีที่แล้ว +42

    0:45 "The students dismiss at 4am." And I thought I was early getting on the bus.

    • @linnylulu2199
      @linnylulu2199 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I have to get to the bus around 6am and i thought that was early 🤚

  • @Tubs2
    @Tubs2 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Tommy's a savage lol "we robbin this burnt body too driver or what?"

  • @Thezedword12
    @Thezedword12 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I actually have my own rule: 1. If you show up to some job and there is a list of scary cryptic rules, then leave immediately.

  • @channelspectator9661
    @channelspectator9661 3 ปีที่แล้ว +201

    “Henry stickmin Collection”
    “Herobrine from Minecraft”
    This guy isn’t an adult bus driver, he’s a 14 year old on a nostalgia binge!

  • @jashjash5374
    @jashjash5374 3 ปีที่แล้ว +42

    Rough world, so much shyte happened due to a bus driver seeing captive cats which escalated into stealing copper wires, and we can pretty much be sure that the cats freed have been recaptured too...

  • @ArcanineEspeon
    @ArcanineEspeon ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm about to listen to a horror story for the third time. It might have been the first rules story I ever heard. I think the events I already recognize are going to be comforting in a weird way :)

  • @hillelvanhooren9911
    @hillelvanhooren9911 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey ! Just to Say i'm so happy that i found your channel
    I really like creepypasta and horror stories
    But it's kinda difficult to find long creepypasta in my language ( at least not a lot )
    So thank you ! I really enjoy

  • @vitalzscopez4695
    @vitalzscopez4695 3 ปีที่แล้ว +144

    This would be an amazing series of different people experience

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +24

      I do actually allow others to write stories in my universe. Multiple authors writing stories that take place in the same universe was something I never saw on r/nosleep, and this made me so frustrated I made this.

    • @kaiwontwin
      @kaiwontwin 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@jd_kreeper2799 oh you wrote this story
      Noice ur good at this

    • @somerandomdude5872
      @somerandomdude5872 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@jd_kreeper2799 oh dang, that's for writing it

    • @codycotter167
      @codycotter167 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Probably one of my favorite rules stories my moms a bus driver so it hit close to home

  • @karlaaus4842
    @karlaaus4842 3 ปีที่แล้ว +266

    Story was great for a 15 year old 👍
    Although the sudden decision to steal copper wire was very strange considering he circumstances 😂

    • @ChrisBrett2
      @ChrisBrett2 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      This comment seems like a review for youtube.

    • @HeresVasilias
      @HeresVasilias 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@ChrisBrett2 that's exactly what it is.

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      George was having a mental breakdown during the job so he did that.

    • @bigships
      @bigships 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      CoPpeR WiRinG !!!!

    • @dummmonke4269
      @dummmonke4269 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      gotta get that drug money somehow

  • @statichydra9031
    @statichydra9031 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is still one of my favourite listens. Always puts me in a good mood when I'm down.

  • @wolfetteplays8894
    @wolfetteplays8894 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Absolutely fantastic story. Loved this one! Very creative and really makes you think a lot. There’s a lot of streets named military road in the US. So god knows which one it really is. Leaves a lot to the mind 🧠

  • @MegaKuchiku
    @MegaKuchiku 3 ปีที่แล้ว +108

    The true horror of this story is how he was allowed and able to drive a school bus with no training or experience

    • @rafaelanim8
      @rafaelanim8 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      A neurotypical person would bolt hahah

    • @blobof4294
      @blobof4294 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@rafaelanim8 as a neurodiv person i would drive despite me not having a license or knowledge to drive and also being terrified of cars and being in them in high speed situations or curvy roads so, a bunch of kids are gonna die!

    • @AzureRadio
      @AzureRadio ปีที่แล้ว

      That's most commonly the case my guy... You have a driver's license? Congrats, you're hired champ

    • @agnesstokes1078
      @agnesstokes1078 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Obviously you haven't heard the real story about the bus drivers they hired from the state of Washington and they didn't know the area across country they didn't know. Parallel!!!!!

    • @kacpadestro8086
      @kacpadestro8086 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      the red flag was "gun is in the glove compartment"

  • @silvernightskin
    @silvernightskin 3 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    This took me by surprise in the best way. I want a series out of this, maybe the kids stories? Find out what happens to the cats? Whoever made this is pretty damn talented.

  • @CRWNVCTRA
    @CRWNVCTRA 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    such a detailed story packed in all revolving around a public transport vehicle, i love it

  • @The_looker42
    @The_looker42 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    "Please let this be a normal bus ride." "IN THIS NEIGHBORHOOD? NO WAY!"

  • @Jokoer86
    @Jokoer86 3 ปีที่แล้ว +45

    The first like 50 minutes of this was creepy and then the last 10 minutes was pure chaos

  • @king81992
    @king81992 3 ปีที่แล้ว +48

    Thumbnail Image- The thing on the bus is on the prowl all through the day(and night too!)
    Story is like a horror themed version of the Magic School Bus.
    The setting of a town where every house has a set of rules has lots of potential.
    The last fifteen to twenty minutes were like Fast and the Furious combined with supernatural shenanigans.

    • @glados5065
      @glados5065 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Nah it just wants a high five.

    • @CactusCarrot
      @CactusCarrot 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@glados5065 i think it deserves a headpat.

    • @jd_kreeper2799
      @jd_kreeper2799 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I'm glad you like the world I created! I do plan to make a lot more George stories of him exploring the lore behind this story and possibly others.
      I'd also love to see stories written by other authors from different character's perspectives, just contact me on Reddit first and tell me what you want to write.

    • @avrie6668
      @avrie6668 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I would love a horror version of the magic school bus a classroom and a teacher whose Ethier not human or is trying to make things more bearable as each time they go on a Field trip something abnormal and horrific happens students magically come back completely fine with no memory of ever being injured recordings anything of proof never come out right

  • @thegoldenstick
    @thegoldenstick 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mr creeps should have Over 3 Mill by now!

  • @DavidRdavidminecraft
    @DavidRdavidminecraft 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    22:55 “How much does it cost to live here?” My guy that’s the first question you have about this whole place?!?!

  • @InternetSupervillain
    @InternetSupervillain 3 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    Ludicrous, yet fun. Great to see the cops involved in the chaos, instead of just arresting the victim after (as is their role in most of these stories).

  • @bizzyizzy9526
    @bizzyizzy9526 3 ปีที่แล้ว +46

    Being bus driver is already a Creepypasta all in itself 🤣

  • @thememer6844
    @thememer6844 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    every one scared
    person running next to the bus:
    Hi we have been trying to contact you about you cars extended warranty.

  • @hollowlee1356
    @hollowlee1356 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I loved all the weird parts xD like usually people fallow the weird rules in these stories but George is like :" have you seen inside the mansion before???"

  • @INFINITESYKOSIS
    @INFINITESYKOSIS 3 ปีที่แล้ว +102

    This is perfect timing ....i just got finishing Taxiderming one of my doppelgangers

    • @chronic_hip_and_back_pain
      @chronic_hip_and_back_pain 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Sounds fun

    • @INFINITESYKOSIS
      @INFINITESYKOSIS 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@chronic_hip_and_back_pain it was!!!

    • @gamevibe23
      @gamevibe23 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      YOU WHAT!?

    • @INFINITESYKOSIS
      @INFINITESYKOSIS 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@gamevibe23 DOOM room needed some decoration

    • @gamevibe23
      @gamevibe23 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@INFINITESYKOSIS oh cool that room was looking bland

  • @ohlone67
    @ohlone67 3 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    I would love to hear more of this bus driver’s stories. Better yet, some of the student’s stories.