C1 Essay Writing Tips | Aiming for C1: Episode 1

Aiming for C1: Episode 1
Watch me give feedback on a C1 essay. This video will help you prepare for the Cambridge Advanced Exam essay writing task. It is packed with C1 essay writing tips.
Here is the task, which inspired the essay:
Your class has attended a panel discussion on what role the government should play in keeping its country’s citizens healthy. You have made the notes below.
The role the government should play in keeping its country’s citizens healthy
introducing educational campaigns
regulating the cost of food
encouraging people to exercise
Some opinions expressed in the discussion
The government is failing to educate young people about the hidden dangers of Sugar
Taxes on unhealthy food should be introduced.
Gym membership should be free.
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[@Ricardo-xg6gx]

Thanks for your today's video. It has been really educational and interesting as usual, but I would have rated it as C1 level before your recommendations. A possible title might be The Role that Our Governments Could Play in Our Health (two easy practical solutions to be applied). Is it too long?

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Thank you so much! But could you explain more about your word choices? It would make me understand better!

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I would like to know if it is corret "exercising would not only be beneficial....... but (would) also increase..... This the structure not only but also if is necessity of using would twice

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Can you give me the full sentence you want to write? 😀

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in spanish the word comenzar is pretty normal howver, if you search for it in the cambridge dictionary, it has a c2 level 🤣

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

I’m fluent in Spanish. Many normal words in Spanish are high-level words in English. A Spanish speaker will find it easier to understand a formal English text than a very informal one. We take formal words from Latin and informal ones from our Germanic roots, as a general rule.

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Can I send you my essays to correct them?

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I’m sorry but I don’t have time anymore - I have a full time job too 😀

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@@englishlearningexpert3595 OK, thank you for your help