Great piece, very classical and the melodies and harmonies all make sense! There are many composers on TH-cam who just mix melodies and harmonies with no real structure, but you seem to know music theory very well 👏
Честно сказать, я много уже переслушал разных сочинений, и это, наверное, пока самое музыкальное, что я слышал, даже сюжет есть. Только концовка затянутая, а так вполне неплохо. Молодец! Тебе даже не стыдно сказать: "Продолжай!".
@@Pikpus2357 you are welcome! Sorry, that you probably need to use translator for my comment, but i thought that i can express what i meant better in my native language. I forgot to say certain thing about the coda of this composition, i think that certainty in assessment is important, because i'm composer too, and it was often sad that no one says specifics, only general phrases, it seems as if the person did not quite understand what the work was about, and just formally replies. in general, the work is really interesting. In style, it is something between classicism and romanticism. I don't know if the classical form is used here, or if it is a more structurally free work. There are only two unpleasant moments that I would fix: a second fragment from the initial theme, which is repeated several times in the course of the piece - it's bad because the melody itself is very bright, and it's better to do without repetitions inside the theme, and you had a moment where a short motif inside the theme is repeated twice, and dynamically it's no different, it's a little jarring. The second problem, as I have already said, is the ending, frequent attempts to finish confuse the listener when, instead of permission, he hears the beginning of a melody that has already sounded with a reserve that it will sound to the end, and when it comes to the end, it is still not resolved, but something else continues to sound. This is slightly reminiscent of Beethoven's manner of finishing a piece, but his repetition of the motif is shorter and more logical. In general, you're doing well, I wouldn't mind showing you what I'm doing, because I think that an opinion from a person who writes well himself is much more valuable than just a listener. I listened to your other works, they are also worthy, I even subscribed.
Such Skills in composing. This piece had the elements of Romanticism, with hint of Baroque and Neo-Classicism. Can you compose something modern or jazz? Like in the style of Debussy or Rachmaninoff, or other Russian Composers?
Hi, thanks a lot for your kind words! I would be totally unable to compose a piece in jazz style or impressionist like Debussy, but I would love to write something in the style of some late romantic Russian composers - Bortkiewicz in particular. My personal taste, however, goes to late classical/early romantic, that’s where I feel at home. Cheers!
instead of just constrasting forte with mezzoforte, you should contrast it with piano. you can see some older scores like those of mozart and haydn where the only contrast they made was forte and piano, occasionally fortissimo or pianissimo, bit generally not playing much in the middle. that's because any instrument is most colourful in their extremes, rather than having the interpreter try their best to contrast some almost indistinguishable colours tl;dr: use p instead of mf, even thought it might sound worse in musescore, the player (if you get your piece performed) will know what to do and it will sound better
Fantastic Piece! I Love the way you conserved the structure of the classical Rondó, I hope to listen you playing this with human touch, I'm very curious of your own interpretation. I'd like you to visit my channel to, I also upload original pieces composed by me. I'd love to know what you think about my compositions. I'm going to upload another piece next week.
wonderful 🎹🎹🎹🎹🎹🎹🎹💯💯💯💯💯💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Thank you very much :)
@@Pikpus2357 you are very welcome ❤️🎵🎶🙌
Splendid work here. Simply wondeful. Been grinning from ear to ear the entire time.
@@nikhilr-q thank you so much for such a kind and positive comment. Happy you liked the piece!
I love that Rondó...congratulations and much success!! 😍♥️
Thank you very much
This is really impressive, and extremely fun to listen to. Keep up the great work!
Thank you very much!
Love it! Well done!
Quite good. Congrats.
Thank you
As usual very nice I love the little moments of harmonic tension, very classical.
Glad you liked it, thanks!
That was really, really nice. I like how you slow the melody down with the 8th notes. You definitely have Beethoven’s earlier piano style down pat.
Thank you very much.
Way to go!
Great piece, very classical and the melodies and harmonies all make sense! There are many composers on TH-cam who just mix melodies and harmonies with no real structure, but you seem to know music theory very well 👏
Thanks for your kind words! and yes indeed, I like classical forms and always try to make my ideas fit in strictly conceived structures. Thanks again!
Честно сказать, я много уже переслушал разных сочинений, и это, наверное, пока самое музыкальное, что я слышал, даже сюжет есть. Только концовка затянутая, а так вполне неплохо. Молодец! Тебе даже не стыдно сказать: "Продолжай!".
Спасибо!
@@Pikpus2357 you are welcome! Sorry, that you probably need to use translator for my comment, but i thought that i can express what i meant better in my native language. I forgot to say certain thing about the coda of this composition, i think that certainty in assessment is important, because i'm composer too, and it was often sad that no one says specifics, only general phrases, it seems as if the person did not quite understand what the work was about, and just formally replies. in general, the work is really interesting. In style, it is something between classicism and romanticism. I don't know if the classical form is used here, or if it is a more structurally free work. There are only two unpleasant moments that I would fix: a second fragment from the initial theme, which is repeated several times in the course of the piece - it's bad because the melody itself is very bright, and it's better to do without repetitions inside the theme, and you had a moment where a short motif inside the theme is repeated twice, and dynamically it's no different, it's a little jarring. The second problem, as I have already said, is the ending, frequent attempts to finish confuse the listener when, instead of permission, he hears the beginning of a melody that has already sounded with a reserve that it will sound to the end, and when it comes to the end, it is still not resolved, but something else continues to sound. This is slightly reminiscent of Beethoven's manner of finishing a piece, but his repetition of the motif is shorter and more logical. In general, you're doing well, I wouldn't mind showing you what I'm doing, because I think that an opinion from a person who writes well himself is much more valuable than just a listener. I listened to your other works, they are also worthy, I even subscribed.
Скажите, пожалуйста, автора этого замечательного произведения! Спасибо!
Hello, thank you! I am the composer.
Such Skills in composing. This piece had the elements of Romanticism, with hint of Baroque and Neo-Classicism. Can you compose something modern or jazz? Like in the style of Debussy or Rachmaninoff, or other Russian Composers?
Hi, thanks a lot for your kind words! I would be totally unable to compose a piece in jazz style or impressionist like Debussy, but I would love to write something in the style of some late romantic Russian composers - Bortkiewicz in particular. My personal taste, however, goes to late classical/early romantic, that’s where I feel at home. Cheers!
instead of just constrasting forte with mezzoforte, you should contrast it with piano. you can see some older scores like those of mozart and haydn where the only contrast they made was forte and piano, occasionally fortissimo or pianissimo, bit generally not playing much in the middle. that's because any instrument is most colourful in their extremes, rather than having the interpreter try their best to contrast some almost indistinguishable colours
tl;dr: use p instead of mf, even thought it might sound worse in musescore, the player (if you get your piece performed) will know what to do and it will sound better
This is Rossini’s La Cambiale di Matrimonio Act 2🤔🤔
I think it’s more like kuhlau’s sonatina 1 in c major third movement.
Not bad.
Fantastic Piece! I Love the way you conserved the structure of the classical Rondó, I hope to listen you playing this with human touch, I'm very curious of your own interpretation. I'd like you to visit my channel to, I also upload original pieces composed by me. I'd love to know what you think about my compositions. I'm going to upload another piece next week.
Thank you! Sure I’ll check out your compositions.