RWBY Evermorrow AU | Animated Intro

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 17 ต.ค. 2023
  • DISCLAIMER: This project is not endorsed by Rooster Teeth in any way. Views, opinions, and thoughts are all our own. It is a fanwork and is not for profit. Rooster Teeth, RWBY and all properties therein are trade names or registered trademarks of Rooster Teeth Productions, LLC.
    © Rooster Teeth Productions, LLC.
    3D ASSETS:
    Dapper Phantom - 3d Beacon Courtyard Set
    Endertinman - 3d Beacon Locker Room Set & General 3d Help
    Joe Ranman - 3d Beacon Courtyard Set
    NinjaSteeve - 3d Beacon Courtyard Set & 3d Beacon Amphitheatre Set
    Proxy - 3d Beacon Locker Room Set & General 3d Help
    Sy - General 3d Help
    Xacrom - 3d Beacon Locker Room Set & General 3d Help
    Zahlen - 3d Beacon Amphitheatre Set
    --
    Evermorrow is a story that takes place in a world where Beacon didn't fall (among other changes), so Team RWBY & Friends are free to continue their education at Beacon - though it'll still be challenging!
    Evermorrow also has its own twitter account at @ RWBYEvermorrow where you can read a LOT more lore and stuff.
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  • @carterweinstein4030
    @carterweinstein4030 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +315

    JEALOUS NORA BECAUSE IN THIS AU SHE HAS TO WATCH TWO OF HER TEAMMATES ACT LOVEY DOVEY LITERALLY EVERY SECOND WHILE SHE PINES OVER REN IS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT OMG

    • @creativekid0264
      @creativekid0264 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      Facts

    • @nocx4592
      @nocx4592 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Oh, I didn't even notice Nora because I was too buzy looking at Arkos...
      Just like Ren.

  • @SchneeflockeMonsoon
    @SchneeflockeMonsoon 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +460

    Hold up, you actually gave Hazel a weapon?
    Had Weiss fight an actual villain from Atlas?
    Make callbacks to the original OP without just copying it?
    Made Weiss wear white with blue accents and red highlights?
    Gave Ruby white not cream clothes so she doesn’t melt into her shirt???
    YOU GENIUS!!

    • @Blue-nc5pr
      @Blue-nc5pr 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      IKR ITS GREAAAAT KDNDNZJ

    • @dragonsvideos6737
      @dragonsvideos6737 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

      Hazels weapons are a pair of those metal gauntlets. Not like yangs but they’re metal plates on his knuckles

    • @solicius_6459
      @solicius_6459 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      small things that make for great changes!

  • @SwitchbackCh
    @SwitchbackCh 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +194

    Evermorrow leading the charge with RWBY AU content, couldn't be prouder of the heights it's reaching 😩

  • @oscarstainton
    @oscarstainton 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +73

    Four main characters are too much for you? How about TWELVE?!?! Muahahahahaaa!!

    • @antyep
      @antyep 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      And nothing bad happened!! EVAR!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!

  • @anthonyfanchin1144
    @anthonyfanchin1144 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +52

    What If...Beacon never fell?

  • @seanharv
    @seanharv 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +89

    I haven't really commented on it yet, but I love that you've decided to include Ilia in this AU. The outfit you came up with for her is awesome too. I can't wait to see what happens next between her, Blake, and Adam. This series is such a cool idea. Always looking forward to more!

    • @kaleidoarms
      @kaleidoarms  8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      I couldn't exclude Ilia, she's one of my favourites 😂

  • @naturescorruptedinfactorie8062
    @naturescorruptedinfactorie8062 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +35

    I was NOT expecting Alyx here Omg??? It seems like she’s on a team with Oscar, Penny, and Illia which I have never seen before

  • @Ponera-Sama
    @Ponera-Sama 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    "I just want to take a moment to appreciate how far we've grown since that fateful day. I want to thank everyone who fought, whether alongside us or on their own, to defend this world and its people. And although they're not here right now... I want to thank Beacon Academy, Professor Ozpin, and team RWBY, For making this day possible."

  • @ozmasterofmasks5838
    @ozmasterofmasks5838 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +23

    Hope roman survives this time😢
    And it's nice to see an intro showing his antagonism with ruby.
    Also now I wonder who is his other henchman

  • @mariapazgonzalezlesme
    @mariapazgonzalezlesme 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +102

    Okay, first of all, this opening is AMAZING. It feels so RWBY yet it's blended with your own style.
    And love the details around this opening.
    The unknow mercernary using a gunblade. (Final Fantasy reference?)
    Nora and Ren look so done how lovey-dovey is Arkos LMAO.
    Okay but Roman Torchwick using red on his new character design is a good use of parallel / antithesis against Ruby, and a good way to showcase their rivalry.
    Watts VS Weiss, an interesing choice since both are from Atlas.
    Hazel VS Yang, the tanks of the group, and love how Hazel have more tech-based guantlet that allows a better use for his Semblance, and parallel with with their character.
    Blake VS Adam is obvious enough. But now I am curious how his role will develop in this AU.

  • @teenprogamer3555
    @teenprogamer3555 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    I think this would be fun if rooster teeth approved this, a cool spinoff series like rwby: chibi or rwby: ice queendom would be fun, and since this one is a Au, I believe it's slightly better because it can tell how the story could have gone if certain events, turned out differently

  • @CrazyWizza
    @CrazyWizza 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Now this is awesome. Like awesome awesome. Great work y’all.

  • @batknight2014
    @batknight2014 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

    This & Dust Queen are two major projects I'm looking forward to. Hope to see more soon, but please take your time!

    • @theolob99
      @theolob99 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Dust Queen ?! Is that a fusion of Bite the Dust and Killer Queen ?!

    • @batknight2014
      @batknight2014 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@theolob99I'm not entirely sure lol. But it's another 3D rwby fan project in the works focusing on Weiss I believe.

    • @mariapazgonzalezlesme
      @mariapazgonzalezlesme 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@theolob99 It's a Weiss-centric short series.

  • @JosephFrazier-ps2hb
    @JosephFrazier-ps2hb 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

    I love it! It’s like an actual season of RWBY!

  • @teoch5217
    @teoch5217 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    No saving the world from the apocalypse. There is no Salem. Just Teens of Color at Monster Killing School. Rule of Cool. And finally, the characters have personality. Cardin's team deserves more airtime and being more than assholes to beat up.
    And they should be in Beacon for at least 3 years before it falls.

    • @christopherpeelerii9700
      @christopherpeelerii9700 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      if there no salem in this then who is cinder working for

    • @teoch5217
      @teoch5217 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@christopherpeelerii9700 i don’t care she can have own side

  • @ani5213
    @ani5213 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    the transition btw the girls fighting looks so cool! also love the shot where ruby leans over the map, the pose of every chaarcter in it tells you so much abt their personality (esp love nora c:). Really impressive stuff!!!

  • @abbycollins4820
    @abbycollins4820 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Gives me early RWBY vibes

  • @sneakierhawk8388
    @sneakierhawk8388 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    My god this whole series so far is amazing. Such good work by everyone involved

  • @lamontaylopez1991
    @lamontaylopez1991 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    This was amazing Especially that Transition to all The main character fighting That was a nice nod to volume two's Intro

  • @ethanrobins6547
    @ethanrobins6547 29 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The fact that i can tell this will be a promising series just by seeing the intro really speaks volumes on why communities that have access to some form of model for the characters will always be the best "if you want something done right do it yourself" people i have ever seen

  • @mikururun
    @mikururun 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Kale carry on a whole serie by himself lets goooooo

  • @spencermalley10
    @spencermalley10 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Youve spoiled us with this.
    Keep up the amazing work

  • @undeathghost5627
    @undeathghost5627 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Rrally cool OP. I love the dedication to making it feel like a RWBY OP. The music felt good and you can tell you tried to tie the scenes to the music.

  • @truepowersichigo1952
    @truepowersichigo1952 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Even if our paths grow more divergent
    And though it seems the road's forever long
    We struggle through the sickness
    The sadness we have witnessed
    But our faith is everstrong
    Maybe in the past, the roles felt certain
    A simple choice between who's right and wrong
    Now that we have lived it
    Right from left is given
    We're reborn, we'll carry on

  • @Kuroyami0Fukaikuro
    @Kuroyami0Fukaikuro 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Holy shit the CRDL redesigns look awesome!

    • @gundhamtanaka9487
      @gundhamtanaka9487 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I know right? They may have been d*ckheads in the original series, but "Atlas" we get to see what their semblance and area colors are now

  • @devonselden4414
    @devonselden4414 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    Let's do this, team!

  • @Numatruehome
    @Numatruehome 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    WOOOOO LET’S GOOO, you guys nocked it out of the park so far and I can’t wait for more of this story, and the extent you are going through to put all your love in it with this intro, the art, the voices, I can’t wait

  • @Takeda10K
    @Takeda10K 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I have been starved for more RWBY since binging the series, your work is fantastic, I can’t wait to see more. Keep it up!

  • @Anemonemonemona
    @Anemonemonemona 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    one cool detail i noticed is that when team rwby is first shown, they're in decrescent order.
    Yang
    Blake
    Weiss
    Ruby
    So when they run towards the door, in order, they make the team's name: Ruby going first, Weiss in second and Blake and Yang coming right after.

  • @blumasterblade2361
    @blumasterblade2361 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Holy Cow those outfits look gorgeous! 🤩

  • @mastertjt56
    @mastertjt56 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS, ESPECIALLY THE DESIGNS

  • @SaphirrWorks
    @SaphirrWorks 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    So glad to see such a well made RWBY fan project. Keep it up! 👍

  • @xxlasthopexx2603
    @xxlasthopexx2603 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This song I'm so glad is being used the right way, and it also fits this fan project too which makes it 100x times better.

  • @maxsotomayor3674
    @maxsotomayor3674 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I believe I'll like this RWBY show better than the original

  • @JayAshBranAudioScripts
    @JayAshBranAudioScripts 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    You know what!!! I liked this. It really took me back to when RWBY first started. You did amazing. I really wish I had talent like this

  • @christophermitchell9739
    @christophermitchell9739 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Looking good

  • @derrickdaniels3955
    @derrickdaniels3955 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    The fandom coming in clutch. I love that Oscar Alyx Penny and Ilia are team. What's their name?

    • @oscarstainton
      @oscarstainton 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      Team OPAL - the 'L' part froms from Alyx and her ascribed surname 'Lidell', just like in the Alice stories. And 'A' stands for Amitola.

  • @polskamapping6116
    @polskamapping6116 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    0:42 Yesssss Adam is here lets gooo

  • @timothywilliams4625
    @timothywilliams4625 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Damn you really did a good job on this intro.

  • @aidanbasker4020
    @aidanbasker4020 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I’m so glad they brought Pyrrha and Penny back

  • @emilianomerendino3311
    @emilianomerendino3311 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Pretty cool, best of luck with the episodes

  • @samflood5631
    @samflood5631 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Personal Opinion. I think these designs are better than the canon show.

    • @JM-wk2bo
      @JM-wk2bo 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Totally agree

  • @Bunny_Crystal
    @Bunny_Crystal 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is incedible work so far!, hyped for more episodess!

  • @user-bq7bs2wp4e
    @user-bq7bs2wp4e 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    just found this now and I am caught up. so far fantastic.

  • @Jaxx_was_here_
    @Jaxx_was_here_ 28 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Low key this is sooo good. I’m so in for the rest of it ❤❤❤❤

  • @joyouspoke
    @joyouspoke 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Watching your stuff so far is making me love rwby again

  • @Blue-nc5pr
    @Blue-nc5pr 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    OMG I LOVE HOW U USED EVERSTRONG FOR THE INTRO IT LOOKS GREAT KSBDNSK:DDD

  • @historiasdeinternet2585
    @historiasdeinternet2585 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    im gonna enjoy this, im gonna enjoy this a lot! thanks for your work.

  • @IzzyakaSpookyGurlQueenal-lh3dh
    @IzzyakaSpookyGurlQueenal-lh3dh 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    HECK YEAH!!!! COOKIES FOREVER!!!!

  • @tick-tackgirl335
    @tick-tackgirl335 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The story has evolved so much from kids going to school to become hunters to more and more drama, like honestly its just so hard to follow. i like the story of the 4 maidens and the orgine of grimm but than it just became to much. Simplisity is sometimes the best motive.

  • @octaviandoroteja8512
    @octaviandoroteja8512 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS LOOKS SO GOOOD!!!! YOU DID AN AMAIZING JOB!!!!

  • @ridgegamer735
    @ridgegamer735 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This is way better then Current Rooster Teeth. Infact, I'd watch this one more then Rooster's version

  • @eeveerosedew8547
    @eeveerosedew8547 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This is so amazing I love it so much aaaaahh! Seriously it made me squeal for 5 minutes straight

  • @wolf-marks9353
    @wolf-marks9353 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I love everything about this. I loved the small Arkos moment. I loved that Oscar was in a team of his own and the new clothes design

  • @Riddler-jq8fw
    @Riddler-jq8fw 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This feel more like the first 2 volumes
    good job👍

  • @cyrus9424
    @cyrus9424 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Fire as usual.

  • @Gdsryrox
    @Gdsryrox 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Lets hope team RWBY actually meet watt in this timeline

  • @claireskitchen4790
    @claireskitchen4790 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Ruby been hugged by Penny and Oscar!! ❤😊
    I love their friendship with our Little Red Riding Hood🌹🍪

  • @raidengodofthunder6177
    @raidengodofthunder6177 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Looks really freaking good.

  • @karlamichelle4946
    @karlamichelle4946 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Im absolutely in love with this AU the fact that Oscar is his own character and not just an Ozpin avatar makes this even more interesting this is what the Rooster teeth should have done in the first place im so glad someone finally capture Monty vision I know this is a fan project and not the official but this is by far my favorite fan project right next to fixing RWBY

  • @foxywoxy0w068
    @foxywoxy0w068 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    An AU where Beacon never fell? Colour me interested!
    My biggest issue I had with the original RWBY was Beacon falling way too early as it felt like there was little time spent with it, if it had fallen by Volume 6, it would have been way more of an emotional impact and acting as a moment of despair for the heroes akin to Empire Strikes Back.
    Honestly I think RWBY should have been a nine volume series where every three volumes follows a specific arc or story line.
    Volume 1-3: Entirely based in Beacon with Team RWBY and co having all sorts of adventures, maybe even have it set around a full school year to give them time to grow as characters and for the series to take off. This part can end on a foreshadowing of a greater villain possibly returning (Salem).
    Volume 4-6: Second school year, have them travel the world as part of their training so they can learn more about the world and what they will be protecting, this can help out with both world building and building relationships with new characters. Volume 4 can be set in Mistral, Volume 5 in Atlas and Volume 6 in Vacuo. Could be a great way for the characters to stumble upon mysteries about the world and Salem. Then it ends with the Fall of Beacon with Salem making her grand entrance, Beacon falls, the heroes go missing (think of Volume 8 but at Beacon instead) and a new threat appears, one who might be unstoppable.
    Volume 7-9: The final set of the series starting with the group in the Ever After where they learn about Salem's origins and are tasked to find a way to stop her (could rewrite how the relics work as well) once they escape from it. The next volume will have them once again explore the world but this time to help save everyone and gather allies (and macguffins) before the epic conclusion in the final volume where they take on Salem and her forces in a last ditch effort to save the world they call home.

  • @deadpoolchimichangas7111
    @deadpoolchimichangas7111 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Yo this is fire and amazing.

  • @Sound613Wave
    @Sound613Wave 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    You had my curiosity
    Now you have my attention

  • @Pinxsea
    @Pinxsea 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    THESE CHARACTER DESIGNS ARE PEAK OMG

  • @darkreflection9087
    @darkreflection9087 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    How is it that the fans could treat RWBY better than Rooster Teeth

    • @maxsotomayor3674
      @maxsotomayor3674 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Because we're more creative than those RT writers who are too oppsessed with money.

  • @jasontoddapologist
    @jasontoddapologist 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    THIS IS AWESOME OMG

  • @micahbailey7328
    @micahbailey7328 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    O k in love with ruby and wieas's outfit

  • @greyjedi4794
    @greyjedi4794 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Well freaking done!!!!! 😎😎🙌🙌😎😎🙌🙌

  • @staymaddddd
    @staymaddddd 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    That was... AMAZING...!

  • @nicolasnagato3181
    @nicolasnagato3181 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Amazing intro ❤😎

  • @Cheetahcat-1128
    @Cheetahcat-1128 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Now this is a true reby intro as i loved this so much, keep up the amazing work, and to the vouce actors, you guys rocks as you have amazing voice acting, top knots, 100/100 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

  • @marshallf8678
    @marshallf8678 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is so cool

  • @SchneeflockeMonsoon
    @SchneeflockeMonsoon 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    So cooool!!

  • @ianjomarcaraballorodriguez6224
    @ianjomarcaraballorodriguez6224 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I wanna see adam again even if he has to be a bad guy again, he was soo cool and still is even after what happened.

  • @codename2590
    @codename2590 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Amazing

  • @therubennation8700
    @therubennation8700 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Wow, this got me Hype!

  • @RukoRuby
    @RukoRuby 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I love the new outfits for the characters, they look so good! Intro turned out awesome as well, can't wait to see how the series turns out! 😊

  • @Slyarno2795
    @Slyarno2795 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Fantastic intro.

  • @gromykoarmourjr.1391
    @gromykoarmourjr.1391 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This is how RWBY should happen from the very beginning😊🎉❤

  • @Gunn3rGuru
    @Gunn3rGuru 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Huh. Nice to see someone appreciate the Arrowfell soundtrack for once.

  • @CawmeKrazee
    @CawmeKrazee 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Love this

  • @oaksap1915
    @oaksap1915 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    So Good!!!

  • @AnimeFan4Life2022x
    @AnimeFan4Life2022x 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Nice

  • @jacksonfloyd2903
    @jacksonfloyd2903 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    this is super cool I would really like if this was like a Au of the main characters kids.

  • @ChrisAkuto
    @ChrisAkuto 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    i dont care if this is a fan made AU seeing oscars team got me HYPED AS HELL!! ALICE (or whatver her name was) ON OSCARS TEAM BRO WHAT A CRAZY IDEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @BryanSanchez-yw4vf
    @BryanSanchez-yw4vf หลายเดือนก่อน

    Definitely part of Supernatural

  • @vinny8589
    @vinny8589 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Let's all be completely honest RWBY NEEDS a hard Reboot
    10 Quality of Life Improvements on how to improve the RWBY series if remade.(I ask that if your going to add your opinion's please keep them "Friendly" if you have advice on how to improve or dislike a statement apply your reasoning but in a pleasant non-disrespected manor ty.)
    1. The GRIMM/Grim
    Remove Salem as the Grim's leader period, the Grimm did NOT need a "Human Face" it reduces their sense of Unknown, Dread, & Urgency as the series main antagonistic force. Designs using creatures based on myths, folklore, horror legends, and nightmarish entities as the premise of the Grimm should've been their staple footnote. It keeps them fresh, unknown and honestly intimidating. A sense of hopelessness and dread needs to accompany Grimm like simply meeting an unfamiliar Grimm should send shivers down not only the casts spines but the audience as well... Grimm commit atrocities, cruelty, and inhumane acts simply because they can. They are an "Evil" entity that's very existence is to spread misery, pain, suffering, and fuel themselves off the negative emotions of others. Warzones would be a grand example of drawing in the Grimm which would explain why NONE of the nation's war with each other out of fear the Grimm would overtake their lands like a plague of death & decay. Grimm should afflict those with "Hearts" & "Souls" mentally physically, emotionally in ways that would "Feel" Sinful or Evil. The Apathy Grimm was a prime example of Grimm that afflicts one's emotions negatively getting more Grimm that screw with those around the psychologically makes them all the more threatening, just as much as an Insect Grimm hunting from the shadows for "Prey" to take back to it's nest. The Grimm are Evil Period, and they need to be showcased as much. Remanent is Grimm and Gritty world at it's core, and that was glossed over far too often.
    2.Make the Dust Company mines OPEN Pit Minning Areas this shows that the Companies learned from past horrors that underground mines are Grimm Territory and that Open Pit Minning can be properly guarded if you can SEE where the Grimm are coming from.
    3. Make the Deep Forests, Aqueducts, Caves, Mountains, Caverns, abandoned Sewers Former Underground Mines
    The territory of the Grimm why because what's more frightening something that uses the Darkness to hunt it's prey right? Making these places that even Hunters and Huntresses try their best to avoid going alone or even in teams makes going in them feel all the more nerve racking to the audience. No matter how much power a Hunter or Huntress may have the Grimm will always be terrifying especially if they swarm you or use the Darkness to their advantage to "Hunt Prey" like a damn Xenomorph from Aliens would, situational awareness is key to avoid an untimely END a lesson every Hunter Huntress and Trained Military person would be aware of, You don't go looking for danger intentionally you go around it if possible. Going into said places without preparation especially ALONE is a kin to a death sentence, If going through say a Deep Forest is unavoidable Run as fast as possible until your out of said forest or at least until a place that can be properly fortified for camp can occur, sleeping at night would be akin to becoming Prey to a Hunter or Huntress in these locations sleeping during the daytime hours is safest. While remaining alert and vigilant during night hours would make more sense for someone trained to combat the Grimm.
    4. Remove the Evil Twin Gods and the Four Season Power B.S. and keep things grounded with Science with Magical Elements. The fact that both of these concepts have been added into RWBY has resulted in the story becoming exceedingly convoluted to the point of being Toxic in some situations.
    5. Drop the Shipping bullsh-t at least to a certain degree okay? Sorry but the fact shipping was introduced into the main cast felt annoyingly forced, and way too drawn out to stick two characters together who lets be honest have very little in common with one another aside from past traumatic experiences. I'm not saying certain ships don't work, I'm saying they needed to be presented more Natural and Gradually and I don't mean 8 f-king seasons of waiting to hold hands gradually.
    6. Ruby...I think many people seem to forget that Ruby is a CHILD, she's entitled to be bratty, to be hyper or happy go-lucky she's also entitled to have a melancholy side after recently losing her mother for reasons she not only doesn't understand but honestly hasn't fully grasped. Maturity is something gained over time it's gradual, yeah trauma and environment can result in a faster maturing cycle however it can't be something forced within storytelling otherwise it leads to a "Disconnect" with the audience and the Main Character. Ruby is supposed to be how we the audience are given the point of view of a little girl forced to take on the world and role as a leader thing she's NOT prepared for and will NEED Help and ADVICE from those around her to grow into a respectable leader. Meaning Yang NEEDS to take an Active Big Sister Role instead of being pointlessly side lined because of bad script writing.
    7. Yang losing her arm yes we know it's tragic, however her PTSD and her personality took a major hit when this decision was implemented and that in many aspects negatively affected her character de-voiding it from the Bright firey yet angry inside angsty teen who by all intents and purposes is pissed at her mother for abandoning her and her little sister. Yet is still brazen enough to go toe to toe with Giant Mechas' Colossal Grimm and Gangs of the White Fang like mother fluffing Bruce Lee with Shotgun Gauntlets & Super Saiyan tier anger.
    8. Pyrah (hopefully I spelt her name right. Sorry if not) Having her die off so early was honestly a wasted opportunity and the reason she died was even stupider. Yes she should end up with the person she loves, but that was so short lived that it honestly caused a disconnection between her and Jaune within the story BECAUSE their romance wasn't allowed to blossom past 10 minutes of screentime. The build up to her death also felt rushed and convoluted thus reducing the meaning and impact when her time finally came about. Seeing Jaune suffer over someone he only spent 10 minutes prior in a "Established Relationship" only to lose them minutes later felt hollow and rushed, there was no proper build up to Pyrah's death she confronts Cinder and dies minutes later almost too easily. It was lazily written and scripted and it's apparent.
    9. Jaune becoming the Rusted Knight. sorry but in all honesty, I felt like this should've been Ruby's role. Ruby being forced to Grow up and survive solo without anyone's help would've made more sense as to WHY she was so pissed off and full of so many frustrations and so much pent-up anger. Having her become "Black-Thorn" an Alias from acting as a Mercenary while trying to survive and even adopting a more edgy and darker motif for someone who's had to go it alone for a decade in yet another world trying it's damnedest trying to "END" her would've hit harder for her teammates and most notably her "Big Sister" whom at that point would be younger. And it would showcase to Yang if she had followed her dad's advice from the beginning and ignored Ruby she would've ended up worse. Ruby confronting Jaune about Penny's death which the reason would need to be changed, would hit hard since he himself hadn't even come to terms with what he had done yet. Ruby's anger and aloof yet cold demeanor would be justified giving her an older battle hardened more mature voice would hit harder as it would imply she's been forced to "Grow Up" or Die Young.
    10. Dust, Weapons, Science and Magic all of which need to be GROUNDED
    A "Magical substance" is reverse engineered reprocessed into "DUST" a Powder like substance that WITH SCIENCE is converted into Ammunition and a Powerful Fuel Source to Combat the Grimm. Yes, it can LOOK and FEEL Magical, but it needs SOME logic behind it to make it feel and sound believable to the audience. Dust itself could be the Remains of "Souls" that hadn't passed on or had been defeated by Grimm and wish to leave behind their "Memories" to Fight the Grimm for the Next Generation "Dust to Dust" as they say. Kind of like how Dinosaur remains become fossil fuel, but with Spirits and Memories. However, this type of Lore would be more grounded, and science based as Remnant would be more Scientific and Fact driven rather than nonsensical b.s. Calling Dust Magic is just how the "Populace" and Religious Zealots of the world would see it not the researchers developing and taking the effort and time to understand Dust's functions and uses to combat the Grimm.

  • @gundhamtanaka9487
    @gundhamtanaka9487 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I wonder who the new character is from the intro where Roman and neo are shown. Also, nice job giving Roman a new look

  • @adamcousins5788
    @adamcousins5788 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    With OPAL Ilia looks unsure.

  • @zm_art
    @zm_art 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOO

  • @anthonythomas305
    @anthonythomas305 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Cool intro

  • @newtyda1st590
    @newtyda1st590 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    That was my idea of remaking RWBY when I read the description

  • @luxley5193
    @luxley5193 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The only thing I’d be worried about overall, is if this fan au was hesitant in taking lots of innovation

  • @ALUNA-chan
    @ALUNA-chan 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Penny is so cute >w

  • @ChrisAkuto
    @ChrisAkuto 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    YANG VS HAZEL!!! FUCKING COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @brandonb4742
    @brandonb4742 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Peak cinema

  • @cyberextreme86
    @cyberextreme86 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This is a RWBY Version Of Marvel’s What If...? Series.

  • @dylantennant6594
    @dylantennant6594 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Oh my gods, this looks awesome! Roman and Neo get to keep being gangsters, you have Oscar being his own person and not making his connection to Ozpin creepy, and Arkos actually getting to be allowed.
    I am wondering what happened to Cinder and her team, but other then that, this looks awesome. Is there any chance a script or story is finished, because I am curious to see where this goes.

    • @gundhamtanaka9487
      @gundhamtanaka9487 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I think they went back to salem's castle

  • @thefunnychiptuneman
    @thefunnychiptuneman 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    rwby should have gone this direction

  • @YoBoyNeptune
    @YoBoyNeptune 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Neat