How to Write a story | CBSE Grade 10 | Tips & Strategies for Planning | Writing with Ease

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  • @indumol
    @indumol 4 ปีที่แล้ว +50

    Ma'am to get full marks, should we focus more on idioms and the style of writing too?

  • @monomoymarjit256
    @monomoymarjit256 5 ปีที่แล้ว +86

    Fantastic ideas with the writing stories. Tnx a lot

  • @anirudh4885
    @anirudh4885 3 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    Thanks a lot!! This helped me so much. I have an English exam tomorrow and this was really a life saver

  • @muralik3805
    @muralik3805 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I learnt that
    1.setting places
    2.talking characters
    3. Oh, a problem
    4. Resolving problem
    5. Yay a solution

  • @goldopolix9597
    @goldopolix9597 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thanks for teaching me this ma’am now I will be able to ace my exams 😊

  • @deadroast8333
    @deadroast8333 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanking

  • @shashankrao1338
    @shashankrao1338 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    hello mam! I am in 10th grade, how can we frame a moral in the story or conclude the story

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      That is easy. Take any panchatantra tale and you will get a moral. Moral and conclusion are not the same. Every story has a conclusion, every story need not have a moral.

  • @twinningforever4005
    @twinningforever4005 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I liked your videos very much this helped me to get full marks in story but could you please make the videos of article writing and letter to editor and like if you believe that mam is the best teacher★♥♥

  • @animeshmaity8567
    @animeshmaity8567 3 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Ma'am the plan for story writing was explained very well and clearly understood by me. A fabulous job ma'am. Requesting you to please make a video on how to write a formal invitation & poster making. Thank you for all your support & guidance. Stay home & Stay Safe.

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      You should get my writing book Writing with Ease for all writing needs. Available on Amazon.

  • @YashasSandeep
    @YashasSandeep 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Mam what do you suggest to improve the vocabulary

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  หลายเดือนก่อน

      My book Writing with Ease has a section on Word formation and has 75 word lists categoried in genres. Buy on Amazon or our website www.mindsprings.in

  • @shailajabs8285
    @shailajabs8285 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I have loved this teacher because she is teaching so good

  • @thefunarea6954
    @thefunarea6954 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    You are the best teacher whom I have ever seen for grammar. Like my granny . Thankyou mam

  • @rupalidhage8423
    @rupalidhage8423 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Amazing mam thanks for aploding this video my daughter is cleared with story writing

  • @GurpreetKaur-mk6kb
    @GurpreetKaur-mk6kb 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Ma'am your videos are awesome and I scored full marks in my exam after watching your video.....
    Thanks ma'am

  • @saiman498
    @saiman498 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Mam now i understood how to attend a story, this vidio was very help full to me thank you mam 😄😄

  • @anairaaireen1401
    @anairaaireen1401 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you so much ma'am, I followed your tips and tricks and won 1st prize in short story contest ( in intercollegiate)today...
    Last time I got third prize by following your advice, this time i wrote a crime mystery story... I'm very grateful to you, from the depth of my heart..
    And those who are reading my comment all the best to you too, you are going to rock

  • @hackergaming4926
    @hackergaming4926 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Ma'am l have understood the story writing very clearly.
    You are very good ma'am.
    Thank you

  • @sufiaamir2348
    @sufiaamir2348 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Setting
    Character
    Problem
    Events
    Solution.
    Have to include all elements of the story. But.
    Start a story with a problem not with the setting..
    1. Stolen ring. Kidnapped boy.
    2. Setting. Where did the problem occur? Create atmosphere.. adjectives etc powerful but brief. Should add to the story not distract from it.
    3. Action/ events. How or why and what happened. Then add a Rising action .. tension goes up. Danger increases..
    4. Characters. Hero. Villain.. supporting characters.. people or animals.
    More about what happened.
    5. Solution . How was the problem solved.
    Vocabulary.. adjectives and adverbs.. precise and descriptive. Remember stories are in the past tense.

  • @UnrealogyTutorials
    @UnrealogyTutorials 5 ปีที่แล้ว +36

    Hello ma'am! 8th grader here. I've been watching your videos for a long time now and thanks to them, I got 38 out of 40 in my previous exam! Can you please suggest some good vocabulary for horror stories? Thanks again!

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Congratulations. I am deeply delighted. Keep it up. Do get my book Writing with Ease from Amazon. It has the vocabulary for your target genre (and heaps more) Good luck.

    • @surbhijaiin4564
      @surbhijaiin4564 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher this book is a prized possession

    • @Hasnainshorts28
      @Hasnainshorts28 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      9

  • @swpandey3704
    @swpandey3704 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The way you explain was excellent thanks ma'am . In my previous exam I got 48 out of 50 again I repeat thanks ma'am 🙏 it is very helpful to us

  • @hemakh8417
    @hemakh8417 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Goodmorning Ma'am
    Should we strictly use past tense while writing a story? My kids are asking why not present tense.
    When a picture is given and ask the students to do picture composition,should they follow strictly present tense like This is a picture of a park.children are playing etc.some children have written like this was a picture of a park and children were playing.How can I reason this? Please help

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Stories use the narrative past. You are narrating a story that happened, aren't you? Hence past tense. You cannot write it in the present tense.
      When you describe a picture you use the present tense because you cannot use the past. There was a picture? Now it is not there? If so, how are you going to describe it? That is illogical. What is there to reason? Isn't it clearly absurd?

  • @jenithgurung9732
    @jenithgurung9732 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hello mam, I'm in 8the Standard and I am participating in Story writing Competition from my School where on the spot we will get topic or theme and we have to create a story there only .I was Searching for a good video which can give me tips, ideas and way to present a story in a creative manner so that learning person or reader will also be excited and intrested during the story time I really appreciate your work Mam and Thank you So much 😊 i am surely going to keep this tips in my mind. Problem then setting making characters from early so that I can fix them in my story , Plot and solution .

  • @mamtaganvir3504
    @mamtaganvir3504 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Ur English words and pronauncation was good mam
    Ur explain very properly
    Thanks alot mam

  • @tnellaiyappan1807
    @tnellaiyappan1807 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam hats of you because i have scored 8 out of 8 thanks a lot mam thank you thank you .......

  • @saswatpanigrahi6504
    @saswatpanigrahi6504 2 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I am preparing for my story writing competition currently and this video will really gonna to help me a lot to bag the success. After watching your educational videos, (very specially this one), a type of critical attitude towards story writing is created in me. So, thanks a lot ma'am.

  • @gayathrikatikareddy4239
    @gayathrikatikareddy4239 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks mama
    Your teaching is very good

  • @ChocolateBoba362
    @ChocolateBoba362 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    So I have a copy like that book so it’s not that book which you told us to get if u want. The book which I have got it’s name is banish boring words. The book which u told us to get and which book I have got are mostly the same

  • @luckstudity9083
    @luckstudity9083 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ma’am I am writing a story on the topic ‘the furious day’ . Ma’am how should I begin it?

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You can start with the setting if 'furious' mean the weather.

    • @luckstudity9083
      @luckstudity9083 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Thank you Ma'am. I will try my best in making this story.

  • @joysfluteworld7154
    @joysfluteworld7154 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Ma'am, in class 10th we get a question on story writing which has a starting line and they ask us to write furter. Ma'am, I just wanted to know that if it has a very simple start or if it hasnt given us any point from which we can start on thinking , then how we would be able make the story interesting?

    • @shailendrabajpai5875
      @shailendrabajpai5875 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Right

    • @devig1905
      @devig1905 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ha yes

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      The story starter allows you to take the story in any direction as long as the starting line fits. So you can write an adventure story and you need to show what circumstances caused that starting line to happen. It's like writing the story in flashback. Just make sure the elements of the story are kept in mind and you adhere to the word limit. Use good vocabulary. Good luck.

    • @joysfluteworld7154
      @joysfluteworld7154 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thank you so much mam. Your encouragement and guidance means a lot to me 😊

  • @AbdulWaris-ul3zx
    @AbdulWaris-ul3zx 5 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    Thanks madam.Indeed you are teacher of extra ordinary caliber.You have a good Skil to teach English language.

  • @ellaa_edits
    @ellaa_edits 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Miss.. Do you take English tution classes??

  • @rosesoreng8750
    @rosesoreng8750 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you I got full Mark's because of your teachings

  • @neelasrinivas9571
    @neelasrinivas9571 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Madam your explanation is awesome I hope I will score well because of this video and thanks a lot madam

  • @alexpraveen4289
    @alexpraveen4289 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I really appreciate you sharing this video with me, mam

  • @kanikakanika529
    @kanikakanika529 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Tomorrow is my English exam and I am watching this video mam . I will you tomorrow is this helpful or not . In my class my teacher you have written a fabulous story in front of my class and I felt very happy . But I am watching this video so that I can do much better.

  • @gayatridhanger9547
    @gayatridhanger9547 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This book is suitable for 3 class students?

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You will have to choose the words for the child. By Grade 5 they can use on their own. No harm in buying it a bit early if you are working with the child.

  • @jyotsnaranidas8389
    @jyotsnaranidas8389 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Mam , you are the best !! I understood very well to write stories after hearing your advices.

  • @srisandhyakhnd429
    @srisandhyakhnd429 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you Mam u are an excellent teacher 👩‍🏫,the moment I saw this video I was absolutely perfect in story writing ✍️🤩

  • @lamborghinilovers6500
    @lamborghinilovers6500 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    it is for 5th

  • @phanikumarayyagari9007
    @phanikumarayyagari9007 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam where can we get the book

  • @samriddhikhitoliya9354
    @samriddhikhitoliya9354 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It was useless for my coz I was searching for creative beginning for story writing I know everything that you tought don't think I am rude I do appreciate your hardwork

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sorry I couldn't help more. If you know all this then you are already well trained. Congratulations. But that is not the case with most.

  • @harnishraval4155
    @harnishraval4155 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mom you have explained very nicely thank you ma'am

  • @dannychantipradeep7
    @dannychantipradeep7 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Mam thank you mam u said very beautifulllly mam
    My English teacher said to write a neat story, ur explanation had helped me a lot ,once again thank you mam for explaining.

  • @kalpanatyagi9158
    @kalpanatyagi9158 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    When I had not saw your video I got only 20/14 but when I saw your video I got 20/19 so thank you a lot ma'am 😊😊

  • @vaibhavtripathi9193
    @vaibhavtripathi9193 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    4:27

    • @AdityaSingh-ox7ni
      @AdityaSingh-ox7ni 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      i thought her very very very wouldn't end LMAO

    • @SuperFsw
      @SuperFsw 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      LMAO

    • @DracoMalfoy-ty4pt
      @DracoMalfoy-ty4pt 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Haha I love the way she said it😹

  • @induns783
    @induns783 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam, for my exam i was given a starting line and then asked to complete the story. How can i write a story if i am given "When sam looked at the mirror, he realised that it was not him". as the starting line?
    Pls help maam....how do we write a reasonable story?

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      sounds like a ghost story to me. Or science fiction where someone has altered his appearance. So you could use an accident, being unconscious, no memory. How he gets back his identity.

    • @surbhijaiin4564
      @surbhijaiin4564 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher marvellous

  • @TheWimpytech
    @TheWimpytech 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Mam is it necessary to add some kind of moral ending on some basic life lesrning?

  • @dhruv7056
    @dhruv7056 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Please join our school mam! It wouldn't help me but my younger friends! Very well explained 🙏

  • @Cloudy_flower
    @Cloudy_flower 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam we should not always use the name of character??

  • @SasiKumar-tn3sn
    @SasiKumar-tn3sn 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam,do we have to write Moral???

  • @zoyajaan7767
    @zoyajaan7767 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Wholeheartedly thanks ma'am, I heard first time such type of instructions which were being given by you, may almighty give more power in your respected pen

  • @sarthakshubham6555
    @sarthakshubham6555 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam i fill short of words when I write a story and I am in class 10 and I don't have much time to give for one subject. Pls give your opinion.

  • @maishaaamir655
    @maishaaamir655 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Our sir is teaching right now in the class and showing your video

  • @joshsunil2500
    @joshsunil2500 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanku mam...... * 🙏
    You was teaching very well...... 😀

  • @ghostblaster1461
    @ghostblaster1461 ปีที่แล้ว

    Really mam the video is very helpful for me . Cause I'm in 10th STD and my education stop for 2 year reason was corona. But now I am learning that thing quickly

  • @mahii_320
    @mahii_320 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    mam which (tense) is used in story
    and also at the time of writing (article)

  • @DharmrajyadavMT
    @DharmrajyadavMT ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Excellent 👌👌

  • @mymissshreyanshi4032
    @mymissshreyanshi4032 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ma'am I am 9th grade.. And Mam I have also followed all the rules of story writing but still got 4out of 10..please help me..... My final exam are approaching....

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Check your grammar, vocabulary, ideas, sequencing. Ask your teacher where you are losing marks.

  • @satyavatigupta4014
    @satyavatigupta4014 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam you are full of talent but not getting popularity so its my request to all plz share the video as much you can

  • @aiswaryaashwin1348
    @aiswaryaashwin1348 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ma'am I'm sure that because of this video I gonna get a good result in my story writing competition. Thank you ma'am

  • @jayantidebnath7408
    @jayantidebnath7408 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam, I wish to be your student, you explained it so nicely

  • @priyankachatterjee9268
    @priyankachatterjee9268 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ma'am it was a brilliant one.. but let me request you to discuss the same topic as per ICSE curriculum

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you. But how is a story different for ICSE or IB or SSC curriculum? A story is a story.

    • @priyankachatterjee9268
      @priyankachatterjee9268 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Firstly I must admit that I've never received a reply from a TH-camr this fast.. 🙂 thank you so much.. Well I do know that a story is a story and the way to weave it also won't be much different.. still i was looking for a confirmation. Thank you once again.

  • @nandinisaraf6316
    @nandinisaraf6316 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I really beg for having such genius teacher 🤗❤

  • @bhadra2546
    @bhadra2546 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam i liked your tips thanku for your idea
    And i have exam next day
    So iwilll defnetlly telll you what happened in the exam if this tips help me or not😊😊😊

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      All the best. Do let me know.

    • @bhadra2546
      @bhadra2546 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      Mam thanku i got fulll in the story👏👏👏👏

  • @Sushi2747
    @Sushi2747 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    very nice and great stay home and stay safe have a nice day mam thank you regards S.Shree hasni

  • @neeavmalhotra558
    @neeavmalhotra558 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I always spend my most of the words in the start. So the end was very fasty and conjested. How to solve this problem !???

  • @nischalcuber4149
    @nischalcuber4149 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I want ask a question that if how to start the writing with like problem or once upon a time

  • @r4coree
    @r4coree 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank u maam this really helped a lot

  • @jitendranathbiswas7279
    @jitendranathbiswas7279 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Fantastically explained
    It will prove very very very helpful for all those students who want to write good stories . Thanks a lot mam .

  • @maishaaamir655
    @maishaaamir655 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your video has been shared in our class

  • @envy75
    @envy75 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks a lot mam

  • @_Amrit_facts_
    @_Amrit_facts_ 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank mam tomorrow is my English exam l do with your idea 🙂🙂

  • @dattartaychavan4315
    @dattartaychavan4315 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Good morning ma'am 4th grade my 40 out of 40 thanks ma'am a lot

  • @AdityaSingh-ox7ni
    @AdityaSingh-ox7ni 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    the only teacher in youtube who is teaching in english

  • @viarrahgaming8194
    @viarrahgaming8194 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    By this video my story writing improved a lot........ thank you very much

  • @sunitalaxman4276
    @sunitalaxman4276 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Thank you mam very well explained. This might give me more than 6 marks for sure.👍

  • @aksharakholiya644
    @aksharakholiya644 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you ma'am for this video today is my English exam I am sure I will score good thank you ma'am

  • @fahimtufail3790
    @fahimtufail3790 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please create videos on the punctuation so that we take benefit from holistic approach you have applied marvellously.

  • @deepak-fx7lq
    @deepak-fx7lq 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Paragraph writing,Tenses , Analytical paragraph,

  • @ankit2733
    @ankit2733 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam I have ever learned from Teacher like you thanks mam

  • @manindrakumar1768
    @manindrakumar1768 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thnx a lot ma'am! Really appreciable ... Happy women's day

  • @neelambisht107
    @neelambisht107 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Mam actually my grammar is so so week........ Actually muje 80 marks exam m aata toh sb h but mai ussai likh ya express nhi kar pati hu..... Plz plz help meeee🙏🙏🙏🙏

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Mere hindi wale playlist me 10 Tips to make your English better hai hindi me. Zaroor dekhiye aur usme jo tips hai who practice kijiye.

    • @sonamchauhan4982
      @sonamchauhan4982 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher mam mujhe ni mila???😕😑

  • @jodtejsyt5357
    @jodtejsyt5357 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam you are excellent really nice 👌👌

  • @thepresidentgamer4472
    @thepresidentgamer4472 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mam please make more videos on this topic.I have interest in writing stories and poems.
    I am your new subscriber, loved your video and your style of explaining .
    Hope you'll fulfil my request.

  • @bontiduttamedhi8487
    @bontiduttamedhi8487 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i have get 10 out of 10 thank u mam

  • @sauravnishad8639
    @sauravnishad8639 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You are great mam.

  • @sonukumar-pd8fv
    @sonukumar-pd8fv 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ma'am please tell how to produce the story with few given lines?????

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Basic elements and structure does not change. These may be given to you. Keep the conflict central and find a solution.

  • @mynurseryteacher8509
    @mynurseryteacher8509 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much ma'am. I have a good news. Because of you today I have got 8/10 in my story writing test. Once again thank you 😘😚🥰❤️

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Very happy to hear this. I am sure you will only go from strength to strength now. Good luck.

    • @mynurseryteacher8509
      @mynurseryteacher8509 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thank you so much ma'am

  • @bluecastor9345
    @bluecastor9345 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Plz tell me
    How will I add a problem, adventurous actions, events and solutions, if I'm asked to elaborate a story titled "My first Birthday- Advent of celebration to my parents" ?
    Plz answer,! :(

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Advent of celebrations? what does that mean? Your question is faulty. In your first birthday you are a baby besides.

    • @bluecastor9345
      @bluecastor9345 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher why not? Wasn't that a time of celebration to you when you got your first child? And why can't it be a question? Can't one be asked to write a story of his/her first birthday celebration? What if I was a baby, I do remember that story!

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@bluecastor9345 The question is grammatically incorrect and hence does not make any meaning. If the topic is 'My first birthday', and you are writing, it has to be your point of view in first person and you cannot possibly have a memory of it as you are an infant. Therefore, this topic is faulty. Your parents can write about their joy at the birth of a child. There is no need to get personal over this @ weren't you happy etc. Advent is related to the arrival of the baby, "advent of celebrations" is clearly wrong, besides, advent is an archaic word. Overall, a very ambiguous topic.

    • @bluecastor9345
      @bluecastor9345 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher I googled and translated ''advent of celebration " into Hindi & I got "खुशियों का आगमन" and I don't think anything is odd in it!
      And, sorry, I don't want to argue anymore! After all you are a teacher, off course elder than me, so u know better!

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@bluecastor9345 khushiyon ka aagman is "heralding of joy". You want to use advent of celebrations, it needs to be predicated by 'on the birth of a newborn child.' Hence, the questions is ambiguous. I always give you explanations. I do not simply say it is wrong. But if you find answers on google, that you trust, you should do that in the first place. Good luck.

  • @krish6034
    @krish6034 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I really like your way of telling tips for writing a story mam🙂

  • @manjulapc2908
    @manjulapc2908 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you very much for this video . I am a grade 10 ICSE student and this has cleared all my doubts regarding story writing. Could you please make videos on transformation of sentences.
    The board paper has a bit called "Join the following sentences to make one complete sentence without
    using and, but or so.
    "
    Some example questions are as follows.
    (i) Sonia asked a riddle. I was unable to solve it.
    (ii) John helped Thomas. Thomas will always be grateful.
    (iii) Rajan is a great Cricketer. He is also popular.
    (iv) Adnan sang a wonderful song. It became a hit.
    I find it very difficult and confusing to answer such questions.I have referred to multiple textbooks and resources till date but none of them offer any proper explanation.They just provide more examples.. Could you please make a video on this 🙏🙏

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you Manjula. There are 3 videos re: transformation of sentences and one of Simple Compound complex sentences and several on clauses. Please visit my playlist. Start with phrases, go to clauses, then simple compound and then transformations and you will be an expert.

    • @manjulapc2908
      @manjulapc2908 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher ohh thank you mam

    • @manjulapc2908
      @manjulapc2908 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher I have another doubt mam, is transformation of sentences the same as synthesis of sentences

    • @manjulapc2908
      @manjulapc2908 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Mam are these answers correct?
      1) I was unable to solve the riddle Sonia asked me.
      2)Thomas will always be grateful to John for his help.
      3) Rajan is a great cricketer who is also popular.
      4) Adnan sang a wonderful song which became a hit.

    • @rahulrathor.67
      @rahulrathor.67 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@manjulapc2908 1 one is not correct

  • @mythologyzeroking1958
    @mythologyzeroking1958 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanku
    Lot of ideas to give for story writting

  • @shubhaaradhya9091
    @shubhaaradhya9091 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you mam 😊

  • @mohdm5960
    @mohdm5960 ปีที่แล้ว

    It is nice I want to make a story in my own words as my teacher says that I have to make a story with a moral where there is a will there is a way in 100 words limited.

    • @mohdm5960
      @mohdm5960 ปีที่แล้ว

      And also I am in 4th class

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  ปีที่แล้ว

      Clearly, your teacher wants a story to show determination in times of adversity. Once you understand the moral, it is easy to write the story.

  • @ramdayalbairwa4241
    @ramdayalbairwa4241 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Ma'am my name is Shainy 👧(class 10th) and your way of teaching is excellent 👍

  • @priyanjali9385
    @priyanjali9385 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Tq soo much ma'am 🙏😊

  • @devakivadevaki3891
    @devakivadevaki3891 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam how to improve the hand writing

    • @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
      @TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Handwriting is like your signature. No matter how much you learn, you will always be unique.

  • @hdn7024
    @hdn7024 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I understood it very nicely
    Thank u thank u so much ma'am

  • @noreenbaig5482
    @noreenbaig5482 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Maam ,you have given me solution of my problem that makes my story complete.you are the Best teacher 😇

  • @narayanahimaja1027
    @narayanahimaja1027 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Mam super b mam under standing nicely great