Thank you so much ma'am, I followed your tips and tricks and won 1st prize in short story contest ( in intercollegiate)today... Last time I got third prize by following your advice, this time i wrote a crime mystery story... I'm very grateful to you, from the depth of my heart.. And those who are reading my comment all the best to you too, you are going to rock
I liked your videos very much this helped me to get full marks in story but could you please make the videos of article writing and letter to editor and like if you believe that mam is the best teacher★♥♥
That is easy. Take any panchatantra tale and you will get a moral. Moral and conclusion are not the same. Every story has a conclusion, every story need not have a moral.
I am preparing for my story writing competition currently and this video will really gonna to help me a lot to bag the success. After watching your educational videos, (very specially this one), a type of critical attitude towards story writing is created in me. So, thanks a lot ma'am.
Ma'am the plan for story writing was explained very well and clearly understood by me. A fabulous job ma'am. Requesting you to please make a video on how to write a formal invitation & poster making. Thank you for all your support & guidance. Stay home & Stay Safe.
Hello ma'am! 8th grader here. I've been watching your videos for a long time now and thanks to them, I got 38 out of 40 in my previous exam! Can you please suggest some good vocabulary for horror stories? Thanks again!
Congratulations. I am deeply delighted. Keep it up. Do get my book Writing with Ease from Amazon. It has the vocabulary for your target genre (and heaps more) Good luck.
Tomorrow is my English exam and I am watching this video mam . I will you tomorrow is this helpful or not . In my class my teacher you have written a fabulous story in front of my class and I felt very happy . But I am watching this video so that I can do much better.
Mam actually my grammar is so so week........ Actually muje 80 marks exam m aata toh sb h but mai ussai likh ya express nhi kar pati hu..... Plz plz help meeee🙏🙏🙏🙏
Mam i liked your tips thanku for your idea And i have exam next day So iwilll defnetlly telll you what happened in the exam if this tips help me or not😊😊😊
Mam thank you mam u said very beautifulllly mam My English teacher said to write a neat story, ur explanation had helped me a lot ,once again thank you mam for explaining.
Really mam the video is very helpful for me . Cause I'm in 10th STD and my education stop for 2 year reason was corona. But now I am learning that thing quickly
It was useless for my coz I was searching for creative beginning for story writing I know everything that you tought don't think I am rude I do appreciate your hardwork
Wholeheartedly thanks ma'am, I heard first time such type of instructions which were being given by you, may almighty give more power in your respected pen
Setting Character Problem Events Solution. Have to include all elements of the story. But. Start a story with a problem not with the setting.. 1. Stolen ring. Kidnapped boy. 2. Setting. Where did the problem occur? Create atmosphere.. adjectives etc powerful but brief. Should add to the story not distract from it. 3. Action/ events. How or why and what happened. Then add a Rising action .. tension goes up. Danger increases.. 4. Characters. Hero. Villain.. supporting characters.. people or animals. More about what happened. 5. Solution . How was the problem solved. Vocabulary.. adjectives and adverbs.. precise and descriptive. Remember stories are in the past tense.
Hello mam, I'm in 8the Standard and I am participating in Story writing Competition from my School where on the spot we will get topic or theme and we have to create a story there only .I was Searching for a good video which can give me tips, ideas and way to present a story in a creative manner so that learning person or reader will also be excited and intrested during the story time I really appreciate your work Mam and Thank you So much 😊 i am surely going to keep this tips in my mind. Problem then setting making characters from early so that I can fix them in my story , Plot and solution .
Ma'am I am 9th grade.. And Mam I have also followed all the rules of story writing but still got 4out of 10..please help me..... My final exam are approaching....
Mam please make more videos on this topic.I have interest in writing stories and poems. I am your new subscriber, loved your video and your style of explaining . Hope you'll fulfil my request.
Ma'am, in class 10th we get a question on story writing which has a starting line and they ask us to write furter. Ma'am, I just wanted to know that if it has a very simple start or if it hasnt given us any point from which we can start on thinking , then how we would be able make the story interesting?
The story starter allows you to take the story in any direction as long as the starting line fits. So you can write an adventure story and you need to show what circumstances caused that starting line to happen. It's like writing the story in flashback. Just make sure the elements of the story are kept in mind and you adhere to the word limit. Use good vocabulary. Good luck.
Wonderful video mam! Can you please make a video on how to write poems and pictures compositions. I would be a great help. Love and support from india 😊
Goodmorning Ma'am Should we strictly use past tense while writing a story? My kids are asking why not present tense. When a picture is given and ask the students to do picture composition,should they follow strictly present tense like This is a picture of a park.children are playing etc.some children have written like this was a picture of a park and children were playing.How can I reason this? Please help
Stories use the narrative past. You are narrating a story that happened, aren't you? Hence past tense. You cannot write it in the present tense. When you describe a picture you use the present tense because you cannot use the past. There was a picture? Now it is not there? If so, how are you going to describe it? That is illogical. What is there to reason? Isn't it clearly absurd?
It is nice I want to make a story in my own words as my teacher says that I have to make a story with a moral where there is a will there is a way in 100 words limited.
So I have a copy like that book so it’s not that book which you told us to get if u want. The book which I have got it’s name is banish boring words. The book which u told us to get and which book I have got are mostly the same
I learnt that
1.setting places
2.talking characters
3. Oh, a problem
4. Resolving problem
5. Yay a solution
Yes - the basic elements of a story.
Fantastic ideas with the writing stories. Tnx a lot
Welcome Monomoy. Glad you liked it.
Thanks a lot!! This helped me so much. I have an English exam tomorrow and this was really a life saver
Best of luck!
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Thanks!
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Thank you so much ma'am, I followed your tips and tricks and won 1st prize in short story contest ( in intercollegiate)today...
Last time I got third prize by following your advice, this time i wrote a crime mystery story... I'm very grateful to you, from the depth of my heart..
And those who are reading my comment all the best to you too, you are going to rock
Wow! Am i delighted to hear this. Well done. I am glad this helped.
Thanks for teaching me this ma’am now I will be able to ace my exams 😊
All the best. Keep watching.
Bai kasa kasa saamaj aa gai aap ko
Mam now i understood how to attend a story, this vidio was very help full to me thank you mam 😄😄
Most welcome 😊
Thanks mama
Your teaching is very good
Welcome Gayathri :)
Ma'am your videos are awesome and I scored full marks in my exam after watching your video.....
Thanks ma'am
That's great news Gurpreet. Congratulations. And thanks for watching.
Ola
Ma'am to get full marks, should we focus more on idioms and the style of writing too?
Not necessary. Keep your sentences grammatically correct.
I really appreciate you sharing this video with me, mam
It's my pleasure. Good luck.
Ur English words and pronauncation was good mam
Ur explain very properly
Thanks alot mam
Thanks Mamta. Glad you liked it.
Ma'am l have understood the story writing very clearly.
You are very good ma'am.
Thank you
It's my pleasure
Madam your explanation is awesome I hope I will score well because of this video and thanks a lot madam
All the best
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Thankyou madam
When I had not saw your video I got only 20/14 but when I saw your video I got 20/19 so thank you a lot ma'am 😊😊
Well done
Amazing mam thanks for aploding this video my daughter is cleared with story writing
Welcome Rupali :)
I liked your videos very much this helped me to get full marks in story but could you please make the videos of article writing and letter to editor and like if you believe that mam is the best teacher★♥♥
Noted. :)
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thankyou mam
Mam super b mam under standing nicely great
Thanks Narayana
Thank you I got full Mark's because of your teachings
Great job!
Our sir is teaching right now in the class and showing your video
That's great. Which class is this?
hello mam! I am in 10th grade, how can we frame a moral in the story or conclude the story
That is easy. Take any panchatantra tale and you will get a moral. Moral and conclusion are not the same. Every story has a conclusion, every story need not have a moral.
Thanks madam.Indeed you are teacher of extra ordinary caliber.You have a good Skil to teach English language.
Thank you Abdul.
Thank you Mam u are an excellent teacher 👩🏫,the moment I saw this video I was absolutely perfect in story writing ✍️🤩
Welcome Srisandhya. Glad you liked it :)
😊
It's wonderful! Next part please do the reverse ; from example to principle.
Mam u r an excellent teacher
Excellent idea 💡 to write stories (very nice)
Many many thanks for your appreciation.
You are the best teacher whom I have ever seen for grammar. Like my granny . Thankyou mam
It's my pleasure
Thank mam tomorrow is my English exam l do with your idea 🙂🙂
Good luck.
Mam hats of you because i have scored 8 out of 8 thanks a lot mam thank you thank you .......
Welcome Nellaiyappan :)
I am preparing for my story writing competition currently and this video will really gonna to help me a lot to bag the success. After watching your educational videos, (very specially this one), a type of critical attitude towards story writing is created in me. So, thanks a lot ma'am.
Good luck Saswat. Hope you do well and win the competition.
Mam , you are the best !! I understood very well to write stories after hearing your advices.
Glad to hear that
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Thank you mam.
Nice 😊 but i have one problem please write farm story
Ma'am the plan for story writing was explained very well and clearly understood by me. A fabulous job ma'am. Requesting you to please make a video on how to write a formal invitation & poster making. Thank you for all your support & guidance. Stay home & Stay Safe.
You should get my writing book Writing with Ease for all writing needs. Available on Amazon.
The way you explain was excellent thanks ma'am . In my previous exam I got 48 out of 50 again I repeat thanks ma'am 🙏 it is very helpful to us
Well done. Good luck.
thank u maam this really helped a lot
Most welcome 😊
Hello ma'am! 8th grader here. I've been watching your videos for a long time now and thanks to them, I got 38 out of 40 in my previous exam! Can you please suggest some good vocabulary for horror stories? Thanks again!
Congratulations. I am deeply delighted. Keep it up. Do get my book Writing with Ease from Amazon. It has the vocabulary for your target genre (and heaps more) Good luck.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher this book is a prized possession
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Mam, I wish to be your student, you explained it so nicely
It's my pleasure
I have loved this teacher because she is teaching so good
Tomorrow is my English exam and I am watching this video mam . I will you tomorrow is this helpful or not . In my class my teacher you have written a fabulous story in front of my class and I felt very happy . But I am watching this video so that I can do much better.
All the best
Thankyou mam
Your video has been shared in our class
You sir is a smart teacher. Tell him I said that.
Please join our school mam! It wouldn't help me but my younger friends! Very well explained 🙏
Thanks Dhruv :)
Mam it is soo but full tichaibg 👏👏👏👏😊😊👍👍👍👍
Whatever that means.....
Mam you are full of talent but not getting popularity so its my request to all plz share the video as much you can
Thanks a lot satyavati .. :)
Mam actually my grammar is so so week........ Actually muje 80 marks exam m aata toh sb h but mai ussai likh ya express nhi kar pati hu..... Plz plz help meeee🙏🙏🙏🙏
Mere hindi wale playlist me 10 Tips to make your English better hai hindi me. Zaroor dekhiye aur usme jo tips hai who practice kijiye.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher mam mujhe ni mila???😕😑
Mam i liked your tips thanku for your idea
And i have exam next day
So iwilll defnetlly telll you what happened in the exam if this tips help me or not😊😊😊
All the best. Do let me know.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
Mam thanku i got fulll in the story👏👏👏👏
Thnx a lot ma'am! Really appreciable ... Happy women's day
Most welcome 😊
Mam thank you mam u said very beautifulllly mam
My English teacher said to write a neat story, ur explanation had helped me a lot ,once again thank you mam for explaining.
Most welcome 😊
Really mam the video is very helpful for me . Cause I'm in 10th STD and my education stop for 2 year reason was corona. But now I am learning that thing quickly
Excellent. I have done a lot of videos. Watch them several times and practice. Good luck.
It was useless for my coz I was searching for creative beginning for story writing I know everything that you tought don't think I am rude I do appreciate your hardwork
Sorry I couldn't help more. If you know all this then you are already well trained. Congratulations. But that is not the case with most.
Wholeheartedly thanks ma'am, I heard first time such type of instructions which were being given by you, may almighty give more power in your respected pen
Thanks Aaqib. Glad you liked it :)
Thank you mam for mindful answer 😇
Most welcome 😊
Thanks for giving the tips how to write story writing
My pleasure 😊
Mom you have explained very nicely thank you ma'am
What is your name ma'am
Most welcome 😊
Thanku
Lot of ideas to give for story writting
Most welcome 😊
Setting
Character
Problem
Events
Solution.
Have to include all elements of the story. But.
Start a story with a problem not with the setting..
1. Stolen ring. Kidnapped boy.
2. Setting. Where did the problem occur? Create atmosphere.. adjectives etc powerful but brief. Should add to the story not distract from it.
3. Action/ events. How or why and what happened. Then add a Rising action .. tension goes up. Danger increases..
4. Characters. Hero. Villain.. supporting characters.. people or animals.
More about what happened.
5. Solution . How was the problem solved.
Vocabulary.. adjectives and adverbs.. precise and descriptive. Remember stories are in the past tense.
I am glad you are revising all this.
Thanks mam I loved this video because I love story writing
Most welcome 😊 All the best.
Good morning ma'am 4th grade my 40 out of 40 thanks ma'am a lot
Well done. Good luck. Glad I could help.
Thanku mam...... * 🙏
You was teaching very well...... 😀
It's my pleasure
Hello mam, I'm in 8the Standard and I am participating in Story writing Competition from my School where on the spot we will get topic or theme and we have to create a story there only .I was Searching for a good video which can give me tips, ideas and way to present a story in a creative manner so that learning person or reader will also be excited and intrested during the story time I really appreciate your work Mam and Thank you So much 😊 i am surely going to keep this tips in my mind. Problem then setting making characters from early so that I can fix them in my story , Plot and solution .
Is you from dav i am also
Awesome Jarmit. Good luck. Let me know how it went.
Are you from DAV is the correct way to ask the question. (not Is you...)
Thank you ma'am for this video today is my English exam I am sure I will score good thank you ma'am
All the best
It’s very helpful. Thanks a lot.
You are welcome!
😃 Good teaching 😃
Thank you! 😃
I really beg for having such genius teacher 🤗❤
Thank you Renuka
very nice and great stay home and stay safe have a nice day mam thank you regards S.Shree hasni
Thanks a lot
Ma'am I am 9th grade.. And Mam I have also followed all the rules of story writing but still got 4out of 10..please help me..... My final exam are approaching....
Check your grammar, vocabulary, ideas, sequencing. Ask your teacher where you are losing marks.
Thankyou ma'am.The video was really helpful.
My pleasure 😊
Your teaching way is so good
Thanks Deepshikha :)
I understood it very nicely
Thank u thank u so much ma'am
Most welcome 😊
Mam I have ever learned from Teacher like you thanks mam
It's my pleasure
Ma'am I'm sure that because of this video I gonna get a good result in my story writing competition. Thank you ma'am
All the best. I am sure you will do well.
Fantastically explained
It will prove very very very helpful for all those students who want to write good stories . Thanks a lot mam .
It's my pleasure
Tq soo much ma'am 🙏😊
Welcome :)
Thank you mam very well explained. This might give me more than 6 marks for sure.👍
All the best. Keep watching
the only teacher in youtube who is teaching in english
Thank you
By this video my story writing improved a lot........ thank you very much
Also do we have to improve on adjectives and adverbs in order to write a good story?
Yes certainly
Mam u r spoken english is good and awesome teaching
Thanks a lot.
Thanks for teach us, form story writing.
It's my pleasure
mam which (tense) is used in story
and also at the time of writing (article)
Always the past tense. Articles can be written in the present or the past tense.
Best teacher you are ma'am and I always follow your video
I am also a teacher
Glad to hear that. Thanks a lot Anamika.
Good to know. Hope I can help you be the best.
Mam please make more videos on this topic.I have interest in writing stories and poems.
I am your new subscriber, loved your video and your style of explaining .
Hope you'll fulfil my request.
There are a lot of videos on poetry in my playlist. Do take a look. And thank you.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Sure mam
Ma'am, in class 10th we get a question on story writing which has a starting line and they ask us to write furter. Ma'am, I just wanted to know that if it has a very simple start or if it hasnt given us any point from which we can start on thinking , then how we would be able make the story interesting?
Right
Ha yes
The story starter allows you to take the story in any direction as long as the starting line fits. So you can write an adventure story and you need to show what circumstances caused that starting line to happen. It's like writing the story in flashback. Just make sure the elements of the story are kept in mind and you adhere to the word limit. Use good vocabulary. Good luck.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thank you so much mam. Your encouragement and guidance means a lot to me 😊
Mam is it necessary to add some kind of moral ending on some basic life lesrning?
No harm in doing so if it is expected in your examinations.
Thanking
Wonderful video mam! Can you please make a video on how to write poems and pictures compositions. I would be a great help. Love and support from india 😊
Thanks. First learn how to analyse and appreciate poems before planning to write. Picture compositions I will try and do.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thanks a lot mam
Very useful vedio mam thank you so much
Most welcome 😊
Mind blowing mam👌👌👍👍👍
Thanks Atul
Goodmorning Ma'am
Should we strictly use past tense while writing a story? My kids are asking why not present tense.
When a picture is given and ask the students to do picture composition,should they follow strictly present tense like This is a picture of a park.children are playing etc.some children have written like this was a picture of a park and children were playing.How can I reason this? Please help
Stories use the narrative past. You are narrating a story that happened, aren't you? Hence past tense. You cannot write it in the present tense.
When you describe a picture you use the present tense because you cannot use the past. There was a picture? Now it is not there? If so, how are you going to describe it? That is illogical. What is there to reason? Isn't it clearly absurd?
Its really useful and simple way for teaching to the kids
Thanks a lot
Mam you are excellent really nice 👌👌
Thanks a lot
ma'am this video was superb/amazing I have my final exam's coming soon, this video will help me a lot. Thank U very much!
All the best
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thank u
Thanks mam please explain with example
Noted.
Thank you mam this is good for making story
You are most welcome.
Good mam you have a valuable knowledge .have a nice day
Thanks
Miss you teach really nice. Superb teacher ever.
Thank you! 😃
It is nice I want to make a story in my own words as my teacher says that I have to make a story with a moral where there is a will there is a way in 100 words limited.
And also I am in 4th class
Clearly, your teacher wants a story to show determination in times of adversity. Once you understand the moral, it is easy to write the story.
Thank you mam your tips are very helpful 😊😀
Most welcome 😊
Thank you so much ma'am. I have a good news. Because of you today I have got 8/10 in my story writing test. Once again thank you 😘😚🥰❤️
Very happy to hear this. I am sure you will only go from strength to strength now. Good luck.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thank you so much ma'am
Tq mam it was easy to understand
So I have a copy like that book so it’s not that book which you told us to get if u want. The book which I have got it’s name is banish boring words. The book which u told us to get and which book I have got are mostly the same
Writing with Ease is a 600 page book. I have reviewed it on my channel. Do watch.
i have get 10 out of 10 thank u mam
Ma'am you are an amazing teacher!
Thank you! 😃
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i thought her very very very wouldn't end LMAO
LMAO
Haha I love the way she said it😹
Thanks for explainig .....it helped me a lot....
My pleasure. Bless you.
One of the best videos with complete and manageable tips..
Glad you liked it Leena.