Interesting story. I didn’t expect it to take the direction that it did. It has the same hope that I have inside. Human and alien, technology and nature. Finding balance between them. Peace and hope. Embracing the better side in all of us.
These are excellent stories! I like the idea of changing your mind when you realise your original plan is liable to fail or non-beneficial to all concerned.
How many different names will you give the Commander? Is it Carran, Voran, Tarran, or some other name I missed in the writings.? If you can't even get your own story straight, how are we, the readers, supposed to follow the script?
Chill lovely, try not to Just criticise and add a reasonable suggestion to go with it, like: if you have trouble remembering all of the characters of your own stories, write them down with a description of who they are and what they do ie. job title or civilian roles and family stats and connections to others, relatives, friends, colleagues… and if you like to illustrate, make a picture to put to each person or cradle races bios (what you picture them as looking like, and colour schemes) That’s if they wrote the story and not just narrated it for our entertainment 😅 If we ‘sound’ mean about it, they may lose the inspiration and then we lose the cool stuff and stories they create for us all to enjoy ☺️ Love to all creators of all types in our world ❤ you give inspiration to all my different interests 😂 😊
@@overencumbered1852That’s actually what I did when I wrote stories when I was younger. And also when I was a GM of internet forum role playing games. It’s how I kept track of the worlds that I created for my players.
The name of a Guardian of nature eg forest, lake, etc is "Yaksha". Caucasians are not from the race of Yaksha. Caucasians are from the race of Danavas.
Interesting story. I didn’t expect it to take the direction that it did. It has the same hope that I have inside. Human and alien, technology and nature. Finding balance between them. Peace and hope. Embracing the better side in all of us.
These are excellent stories! I like the idea of changing your mind when you realise your original plan is liable to fail or non-beneficial to all concerned.
🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤THANK YOU FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY!🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤
How many different names will you give the Commander? Is it Carran, Voran, Tarran, or some other name I missed in the writings.?
If you can't even get your own story straight, how are we, the readers, supposed to follow the script?
Chill lovely, try not to Just criticise and add a reasonable suggestion to go with it, like: if you have trouble remembering all of the characters of your own stories, write them down with a description of who they are and what they do ie. job title or civilian roles and family stats and connections to others, relatives, friends, colleagues… and if you like to illustrate, make a picture to put to each person or cradle races bios (what you picture them as looking like, and colour schemes)
That’s if they wrote the story and not just narrated it for our entertainment 😅
If we ‘sound’ mean about it, they may lose the inspiration and then we lose the cool stuff and stories they create for us all to enjoy ☺️
Love to all creators of all types in our world ❤ you give inspiration to all my different interests 😂 😊
@@overencumbered1852That’s actually what I did when I wrote stories when I was younger. And also when I was a GM of internet forum role playing games. It’s how I kept track of the worlds that I created for my players.
The name of a Guardian of nature eg forest, lake, etc is "Yaksha". Caucasians are not from the race of Yaksha. Caucasians are from the race of Danavas.