The 7 tips 1. Don't spend too much time obsessing over which prompt to use 2. Don't worry too much about what "they" want 3. Consider being vulnerable in your personal statement 4. Engage the readers imagination using all 5 senses 5. The ending of your essay should feel surprising, but inevitable 6. The essence objects exercise 7. The values exercise
As a junior writing my common application drafts, i cannot emphasize this more: Write about something you’re passionate about!! You cannot imagine how many ideas I contemplated until I found a unique topic I love and then realized it became my favorite topic and draft because it included my passions in a subtle way.
I’m a junior in high school right now, and in my English class, every week we have to a write a college essay, and the point of it is to progress over time and get better at it, so when it’s time to submit them, they’re ready. I’ve never written one and didn’t know where onto begin, so watching this video helped so much. I wanted to thank you for that. I feel better about it and think I know where to start.
So awesome, Maya. Glad to hear! I LOVE what your English teacher did, btw. Creative and personal writing is a muscle that only gets stronger with exercise.
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I have watched many videos on how to make my essay perfect, but this video was by far the bet video. He gave understandable examples, personal advice, and counter measures to avoid being cliche. I really appreciate this video. After watching this video, I feel I am on the right path to making an exceptional essay. Thank you!
Please review my UT Austin essay, please I'm begging you this is the only college I am applying to and so I cannot afford to fail. ( www.collegevine.com/essay/d65cef26 )0
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You are awesome dude! I'm a Duke fan, but you're connection with you're dad really struck home with me. My dad passed away in 2007 and was a huge Duke basketball fan. And even though he isn't here to watch them with me, we share that bond to this day. Thank you so much for all of the great tips, and for helping me gain some confidence going into this process. Best video I've watched in a long time!
this was definitely THE best video I've found advising me about what to write! I've found the usual tips everywhere, "don't describe your achievements" etc, but this actually told me what TO do!
Thank you! I’m gonna be applying soon as an international student. I am terrified of the process, especially that my first language is not English, which is why these tips and your videos in general are so helpful!
I’m in 8th grade. Where I am, that’s the last year of middle school. I’m writing TWO essays to get into this performing arts school, and there’s really no guide to that so I’m looking up college essay tips and this is helpful for me right now and me in the future. Thank you, College Essay Guy.
@@prodjvenchy even if she’s in 8th grade she should be allowed to worry what she wants to do in the future. There’s no such thing as too early. And plus she said she is applying for a performing arts school for HIGHSCHOOL so stop
I’ve passed my junior high school, I’m starting to soon write my application for colleges, this video was so far the best one. I’m an economics student and I even achieved region highest 2 times but, this essay stress had me cornered. Thanks for all the info👏🏼
Yes! I certainly do. ;) Try www.collegeessayguy.com ! We have tons of free resources, guides, online courses, and a podcast to guide parents and students through the essay writing process.
Could you elaborate more on the transfer essays! Should it resemble the "why us" essay outlines you talk about, too? What is a good reason for wanting to leave a school even if you were very involved?
Thanks for asking! I actually wrote up a guide for transfer essays which you can check out here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-transfer-essay-examples
I’m from England and we have a “personal statement” and it’s basically 4000 characters of sucking up to the subject and talking about all the stuff you’ve done in your life that relate to the subject you’re applying for - and then maybe you’ll have a small paragraph at the end talking about ur hobbies. But your college essays sound like they’re genuine personal statements and it’s about you as a person :0
Thank you so much for these videos and the Matchlighters Program! My counselor and these essay guides are the only thing getting me through finishing my supplementals for the Questbridge match.
I’m just a rising senior getting some ideas/ inspiration to write a essay for Dual enrollment for a really good college. Thanks for this video and helping to get my proverbial wheels turning. Hopefully they’ll except me in the end.🤞
Thank you very much. Really appreciate your help as i'm currently in the essay writing process. And your guides and tips are indeed a big help. And I can't wait to give you feedback when my results are in later in the year. Again Thank You for even making aspects of your material free.
im 16, no idea when or if i'm going to graduate. but i've been thinking about my college essay since i was 11 so i think i owe it to myself to have a good one.
Do these things also work for early college essay's? This is the prompt that I have to work with. In an essay of one to two pages, explain how you know you are ready for this challenge and how you plan to be successful if accepted into the program.
Sure, this same perspective applies! I have some other personal statement/college essay resources on my website. Feel free to check them out! www.collegeessayguy.com/college-admissions-blog
Hey Mister College Essay guy! Thank you for all your amazing videos! I’m a Tunisian senior and I’m applying this fall to my dream college in the US. I have many ideas but I can’t find the perfect one! I can’t get inspired... I was wondering if you talked to some students one-on-one and helped them get inspiration based on their own stories. Again, thank you for your content! It is really helpful!
Hi Lina! Glad you liked it! And don't worry if you haven't found your topic. It sometimes takes a bit longer, but you'll get there. :) Check out my free guide if you haven't yet! To answer your question, my team and I work with a small number of students each year one-on-one. You can reach out and learn more here: www.collegeessayguy.com/one-on-one/
Hey dears. From my experience, if you want to write effectively and fast, make sure that you eliminate all potential distractions. Make yourself comfortable and switch off your phone or put it in “do not disturb” mode. If you prefer working in silence, consider visiting the library. On the other hand, if you like background noise, turn on some fast music or try working in a cafe. But do you know what works even better? Getting a good essay writer to help you. I work with Mary, and I assure you, she is the best writer I’ve come across, and she’s super kind. (m a r y j o y k i m m y @ g m a i l . c o m) - without the spaces, of course.
I am really passionate about my views on the death penalty which could fall under a few prompts for the common app essay, but I have read that speaking about politics isn’t such a good idea for a college essay. So I was wondering which would be a better topic: My really strong views on the death penalty or the reasoning behind I want to help people so much
The difficulty with topics that don't focus on you (like the death penalty) is that we may not learn as much about your own core values and how you'll contribute to your future college campus. Might there be another topic that will give readers better insight into you? Try outlining 2-3 different ideas, then share with a trusted teacher, friend, or family member and ask which idea might share more about you.
Yeah, My dad is an author, and he tells me when I am writing my stories that the endings should be surprising but inevitable. So I find it really interesting that it is the same in essay writing! This video is super helpful, thanks so much!
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Do you know a student who doesn't lack sleep? It's amazing how exhaustion is perceived as something normal when you're a student. You don't sleep for days because the exams are approaching and you have a huge essay marked with red on your schedule. That's normal; you're a student after all. Wait! No; it's not normal! If you're a student, that doesn't mean you shouldn't have a life, does it? I have a way out for those who are fed up with exhaustion - contact Sarah Lorde’s H/W Help (s a r a h l o r d e m e @ g m a i l . c o m) - without the spaces, of course. Sarah is very kind, and she is extremely talented in writing academic papers.
@@YourNextCareer I disagree partially. Yes do enjoy your time in school, but since you're aware right now, it wouldn't hurt to chip away each day. A lot of people get their college essay "moments" during these years, so just make a note of it and it may later become your essay topic
Time goes by hella fast. You’ll be a senior in no time. Don’t think about college too much rn and enjoy middle school while it lasts. That being said if you have a passion then go for it. Nothing’s holding you back
Journaling is a great way to practice writing. But I wouldn't recommend thinking about whether any given experience will make a great college essay. Live life and stay curious; your essay topic will come as you get to the end of your high school career.
Hey dears. From my experience, if you want to write effectively and fast, make sure that you eliminate all potential distractions. Make yourself comfortable and switch off your phone or put it in “do not disturb” mode. If you prefer working in silence, consider visiting the library. On the other hand, if you like background noise, turn on some fast music or try working in a cafe. But do you know what works even better? Getting a good essay writer to help you. I work with Mary, and I assure you, she is the best writer I’ve come across, and she’s super kind. (m a r y j o y k i m m y @ g m a i l . c o m) - without the spaces, of course.
Hey there Mr. College Essay guy, I’ll be applying to college in the fall but I haven’t yet decided how to approach writing my essay. I want to include certain comedic aspects but I’m not sure if I should take that risk. Do you have any advice on what to do? Thanks in advance 👍🏾
If humor is a big part of your personality, including it in your college essay is a GREAT way to show that! The key here, as with all things, is execution. HOW will you do that? Check out point #2 on this blog post for some guidance: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/how-to-write-about-challenges-college-essay Best of luck!
I am thinking about writing like a how to on how to overcome shyness so what i did to overcome shyness how I am now more confident and what I have done now since overcoming my shyness that I wouldn’t have done before because I was too shy and how it’s developed my character.Do you think this will be a good topic to write about or is it to cliche?
It's a pretty common topic, so I recommend that if going with that topic to try and brainstorm some uncommon connections: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/how-to-write-a-college-essay#D1 However, I might recommend brainstorming a few other ideas: what's the college essay that only you could write?
Would a good college essay be writing about how the game of football has had such a powerful effect on me since I was 6 and my dreams and aspirations for football, and how even though I’ve grown up in a suburban household, my family life wasn’t the best. Like how my older sister has been verbally and physically abusive to my parents since I was little and how her abuse forced me to mature faster to make sure I could protect my mom and younger siblings from her? Also how the reason I want to become successful in football is because I want to give my parents and siblings a great life?
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?" If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
do u think its a good idea to write ab how i love things that giv me an adrenaline rush (like rollercoasters, haunted houses) and how thats taught me to go for the things i want in life even if its risky cuz ive always been taught to play it safe and never go for the things i want
So the college that I really want to go to doesn't require an essay, but highly recommend one if you have a low GPA. My GPA isn't the best so the lady said to either write about why I want to go to that college or really anything, and they just want to see how I write. I don't really have much about why I want to go to that college that would be essay worthy and if I wanted to write about why I want to chose the majors I did, I don't think I could write about that in detail either. I would love to do a personal essay, but I really don't know where to begin or how to format it. What would you recommend?
Hey dears. From my experience, if you want to write effectively and fast, make sure that you eliminate all potential distractions. Make yourself comfortable and switch off your phone or put it in “do not disturb” mode. If you prefer working in silence, consider visiting the library. On the other hand, if you like background noise, turn on some fast music or try working in a cafe. But do you know what works even better? Getting a good essay writer to help you. I work with Mary, and I assure you, she is the best writer I’ve come across, and she’s super kind. (m a r y j o y k i m m y @ g m a i l . c o m) - without the spaces, of course.
I like the idea of a diary. Also, make sure you do some low stakes brainstorming - figure out character traits or lessons you have learned that could be the focus / essence of the essay...what do people say about, adjectives to describe who you are to others...you can think conventions and structure after you nail down the topic and message but you can write it as if it's someone else writing about you, a diary entry sounds fun too. a lot of options. good luck
i’m 24 and writing a personal essay. I would like to talk about my time out of school and building work experience and now wanting to expand within my field. i’m not quite sure how to word it in 650 words lol
I really hope you see this , but i’ve been told multiple times not to bring up academics in your college essay but a lot of the examples you used involved academics, do you recommend using academics ?
Your entire college application is supposed to give the admissions officers a glimpse into who you are as a person inside and outside of your academic life. Aim to talk about a range of subjects and qualities about yourself.
I recommend writing your college essay for Common App's 7th prompt: "Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you've already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design."
I want to write about what I think about myself! Is it okay to write about that? And also in between I have my own personal apperance thought. Is it good to topic to write about?
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?" If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
I’m freaking out because I have nothing to write about. I grew up in the suburbs so my life is pretty boring, I don’t really have any big experiences I could write about
Hiya! Im a junior in highschool, boutta be a senior next year but I have a question, is it ok for me to talk about myself being not confident with my body and looks? Because all throughout my 17 years of living I've had doubts bout myself and over think about things that are very simple to everyone else. Growing up I have always felt like I wasn't good enough for anyone or that people I walk by silently judges me for the way how I look. But I learned to love myself slowly but surely but I couldn't have done that if I didn't remember the encouraging words my grandma would say to me when I felt down or the uplifting speeches my God mom would say to me when I would confess the things that have been on my mind for ages (which were all depressing thoughts, not eating for days on end and even some fat shaming) those two people who I care for very much has been my motivation to not care what others think and just be ME! They inspired me that if I don't like the way how I look then change it up a bit. meaning work on sculpting my body the way I can feel comfortable enough in, eat right and workout stuff like that. It woukd be great if I could write on that honestly, with my journey towards self lovin.
Sir, I need your help. I want to write an essay about my interest in science. Do you have any tips on how to model the essay, how to bring out my fascination, the urge to learn more and all that?
Yep! I have a bunch of blog posts and TH-cam videos that dive deep into the Personal Statement process. Feel free to start on my blog here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-admissions-blog
You may want to submit your test scores (if they're great), and you'll definitely want to have great application essays and extracurricular activities. Hope this helps! I have other resources you can check out for help with those areas on my website: www.collegeessayguy.com/
Not unless the prompt asks for that! Of course, if you're writing a "Why Major" essay, than of course you'd want to include that information. If it's a different prompt, then it wouldn't be mandatory. Overall, it's up to you!
Hi there! Thanks for writing in. Unfortunately, no. Super busy this time of year so I'm unavailable for one-time essay revisions. There are a few options for you though! 1. Submit your essay for review at Prompt: prompt.com/ceg/ 2. Submit your essay for a review from my team at College Vine: www.collegevine.com/essays/review/expert/o/3 3. Submit your essay for a review on my website: review.collegeessayguy.com/ Additionally, you can request a meeting to learn more about our 1-on-1 college essay and application help here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-review-services Hope this helps! I'm sure you're doing great!
Sir your contents are reallu amazing. " Describe an experience where you had to adapt to a new environment (i.e. a different culture, situation, or way of thinking)." This is my topic. So can i write about my family background, and also the experience and challenges I had when i shifted to new college in the town ( where all film stars children studies ) and then talking about how this shapes my ambition to be Chemical engineer ( inspired by my Chemistry proffessor, and his lectures, and by participating in science fairs) Can you please help. University of pittsburg Pennsylvania is my dream one So is this enough
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?" If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
I have to Write a college application essay in highschool to prepare us, I’m at 464 words ☹️.. but I was wondering how can I stand out even more ? I feel like I didn’t go much in detail
That's up to you! If you have multiple experiences that relate to a value of yours, it could make for a great essay. I recommend doing some more brainstorming. Here are some of my favorite exercises: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/category/Brainstorm
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The 7 tips
1. Don't spend too much time obsessing over which prompt to use
2. Don't worry too much about what "they" want
3. Consider being vulnerable in your personal statement
4. Engage the readers imagination using all 5 senses
5. The ending of your essay should feel surprising, but inevitable
6. The essence objects exercise
7. The values exercise
If you want the TL;DR version, here it is!
Please review my UT Austin essay, please I'm begging you this is the only college I am applying to and so I cannot afford to fail.0
Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)3
@@edsradio5817 no
Not quite but ok.
As a junior writing my common application drafts, i cannot emphasize this more: Write about something you’re passionate about!! You cannot imagine how many ideas I contemplated until I found a unique topic I love and then realized it became my favorite topic and draft because it included my passions in a subtle way.
Well said!
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Ooh! too bad i’m not passionate about anything 😐
I feel like an empty passionless husk trying to do this. Just wish it was that easy.
@@schwany6703 literally my exact problem
I’m a junior in high school right now, and in my English class, every week we have to a write a college essay, and the point of it is to progress over time and get better at it, so when it’s time to submit them, they’re ready. I’ve never written one and didn’t know where onto begin, so watching this video helped so much. I wanted to thank you for that. I feel better about it and think I know where to start.
So awesome, Maya. Glad to hear! I LOVE what your English teacher did, btw. Creative and personal writing is a muscle that only gets stronger with exercise.
Maya Amylee Jialu Robinson you have a good teacher she loves y’all 👍
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Elvis Chen I would but it says someone else has already started looking at it
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As a senior with a week left until the December 1st deadline, I need to learn this quick.
You got this!
How was it? My deadlines are all on January.
howd it go
@@PixT are u also cramming ur essay before Jan 1st deadline?
@@ethanchu1108 nah ima junior just watching these for the future, gl with ur essay tho
This 500 word limit is killing me. I have so much i want to say
You got this!
I think I'm the opposite...
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@@vokloo Fr man I have to write at least 250 words so I’m gonna write like 300 max
Alright, time to write some last-minute essays... Wish me luck!
Update: I got accepted into my dream college🥳🥳
Good luck!
Good luck
Did it work out lol?
@@someonesomeone3126 PLEASE IKR
How did it go
I have watched many videos on how to make my essay perfect, but this video was by far the bet video. He gave understandable examples, personal advice, and counter measures to avoid being cliche. I really appreciate this video. After watching this video, I feel I am on the right path to making an exceptional essay. Thank you!
Wow! You're so welcome! I'm always happy to help.
Did you get in? :)
Did you get in? :)
@@ziadayman4133 Aww! Thank you for checking in. I am happy to say that I am officially in my dream school!
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Congrats! I am so happy for you. I am a senior and am afraid not to get accepted.
Wow this is truly some amazing information, I can’t explain how much I appreciate this.
Thanks!
I can do any homework / college work / Uni work and even Essays for you!! DM me on instagram @homeworkguy
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These are really good tips. Students tend to obsess over certain prompts instead of getting down to the writing!
You're so right! Glad that you enjoyed the tips. Feel free to spread the word. :)
You are awesome dude! I'm a Duke fan, but you're connection with you're dad really struck home with me. My dad passed away in 2007 and was a huge Duke basketball fan. And even though he isn't here to watch them with me, we share that bond to this day. Thank you so much for all of the great tips, and for helping me gain some confidence going into this process. Best video I've watched in a long time!
Wow! Thanks for sharing. :)
this was definitely THE best video I've found advising me about what to write!
I've found the usual tips everywhere, "don't describe your achievements" etc, but this actually told me what TO do!
Glad it was helpful! Thanks for watching. :)
Thank you! I’m gonna be applying soon as an international student. I am terrified of the process, especially that my first language is not English, which is why these tips and your videos in general are so helpful!
You're welcome! Best of luck to you. You got this.
same!
Same here, really nervous!
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I’m in 8th grade. Where I am, that’s the last year of middle school. I’m writing TWO essays to get into this performing arts school, and there’s really no guide to that so I’m looking up college essay tips and this is helpful for me right now and me in the future. Thank you, College Essay Guy.
Wow! That's awesome. Glad I could help!
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bro you're in middle school. relax. enjoy your time and stop worrying about college applications already.
@@prodjvenchy even if she’s in 8th grade she should be allowed to worry what she wants to do in the future. There’s no such thing as too early. And plus she said she is applying for a performing arts school for HIGHSCHOOL so stop
@@frankie-leerodriguez-gonza783 damn I can't read
I’ve passed my junior high school, I’m starting to soon write my application for colleges, this video was so far the best one. I’m an economics student and I even achieved region highest 2 times but, this essay stress had me cornered. Thanks for all the info👏🏼
Glad it was helpful! Thanks for watching. :)
POV: Your early decision deadline is in less than three weeks and you still haven't written your essay.
LOL! You got this!
PLS THIS IS LITERALLY ME
It's been 3 weeks, how are you?
Mines in 14 days (I’m cooked)
My daughter is going through this right now. It’s frustrating as a parent to watch your child feel overwhelmed by the college application process.
We hear you. It's a journey! You may find our parent resources helpful: www.collegeessayguy.com/parents
my daughter is having a hard time getting her essays ready; any suggestions on books or websites that I can visit with her to get the ball rolling?
Yes! I certainly do. ;) Try www.collegeessayguy.com ! We have tons of free resources, guides, online courses, and a podcast to guide parents and students through the essay writing process.
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I have finally find a video that could help me with my college essay. Thank you so much!!!
Glad it was helpful!
College Essay Guy is the real deal! Love your stuff Ethan! Still such valuable insights even after all these years! -Kevin
Thanks so much!
Could you elaborate more on the transfer essays! Should it resemble the "why us" essay outlines you talk about, too? What is a good reason for wanting to leave a school even if you were very involved?
Thanks for asking! I actually wrote up a guide for transfer essays which you can check out here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-transfer-essay-examples
I’m from England and we have a “personal statement” and it’s basically 4000 characters of sucking up to the subject and talking about all the stuff you’ve done in your life that relate to the subject you’re applying for - and then maybe you’ll have a small paragraph at the end talking about ur hobbies. But your college essays sound like they’re genuine personal statements and it’s about you as a person :0
You mean to English unis/colleges ?
Rafiz Sadique yeah , I edited it to make sense lol
Interesting! I wonder if any of the same concepts could apply to your personal statement in England?
Thank you so much for these videos and the Matchlighters Program! My counselor and these essay guides are the only thing getting me through finishing my supplementals for the Questbridge match.
You're so welcome! Happy you're here.
Very helpful tips that will not only help me get an A in English, but help out my whole life in general thankyou very much, keep up the good work
Happy to help!
Thank you very much! God bless you.
You're welcome!
Very good insights--direct, to the point, but with plenty of concrete examples. You nailed it.
Thanks for watching!
I’m just a rising senior getting some ideas/ inspiration to write a essay for Dual enrollment for a really good college. Thanks for this video and helping to get my proverbial wheels turning. Hopefully they’ll except me in the end.🤞
Awesome. Thanks for watching!
Thank you very much. Really appreciate your help as i'm currently in the essay writing process. And your guides and tips are indeed a big help. And I can't wait to give you feedback when my results are in later in the year. Again Thank You for even making aspects of your material free.
You're welcome Amanda!
Not only was I able to get tips through this, but was able to develop my confidence, thankyou very much ❤️🙏🙏😀
Awesome!
im 16, no idea when or if i'm going to graduate. but i've been thinking about my college essay since i was 11 so i think i owe it to myself to have a good one.
You have plenty of time! Thanks for watching.
Do these things also work for early college essay's? This is the prompt that I have to work with. In an essay of one to two pages, explain how you know you are ready for this challenge and how you plan to be successful if accepted into the program.
Sure, this same perspective applies! I have some other personal statement/college essay resources on my website. Feel free to check them out! www.collegeessayguy.com/college-admissions-blog
Hey Mister College Essay guy! Thank you for all your amazing videos! I’m a Tunisian senior and I’m applying this fall to my dream college in the US. I have many ideas but I can’t find the perfect one! I can’t get inspired... I was wondering if you talked to some students one-on-one and helped them get inspiration based on their own stories. Again, thank you for your content! It is really helpful!
Hi Lina! Glad you liked it! And don't worry if you haven't found your topic. It sometimes takes a bit longer, but you'll get there. :) Check out my free guide if you haven't yet! To answer your question, my team and I work with a small number of students each year one-on-one. You can reach out and learn more here: www.collegeessayguy.com/one-on-one/
Hi Lina. This 2 months after you comment, have you been apply to write you personal essay?
thanks man, this helped a lot:D
Awesome! Thanks for watching. :)
This just gave me so much confidence!!
I LOVE this video
So happy to hear that!
Trying to gather some info before I get started on my college applications, thank you, this was great!
So glad!
Truly thank you so much! This really helps me being a first time university student!! I totally understand your perspectives! 💕🎊🎉
I'm so glad!
Hey dears. From my experience, if you want to write effectively and fast, make sure that you eliminate all potential distractions. Make yourself comfortable and switch off your phone or put it in “do not disturb” mode. If you prefer working in silence, consider visiting the library. On the other hand, if you like background noise, turn on some fast music or try working in a cafe.
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thank you for your useful video . I am trying my best in it . Need more practice.
You can do it!
I am really passionate about my views on the death penalty which could fall under a few prompts for the common app essay, but I have read that speaking about politics isn’t such a good idea for a college essay. So I was wondering which would be a better topic: My really strong views on the death penalty or the reasoning behind I want to help people so much
The difficulty with topics that don't focus on you (like the death penalty) is that we may not learn as much about your own core values and how you'll contribute to your future college campus. Might there be another topic that will give readers better insight into you? Try outlining 2-3 different ideas, then share with a trusted teacher, friend, or family member and ask which idea might share more about you.
College Essay Guy Ohh ok thank you so much!
I’m trying to get into Oxford and I’m stressed about essay next year please pray for me to get there!!!
You got this. I believe in you!
Thanks for the great video! It helped a lot!
Glad to hear it!
Yeah, My dad is an author, and he tells me when I am writing my stories that the endings should be surprising but inevitable. So I find it really interesting that it is the same in essay writing! This video is super helpful, thanks so much!
Your dad sounds pretty cool. :)
@@Collegeessayguy Yeah he totally is!
Thank you so much for making this video, I really feel like this will help me in starting my college essays! :D
You're so welcome!
Thanks for the help!
You're welcome! Thanks for watching.
Extremely helpful. Thank you!
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Glad you liked it. :)
Dear Mr. College Essay Guy,
I’m a 7th grader how is really ready for life, any advice for me to get started
enjoy the early years and don't worry about college til junior and senior year.
@@YourNextCareer I disagree partially. Yes do enjoy your time in school, but since you're aware right now, it wouldn't hurt to chip away each day. A lot of people get their college essay "moments" during these years, so just make a note of it and it may later become your essay topic
Time goes by hella fast. You’ll be a senior in no time. Don’t think about college too much rn and enjoy middle school while it lasts. That being said if you have a passion then go for it. Nothing’s holding you back
Journaling is a great way to practice writing. But I wouldn't recommend thinking about whether any given experience will make a great college essay. Live life and stay curious; your essay topic will come as you get to the end of your high school career.
Hey dears. From my experience, if you want to write effectively and fast, make sure that you eliminate all potential distractions. Make yourself comfortable and switch off your phone or put it in “do not disturb” mode. If you prefer working in silence, consider visiting the library. On the other hand, if you like background noise, turn on some fast music or try working in a cafe.
But do you know what works even better? Getting a good essay writer to help you. I work with Mary, and I assure you, she is the best writer I’ve come across, and she’s super kind. (m a r y j o y k i m m y @ g m a i l . c o m) - without the spaces, of course.
Hey there Mr. College Essay guy, I’ll be applying to college in the fall but I haven’t yet decided how to approach writing my essay. I want to include certain comedic aspects but I’m not sure if I should take that risk. Do you have any advice on what to do? Thanks in advance 👍🏾
If humor is a big part of your personality, including it in your college essay is a GREAT way to show that! The key here, as with all things, is execution. HOW will you do that? Check out point #2 on this blog post for some guidance: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/how-to-write-about-challenges-college-essay Best of luck!
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I am thinking about writing like a how to on how to overcome shyness so what i did to overcome shyness how I am now more confident and what I have done now since overcoming my shyness that I wouldn’t have done before because I was too shy and how it’s developed my character.Do you think this will be a good topic to write about or is it to cliche?
It's a pretty common topic, so I recommend that if going with that topic to try and brainstorm some uncommon connections: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/how-to-write-a-college-essay#D1
However, I might recommend brainstorming a few other ideas: what's the college essay that only you could write?
Would a good college essay be writing about how the game of football has had such a powerful effect on me since I was 6 and my dreams and aspirations for football, and how even though I’ve grown up in a suburban household, my family life wasn’t the best. Like how my older sister has been verbally and physically abusive to my parents since I was little and how her abuse forced me to mature faster to make sure I could protect my mom and younger siblings from her? Also how the reason I want to become successful in football is because I want to give my parents and siblings a great life?
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?"
If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
do u think its a good idea to write ab how i love things that giv me an adrenaline rush (like rollercoasters, haunted houses) and how thats taught me to go for the things i want in life even if its risky cuz ive always been taught to play it safe and never go for the things i want
Sure!
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Very helpful video, thank you!!
You're welcome!
So the college that I really want to go to doesn't require an essay, but highly recommend one if you have a low GPA. My GPA isn't the best so the lady said to either write about why I want to go to that college or really anything, and they just want to see how I write. I don't really have much about why I want to go to that college that would be essay worthy and if I wanted to write about why I want to chose the majors I did, I don't think I could write about that in detail either. I would love to do a personal essay, but I really don't know where to begin or how to format it. What would you recommend?
Hi there! I recommend starting with my free guide to writing the personal statement. You can access it on my website here: www.collegeessayguy.com/
thank you so much everything in this video except video was useful for me.
Glad it was helpful!
Awesome tips, these really helped me out!
Glad to hear it! Thanks for letting me know. :)
Hey dears. From my experience, if you want to write effectively and fast, make sure that you eliminate all potential distractions. Make yourself comfortable and switch off your phone or put it in “do not disturb” mode. If you prefer working in silence, consider visiting the library. On the other hand, if you like background noise, turn on some fast music or try working in a cafe.
But do you know what works even better? Getting a good essay writer to help you. I work with Mary, and I assure you, she is the best writer I’ve come across, and she’s super kind. (m a r y j o y k i m m y @ g m a i l . c o m) - without the spaces, of course.
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Thanks!
I need help. I've always been a closed off person who doesn't like talking about myself so how should I go about tackling these college essays
Make it like your diAry, things youve never shared maybe
I like the idea of a diary. Also, make sure you do some low stakes brainstorming - figure out character traits or lessons you have learned that could be the focus / essence of the essay...what do people say about, adjectives to describe who you are to others...you can think conventions and structure after you nail down the topic and message but you can write it as if it's someone else writing about you, a diary entry sounds fun too. a lot of options. good luck
Try this blog post to generate lots of ideas! www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-essay-topics-ideas
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i’m 24 and writing a personal essay. I would like to talk about my time out of school and building work experience and now wanting to expand within my field. i’m not quite sure how to word it in 650 words lol
Best of luck to you! I recommend starting with my new blog post: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/personal-statement
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Is it okay to use informal speech in my essay? Like don't or isn't or aren't or I'd ?
We're fans of contractions around here :)
thank you so much this has helped me a lot!
You're so welcome!
So great thank you !!
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It wonderful! Thank you so much 😍😍
Welcome!
I really hope you see this , but i’ve been told multiple times not to bring up academics in your college essay but a lot of the examples you used involved academics, do you recommend using academics ?
Your entire college application is supposed to give the admissions officers a glimpse into who you are as a person inside and outside of your academic life. Aim to talk about a range of subjects and qualities about yourself.
Do you still recommend using the "Describe the world you come from..." prompt? I personally really like it and want to use it
I recommend writing your college essay for Common App's 7th prompt: "Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you've already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design."
I want to write about what I think about myself! Is it okay to write about that? And also in between I have my own personal apperance thought. Is it good to topic to write about?
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?"
If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
thank u very much
hope i'll get YES and will be a french student from Ukraine
fingers crossed 🤞🏼💜💜
You got this.
awesome video!!! thx so much:)
Hey, thanks!
I’m freaking out because I have nothing to write about. I grew up in the suburbs so my life is pretty boring, I don’t really have any big experiences I could write about
Sounds like you need to do some brainstorming! Check out the videos on my channel for some awesome exercises. :)
Should've watched this before I wrote my essay
Oops. :)
Hiya! Im a junior in highschool, boutta be a senior next year but I have a question, is it ok for me to talk about myself being not confident with my body and looks? Because all throughout my 17 years of living I've had doubts bout myself and over think about things that are very simple to everyone else. Growing up I have always felt like I wasn't good enough for anyone or that people I walk by silently judges me for the way how I look. But I learned to love myself slowly but surely but I couldn't have done that if I didn't remember the encouraging words my grandma would say to me when I felt down or the uplifting speeches my God mom would say to me when I would confess the things that have been on my mind for ages (which were all depressing thoughts, not eating for days on end and even some fat shaming) those two people who I care for very much has been my motivation to not care what others think and just be ME! They inspired me that if I don't like the way how I look then change it up a bit. meaning work on sculpting my body the way I can feel comfortable enough in, eat right and workout stuff like that. It woukd be great if I could write on that honestly, with my journey towards self lovin.
You could definitely talk about your self-love journey in your essay! Just remember to also include what you learned along the way.
Could I write about experiences I had as a child (10-11 years old) if I believe it has shaped me and I can still be descriptive about it?
Up to you! Start by outlining the idea to see what sorts of insights you can come up with.
Same, I had an essay due over a month ago... still not turned in. I keep changing it...
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As an 11 year old, I think this will greatly improve my chances of getting into Harvard.
LOL, keep us posted!
Really educational love it!!!!
Awesome. Thanks!
Right now im tryin to get inti college in middle school, so this helps
Good for you! Best of luck.
Sir, I need your help.
I want to write an essay about my interest in science.
Do you have any tips on how to model the essay, how to bring out my fascination, the urge to learn more and all that?
Yep! I have a bunch of blog posts and TH-cam videos that dive deep into the Personal Statement process. Feel free to start on my blog here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-admissions-blog
Thank you very much.
I'll have a look
Hi I have a really low gpa but I want to go to NYU I’m hoping other things in my application can help me what else can I do
You may want to submit your test scores (if they're great), and you'll definitely want to have great application essays and extracurricular activities. Hope this helps! I have other resources you can check out for help with those areas on my website: www.collegeessayguy.com/
So grateful for these tips. writing is not my cup of tea(((
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I wanted to focus on my adoption, as my major will be criminal psychology i wanted to connect it without being "soppy". Tips?
Try to bring some uncommon connections to your essay! What's something that is unique to your situation and experiences? :)
do you think its necessary/important to talk about or end your essay with your chosen major/ career?
Not unless the prompt asks for that! Of course, if you're writing a "Why Major" essay, than of course you'd want to include that information. If it's a different prompt, then it wouldn't be mandatory. Overall, it's up to you!
Alright… I only got one prompt to work with and it’s about challenges.. wish me luck
You got this!
Great video
Thanks!
Is there a certain format to use? Like MLA?
Good question. I actually wrote a whole blog post on this. Check it out: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-essay-format
Thanks man! I feel a weight lifted off my shoulders
Beautiful, Shubham! Glad to hear it. You've got this.
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Hi, I really love ur video! I am working on my transfer essays right now. Can I pay you for editing my why transfer essays
Hi there! Thanks for writing in. Unfortunately, no. Super busy this time of year so I'm unavailable for one-time essay revisions. There are a few options for you though!
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Hope this helps! I'm sure you're doing great!
@@Collegeessayguy Actually most of my schools deadline are at 3.15. I am wondering whether if you have time at the beginning of March?
Sir your contents are reallu amazing. " Describe an experience where you had to adapt to a new environment (i.e. a different culture, situation, or way of thinking)." This is my topic. So can i write about my family background, and also the experience and challenges I had when i shifted to new college in the town ( where all film stars children studies ) and then talking about how this shapes my ambition to be Chemical engineer ( inspired by my Chemistry proffessor, and his lectures, and by participating in science fairs) Can you please help. University of pittsburg Pennsylvania is my dream one So is this enough
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?"
If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
Do you have like examples of college eassays so that we can get an idea of what you mean.
Yup! www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-essay-examples
I have to Write a college application essay in highschool to prepare us, I’m at 464 words ☹️.. but I was wondering how can I stand out even more ? I feel like I didn’t go much in detail
Add more insights into your essay! Read this: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-essay-tips
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Can your essence objects bring you back to negative moments in your life or represent a negative aspect of your life
Yes!
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I’m starting this at the start of my senior year, kinda stressful
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@@Collegeessayguy Thanks!
I love your videos but for some reason the website with the recoursec wont open on my browser. Im from Russia
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Are we supposed to only write about one moment in our lives or talk about more events I’m really confused about that
That's up to you! If you have multiple experiences that relate to a value of yours, it could make for a great essay. I recommend doing some more brainstorming. Here are some of my favorite exercises: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/category/Brainstorm
For using the imagination of the five senses, so I include all of it on a single paragraph or throughout the essay?
Up to you! Do whatever fits with the flow of your essay.
Saved me thank you
Thanks for watching!
Can I use the same essay with different colleges, assuming the promt is the same, or similar.
Noah Boock that’s what i’m doing, it’s completely fine, although you might need to rewrite it a little to better suit the prompt
You totally can! In fact, I recommend it. I call these Super Essays. More here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/college-essay-prompts