THE ESSAYS THAT GOT ME INTO YALE!

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  • @kalebbradburn5298
    @kalebbradburn5298 4 ปีที่แล้ว +85

    Omg I wish I could write like him. Its literal art.

  • @anthonygardner400
    @anthonygardner400 5 ปีที่แล้ว +155

    Jose - These essays are absolutely wonderful. They do what admissions committee members hope for, which is to creatively convey who you really are as a person. As a Yale grad, I'm bummed you didn't choose my school, but Stanford is awesome as well. :) Best of luck, and have an amazing four years!

  • @StutiMishra
    @StutiMishra 4 ปีที่แล้ว +82

    Out of all the Harvard/Yale essays I have seen on TH-cam, these were the best. Congrats on your admission!

  • @alexlam6655
    @alexlam6655 4 ปีที่แล้ว +58

    your essays are so beautiful it makes me want to cry, thank you this video helps so much/ makes me excited to write!!

  • @angelinaskedros1540
    @angelinaskedros1540 3 ปีที่แล้ว +29

    I am in literal awe. You write powerful, poetic, and articulated essays.

  • @josieb6880
    @josieb6880 3 ปีที่แล้ว +28

    My jaw dropped at the John Winthrop essay! Thank you so much for this; it's good inspiration for my own Yale essays :))

  • @melb23boy66
    @melb23boy66 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    Those essays are literally works of art. You should be super proud of them!

  • @dumisilechavula1709
    @dumisilechavula1709 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Eeeh, I’m shook. I need to improve my writing ASAP!! These were absolutely amazing essays.

  • @jeffreyhan6747
    @jeffreyhan6747 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    These essays were geneuity the only ones I "wowed." When I see others' videos, I'm always like "why him?" "why her?" (and "why me" when I proofread mine). Yours definitely showed why Yale chose you; any school will.

  • @JeanneLin
    @JeanneLin 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Your story about the sandbox.....so beautiful like wow your writing is amazing

  • @khadijah_2948
    @khadijah_2948 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Let me get this straight, your essays are not cut and dry. They are amazing ❤️❤️❤️

  • @wolfmangoland7972
    @wolfmangoland7972 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    These are one of the best essays I have read so far.

  • @L4urr3n
    @L4urr3n 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    im only in 9th grade, yale and Columbia are my dream schools. you’re truly inspiring.

  • @whartonbizzo
    @whartonbizzo 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I liked learning about Yale's short essay questions! Congratulations on your application.

  • @ariannyjorge1328
    @ariannyjorge1328 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    WOW. I legit have no words, this is art.

  • @adrianthegreat8190
    @adrianthegreat8190 4 ปีที่แล้ว +138

    These essays are poems, holy shit. Looks like I'm not getting in.

    • @willcoomans9674
      @willcoomans9674 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      that's how im feeling right now :(

    • @rana-gd4ue
      @rana-gd4ue 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@willcoomans9674 don’t feel this way, work hard to improve your skills and I am sure that you will be accepted to Yale.

  • @vishwajeetd1483
    @vishwajeetd1483 4 ปีที่แล้ว +144

    My gaydar didn't work for the first time

  • @elinemateo
    @elinemateo 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    :) THIS is aMaZinG! I wish I’d see this sooner, it’s very helpful. It gave me a creative and different outlook (because you wrote really well and gave us your essay) on how to answer vague overreaching prompts! 👍🏽👍🏽

  • @vivianhir3930
    @vivianhir3930 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    These are the best essays I have ever read.

  • @markmelon3529
    @markmelon3529 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I'm on the verge of breakdown because I feel so dumb reading your essays. I don't think I'd stop feeling miserable if I start crying now.

  • @myeong-hee6041
    @myeong-hee6041 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    You have helped me so much! Yale’s questions are quite “deep” and it rlly gets you thinking. That’s why I like Yale. They aren’t just looking at your academics, they want to see you as a person. If that makes sense?

    • @danielm17
      @danielm17 ปีที่แล้ว

      Only if ur oppressed.

  • @atomicbones
    @atomicbones ปีที่แล้ว

    Oh my gosh you're a genius. So cool. You're an amazing writer

  • @salmamohamed2213
    @salmamohamed2213 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    your essays are amazing and are an inspiration to me during the application process!

  • @ashiyasaeed4099
    @ashiyasaeed4099 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Nice. I liked how you articulate your points.

  • @Nick-un2cq
    @Nick-un2cq 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I loved your essays... I'm also latino, and I just definitely love Yale (hope I get in).

  • @isabelaavila8770
    @isabelaavila8770 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your essays are amazing! Thanks for sharing :)

  • @Lelffy
    @Lelffy 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    In am very proud of you!

  • @sabrinasalam6537
    @sabrinasalam6537 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Did you add a supplement? Like a letter of recommendation from a mentor who you were working with in your research of sustainable development?

    • @ivanboyadzhiev1929
      @ivanboyadzhiev1929 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm not sure about Jose but I did some summer research in a biophysics lab and uploaded a recommendation from my supervising professor. If you have the chance to do so too it would greatly help your app if it comes from a respected individual (ie professor, mentor of research, etc)

  • @nellieeess
    @nellieeess 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    woah. I found my male twin. (Expect I’m 14). I love cross country (running in general), sustainability, and politics. I’m also from Mexico.
    I’ve been thinking about college and I always liked Harvard and Princeton because I visited there. But honestly Yale sounds so much better. However I probably won’t get into either.

  • @samwang7925
    @samwang7925 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your essays are really awesome! Thanks for sharing.

  • @ymirsrage
    @ymirsrage ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Omg i just checked my sat scores and got a 1510 , 790 in math and 720 in Reading and writing...can I still get into harvard

  • @michelleyuxinwang5961
    @michelleyuxinwang5961 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    thanks for sharing!

  • @yys1656
    @yys1656 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    a what in the venn diagram?? this dude is next level..

  • @daylightstars4097
    @daylightstars4097 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hello. I am in middle school currently and hope to one day attend Yale. It is a dream of mine. I don’t yet know what I want to do there. All I know is that I really want to get into that school. One question I do have, is do you have to restate the question or just give an answer?

  • @bmillz007
    @bmillz007 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Wow you’re so incredibly handsome!

  • @autummb4191
    @autummb4191 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    wow....and that’s how you show not tell..

  • @dinyarislam1793
    @dinyarislam1793 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Hey Jose I'm applying to Yale fall 2020 session and I had a question regarding your "why these topics interest u"...So u said u selected 3 majors u were interested in but why didn't u write anything regarding ur interest in architecture? Is it because of the concise
    word limit

    • @Subhuofc111
      @Subhuofc111 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hey man !
      Just wondering...
      Did you get selected in ?

  • @jackpumpunifrimpong-manso6523
    @jackpumpunifrimpong-manso6523 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Nice video

  • @yasminabdulrazak7958
    @yasminabdulrazak7958 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you!

  • @jho5669
    @jho5669 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Congratulations? Did you get interviewed by Yale alum?

  • @lpstwoqueens5481
    @lpstwoqueens5481 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey bestie it's your friend Ximena

  • @obaidulkhan9538
    @obaidulkhan9538 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Which websites or books should we follow for writing poem type essays like you?
    Please reply

  • @KeitonHarrison
    @KeitonHarrison 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    this is the first time my gaydar failed me

    • @qbpw8888
      @qbpw8888 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Looks like Blake Mitchell lol 😁

  • @barsaa._.
    @barsaa._. 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    buy ma boy new glasses

  • @syedhanan7547
    @syedhanan7547 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi ...can u help me in essays

  • @sherlythinker
    @sherlythinker 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    How to put your 'pest' foot forward? I'm appalled.