I can't belive how it must have felt while in that dream. Its bad enough that we heard this, imagion how it must have felt or feel like sleeping with this.
This has just about everything that could make a nightmare: A total lack of understanding of events, complete isolation, said events all having really dark anomalies, 14 hours of perception, and you even had it on the same day for two years.
This is a really great story so far, despite the few cliches (all alone, something preventing you from turning off the system). But the fact that you had a dream that is better and more well-written than most creepy pastas is pretty awesome.
Damn, you weren't kidding when you were saying you could make better horror material than all of the horror genre. Possibly best Mario creepy pasta I've heard ever. keep up the good work, chief chortles.
I'm not easily scared. Seriously, I can take a jump scare like it's nothing... I can get through those 'psycological horror' games just fine. I'm NOT easily scared... but this? ... I've read creepypastas... especially game creepypastas... BUT THIS?! The wind blew my door open a crack and I had to convince myself FIVE TIMES that it was just the wind. ... Holy shit do I love this...
*Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and the geniuses that create for selfishness are monsters in disguise.* *This is the true exemplification of pure evil and malevolence.* *This is Fawful's true inner imaginative death.* *All that get in his way will be stopped in all ways.* *This is the Pure Destructive power of a character that could be underestimated.* *Never.* *Underestimate Fawful.* *If you do,* *There's going to be a very small chance of your survival.* *So watch your back.*
I still have memories of this creepypasta encraved onto my skull the time I read it last year. Congrats, man! It takes some true dedication to write something as spooky (in the good way) as this.
Not to waste your time, but I also had a dream when I was little. I was at least 7 or 8, around that age. Anyways, when I lived in Georgia, we figured the house we lived in was haunted, because whenever I went to bed, I was mysteriously rocked to sleep. My bed would move, but for some reason, I really didn't mind it. But that was pretty common. It was around the same age in the same house that I would have a strange, haunting dream. It would start out with me waking up and wanting to go to my parent's room to sleep with them, as what any other child would do. So I remember walking slowly towards the room from my bedroom hallway with my duck plush in my hand. then suddenly, in the living room, halfway there, I would start to slow down, as if I was pushed. Then I couldn't move, maybe frozen of fear. Then I felt like I was being pushed down very forcefully, I was trying to resist with all I could, but I lost. I fell to the ground still being pushed down to the floor. Then I screamed as loud as I could for help, but I I got quieter, and quieter, then I couldn't hear anything. Fallen in silence, nobody came to help. As for my final seconds of the dream I suffered a loss of my eyesight. Then I woke up. I was breathing really hard as I jerked up from my bed, then I ran to my light switch realizing that it was just that same dream again. I was slowly regaining sight and my hearing, and I felt my pain go away. So today I am 13 and I haven't had the dream since, and I am still unclear of what it was. I don't know if it was a hallucination, or a dream...But at least I am still alive today. 😌👍
I'm honestly glad that this creepypasta finally got the attention that it deserved after all these years. After watching ZertyTV's video on the lost rom hack based off this nightmare, it makes me wish that more creepypastas were like this. Not every creepypasta has to have a jumpscare people... It's hard to see any good creepypastas nowadays. I wonder what kind of stuff would've been shown if it was any other Mario & Luigi game. Imagine instead of Bowser's Inside Story, it was something like Partner's in Time or Dream Team?
That description. "A few of my greatest fears are permanent isolation... And going insane." I don't think I've ever related to something more than this.
Is this the exact dream that you had? Like word for word? If so, that is so scary! I've never had such a vivid, long, and terrifying dream! I feel so sorry for you, but that is such an interesting story! Great job with the narration by the way.
First time writing a Creepypasta and is still better than all of the "lost episode" or "hacked game" shit pastas. I may be over exaggerating here, but this is honestly one of my favorite creepypastas. Well done, Mr. Minion.
This is one of the most disturbing nightmare I have ever heard even more spooky than squidwards suicide PS fawfuls minion are you going to review splatoon
Man, I really thought this was a retelling of something that actually happened. I'm not even cringing, it's just adorable that I was legitimately worried for your well-being.
We don't know who the first viewer was. Life cannot go on until someone steps up and takes responsibility for this. This sounds spoooopy. I'm watching in broad daylight and I'm still scared >_
Bro this was a DREAM? WTF Man U need some therapist or something because THAT is one of the best ideas for a creepypasta, one question though….. What kind of physical trauma have you been through to dream this shit
*gulp* I remember reading this back then in the middle of the night and being genuinely scared. To me the worst thing in nightmares is hearing sounds...and the sounds you describe...o_O; All the nope in the world.
Me: oh a creepypasta. Alright. Let’s see how creepy it is. *sees box art for a_one* Me: *BYE* FAVORITE GAME EVER RUINED Also me: alright I’m back Me; 10 minutes in: YOU DREAMT THIS?! *TWICE?!?!*
So, this happened in a nightmare that you fell asleep for 14 hours during it (If you couldn't wake up, then technically it's a night terror). So, if that is all correct, then f__k that s__t I'm out.
Wow...Jesus christ this is horrifying.How does this not have more fans?This is definitely better then something like say,the sonic.exe creepypasta.This...is...wow.
You, know... Looking back, I'm surprised Logan never referenced SM64, or Specifically... L is real 2401; Granted, he avoids cliches, but L is Real tends to be more of a "Legend" rather than a Ghost Story...
When I read this on deviant art, I got a head ache when I thought about it. I thought I've seen the last of this, but I guess not. I'm almost certain that this pasta, out ranks that other $#@! pasta sonic.exe.
DUDE, THIS HAPPEND TO ME TOO! I HAD A NIGHTMARE WITH CREEPY SOUNDS, AND WHEN I GOT HOME, I WROTE A CREEPYPASTA! I say we can be fell same thing. You like Most the things as i do, and dislike the same things, and now this! HOLY S**T!!! We have so much incomen.
A creepypasta based of an actual nightmare rather then a random idea. I can get behind this.
Maybe I should make a creepypasta based off one of my worst nightmares.
Mattack The Gengar I had a Pikmin nightmare once
I can't belive how it must have felt while in that dream. Its bad enough that we heard this, imagion how it must have felt or feel like sleeping with this.
This has just about everything that could make a nightmare: A total lack of understanding of events, complete isolation, said events all having really dark anomalies, 14 hours of perception, and you even had it on the same day for two years.
My only thought is, "You DREAMED this?!"
Ian Oliver this was my thoughts too! Like, this was all a freaking NIGHTMARE? What?!
Yeah, holy shit!
I have had nightmares like this with wakfu that is even a real game or cartoon but it was like jack the samurai based if that was the cartoon name
Just when I had managed to forget that story I read on your Deviantart page... I HAVE FEARNESS !
This is a really great story so far, despite the few cliches (all alone, something preventing you from turning off the system). But the fact that you had a dream that is better and more well-written than most creepy pastas is pretty awesome.
Pikmin From Nintendo I didn't really "write" it, per se...more like felt it.
***** dont you mean "more _ike felt it."?
***** It's very interesting how you dreamt all of this, and had the exact same dream on the same day. Freaky o_o
Wait, THIS IS REAL?! THIS CAN'T BE!!! Well, it could. It's a dream, after all.
+Fawfuls Minion what all goes on ur head seriously
Damn, you weren't kidding when you were saying you could make better horror material than all of the horror genre. Possibly best Mario creepy pasta I've heard ever. keep up the good work, chief chortles.
"someone you care about passed through a meat grinder"
That ALONE stopped me from sleeping for a week
Don’t you mean “That A_ONE stopped me from s_eeping for a week”?😂😂😂😂
Revisiting this for Halloween, good stuff , almost 10 years old.
back here after watching that video
Fawful this is your origin story not a nightmare
It's just a dream/nightmare bro
@@prettypink490
It's a bird! It's a plane! It's the joke flying over your head!
I'm not easily scared. Seriously, I can take a jump scare like it's nothing... I can get through those 'psycological horror' games just fine. I'm NOT easily scared... but this? ... I've read creepypastas... especially game creepypastas... BUT THIS?! The wind blew my door open a crack and I had to convince myself FIVE TIMES that it was just the wind. ... Holy shit do I love this...
I'm never turning on my dsi again
You gained: *trauma!*
*Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and the geniuses that create for selfishness are monsters in disguise.*
*This is the true exemplification of pure evil and malevolence.*
*This is Fawful's true inner imaginative death.*
*All that get in his way will be stopped in all ways.*
*This is the Pure Destructive power of a character that could be underestimated.*
*Never.*
*Underestimate Fawful.*
*If you do,*
*There's going to be a very small chance of your survival.*
*So watch your back.*
Ner0mancer that's deep
Tony the electric ninja I was going to say that XD
wait where is the quote from?
I’m going to go now
This pasta is so descriptive and had me the entire time. The theme of all "L"s and green fading away only makes it better.
This was so good, I'm back for another listen.
I still have memories of this creepypasta encraved onto my skull the time I read it last year. Congrats, man! It takes some true dedication to write something as spooky (in the good way) as this.
This was based on an ACTUAL nightmare that REALLY happened? Holy shit. That makes this Creepypasta far different and all the more creepy.
This is truly terrifying because it attacks the areas in which you feel you’d be most safe. It still gives me chills to this day.
welcome to the comment section. it's safer here.
eheheheheheheh or is it?
leon2550 no it isn't. NOWHERE IS SAFE
MUhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Karel Hnědkovský I need to leave now before I'm spooked to death
TOO LATE!!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH!!!
Not to waste your time, but I also had a dream when I was little. I was at least 7 or 8, around that age. Anyways, when I lived in Georgia, we figured the house we lived in was haunted, because whenever I went to bed, I was mysteriously rocked to sleep. My bed would move, but for some reason, I really didn't mind it. But that was pretty common. It was around the same age in the same house that I would have a strange, haunting dream. It would start out with me waking up and wanting to go to my parent's room to sleep with them, as what any other child would do. So I remember walking slowly towards the room from my bedroom hallway with my duck plush in my hand. then suddenly, in the living room, halfway there, I would start to slow down, as if I was pushed. Then I couldn't move, maybe frozen of fear. Then I felt like I was being pushed down very forcefully, I was trying to resist with all I could, but I lost. I fell to the ground still being pushed down to the floor. Then I screamed as loud as I could for help, but I I got quieter, and quieter, then I couldn't hear anything. Fallen in silence, nobody came to help. As for my final seconds of the dream I suffered a loss of my eyesight. Then I woke up. I was breathing really hard as I jerked up from my bed, then I ran to my light switch realizing that it was just that same dream again. I was slowly regaining sight and my hearing, and I felt my pain go away. So today I am 13 and I haven't had the dream since, and I am still unclear of what it was. I don't know if it was a hallucination, or a dream...But at least I am still alive today. 😌👍
Ajon2121 um... wow
I also live in Georgia and was born here no I am no black nor do I have a southern drawl
Holy smokes, that’s sounded terrifying!
I'm honestly glad that this creepypasta finally got the attention that it deserved after all these years. After watching ZertyTV's video on the lost rom hack based off this nightmare, it makes me wish that more creepypastas were like this. Not every creepypasta has to have a jumpscare people... It's hard to see any good creepypastas nowadays. I wonder what kind of stuff would've been shown if it was any other Mario & Luigi game. Imagine instead of Bowser's Inside Story, it was something like Partner's in Time or Dream Team?
Man, Mario and Luigi bowser's inside story is special because it was the very first Mario game I ever played
Just saw the original adaption of this uploaded by ZertyTV. Also it’s good to be back to your channel since 2017 for me 😊
One of the few creepypastas that keeps me coming back every time. Maybe because it's one of the most genuine I've heard or read.
7 years later and I still think about this from time to time.
See? This is what happens when you get involved with Darkrai (Not enough Lunar Wings).
A_one, on a Friday night?
That description.
"A few of my greatest fears are permanent isolation... And going insane."
I don't think I've ever related to something more than this.
Is this the exact dream that you had? Like word for word? If so, that is so scary! I've never had such a vivid, long, and terrifying dream! I feel so sorry for you, but that is such an interesting story! Great job with the narration by the way.
First time writing a Creepypasta and is still better than all of the "lost episode" or "hacked game" shit pastas. I may be over exaggerating here, but this is honestly one of my favorite creepypastas. Well done, Mr. Minion.
Jesus christ, that's one HELL of a nightmare if you were awake for FOURTEEN HOURS
Darkai is clearly getting revenge on you for accusing him for murder.
The scariest thing;
o_0 naked logan
This creepypasta is what made me truly love your channel. You do great with horror
I remember reading this when you first had the nightmare. I was less scared and more intrigued...
I heard a child laughing as I watched this...
Wait....you too.... 0_0
It's ghost fawful
IsaiahPotato I say ambient noise just for the extra spook.
I didn't mind when i heard it because it was just the audio on the video
D
A Bird Hit The Window After I Watched
This was a very unique creepypasta in that it got scarier when you weren’t listening to it, only thinking of it.
Wow, I can't remember my worst nightmare with anywhere near this clarity.
I've heard that music at the beginning used in another video of yours, does anyone know what it is? It's incredibly creepy and I need to know
For a gaming creepypasta, this is EXTREMELY good, I mean, it's very descriptive, 11/10
THE L'S ARE GONE BECAUSE YOU'RE HOLDING THEM
Alec Miller Hahaha no thanks :)
Stop.
More like hogging them
This is one of the most disturbing nightmare I have ever heard even more spooky than squidwards suicide PS fawfuls minion are you going to review splatoon
are there jumscares? in any of the 3 parts?
knobbelboy no
Usually Creepy pastas don't freak me out but I think this will keep me up all night. 😦
I distinctly remember a few years ago saying "i'm not writing a creepypasta here."
I read this when you originally wrote it. Shook me up a little bit back then...still doing it now.
I want to
A) Animate this.
B) Create more stories based on my and other nightmares.
I remember way back when you told this the first time and I read it. Its still pretty creepy.
wow, from someone who saw the text when it was released, this is gonna be GOOD in the next 2 parts!
I remember reading this... I got the shivers.
I know how much you love M&L BIS
Why does this comment scare me?
Man, I really thought this was a retelling of something that actually happened. I'm not even cringing, it's just adorable that I was legitimately worried for your well-being.
This geniunely unsettled me, more than ALL of Sonic.EXE stories actually
13:38 ok dude you're starting to scare me
Im pretty sure this is a real story.
Only RNG this was an actual dream
It’s not
Bruh
We don't know who the first viewer was. Life cannot go on until someone steps up and takes responsibility for this.
This sounds spoooopy. I'm watching in broad daylight and I'm still scared >_
I challenge you to watch this at 3am with no lights on
Also at 13:00 "I thought of turning off my dis but I couldn't silence Luigi"
ME if I was in the situation: "FUCK THAT SHIT! POWER BUTTON!"
SamTEG Woodruff are you a mew or a pikachu
I would've SMASHED my dsi, then I would play it in my 3DS.
Wylie Hinton both
Wylie Hinton why cant we have both?
but if i had to decide mew...
this creepypasta is absolute FAWFUL
+vecko916 absolutely*
vecko916 it's nice to see someone who has the same liking of puns as me. Me and you are going to get along very well
I know that this is a recount of a dream, but DAMN it is off the freakin' wall!
Not that it's a bad thing.
Bro this was a DREAM? WTF Man U need some therapist or something because THAT is one of the best ideas for a creepypasta, one question though…..
What kind of physical trauma have you been through to dream this shit
how you speck makes it a spooky story
I have not seen this in over a year, yet I still remember all the scenery in my head...
I remembered the first time I read this. I was very terrifying. I _ooked on in horror as everything unfo_ded. This was rea__y insane man
*gulp* I remember reading this back then in the middle of the night and being genuinely scared. To me the worst thing in nightmares is hearing sounds...and the sounds you describe...o_O; All the nope in the world.
The story starts so cozy! I like it!
7:25 Nope! Nope! Nevered have had so much nope in my life!
It seems that your favorite Mario character is also your worst nightmare sort of.
Wow, this *Dream* is better than any *Creepypasta* i've heard, Nightmares are terrifying bro.
This is what you get when you play mario and luigi rpgs after watching horror movies or watching creepypastas. And no fawful. Im keeping lights on.
hurray! hes got his own creepypasta
That's pretty scary. Aare you alright, man?
Well. Ignoring the superb reading. You're also apparently an excellent writer.
I HAVE CHORTLES! Now is when I say farewell to the green fink-rat forever!
Me: oh a creepypasta. Alright. Let’s see how creepy it is.
*sees box art for a_one*
Me: *BYE* FAVORITE GAME EVER RUINED
Also me: alright I’m back
Me; 10 minutes in: YOU DREAMT THIS?! *TWICE?!?!*
So, this happened in a nightmare that you fell asleep for 14 hours during it (If you couldn't wake up, then technically it's a night terror). So, if that is all correct, then f__k that s__t I'm out.
your mind is telling you,this is what would happen if FAWFUL had his way,and if he was successful.
Hehe.. You played through 20 hours of the game on your birthday.. I bet you solved all of Kuzzle's puzzles and found the beans in all of the areas...
Welcome to the under 301 club, how tough are ya?
Yeah! A creepypasta that actually makes uncomfortable! Thanks! And wow, I see why that's your worst nightmare!
Like Creepypastas? Then look at this masterpiece.
CONGRATS YOU JUST MADE ME 50% MORE INSANE
I HOPE UR HAPPY!!!
I watched this on broad daylight but daaaaaaaaaamn
damn, not only did you dream this, you remembered it to this much detail?
(yes I am aware how late I am)
Is it weird that I actually just recently read this on your DeviantArt page? XD
Pretty scary though. I've had similar things happen to me. Not quite as intense though. My sympathy man.
I heard a Fawful laugh when the luigi scream stopped.
The creepypasta it self isn't very scary but when the voice acting is put with this, holy crap. O.o
Wow. Usually ScaryNoodles are written with 90% jumpscares. But, this, this is an entire new level of horror
How do you write a jumpscare?
Cyber Kirby If you like this I'd recommend that you read BEN DROWNED, Majora's Mask. It's similar.
Typhon Destroyer That is kinda badly written, the only good parts is the video, which is very easy to do.
Typhon Destroyer Already read that one.
I agree. Mewtwo over here is also scared. We are screwed
Off to a good start. Some cliches here and there, but not enough to completely throw someone off.
Wow...Jesus christ this is horrifying.How does this not have more fans?This is definitely better then something like say,the sonic.exe creepypasta.This...is...wow.
WARNING: you might want to bring a change of pants before you watch this (your gonna need it)
BoomerangMiaro 777 and underwear
Just...Oh my god! you actually saw this in you SLEEP!?
I watched on mobile and when I shaked the handheld (not the 3ds an iPad) the darkness around Mario moved
Ok this is got to be a nightmare also the music was scary at the start.
So this was based off a nightmare!! I KNEW IT!! I ALSO HAD A NIGHTMARE THAT TOOK PLACE IN THIS GAME!!
I GUESS FAWFEL TOOK THE L
Good one
what's the music in the background?
The Hive, by Kevin Macleod
So close 100,000 subscribers!
You, know... Looking back, I'm surprised Logan never referenced SM64, or Specifically... L is real 2401; Granted, he avoids cliches, but L is Real tends to be more of a "Legend" rather than a Ghost Story...
When I read this on deviant art, I got a head ache when I thought about it.
I thought I've seen the last of this, but I guess not.
I'm almost certain that this pasta, out ranks that other $#@! pasta sonic.exe.
Rude.
true, but rude nonetheless
DUDE, THIS HAPPEND TO ME TOO! I HAD A NIGHTMARE WITH CREEPY SOUNDS, AND WHEN I GOT HOME, I WROTE A CREEPYPASTA! I say we can be fell same thing. You like Most the things as i do, and dislike the same things, and now this! HOLY S**T!!! We have so much incomen.
3:50 Wait, didn't you say you were born in '92 way back when? M&L: BIS came out in '09.
How do you remember this, what happened to Luigi?
I would probably do the same, if I had a dream like this..