Letting pups be my mate's responsibility to see if I can unlock new coats | WolfQuest AE

Hii please read me!
Thanks for watching this video! I've never made a WolfQuest video before and I just wanted to see if editing one would be fun. If I were to keep making videos, what suggestions do you have for me?
Does the text show up too long/short? Is the video sped up too much? Too loud? Too long? Not enough clips of the pups? Whatever it is just let me know :) I want to improve for whenever I do another WolfQuest video again
About me:
I started playing WolfQuest in 2014-15 when I was like 10 or 11, and it became my favorite game of all time. My sister and I have always been huge animal lovers obviously so we adoooored WolfQuest. Almost 10 years later I'm 19yo and now I'm playing Anniversary Edition! :) it feels so nostalgic and sweet to be playing this adorable wolf game again.
I'll definitely be playing more when Saga comes out too, I'm so pumped for it.