I Rode the Tram For One Week Straight - There Are Horrifying Places Hidden Beneath the City
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 6 พ.ย. 2023
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Written by Rene Rehn (u/rehnwriter on reddit)
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😂😂! I wish my mother was still alive to hear this. I used to scare the crap out of her (not on purpose) because I would makeup stories about people around us which was fine. She got scared when I would tell extremely detailed accounts. I'd get so into it I would use specific details that fit perfectly in sync. She was able to figure out i was creating an entire community with everything falling into place. So I got sent to a child shrink. The shrink said i was fine and extremely creative. She guessed I'd be a writer...maybe. In 8th grade I had creative writing. I was called to the office and was confronted by the guidance counselor (who loved smashing children's dreams), both principals, my "teacher" and an old nasty guy. A few days b4 we had to write a detailed fictional story based on historical events including dialogue. I picked the Korean war. I thought it was the best thing I had ever written! Well they slammed it down and tried to look intimidating (you're not fooling anyone) then they pulled out bullet points of what despicable (to them) things that were to be removed from my story. Huh...that was the first time someone tried to shut me down. I refused and read (outloud) the instructions for the story. I asked why I'm in trouble for doing EXACTLY what she asked me to do? They had no rebuttal just a threat. If i didn't rewrite the story I'd get a zero. I said "Can I call my mother? I get nervous when threatened. With those words I was allowed to leave and the next week I received a B. We all read each other's stories b4 handing them in. The most boring untalented snob got an A. 😂 when the class saw that they were demanding I get an A+. It friggin worked! A bunch of freshmen formed a 😂...a friggin union and overturned the teacher because she didn't want to deal with me. I made it through without a scratch but my passion was gone. Sorry so long I just wanted the whole story including the 8th grade "union". That story and situation was a unicorn moment.
I hate dream squashers! That's what school seems to do best. I hope that you're still writing, and if you're not, that you'll start again!!
I was homeschooled till grade nine in Canada (age 15ish?), I one of my major gaps was formatting especially for essays. 😭 I managed to make honour roll so I was doing pretty well all things considered! Until my grade ten English teacher outright refused to read an essay draft because it wasn't formatted exactly how he expected, then proceeded to loudly scold me for minutes in front of the class.... In the end I fixed the format (cried a bit) and he marked it B+ 🙃 haven't been able to enjoy writing since
Care to share the story? Sounds damn interesting
Wow, some teachers really shouldn't be teachers if they crush kids creativity and dreams like that. I had a similar story in high school with a science project I handed in where it was a cartoon comic book featuring all the teachers as charicatures - even though it fit the guidelines of the assignment we got in trouble and had to redo it. My art teacher thought it was hilarious though, and thought we should have gotten an A+. The teachers were just annoyed because we made them look a little silly but it was all in good fun. Some people have no sense of humor.
@@JordanGrupe I graduated in '96 and it was a public school...Jamesburg NJ. We only had an art teacher that would "feed" and encourage us. Great singer in a ...Dowap group? Yeah I know...my spelling. The majority of our teachers were,well, assh**es. They were miserable and took it out on us. Then I grew up and everyone was still miserable with life! They even tried to crush my future career choice (AOL days) in computers. I can still hear her saying "according to your grades you can't enter that field."
I was bright red with anger and said watch me moron. Then left. 2yrs later I came by the school and she was still there. She invited me in and the anger was palpable the second I crossed her threshold. I slammed a stack of papers down and said "What was that about me not getting a computer job".
I'm Network Administrator and security at Ft. Monmouth and you are still here. I left when I saw tears coming. She thought I was coming to visit not to be mentally shredded. Don't mess with kids...they remember everything. I guess she didn't get that memo. Someone above wants me to turn it into a story (change stuff making it scary. I've been terrified to even try since the fiasco like 30yrs ago. I'll try but I can't get anywhere near the awesome Hollows End writing. I'm not just being nice. They are GOOD! If I try I only want Jordan to read it and give me notes first. It may take awhile.
Slowly creeping up my list as one of my favorite narrators. Thank you!
Thank you!!
Love the “drinking first thing in the morning.” I call that “hair of the dog” and go to a Bloody Mary. It does work, though, you’re worthless all day, but it does work. Lol
Or just don't drink that poison to begin with
You're only worthless all day if you let yourself be a man's good time isn't an issue until he lets it become one.
Thank you to the author, Rene Rehn. And a huge thanks to you, Jordan. Your narrations are always spot on. ⚘️🙋♀️
Rene is a great author, and Jordan always nails his narrations!
@@DocBree13It was a good story. I can’t even think of a single thing to criticize. I’m going to look for more by this author.
Isn't Jordan AI narration, I heard?
First 5 minutes of the story has me hooked
Thanks again Jordan for bringing all of these awesome stories. I absolutely love your narration style. You have the way of putting me right in the moment of the story. What I like to call Imagination theater. You are very much appreciated. 👍🏻
Thanks again, Keith! I appreciate that
Listening on the drive home from work. thanks ❤
Damn. That was quite a ride.
Brilliant story love it
👍🏻👍🏻enormously brilliant, I was totally captivated by this story. Thanks Jordan.😇💖
If a tram did such things, the NYC subway would be worse.
The prime rule of city transport is never stare and or look at other riders too long. Use side eye instead.
Kudos to the narrator and author 🎉
Or wear patchouli
@@TheJemstar28 That would definitely get you some more room and maybe a new friend.
I'm very convinced that this isn't a work of fiction, but a very real account of a commuter journey on a Scotrail train in Glasgow, Scotland.
I came here to say the same thing, and can personally testify that Glasgow has its fair share of "Unlocations".
Love these types of stories.
Woo hoo! This is gonna make my work day great!
SOOOO NOT looking forward to the years when I can't drive myself anymore......!!!
Damn expensive window! 1000€s! 😮Great story, Thank You!
Love you!!!
This is now officially my favourite story. Thank-you. I look forward everyday to the next story. I suffer a little from depression and this makes all the difference and makes me smile.
Thanks for the cool story Mr, GRUPE creepy pasta guy
Yea!!! Couldn’t wait to get home to listen to your story Jordan 👍👍👏👏🍷🍷
Hope you enjoyed it!
Hot fucken DAMN ,the build-up was just PERFECT, your voice did it justice ,this was a glorious story .the transmissional factor of it was sooo cool man, you did a damn good job
I had to back it up to the beginning so I’m behind.
I was late for the whole thing, I'm listening to it now, it's pretty good so far
Aye.. me too.
Can’t wait!
Phenomenal production!
This would be a Cool creepy movie i think
I love how everyone who reacts to this guy telling them that he's sitting on the train for a week straight just call him an idiot without fail, regardless of knowing about the creepy stuff or not. Cause it's just so dull of a challenge that it's stupid
perfect for a desperate youtuber to do though with no payoff XD
Excellent tale.
Every train I've been on for transportation. It has power outlets, toilet, a snack bar...
Love your narration! I update my "sleep mix" every night to include different creepypasta stories and narrators. You are on the top! This story, for some reason, made for some very messed up dreams. Love to be scared, i guess. Whats the term?? Glutton for punishment? Keep these stories coming!! ❤
Thanks so much!
As the techno-carnival rave sounds pumped and thumped, grabbing hold of our hearts rhythmic beat, club RED used every lure, tempting us to join, freely, willingly, longingly.
I really enjoyed this 🙂 Many thanks to the writer and to you Jordan for reading it for us
I live in a pretty large city but not big enough for a tram. Gotta say it sounds better than Milwaukee County Transit system which consists of a fleet of crappy busses with crabby drivers who talk to you like your an inmate, not a passenger. And I've tried the drinking thing a few times. I was thrown off the bus in the middle of the hood and had to walk an hour to home since it was the final bus of the evening. Good times.
1:04:31 A freakin beak?!?!! And claws?! AAAAAAHHHH 🫨
Fantastic!!! Thank you so much
One of my favourite stories.
Really cool story and awesome narration!
Glad you enjoyed it!
I can't imagine being on a tram for days. Every time you doze off,DING DING. DING DING DING DING!!! DING!!!! D--I--N--G!!!!!!!
Wonderful original story and grat narration.
How were his ham and cheese sandwiches sopposed to last the entire week with out going bad, just curious, i don't think I missed anything
By day 4 I think his food poisoning is so bad he is hallucinating all this😂
@@jessikamallinger7455 excellent observation jess, could you imagine how gross, no one cought that during editing, I could could see peanut butter, and cans of tuna, but how do you keep the bread from turning green or hard as a hockey puck, or maybe we analyze things to much, anyway thank you for the interesting reply, and have a nice night
@@jessikamallinger7455 and imagine how sore his butt would be from sitting down so long, and drinking beer is a horrible idea, think about how badly he would have urinate, it would be a self inflicted hell, he would pee his pants or pee in the isle
@@jessikamallinger7455beyond that it's a pretty cool story and I really like Jordan GRUPE horror
@@williestreiff9314A jar of peanut butter and packs of crackers would work much better. I used to keep those in my desk at work for times I didn't have time to go to lunch
He should have been suspicious that any girl was interested in him with how bad he would smell by day 5.
😂 true!
Iiiii...have some innteresting news. Some people are utter freaks, trust me.
He's just pheromone maxing... apparently it worked.
That poor fool… purgatory… hell… the great nothing… what’s next I wonder?
A succubus…? Damn… they’re determined…
Jokes on you! I actually added this to my bucket list at the bottom of the things that I did and will do.
Ok , WORD WAS ,, SKARDNES, BEING SCARED OR AS WE SAY DOWN SOUTH SKART, LOL
At least it was only a Hullucination.
I can imagine a train enthusiast might spend a week riding trains but riding the same one for a week sounds boring.
Rider should have tried to record the weird stuff he saw
Anyone else found themselves in un-locations?
Man my account gave me a lot of push to watch this hope it's good thank you TH-cam lol......
Hope you like it!
For some reason, the narrator reminds me of Dax Shepard
12 beers and no bathroom run?🤔
A a goddamn flesh spider burna teams will don't be sent to burn you
plot twist it was just a salvia trip
Help!!!!! What is a tram??? Sounds like something from the Evil planet Florida ....
Subway, Transit, public train.
Ty
Train in UK
Plot twist it's a true story 😊
1:03:59 do you have seen the true form the angler fish is now I would not advise you to keep on this course ride to the final ride to the final day and when you are done never fall for the angler fishes this time you were lucky
Is this story Grimdark?
Nice story good read❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY
GOOD STORY NICE READ❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY
❤️👋
I look forward to hearing these stories everyday and can't wait for a new One especially a hollows end one . Keep them coming.thank you .
1:03:28 you have fallen for the angler fish is the Lord now you are most likely dead ambush predators are so complicated now you got to run send your father succubus
WTF is a tram?
Train ride into hell
I am half way the story and the only certanty I have is that this dude has is dumb and has bad friends lol. Nice story tho.
As fun as this story was-there were no stakes, consequences, or threat.
I disagree. The consequences of him staying a minute longer would have been to be attacked by those ghosts or demons, then who knows what fate would have awaited him. The threat was the presence of malevolent supernatural beings who had the inclination and ability to do him great harm. The stakes were what they could do to his body and soul.
@@DocBree13 it took the entire drag to get there though. Most stories sprinkle in more threat or conflict throughout the journey whereas he was constantly observing these things. For me many of those sights were interesting but were passed by quickly. Then at the end it was almost at least very-slightly suggesting that he may have just been a piece of shit living out some delusion. His behavior started to reflect that he was an alcoholic bum on a train, but only slightly. Maybe he should’ve been permanently scarred or marked in some way to stick that landing, but that’s just me.