John Carpenter's The Thing's rules of telling whose the monster doesn't really apply here. Especially since they may bleed like us and aren't a single cell organism that absorbs it'ts host. But trusting the dog was probably the one rule that they should have not broken. How can they know Steve wasn't one of them too?
Not transphobic if your a straight man who is kissing a person you think was a born a genetic woman. And still remains one in name and Identity. Can anything just not be something "Offensive" or political anymore. Beats the hell out of what Hollywood puts out now.
As a New Englander this one chilled me to the core, and that's saying something since it's like 12°F right now. This was like a twisted version of Twilight Zone's gremling on the wing, Invasion of the body snatchers, Steven King's IT, and John Carpenter's THE THING combined With no one rule for surviving any of them applying here except fore 3... 1) Trust no one to be who you think they are 2) Only trust any info you knew about anyone told before everything started. All info after is suspected to be tainted afterwards. 3) And for no reasone do you rule out dogs to be one of them. Remember the clammering of clawed feet behind Andrew as he ran back to the cafeteria the first time, or the tapping at's door when the creature was trying to get them back out in the halls? As though it became a dog right?... ...Um Amdrew. Do you think it's wise to let the dog get so close to your groin like tha- "AAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!" ...Nevermind.
You didn't mansion who goes there by Earl Campbell Jr he rote the story in 1928 i don't know how Howard Hawks based his 1951 the thing from another world because it was more of a vampire and the original creature in the story was a shapeshifter could look like anybody
@@buckylamb8674 I didn't mention those because I'm not familiar with either of them. So I can't exactly forget something I don't know anything about. But their are many different stories about creatures that mimic people or things in both fiction, folk lore, and historical mythos . So there's bound to have overlapping simularities between tales at one place or another.
There's a reason Russia has been so interested on that area and why they built a nuclear ice breaker that was the biggest and could go further into the ice than any other ship. The arktika is the largest and most powerful ice breaker ship in the world!
Found a statue in the snow. “Don’t bring that back to the base.” Brings to base. “Don’t take that inside!” Brings frozen statue inside. “Don’t let that thaw out!” Statue is now thawing…. Oh Lordy, y’all done broke all the rules. Protect the dogos, please! It’s not their fault you are all idiots.
Okay guys. I just saw this isn't Jordan's story. And while I hate spoilers as much as anyone, one of my dogs is named Steve....i can't handle dog death stories anyway so...have a ❤️. I'm 3/4 thru....should I just stop here? Plz & thx. I'll remove the comment immediately upon reply.
My brother worked on the Alaskan pipeline and he told me that started sending teams up to work 2 weeks on snd 2 weeks before ppl began to hallucinate- he said all you see for miles in any direction is white snow and ice - so yeah you do see things much like being in the desert- frozen statues or frozen ppl ??
I'm 59 years old not phone savvy never knew this existed. Been listening to spook stories or about 8 months now. But you are definitely my favorite narrator!! Love the hollows end stories!! Weird and funny kind of like me!
I enjoyed the professional monster Hunter series very much. So much that the catch phrase caught in my head. F monsters in fill the blanks. As an example I put a couple potatoes in the oven to have with dinner. Me being me are promptly forgot about. By the time I remember and got him out of the oven they were unedible. Without even I said fuck monsters and and fuck baked potatos LMAO!! I hope you laugh as hard as I did after I realized I said it
I thought they were gonna use the dog Steve to sniff out who was real and who was fake. I wonder when the old man got snatched. Had to before the power when out.
Scary, excellent writing.....and a wonderful job narrating this story.. and although it's (the creature in the arctic or antarctic camp) been done before several times, I never heard it done as a podcast format.. I'm not sure what you call these story creepypasta tales told by one person, as opposed to, say, radio plays, with actors doing dialog. Is there an actual word for this type of format?
As a fan of fantasy, sci-fi, and horror fiction for over 50 years, let me give a piece of advice. It's not a good idea to start a narrative with an arrogant, whiny, condescending monologue.
Ok so just stumbled onto your channel and am enjoying it, are the stories someone elses or yours or are they just fictional stories you wrote? Either way i enjoy them while at work with my earbuds!!
A bit of both! This one was written by another author named Lucas Whorley but I wrote a bunch of them myself as well. The Hollow's End stories are my pride and joy 😊
So, I think that you may be seeing this as too much of a personal thing and less of a logical thing. Think of this like breast cancer. Breast cancer can happen in both men and women and the reason for this is simply because women tend to have more breast tissue comparably and therefore, get breast cancer more than men. There literally is not many other reasons other than that. Genetically, there are conditions that can predispose a female, but again, its due to the breast tissue. This is a logical fact, right? So, applying that same idea, the reason why they use military Vets as sharp shooter assassins isn't because veterans are inherently these terrible evil corrupt people. It's because certain jobs in the military provide far more training and practice in sharp shooting than the average person would ever viably get, without a specific reason. They also have less space available and altogether, just have less resources that are granted to some Jobs. Now, being an assassin isn't specifically because theyre ex military. It's due to human greed. MANY people would become an assassin without any moral issues due to the pay. Everyone has a price. If the price is right, everyone would be willing to do anything. Even killing someone. So, veterans are used stereotypically because they possess a necessary skill that not many other people or professions need.. so, they would logically be the ones who would be asked to do the job. Many assassins aren't veterans. This isn't a personal or moral attack on the military. It's simply logistics.
If you’re referring to Donovan, he acted reasonably, given the situation: being stalked by murderous shape-shifters, and dealing with mentally taxing and disorienting physical environment, on top of that. He didn’t kill anyone he believed to be human, and a soldier is more likely to retaliate against an existential threat with violence because they’ve been trained for that. It was also completely warranted for him to shoot the actual shapeshifters. He wasn’t portrayed as being violent prior to the incursion, and he wasn’t an assassin. Had Jones turned out to be a doppelgänger, all of his actions would have been heroic. I also agree that having flawed characters in a story is part of good writing.
I think characters having flaws is an important aspect of writing, and it often makes characters more three dimensional and interesting. In this case I think it was more the one character having a predisposed dislike for veterans because of a bad life experience where she was hurt by one. Obviously that's not okay, but it does factor into the story later and *spoiler alert* she seems to change her opinion later. The author is just portraying a character who had a bad life experience and was traumatized by it, and then learns to grow and realize that people are all different and she shouldn't judge one vet because of another. In this one there is some aspect of wondering whether the person is really the person they are claiming to be as well, so we don't know for sure which Donovan is real until towards the end.
@@JordanGrupe Thank you for that explaination. As a veteran I have been sterotyped on several occassions. At first I didn't like the portrayal. But as the story progressed it made sense. Now, my only complaint.... What happened to the last two in the helicopter... lol
Absolutely,watch for a hurricane to gain strength after making land fall. Doplar picked up the energy transmission while the gulf washed away. (antenna arrays.) Earthquakes seem dialed in well to. Old tech.
Have these people never watched 1984 the thing.
John Carpenter's The Thing's rules of telling whose the monster doesn't really apply here. Especially since they may bleed like us and aren't a single cell organism that absorbs it'ts host. But trusting the dog was probably the one rule that they should have not broken. How can they know Steve wasn't one of them too?
Semantics, this is too close
Agreed. It's The Thing.
@@ZedMazaus480😊
I loved all of “The Thing” movies. Creepy!
Finkle is Einhorn.
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@@averagejoe455A popular line from the Ace Ventura: Pet Detective movie 1994 with Jim Carrey. 🤮
@@ctrlaltdel138 Ah. The transphobic joke.
@@averagejoe455No not at all. Phobia means an extreme or irrational fear of something.
Not transphobic if your a straight man who is kissing a person you think was a born a genetic woman. And still remains one in name and Identity. Can anything just not be something "Offensive" or political anymore. Beats the hell out of what Hollywood puts out now.
Stories about the Arctic are Brrrrutal! 🥶
Thats why they’re my fave! Ocean stories too!! 🌊
X2 my favs are arctic, ocean & space!
Ya, the real ones. This isnt
I find the use of the f word offensive it is lazy writing by a lazy writer
@@Alex-mh9ye Some people got pushed on the playground but never pushed back, and it shows.
@@Alex-mh9ye I don't give a fuck
It’s so nice that he’s not using an AI program to narrate the story
I concur 🎉 not with the league part 😊
Ai voice gives me gas
I can't stand AI channels. They are mainly AI written too
Sounds great...
I follow the black pyramid in Alaska story..
Reminds me of the Thing; the modern one that is, but it has somewhat of a different slant, I liked it.
As a New Englander this one chilled me to the core, and that's saying something since it's like 12°F right now. This was like a twisted version of Twilight Zone's gremling on the wing, Invasion of the body snatchers, Steven King's IT, and John Carpenter's THE THING combined With no one rule for surviving any of them applying here except fore 3...
1) Trust no one to be who you think they are
2) Only trust any info you knew about anyone told before everything started. All info after is suspected to be tainted afterwards.
3) And for no reasone do you rule out dogs to be one of them.
Remember the clammering of clawed feet behind Andrew as he ran back to the cafeteria the first time, or the tapping at's door when the creature was trying to get them back out in the halls? As though it became a dog right?...
...Um Amdrew. Do you think it's wise to let the dog get so close to your groin like tha-
"AAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!"
...Nevermind.
You didn't mansion who goes there by Earl Campbell Jr he rote the story in 1928 i don't know how Howard Hawks based his 1951 the thing from another world because it was more of a vampire and the original creature in the story was a shapeshifter could look like anybody
@@buckylamb8674 I didn't mention those because I'm not familiar with either of them. So I can't exactly forget something I don't know anything about.
But their are many different stories about creatures that mimic people or things in both fiction, folk lore, and historical mythos . So there's bound to have overlapping simularities between tales at one place or another.
There's a reason Russia has been so interested on that area and why they built a nuclear ice breaker that was the biggest and could go further into the ice than any other ship. The arktika is the largest and most powerful ice breaker ship in the world!
Um yeah oil and rare earth minerals
Found a statue in the snow. “Don’t bring that back to the base.” Brings to base. “Don’t take that inside!” Brings frozen statue inside. “Don’t let that thaw out!” Statue is now thawing…. Oh Lordy, y’all done broke all the rules. Protect the dogos, please! It’s not their fault you are all idiots.
It's my last day off work and I can't wait to hear Jordan 😊
Okay guys. I just saw this isn't Jordan's story. And while I hate spoilers as much as anyone, one of my dogs is named Steve....i can't handle dog death stories anyway so...have a ❤️. I'm 3/4 thru....should I just stop here? Plz & thx. I'll remove the comment immediately upon reply.
No animals get hurt or anything like that, don't worry. I really try my best to avoid those ones
@@JordanGrupe
Is this story real or was it fiction? There are real cryptids out there that can do things like that.
It won’t be long now!!!
I lost my wifi and didn't see your message on chat until now. What were you saying sorry about being wrong about?
@@kimberlyshepherd270
I was thinking the heart in the circle had to do with the super sticker. But it just sends emojis up on the screen at the top.
If they found Frozen statues like in the picture here they are not statues they're frozen Giants😊
My brother worked on the Alaskan pipeline and he told me that started sending teams up to work 2 weeks on snd 2 weeks before ppl began to hallucinate- he said all you see for miles in any direction is white snow and ice - so yeah you do see things much like being in the desert- frozen statues or frozen ppl ??
You can ALWAYS rely on your dog(s)!!Perfect story for today it’s 37^C here atm! 🇦🇺😎✌️
Jordan….How did you know?
Jen Finkle… hhhhmmmm
I'm 59 years old not phone savvy never knew this existed. Been listening to spook stories or about 8 months now. But you are definitely my favorite narrator!! Love the hollows end stories!! Weird and funny kind of like me!
Thank you so much!
@@JordanGrupeyou're so welcome!
I enjoyed the professional monster Hunter series very much. So much that the catch phrase caught in my head. F monsters in fill the blanks. As an example I put a couple potatoes in the oven to have with dinner. Me being me are promptly forgot about. By the time I remember and got him out of the oven they were unedible. Without even I said fuck monsters and and fuck baked potatos LMAO!! I hope you laugh as hard as I did after I realized I said it
I swear I thought I heard Mike Rowe narrating this story. Sounds so much like him.
There's a hint of Beavis n butt head now n then to! Lol
@@rickswartzentruber3616 😆 🤣 😂 😹
Reminds me of The Thing.
this is amazingly hilarious.
50:11 sleaze stacks for the evil lizard people. 😅
This story is even more fun if you think of it as an episode of Scooby Doo. Zoinks! Jinkies! Ruh-roe!
👍👍eminently first-rate, I was captivated by this story of the Antarctic.😅 I got a gun. It was thrilling and funny. I loved it. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖
Jordan. Today, for me, you were the nameless empress holding out cupped hands to my inner Sebastian 💫 Thank you❣️🙏🏻❣️. ✨🐉✨
Nah man that was me, i built the statues. Sorry i forgot to tell yah
Spiritual successor of The Thing. Great!
loving the story so far but at 50 mins when they call the creature a ningen, man, those are an antarctic cryptid
I thought they were gonna use the dog Steve to sniff out who was real and who was fake. I wonder when the old man got snatched. Had to before the power when out.
Jordan kicks ass!!!!! Another awesome story...
Love love love this story....❤❤❤
Something about long stories that take place in the arctic are always good.
Yet another telling of who goes thar by Earl Campbell Jr 1928
Isnt this story in some movie? Sounds familiar but dont remember where.
Not Thing some else newer movie
Great story Jordan, you told it so well. Whoop whoop
I wonder if theres a part 2?!
I knew they bought in the doppelganger. As I always say it's the Idiocy of curiosity
Sheeesh just get to the minion and a doorbell rings- and I jump! It was a commercial!
Wow!Great story! Thank you for another wonderful read.
Scary, excellent writing.....and a wonderful job narrating this story.. and although it's (the creature in the arctic or antarctic camp) been done before several times, I never heard it done as a podcast format.. I'm not sure what you call these story creepypasta tales told by one person, as opposed to, say, radio plays, with actors doing dialog. Is there an actual word for this type of format?
I really liked this story 👍 I listened to it 5 times. Thank you
Another great video bro, thank you for making this shitty work day alot better.
If you're going to travel to the Arctic to do some kind of research then the least I can do is to listen to what you have to say about it
As a fan of fantasy, sci-fi, and horror fiction for over 50 years, let me give a piece of advice.
It's not a good idea to start a narrative with an arrogant, whiny, condescending monologue.
Great narration! Makes the narrator sound like the most laid back dude in the world every time.
Ok so just stumbled onto your channel and am enjoying it, are the stories someone elses or yours or are they just fictional stories you wrote? Either way i enjoy them while at work with my earbuds!!
A bit of both! This one was written by another author named Lucas Whorley but I wrote a bunch of them myself as well. The Hollow's End stories are my pride and joy 😊
😊Great story sand a very good narrator. Thank you 😂
Err they had dogs. They didnt use the dogs senses !??
Life is hard when your stupid.
Good story. Kept my attention not too scary but good tomt like it too scary so much enjoyed this one.
Super Nice story champ 😊😊😊
I see many of them on my street after a fresh snowfall. They're called "snowmen"
33:45 7c is actually fairly warm, like tee shirts would be a bit chilly but not crazy cold.
About 30 mins in I couldn’t help but imagine among us
Nicely done.
Great fiction full stop
Great story, Lucas!
Great sty, had me the whole way,😊😊😊
This was intense. ❤
Maybe one day you’ll read my story..😅
I totally enjoyed that 🙂
Great story 👏👏👏👏
Thanks Jordan!
Thanks to all of your comments that SPOILED it for the rest of us! Ding Dongs
How does a statue freeze ?????😢
If it's not a statue at all but something else
@@JordanGrupe giants ....
Thanks
Ningen is japanese for human. Hmm
Missed this one yesterday. Catching up. Thanks, Jordan! ⚘️🙋♀️
4th time listening got the thing vibe love it buddy greatly appreciated thank you for your hard work 💪
Glad you enjoyed it!
58:57 Land of the lost!
Man please spare us the social justice speech and just tell a compelling story
They just cant seam to help it 🤑😵💫
Yeah, I'm not down with portraying military vets as violent long gun assassins.
So, I think that you may be seeing this as too much of a personal thing and less of a logical thing. Think of this like breast cancer. Breast cancer can happen in both men and women and the reason for this is simply because women tend to have more breast tissue comparably and therefore, get breast cancer more than men. There literally is not many other reasons other than that. Genetically, there are conditions that can predispose a female, but again, its due to the breast tissue. This is a logical fact, right? So, applying that same idea, the reason why they use military Vets as sharp shooter assassins isn't because veterans are inherently these terrible evil corrupt people. It's because certain jobs in the military provide far more training and practice in sharp shooting than the average person would ever viably get, without a specific reason. They also have less space available and altogether, just have less resources that are granted to some Jobs. Now, being an assassin isn't specifically because theyre ex military. It's due to human greed. MANY people would become an assassin without any moral issues due to the pay. Everyone has a price. If the price is right, everyone would be willing to do anything. Even killing someone. So, veterans are used stereotypically because they possess a necessary skill that not many other people or professions need.. so, they would logically be the ones who would be asked to do the job. Many assassins aren't veterans. This isn't a personal or moral attack on the military. It's simply logistics.
If you’re referring to Donovan, he acted reasonably, given the situation: being stalked by murderous shape-shifters, and dealing with mentally taxing and disorienting physical environment, on top of that. He didn’t kill anyone he believed to be human, and a soldier is more likely to retaliate against an existential threat with violence because they’ve been trained for that. It was also completely warranted for him to shoot the actual shapeshifters. He wasn’t portrayed as being violent prior to the incursion, and he wasn’t an assassin. Had Jones turned out to be a doppelgänger, all of his actions would have been heroic.
I also agree that having flawed characters in a story is part of good writing.
I think characters having flaws is an important aspect of writing, and it often makes characters more three dimensional and interesting. In this case I think it was more the one character having a predisposed dislike for veterans because of a bad life experience where she was hurt by one. Obviously that's not okay, but it does factor into the story later and *spoiler alert* she seems to change her opinion later. The author is just portraying a character who had a bad life experience and was traumatized by it, and then learns to grow and realize that people are all different and she shouldn't judge one vet because of another. In this one there is some aspect of wondering whether the person is really the person they are claiming to be as well, so we don't know for sure which Donovan is real until towards the end.
Womp womp toughen up princess
@@JordanGrupe Thank you for that explaination. As a veteran I have been sterotyped on several occassions. At first I didn't like the portrayal. But as the story progressed it made sense.
Now, my only complaint.... What happened to the last two in the helicopter... lol
I’m like a third way through and if the dogs get hurt or god forbid die
I swear to god the authors gonna get sued for mental harm
…. Someone’s getting sued
The dogs aren't harmed
@@JordanGrupe but what about them being left behind! poor babies r gonna starve up there TT
also thanks for replying!
Great story
I liked this
It would be scarier if they were warm
Yeah, nice novel
39:35 I would send the dogs out
That's not w00t w00t w00t moment at all!
Like a glove 😂
Boy , those ice statues are so real like
Awesome Jordan, thanks!
Good story
Is this true
Loved this! Definitely subscribing
Only trust Steve!
WOW!
At least while I’m thrashing about with my insomnia I am well entertained. Thank you. ❤
One fine day I will be able to give some money for Ur fine work.
This sounds like the thing
Einhorn is finkel
Is this real??? I'm going at it incredulously lol
Absolutely,watch for a hurricane to gain strength after making land fall. Doplar picked up the energy transmission while the gulf washed away. (antenna arrays.) Earthquakes seem dialed in well to. Old tech.
Did you see the flying pig it had a police uniform on🐖🐷😉✌
Fink you are really bugging out, splitting up again, risking your life and Andrew's, for a ring????? Smh
I get it.
1.08
Hell haven't you ever seen the pics from 1912? Or close to that.. it's been awhile.. you have no idea... Lol
Tell me it ain't true.
Good stoy
Being a researcher in the Arctic , don't you have a camera, why no photos
🤞🤝💞
Absolutely nothing against the reader but to the writer this story is very derivative.
YOU FOUND NOTHING.
3 minutes was enough of this BS.