Absolutely love this! Also, little fun fact: Wu Zetian was the first and only female Chinese emperor! Her story is absolutely fascinating and could be good inspiration for Piáo Chóng. Xiran Jay Zhao has two videos detailing Wu Zetian’s story :> can’t wait for more videos of your MLB reboot!
Heres my version. Its closer to the movie version in how she acts. Marinette would first be seen cleaning up her room. Mostly moving boxes and cleaning the room. However she ran into a box VIA trip. She would pick up the box and put it on the desk. We get a time skip of just moving boxes and removal of cobwebs. And a cute scene with possums. Marinette would have remember something on discovery channel and move the possums in a small box. While this happens the box glows bright red then normal. As soon as she finished cleaning up. The room doesn't seem to be too interesting other than an art studio mostly drawing outfits and character designs. Marinette was just about to open the box but got called down for dinner. Marinette talked about what she found in her room. She isn't aware she was an orphin that was immediately taken in but her parents would look a bit different from her. As soon as she finished up dinner she went upstairs to open the box. She found a pair of earrings that look like something she enjoys. She went to bed. She then had a dream of a blonde guy who looks different from the modern era. The dream then turns to a nightmare when she saw the guy die right infront of her. She wakes up finding out... she wet the bed. This is chapter 1 "Red jeweled origin"
Your designs look great! As someone with a degree in English Lit, the story format could use some work, but I can tell you're super passionate about it. The most important thing about creating any story is having fun with it! Dialogue is always hard to get a grasp of, so I'm interested in seeing more from you and hearing how your writing skills improve!
the music along with the edgier tone really made this seem really good and Marinette getting overstimulated really shows you know about autism. if you were making a series i would say watch it as an rlsh i can tell you fighting strangers isn't easy.
The origin rewrite is incredible, the drama, the action, oh so beautiful! This is way better than the canon versions, keep it up girl, you are creating a story masterpiece.
I love this way of miraculous ladybug it makes me interested to hear more of your take on miraculous ladybug re telling of the story can't wait to see more! 😁😁😁😁
I love the art and desing but there was one thing that killed me ;;w;; hands, you drew them wrong ;;w;; it looks like she have hands on oposite sides ;;w;; 👉👈 sorry if i hurted you 😭👉👈
Ok rude first of all it was an opinion made Ever known a superhero who doesn’t have that “cliche”? Spider man and Uncle ben Tony Stark and his Dad Captain America and Peggy Wanda and everyone her family Natasha and her life I can go on Next time remember there are reasons for creative ideas sure her dad was amazing but it makes her a better person realizing good things make us better whether we have them or not
@@wishinStars Ok, I guess that was kind of rude of me, but most magical girl protagonists do have two living parents, and Ladybug owes just as much to those anime as to Western superheroes.
@@ethancox9737 I get that, but the way you said it could’ve been a little bit more polite What if you created your own rewrite and someone said something about having no character change at all It would feel like you were unappreciated and that you couldn’t be creative without critique and criticism Just food for thought
Absolutely love this! Also, little fun fact: Wu Zetian was the first and only female Chinese emperor! Her story is absolutely fascinating and could be good inspiration for Piáo Chóng. Xiran Jay Zhao has two videos detailing Wu Zetian’s story :> can’t wait for more videos of your MLB reboot!
Ohhh thank you ☺️ ❤️
This is amazing!
Have you ever thought about making your own AU of mlb?
Heres my version. Its closer to the movie version in how she acts. Marinette would first be seen cleaning up her room. Mostly moving boxes and cleaning the room. However she ran into a box VIA trip. She would pick up the box and put it on the desk. We get a time skip of just moving boxes and removal of cobwebs. And a cute scene with possums. Marinette would have remember something on discovery channel and move the possums in a small box. While this happens the box glows bright red then normal. As soon as she finished cleaning up. The room doesn't seem to be too interesting other than an art studio mostly drawing outfits and character designs. Marinette was just about to open the box but got called down for dinner. Marinette talked about what she found in her room. She isn't aware she was an orphin that was immediately taken in but her parents would look a bit different from her. As soon as she finished up dinner she went upstairs to open the box. She found a pair of earrings that look like something she enjoys. She went to bed. She then had a dream of a blonde guy who looks different from the modern era. The dream then turns to a nightmare when she saw the guy die right infront of her. She wakes up finding out... she wet the bed.
This is chapter 1 "Red jeweled origin"
Btw her wetting the bed is a reference to the movie where she admits it.
Your designs look great! As someone with a degree in English Lit, the story format could use some work, but I can tell you're super passionate about it. The most important thing about creating any story is having fun with it! Dialogue is always hard to get a grasp of, so I'm interested in seeing more from you and hearing how your writing skills improve!
Thank you so much
I work hard to improve my story telling skills. Im happy you enjoyed my work.
the music along with the edgier tone really made this seem really good and Marinette getting overstimulated really shows you know about autism. if you were making a series i would say watch it
as an rlsh i can tell you fighting strangers isn't easy.
The origin rewrite is incredible, the drama, the action, oh so beautiful! This is way better than the canon versions, keep it up girl, you are creating a story masterpiece.
NOOOOOOOOO THE BEST DAD GONE!
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Your stuff rocks! I hope you make more redesigns! :D
Thank you so much this project took me two months to compete.
To Lady Knight I am sorry for not attending it live my circumstances at school won't allow me to see your wonderful video.
I thought Nathaniel said “uh Marinette your gay?” 😂 great designs btw!
Thank you
I love this way of miraculous ladybug it makes me interested to hear more of your take on miraculous ladybug re telling of the story can't wait to see more! 😁😁😁😁
I am glad you enjoyed it.
If you don't mind, why do you not like the origin story as it is? Not every superhero origin needs to be so serious.
Why did you make so many changes to the origin?
I love the art and desing but there was one thing that killed me ;;w;; hands, you drew them wrong ;;w;; it looks like she have hands on oposite sides ;;w;; 👉👈 sorry if i hurted you 😭👉👈
Why did you have to kill off her dad? Having a dead parent is so cliche.
Ok rude first of all it was an opinion made
Ever known a superhero who doesn’t have that “cliche”?
Spider man and Uncle ben
Tony Stark and his Dad
Captain America and Peggy
Wanda and everyone her family
Natasha and her life
I can go on
Next time remember there are reasons for creative ideas sure her dad was amazing but it makes her a better person realizing good things make us better whether we have them or not
@@wishinStars Ok, I guess that was kind of rude of me, but most magical girl protagonists do have two living parents, and Ladybug owes just as much to those anime as to Western superheroes.
@@ethancox9737 I get that, but the way you said it could’ve been a little bit more polite
What if you created your own rewrite and someone said something about having no character change at all
It would feel like you were unappreciated and that you couldn’t be creative without critique and criticism
Just food for thought
@@wishinStars I know, I shouldn't have worded it that way.
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