Odd skills for a diplomat to have, maybe a marine. The fact the diplomat didn't have a escort detachment. That he was so inclined to get into battle and not pursue were the aliens got hold of earth technology. He seemed to have a lot information about the preservers organization, where did he get it. Perhaps we need to do an outline and analyze what we want the main character to do and be in this story?
??? No, it was at best the apparition of the first life on our planet, primitive bacteria. The first complex life appeared 500 million years ago and the first primate that vaguely look human is 3 million years old, the current version of primate called Homo sapiens sapiens is barely 100 thousand years old. 4 billion years ago, our planet didn't even have oxygen or soil and was still extremely hot, there was also still a heavy rain of asteroids.
Again. You have mostly at least half decent stories, but they'd get several times the views to the end if you just watched it first and did basic edits
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Odd skills for a diplomat to have, maybe a marine. The fact the diplomat didn't have a escort detachment. That he was so inclined to get into battle and not pursue were the aliens got hold of earth technology. He seemed to have a lot information about the preservers organization, where did he get it. Perhaps we need to do an outline and analyze what we want the main character to do and be in this story?
I remember a President named Eisenhower . A Former GENERAL . Diplomat and Former Serviceman , or even CURRENT Serviceman are not mutually exclusive .
Story is all over the place. Could barely follow it
Don t need bad words
I was told that humans have been on the earth for nearly 4 billion years.
??? No, it was at best the apparition of the first life on our planet, primitive bacteria. The first complex life appeared 500 million years ago and the first primate that vaguely look human is 3 million years old, the current version of primate called Homo sapiens sapiens is barely 100 thousand years old. 4 billion years ago, our planet didn't even have oxygen or soil and was still extremely hot, there was also still a heavy rain of asteroids.
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I liked the story 😊. It had some gaps but basically very good. 88😊
Again. You have mostly at least half decent stories, but they'd get several times the views to the end if you just watched it first and did basic edits
These ai stories suck