The story is amazing I give it a five star the reading is okay but there is no emotions in the reading and also you should try different voices to notations to make the imagination look alive but all in all nice book❤
Like there should be a difference between dialogues and narrations also there voices are all the same and the notations are kinda weird this makes an amazing book boring
I listen to a variety of romance books, and I have to say I have enjoyed your books. Thank you for taking the time to put them out there for everyone. 😊
Hey there! Thank you for enjoying the story. I believe the automatic subtitles are there, but do you mean having the full text on the video where people can read along?
@@denisdipaola9267 I looked into it, and it should be fixed now. I will make a note to check that they're activated for every video. Thanks for letting me know!
Oh my God this book is so awesome thank you for letting me listen to it I really do appreciate all the books thank you from the bottom of my heart❤
You’re welcome! I’m glad you enjoy and appreciate them. That makes me very happy 🥰
Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing ❤
I have been enjoying these! Looking forward to another! Thanks for sharing them🙂
I’m glad you’re enjoying them 🥰 you’re so welcome!!
The story is amazing I give it a five star the reading is okay but there is no emotions in the reading and also you should try different voices to notations to make the imagination look alive but all in all nice book❤
Like there should be a difference between dialogues and narrations also there voices are all the same and the notations are kinda weird this makes an amazing book boring
Fucking awesome ending! Awesome story, period. L Loryn, you are a truly gifted weaver of yarns (aka stories 😉). I love each one I listen to.
I can also crochet, so either way I’m good at working with yarn 😃 I’m glad you enjoyed the story!
Thank you for sharing this story. ❤
Thank you for listening! 🥰
I listen to a variety of romance books, and I have to say I have enjoyed your books. Thank you for taking the time to put them out there for everyone. 😊
Thank you so much! That feedback means a lot to me, and you're welcome 🥰
My favorite❤
Still the same Loryn sauce 🌶️🔥but I can tell the difference between then and now. I love it you should be proud
Thank you!! It is fun to look back and see/hear how much my style has changed over the years. 🥰
@@LLorynAuthor Remake but longer 🙈🙈
You sound like an airline pilot talking to us passengers. 😊
😂😂 precisely. Preparing you for your trip to a world full of happy endings 😏
Exactly! 😂😂😂😂
The reading is not very well for this type of stories, but the story itself is interesting.
I'd much rather hear ur beautiful voice reading it.
I have dreams about the rainbow 🌈 but i wont be sitting on it in reality 😂
Thanks!
You are very welcome 🖤
Weres the 3 wallies wen ya need em Dave😂😂
Im the best criptit Riddler solver there is😂😂
You make me laugh 😂
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Beautiful story
Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoyed it 🖤
I broke 2 gear boxes😂😂
Were having a mini castle 🏰 buiilt at the bk well it looks like one😂😂
Apos are dangerous ❤
Interesting 😂
I know about fan bwlts i can mend washing machine 😂😂
I past my theory 😂
I dont know anything anymore 🤣🤣
Fan belts😂 🤣 indeed
I can only reverse ◀️😭
Gok wan was a good cook and Ainsley harriot ❤
See talking in riddles helps no one😂😂
Well is were ya keep water 💦😂
Asylum is wat it is 😮
Can u meke 2nd book
😏 I’ll think about it. Or at least make a series of bonus epilogues for all the boys.
Yes, please!!
My theory is ya born wiv nothing ya die wiv nothing its not personal its life 😂🤭🤭
This is very true, and exactly what my best friend says, too.
Bulldog on Magazine?… River? Is this set in New Orleans? 😂
👀👀 IYKYK, haha.
Tesco's 😂😂
Savage 😂🤣
I cant help the stuff i know 😞🎉
Drive carefully 🙏
Mentally challenged but the world 🌍🌎 gone mad gid need my help❤
Common sense wats that 🤣🤣
Some of Cadbury 😢
😂😂 trust me 😜
Parents 😎
Im mother earth 🌎🌍 mum❤
Coka cola 🥤 is so bad for ya yanks😂
Yanks! 😩 It very much is though.
You don't know who ya meeting 🤝 on apps it cud be a murderer 😮
😂😂😂 absolute facts.
why no subtitles? Anyway great story
Hey there! Thank you for enjoying the story. I believe the automatic subtitles are there, but do you mean having the full text on the video where people can read along?
@@LLorynAuthor the automatic subtitle are not there.
@@denisdipaola9267 I looked into it, and it should be fixed now. I will make a note to check that they're activated for every video. Thanks for letting me know!
@@LLorynAuthor no problem
Do ya wann know something scary about coke 😮
They stop selling lui 😠😠
My sister went out wiv kelton Mackenzie wen she was 14 😂😂
Dense is sense ☺️ seriously 😑
Pal 😂 PayPal 😂
Wat about date rape drugs😮
Wow 😳😮 thats bad
😎 ehhhh
😎👅💥
😂😂
😂😂 wat 🎉
Reese's
Jimmy saville advent calendar 🗓️😮
Think logic 5 yrs to mars 🙈🤣💦 darkness wats ya chances 😂 wat ya flying on 🗞️😂 ridiculous
😂😂