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Almost too hot.

Interesting story!❤

Contemplating to date a guy who likes you because he's eating meat. The heck.

That story that book was beautiful thank you

❤ Smiled through the entire story.

Great job keep it coming ❤❤❤❤

Sometimes the dialogue confuses me. I don't know who's talking half the time, so I have to go back again and again to make sense of it. Kind of frustrating, but that's about it. The pacing could also use some work, like how at one point the story is emotional, then two dialogues later the mood turns upbeat and kind of comedic. Overall, I love it!

Loved it! Ray & Ben were delightful & you kept me cheering for their success together. Enjoyed having Jack & Marcus woven in too. Thank you!! 🥰🥰

Great story...❤❤❤❤ I guess my imagination needs to finish it....

This is the best book I have ever listened to it's so beautiful thank you

An emotional roller coaster in the best way possible. And thanks for showing that a true romance doesn't require sex.

The only thing you should do to this story is to write a sequel.

I listen to this over and over. I love the dynamics and Romantics of the story. The spiciness is a real plus.❤❤

😂😂 yeah it is hard to find gay 🌽 with a asian top and black bottom 🤣🤣 OMG

Love this book so much ❤

Hah! Amazingly, this book landed me a hot sweaty afternoon earlier. I live in a senior apartment unit in the campus of the historic farmer's market that i work in. Our maintenance crew attends to everything in our units, and we were scheduled for hepafilter changeouts today. The guy who came by end of day is someone who has been in my apartment several times, and i was listening to this and forgot to shut it off when he came in and went to do so, apologizing. He laughed, said don't bother, and asked me to bring him the filter off his cart in the kitchen. I went to get it, came by the closet (where the filter is) to hand it to him. He turned toward me, screwsriver in hand, and revealed that his carhartts were open, and his other "tool" was hanging out! He was grinning, said he realised i was watching him last time he was here with apparent "thirst" and noticed the homoerotic drawings on my studio desk in my large efficiency, and mentioned that he had intentionally scheduled my filter for end of day, in case I was still thirsty. He grabbed his phone, called the maintenance office to have them clock him out and let them know the work cart was going in the storeroom down the hall for morning. He announced that he was officially off work, and hoped I would love to "oblige". Yessir! I would indeed. We played heavily literally through half the book reading, which egged us both on. I look forward to additional volumes. We now have each others' text numbers and plans to make it at least a bi-weekly. 😎 Thank you for adding some ambiance for fleshing out what he had hoped for all day.

We love the storylines but we equally live for those dirty scenes!!!! 😢💔I'm so mad at YT for this

horrible, unprogessional AI narration, of the type any highschooler can get for free. the storyline is attractive, but the characters are flat and unrealistic. and that bit of idiotic veganism propaganda is not even scientifically correct. plant-based protein is even worse than fat meat - it always comes with too many complex carbohydrates, that take too much of the brain power to digest. no one-type of food diet is good for anyone, other than sick people. as for so called dietary supplements, that come diluted with "inactive" materials, they introduce more garbage than usefull molecules, in the body. not worth even the half-time i wasted trying to get over the AI narration

Nice! Thanks.

This could be you best one yet...

Another enjoyable story.

Love it ❤

Nice story. Thank you for sharing.

This long break till next chapter is not good.

What a beautiful book thank you

Love it......I want more

Awesome story..❤❤❤❤❤ Thanks for what you do.

Did he call him Josi coon? That word is a very not nice name for a black person in the UK. Mostly died out now thank goodness but it gave me a bit of a jolt when I heard it

No leave the original story😊

Thoroughly enjoyable.❤

I absolutely love the story but absolutely hate the narration at the same time.

I love this 😍 story, L😊Loryn

I'm so drawn to your stories, L Loryn. So glad this story is acceptable to TH-cam so we can find pleasure in your Treasure. TY so much 😍

I prefer "inappropriate" stories😉. Sorry to hear that TH-cam is listening to closed minded people, zeroing in on authentic authors such as yourself, L Loryn. 🪻🙏💗

Let's do a continuance one of Maxwel. And able I would like to know what happens with those two and the marriage of Hudson and Oliver please

I love your stories. I’ve listened to them all and can’t wait for the next one.

This was a terrific love story! The characters were so well developed that they would transition well into more stories. And Ray or Marcus’s brother would also make interesting leads in their own stories. Happy endings are always sweet! Thank you again for some great writing! 🥰🥰

Sorry TH-cam is giving you difficulty. What's the name of your patreon? I don't see it in the description. Thank you🙏

As always, beautiful story❤

I have listened to this story about 15 *times is such a beautiful book thank you

I really enjoy your stories. I hope the homophobes don’t kick you off.

Glad to see your back welcome back

AWESOME STORY..❤

A very nice story! 👍🔥