Hi - from someone who has marked for Edexcel, I can confirm: (1) you do NOT need an introduction. (2) an AGREE/DISAGREE structure is best - this question is a debate which makes it different to a 12 mark question. (3) three points are ideal - two that agree/one disagree or two that disagree/one agree. (4) the judgement is vital - be it at the end or via mini-judgements made throughout (which show a more sophisticated writing style/sustained analysis).
I have always known the information to answer a 16 mark question, but never able to execute it that well. This video in 8 minutes has given me a better understanding on how to answer a 16 mark question, than my dead beat history teacher has in 2 years.
Thanks to you, I got a 10/12 for my 12 marker class test. I always hated 12 markers and overall history exam questions, but because of your teaching strategies, I conquered my fears and I am getting the grades I need for history.
I used this technique to revise for my end of year 10 exam on crime and punishment and I got all 16 marks on the question. I am so happy. Thank you so much for this!
I used your videos all throughout gcses and went from a grade 3 to a grade 9 on results day last year. I showed your channel to 3 of my friends who also achieved a grade 9 because of you and history became all of our strongest subjects. Thank you so much, you were a blessing for my gcses and your channel deserves a million subscribers !!
I have my history mock tomorrow about the turning points in the treatment of disease c1700-c1900. Watching this video made me a bit less nervous so thank you!
ugh, this helped so much! have gotten stuck with a rubbish teacher and this video perfectly explained the question structure for the exam. I felt like I was just spouting knowledge out in the exam, without really linking the evidence back to the question, so I was super gutted when I was handed back my mock paper, especially as I'm taking history a level next year ):
So pleased I could help! Having a rubbish teacher makes your life so much harder, so you should be even more proud of every achievement you make in spite of your teacher. I'm pleased you're not going to let a rubbish teacher stop you going on to do A-level though! Good luck :)
Due to covid I had to do teacher assessed exams and I did two history papers and got a 5&7 which was worrying for me because I needed a 6 to do A level history. I watched your videos on how to answers questions (mostly this one) the night before my crime and punishment paper and I got a grade 9. A 9 won't be my overall grade but thanks to your videos I'll definitely get a grads 6 overall and therefore be able to do it for a levels so thank you!
heyyy its me again. just finished the crime and punishment exam. it went very well and I feel really happy w my answers. thanks you lots for the great videos and helping out. gonna continue watching them for Germany!
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THANK, THANK, THANK YOU!! I got a 7 in my first history mock, and then an 8 but i was 4 marks off a 9 and completely messed up the 16 markers . I searched for a structure, redid the question and got 13/16!! (My teacher marks VERY strictly so I was ecstatic! 😊 hopefully I can get a 8/9 in the real things :)
The way our History teacher taught us was: introduction, agree 1, agree 2, disagree 1, disagree 2, and then the conclusion. Could I still be awarded 16/16 marks using this structure?
Yes, absolutely! That's a very valid way to answer the question. I personally used 3 paragraphs, because it's one less paragraph to write, but both ways work and should enable you to get all the marks!
i watched this video before one of my mocks and got12 out of 16 and i didn't get to do a conclusion so i hope i can do even better for my real exam in a few hours time
For my University exam, the only question I was asked was if I can pay the fees. -__- Although, it was phrased in a similar How-far-do-you-agree fashion.
Everyone of my class fellows who went from grade 8 to 9 aren't doing good in social studies including me,I knew everything and did not understand why the teacher cut marks,now I understand that I need to learn and know the marking scheme as good as possible
i wish you were my teacher fr lmao . thanks for the vid . i have my GCSE's coming up so im tryna get in as much revision as possible. I've gone over most of history content, now i gotta practice exam questions, however im struggling with structure whereas the knowledge is there.:))
We did a mini test, basically a one 16 mark question, and I was super happy with how I did until I got my results and my teacher marked me down 2 marks for silly little things :( he’s a good teacher though, and it wasn’t an important test. I guess I’ll watch more vids like this and try harder next time :)
Honestly, being marked down by one or two for silly things isn't something to worry about. I used to (and still do) get marked down for silly things all the time. You're never going to be perfect 100% of the time, so don't worry yourself. :)
My teacher is really good at teaching me knowledge, but he's rubbish at showing us exam technique. I was getting 9s in English, but 3s in History... not anymore :D This has been extremely helpful!
Oh my goodness, my teacher does not teach technique, she just reads off a pre-made powerpoint by another teacher. Thank you so much for this, i have to retest the whole paper and this is so helpful.
thank you so much ive been struggling with how to answer these types of questions, usually was because of the introduction, im now in yr 9 and starting my first test in history yr 9. Thank u so much
@@genox633 didn't end up picking it😭 also another funny thing is that i completely flopped this test💀 (but that was completely on me though i revised the wrong thing-- this video is really useful if you know when to use it properly lmao) enjoy being in year 9 :)
@@genox633 im in year 10 going into year 11 soon and i regret picking history so much im so bad at history even when i try. i have my history mocks tomorrow and im pretty confident im failing :(
Wishing you all luck, as long as you can remember answer structure and keep up with the short time, the knowledge should come to you in the exam You should definitely still learn a few dates like 1829, 1066 etc Medieval 1000-1500 Early modern 1500-1700 Industrial 1700-1900 Modern 1900-now
I know this is a 2 year old video.. But I really want to say how much I love the little character teaching me ahahha this channel is AMAZING! (History test tmr)
Thank you!! His name's Edward the Professor and I'm pleased you like him :) also unlike most channels mine works backwards where the older the video is the more views and more active the comments lol
This channel is AMAZING, thank you so much for everything you do, I’m in year 10 and I’ve always struggled with history, English and anything with wordy answers as I’m more of a logical thinker (better at maths and science) and questions where I need to answer with words and lots of paragraphs tend to overwhelm me. This has helped a lot :))
i'm here because i got the worst mark on any test i've ever done today in history. Normally i get 7 or 8s on history tests but this time, i did the exact same thing, for this test but i got a mark so bad i'm not even going to reveal it so hopefully this advice is helpful and i don't have to go through that again, what annoys me more is the kid next to me got chatgpt to write it, and chatgpt doesn't even use paragraph structure, and he still got higher than me. like i genuinely don't understand where i went wrong so hopefully this helps
I’ve recently come across your channel, and it’s great! Thanks for the help..can you do edexcel Gcse revision on crime and punishment but the change and continuities throughout the years! or the case studies like the church/religion or withcraft? Thanks again!
Thanks, I'm pleased you my videos! :) I could probably do something where I follow changes the changes and continuities through topics (though I'd do that nearer exam season probably), and videos covering C&P case studies will appear in time :)
Pleased you found this helpful!! I hate maths and have done my best to erase all maths skills from my brain since being able to drop it, so am very much not the person to ask about maths channels 😅
Thank you again🙌 This video made this question so easy hopefully i can apply it on paper😅 I just need to brushen up on the changes(Structures/sentences) Other than that i am 😁 And hopefully i will get to do A-Level History Going for a Grade 7 wish me luck😅
@@Alonglongtimeago Thanks i could people have been telling me it is hard but if it was hard it wouldn't be there also i want to be the one who can get an A and set an example to others🙌
thank you for making this because after not writing some of these for 6 months due to covid 19 i have forgotten how to write these and this really did save me from a panic attack. hopefully i will edit this and tell you how many marks i have gotten when i receive my feed back :)
It's a video I will certainly be making at some point, how soon that is, I can't tell you. I'm pleased you've found the 12 and 16 marker videos helpful though! :)
Thank you, I'm in year 10 and I ended up getting 14 on this question (one of the comments was that it was almost perfect!) and 29 overall because of your videos. Even though it was our first practice paper and probably won't account for anything, I'm so grateful as that is the most I've ever gotten on any questions that are on paper 1.
Pleased you like the videos! :) My GCSE history teacher always said you do need an intro and she marked for the exam board (but only started doing this the year I actually did GCSEs - after she'd taught us exam skills), so I'd assume yes, but not with 100% certainty.
I am so confused right now, my whole secondary career i've been taught that we have to write and introduction, a conclusion and.... 6 paragraphs... not three. Also we have to take sides for the statement. For example in the conclusion you state if you agree or disagree with it
There's more than one way to write an answer to a question correctly, so the way you've been taught would work, however, you can also do it with 3 paragraphs and an intro and conclusion, which will save you a lot of time! :)
Genuinely no clue, but feel free to count the words in the example answer I use in the video, will give you a vague idea (probably at the lengthier end) :)
I know you see / respond to all the comments you get, so here's my question. Can you make an 8 Mark Question video? It's the 'How useful are Sources...' and, could you possibly make videos on other questions? I'm sure a bunch of people will be grateful of these videos... It's Mock Question Time...
Hey!I'm not sure if you''ll see this but i have one on Problems facing Elizabeth at the start of her reign..could i start with I agree that the threat from France was the biggest issue for point one then go onto say for my two disagree however on the other hand i don't agree due to..
Hi jus stumbled across your vids they are so helpful my teacher is so bad and we always hv supply so I’m panicking do you think u could tell me what to revise for my mock in 3 days ?!? As I don’t wanna learn irrelevant info
Thanks, pleased you find my videos helpful! Seeing as you have 2 days, I'd suggest covering question structures and giving yourself an overview and then looking at anything you know that you particularly struggle with or have no knowledge of. You'll find in the exam that you know more than you think you do. Good luck!
Do you think it is extremely certain to be more pinpoint on key specific dates? For example, would it be necessary to name the exact year that Demonology was released or would it be fine to just mention it was released in the 1500th century?
If you can't remember the specific date then yep go for the century (maybe even say 'end of the 16th century' but it's better if you can remember to go for the specific year :)
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Hi - from someone who has marked for Edexcel, I can confirm:
(1) you do NOT need an introduction.
(2) an AGREE/DISAGREE structure is best - this question is a debate which makes it different to a 12 mark question.
(3) three points are ideal - two that agree/one disagree or two that disagree/one agree.
(4) the judgement is vital - be it at the end or via mini-judgements made throughout (which show a more sophisticated writing style/sustained analysis).
Thanks for this :)
What do you mean by the judgement
So would tou start with saying some thing like i mostly agree with this statement then go on to do 2 agree paragraphs and 1 disagree paragraph
Can you still get full marks using the same sentence starters
E.g. For example... Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly... Overall...
@@abdulislam101 they are not marking for fluidity of text in that way, firstly, secondly is fine and actually really appreciated.
3 years later and these videos are still saving many students... thank you...
Anyone watching this before the gcse tomorrow ✋
who isn't 😅
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yep
Mine's in 7 hours
YUP
I’m only in year 10 but I can tell you are going to relieve a lot of stress I will have in the future
I’m only in year 8😂
same, but in history im really struggling with structuring my answer and im getting low marks, what advice would you give?
Master-Micah use peel structure
K thx alot mate 👍
for real the corona is gonna make me fail next years gcse
I pray we all pass our exams God bless all
amen
in Jesus's name, AMEN ❤
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Amin❤
I have always known the information to answer a 16 mark question, but never able to execute it that well. This video in 8 minutes has given me a better understanding on how to answer a 16 mark question, than my dead beat history teacher has in 2 years.
Thanks to you, I got a 10/12 for my 12 marker class test. I always hated 12 markers and overall history exam questions, but because of your teaching strategies, I conquered my fears and I am getting the grades I need for history.
That's amazing to hear! Long may it continue!
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SAME I just got 12/12 on my homework! I love this page sm it’s saving my y11 grade!!
I have a history test coming up im so glad i found this channel
Good luck with your history test!
Same here, good luck.
i have one rn and im stressing
@@phoebeould4846 me too, it’s going to be okay, we can do this
Good luck
I used this technique to revise for my end of year 10 exam on crime and punishment and I got all 16 marks on the question. I am so happy. Thank you so much for this!
WHAT REALLY so the intro and conclusion worked?
@@tahminabegum4325 yes!👌
Good luck for anyone doing their exam today
Thanks, you too! Pretty confident with this its just American West (my second paper) I am nervous for
im literally so scared
Summary:
Intro+conculsion+12 marker response.
Intro
3 paragraphs-3 points
Conculsions
Intro: 1-2 sentences
Paragraphs--PEEL
Evidence- Spend (statistics, people, names, dates?)
Statistics, Places, Events, Names, Dates :)
Got a 7 when I did this a few years back. Good luck everyone
I used your videos all throughout gcses and went from a grade 3 to a grade 9 on results day last year. I showed your channel to 3 of my friends who also achieved a grade 9 because of you and history became all of our strongest subjects. Thank you so much, you were a blessing for my gcses and your channel deserves a million subscribers !!
Hi, I got my results today and I just wanted to say thank you so much as I wouldn't have gotten a grade 9 in history without your videos.
Thank you 😊 and mega congrats on your grade 9!!!
I have my history mock tomorrow about the turning points in the treatment of disease c1700-c1900. Watching this video made me a bit less nervous so thank you!
Hope it went well for you! :)
ugh, this helped so much! have gotten stuck with a rubbish teacher and this video perfectly explained the question structure for the exam. I felt like I was just spouting knowledge out in the exam, without really linking the evidence back to the question, so I was super gutted when I was handed back my mock paper, especially as I'm taking history a level next year ):
So pleased I could help! Having a rubbish teacher makes your life so much harder, so you should be even more proud of every achievement you make in spite of your teacher. I'm pleased you're not going to let a rubbish teacher stop you going on to do A-level though! Good luck :)
its my first year of GCSE HISTORY and this helped quite a lot
Thanks! Happy I could help!!
Due to covid I had to do teacher assessed exams and I did two history papers and got a 5&7 which was worrying for me because I needed a 6 to do A level history. I watched your videos on how to answers questions (mostly this one) the night before my crime and punishment paper and I got a grade 9. A 9 won't be my overall grade but thanks to your videos I'll definitely get a grads 6 overall and therefore be able to do it for a levels so thank you!
Found this channel today and I've already watched every video
This is the best history channel on TH-cam
Thank you! I'm flattered
@Harry GORDON
How's it sad?
@Harry Gordon
Okay fucko you didn't answer my fucking question
nice jon tron reference bro
Thank you so much for this, my teacher is useless and barely teaches content or structure so videos like this really help!
Pleased you like the video! :)
Currently cramming all your videos in preparation for my paper 1 exam, very helpful!
Literally have my gcse history paper on Thursday and I have no idea how to write a 16 marker 😭😭
heyyy its me again. just finished the crime and punishment exam. it went very well and I feel really happy w my answers. thanks you lots for the great videos and helping out. gonna continue watching them for Germany!
I’m about to do my mock today at 9:30am thank you so much for this!!
i come back to your channel like every few months and it’s always incredibly helpful, thank you sm!
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THANK, THANK, THANK YOU!! I got a 7 in my first history mock, and then an 8 but i was 4 marks off a 9 and completely messed up the 16 markers . I searched for a structure, redid the question and got 13/16!! (My teacher marks VERY strictly so I was ecstatic! 😊 hopefully I can get a 8/9 in the real things :)
The way our History teacher taught us was: introduction, agree 1, agree 2, disagree 1, disagree 2, and then the conclusion. Could I still be awarded 16/16 marks using this structure?
Yes!
Yes, absolutely! That's a very valid way to answer the question. I personally used 3 paragraphs, because it's one less paragraph to write, but both ways work and should enable you to get all the marks!
A long, long time ago... Thank you :)
Rocky Yeah, our teacher does that to
@@NotRxcky did you pass??
no joke this video helped me to achieve a 9 in my latest mock! thank you so so much x
Congrats!!
i watched this video before one of my mocks and got12 out of 16 and i didn't get to do a conclusion so i hope i can do even better for my real exam in a few hours time
For my University exam, the only question I was asked was if I can pay the fees. -__- Although, it was phrased in a similar How-far-do-you-agree fashion.
That's nasty. Did you peel?
@@Alonglongtimeago badum tshhhhh
I always have problems in the kitchen, but will start to Peel my tomatoes.
Btw, I'm not even English, but that method can be used on other issues too.
It's good to see that you're peeling very well. :)
My predicted grades have gone right up ever since i’ve started watching ur videos,, thank you so much :))
got a grade 8 on mocks, thank you so much 🙏
back again lol got another set of mocks in 3 weeks
THANK YOU SO MUCH I WENT FROM GRADE 3 TO GRADE 9 OVERNIGHT!!!!
Everyone of my class fellows who went from grade 8 to 9 aren't doing good in social studies including me,I knew everything and did not understand why the teacher cut marks,now I understand that I need to learn and know the marking scheme as good as possible
I got an 8 in a history exam.Thank you.
AMAZING! Congratulations!!! :D
your going to make me pass or even get above my target in my mocks…. tysm!
i wish you were my teacher fr lmao . thanks for the vid . i have my GCSE's coming up so im tryna get in as much revision as possible. I've gone over most of history content, now i gotta practice exam questions, however im struggling with structure whereas the knowledge is there.:))
Sounds like you're on the right track! Good luck! :)
my exam is Thursday morning and it's Tuesday, I'm just realising how much I don't know
Try not to worry about it, i hightly doubt you will see this before you do it, but i’m in the same boat!
You'll find you know more than you think you do! Best of luck :)
I have this exam tommorow with this exact question. May Allah be with you
Inshallah brother
Hope it went well for you! :)
We did a mini test, basically a one 16 mark question, and I was super happy with how I did until I got my results and my teacher marked me down 2 marks for silly little things :( he’s a good teacher though, and it wasn’t an important test. I guess I’ll watch more vids like this and try harder next time :)
Honestly, being marked down by one or two for silly things isn't something to worry about. I used to (and still do) get marked down for silly things all the time. You're never going to be perfect 100% of the time, so don't worry yourself. :)
My teacher is really good at teaching me knowledge, but he's rubbish at showing us exam technique. I was getting 9s in English, but 3s in History... not anymore :D
This has been extremely helpful!
Oh my goodness, my teacher does not teach technique, she just reads off a pre-made powerpoint by another teacher. Thank you so much for this, i have to retest the whole paper and this is so helpful.
thank you so much ive been struggling with how to answer these types of questions, usually was because of the introduction, im now in yr 9 and starting my first test in history yr 9. Thank u so much
Pleased you found the video helpful and good luck with your test! :)
@@Alonglongtimeago I got a grade 8 omfnshevehheheg just some little slip ups on the information given but other than that thank youuuu
@@ennaeig1653 omg that's amazing news well done!!
Thank you! i really appreciate it, this really helped me with my pre-test in history! it was a medicine 1
Using this for my history test (I'm in year 9)😁
I’m in year 9 right now lol how’s GCSE history in year 10 or did you pick it?
@@genox633 didn't end up picking it😭 also another funny thing is that i completely flopped this test💀 (but that was completely on me though i revised the wrong thing-- this video is really useful if you know when to use it properly lmao)
enjoy being in year 9 :)
@@genox633 im in year 10 going into year 11 soon and i regret picking history so much im so bad at history even when i try. i have my history mocks tomorrow and im pretty confident im failing :(
babe you’re a life saver
Wishing you all luck, as long as you can remember answer structure and keep up with the short time, the knowledge should come to you in the exam
You should definitely still learn a few dates like 1829, 1066 etc
Medieval 1000-1500
Early modern 1500-1700
Industrial 1700-1900
Modern 1900-now
LEGEND thanks night b4 exam and did no exam technique in class
thanks :) and good luck hope you smash it!!
thank you! i have my history mock in two days :)
year 11 mocks are coming up and im terrified so thanks for the help
I know this is a 2 year old video.. But I really want to say how much I love the little character teaching me ahahha this channel is AMAZING! (History test tmr)
Thank you!! His name's Edward the Professor and I'm pleased you like him :)
also unlike most channels mine works backwards where the older the video is the more views and more active the comments lol
Ur literally saving me rn 🙏
i have my medicine gcse exam on thursday, and we didnt get taught exam skills that well
Have an exam tomorrow 6 and 16 marker ty for your help hoping it goes amazing
4 years later this video still saves students like me
This channel is AMAZING, thank you so much for everything you do, I’m in year 10 and I’ve always struggled with history, English and anything with wordy answers as I’m more of a logical thinker (better at maths and science) and questions where I need to answer with words and lots of paragraphs tend to overwhelm me. This has helped a lot :))
Pleased you found it helpful! But, personally, I think words are much better than numbers! :)
i'm here because i got the worst mark on any test i've ever done today in history. Normally i get 7 or 8s on history tests but this time, i did the exact same thing, for this test but i got a mark so bad i'm not even going to reveal it so hopefully this advice is helpful and i don't have to go through that again, what annoys me more is the kid next to me got chatgpt to write it, and chatgpt doesn't even use paragraph structure, and he still got higher than me. like i genuinely don't understand where i went wrong so hopefully this helps
I’ve recently come across your channel, and it’s great! Thanks for the help..can you do edexcel Gcse revision on crime and punishment but the change and continuities throughout the years! or the case studies like the church/religion or withcraft? Thanks again!
Thanks, I'm pleased you my videos! :) I could probably do something where I follow changes the changes and continuities through topics (though I'd do that nearer exam season probably), and videos covering C&P case studies will appear in time :)
The links to the practice questions are really helpful thank you!
Oooh good to know someone's used them! :)
I used this for the League of Nations downfall, thank you so much, it helped a lot!
Amazing, pleased to hear! :)
im year 11 this has helped loads. ive got stuck with a rubbish maths teacher, could you recommend a maths channel please?
Pleased you found this helpful!! I hate maths and have done my best to erase all maths skills from my brain since being able to drop it, so am very much not the person to ask about maths channels 😅
Thank you so much u are a legend I subscribed. I have a test tomorrow that his will be a big help thank you so much, god will bless u
Hope your test went well :)
this video helped me a lot thanks!
This is what I like to hear!!
This is great. Liked, commented, shared
Thanks! Pleased you liked it!
Thank you again🙌
This video made this question so easy hopefully i can apply it on paper😅
I just need to brushen up on the changes(Structures/sentences)
Other than that i am 😁
And hopefully i will get to do A-Level History
Going for a Grade 7 wish me luck😅
Good luck! Also, defo to A-level history, it's a great choice!! :)
@@Alonglongtimeago Thanks i could people have been telling me it is hard but if it was hard it wouldn't be there also i want to be the one who can get an A and set an example to others🙌
thank you for making this because after not writing some of these for 6 months due to covid 19 i have forgotten how to write these and this really did save me from a panic attack. hopefully i will edit this and tell you how many marks i have gotten when i receive my feed back :)
Pleased you like the video! And good luck with getting back on track now you're back at school :)
Do you mind sharing what mark you got just so it can give me reassurance
@@cocoloco7387 i got 11/12 which in my opinion is good after 6 months lol sorry if its too late
I'm struck on how to write the conclusion part.
Can you do a video on 8 marker how useful questions please??? The 12 and 16 marker really helped me as my teacher isn’t as concise as you are
It's a video I will certainly be making at some point, how soon that is, I can't tell you. I'm pleased you've found the 12 and 16 marker videos helpful though! :)
Thanks to u I got a full 16 in a 16 markers
omg congrats!!
Love this channel, had to sub!
Thanks! And welcome :)
thank you so much. I just subscribed
Awesome, thank you!
for all of my paragraphs i agreed with everything
Incredibly helpful
Thank you, I'm in year 10 and I ended up getting 14 on this question (one of the comments was that it was almost perfect!) and 29 overall because of your videos. Even though it was our first practice paper and probably won't account for anything, I'm so grateful as that is the most I've ever gotten on any questions that are on paper 1.
This is awesome, congratulations! :)
I only argued one side, does that mean my marks are limited?
have my history GCSE in a few days im counting on this
How did it go?
Im doing Germany tomorrow
@@JuicyPolarBear do you do edexcel
@@brittany1370 yes
Good luck! :)
Such a useful video, thank you very much!
Pleased to hear! :)
Thanks. You helpt a lot.
I really needed this thank you, id only ever get 11/12 out of 20 so this really helped
You are amazing
Thank you
This video helped me so much
Just subbed
Happy I could help, and thanks for the sub! :)
Can you do one on the 16 marker in paper 3 please?
Excellent explanation thank yo
Hi, could please do a tutorial on a follow up question, thank you
I just do a history 16 marker and I included my own knowledge but in the conclusion, will I drop marks?
Off the top of my head these questions are marked positively, so you can't drop marks, only gain them :)
Do you really need to do an introduction? Thanks for your videos, they’re really helpful :)
Pleased you like the videos! :) My GCSE history teacher always said you do need an intro and she marked for the exam board (but only started doing this the year I actually did GCSEs - after she'd taught us exam skills), so I'd assume yes, but not with 100% certainty.
I am so confused right now, my whole secondary career i've been taught that we have to write and introduction, a conclusion and.... 6 paragraphs... not three. Also we have to take sides for the statement. For example in the conclusion you state if you agree or disagree with it
There's more than one way to write an answer to a question correctly, so the way you've been taught would work, however, you can also do it with 3 paragraphs and an intro and conclusion, which will save you a lot of time! :)
Thank you for this useful video! Approximately how many words do we have to write for a 16 mark question like this one?
Genuinely no clue, but feel free to count the words in the example answer I use in the video, will give you a vague idea (probably at the lengthier end) :)
Idk how to write arabic but "barak allah fina"
I know you see / respond to all the comments you get, so here's my question.
Can you make an 8 Mark Question video? It's the 'How useful are Sources...' and, could you possibly make videos on other questions? I'm sure a bunch of people will be grateful of these videos... It's Mock Question Time...
There are already plans for more question videos, including one on the 8 marker! :)
Can you make a "How useful is this source" question video
It'll be coming at some point :)
@@Alonglongtimeago yesssss thank you
does this sound alright, so i didnt use an introduction and for all 3 paragraphs i agreed and i didnt add a conclusion
Thanks sooo much!
Hey!I'm not sure if you''ll see this but i have one on Problems facing Elizabeth at the start of her reign..could i start with I agree that the threat from France was the biggest issue for point one then go onto say for my two disagree however on the other hand i don't agree due to..
I don't know anything about Elizabeth so I'm afraid I can't help you there :(
thanks to you l got 15/16 on my essayyy :0
congrats!! :)
Hi jus stumbled across your vids they are so helpful my teacher is so bad and we always hv supply so I’m panicking do you think u could tell me what to revise for my mock in 3 days ?!? As I don’t wanna learn irrelevant info
Thanks, pleased you find my videos helpful! Seeing as you have 2 days, I'd suggest covering question structures and giving yourself an overview and then looking at anything you know that you particularly struggle with or have no knowledge of. You'll find in the exam that you know more than you think you do. Good luck!
Do you think it is extremely certain to be more pinpoint on key specific dates? For example, would it be necessary to name the exact year that Demonology was released or would it be fine to just mention it was released in the 1500th century?
If you can't remember the specific date then yep go for the century (maybe even say 'end of the 16th century' but it's better if you can remember to go for the specific year :)
Can you do some videos on source exam questions? I find that those are the most difficult and these videos have really helped me :).
Pleased it's helped you! You'll be pleased to know source questions are already on the list!!! :)
So what your saying is I don’t have to write four pages like other kids as long as I put all the right stuff in my answer
aye aye and then you can spend lots of time feeling smug about your efficiency ;)
Thanks for this!
Pleased you liked it :)