How many stories have you smashed together here...? I'm up to 4 so far.... Continuity can be fixed, partially, with "Chapters" and "Parts 1-X". Not bad writing, just bad story layout, in the first story, and alien suddenly became human...? WTH?
Just when I was thinking that this was Andre Norton with a hint of maybe Asimov's Foundation, the switch to human just out of the blue...Of course all of the glitches could be repaired by a great surprise ending, but I won't waste my time going on with this train wreck.
You have made mistakes First they were aliens looking at earth Then they are humans defending the power of earth It’s very confusing to fallow this story Sorry but it’s a no from me because of the story changing from being aliens to changing to humans .
Interesting story or stories strung together ...poorly. Ye might wanna read your stuff before publishing and proofreading the materials and edit yer stuff. Currently it's about 3/10 with potential.
I must confess that I did know a story could be that bad. I will never get the time I wasted here back.
AMEN.
Thank you for the warning❤❤❤❤
you are a lifesaver by saving me 2 hours. good thing I read the comments first before watching the video
IF this is supposed to be an A.I. reciting the story why can I hear breathing pauses lmao
How many stories have you smashed together here...? I'm up to 4 so far.... Continuity can be fixed, partially, with "Chapters" and "Parts 1-X". Not bad writing, just bad story layout, in the first story, and alien suddenly became human...? WTH?
think the ai broke sown on that part
Just when I was thinking that this was Andre Norton with a hint of maybe Asimov's Foundation, the switch to human just out of the blue...Of course all of the glitches could be repaired by a great surprise ending, but I won't waste my time going on with this train wreck.
How did they all of a sudden become humans? Is this AI generated confusion
Don’t mess with Earths Guardian Angels 😂
Where's the humans, oh! We are the humans... 😂 Totally forgot
Galaxy wide amnesia
What happened to the first story, where did it go. This is total BS.
Flutter like a butterfly
Bite like a Shark
I’m the
😅can confused
You have made mistakes
First they were aliens looking at earth
Then they are humans defending the power of earth
It’s very confusing to fallow this story
Sorry but it’s a no from me because of the story changing from being aliens to changing to humans .
Interesting story or stories strung together ...poorly. Ye might wanna read your stuff before publishing and proofreading the materials and edit yer stuff. Currently it's about 3/10 with potential.
This all makes no sense, are there multiple different stories? Or is the author just this bad? Nothing flows together and its extremely confusing.
This is BS
FOR SUCH A GOOD STORYLINE, THE ENDING SUCKED. WASTE OF TIME.