I like happy endings and stories with emotion. I think most people do. Too many people walk around with broken hearts for me to want to read about it. The story narration was good, and the plot held together, but I would very much have preferred see a 'Lets work this out together' moment at the end.
@@boatingman11 Thank you for sharing your opinion, this is the first time I shared a story on this channel that didn't have a happy ending and you are right, it would have been better to have a happy ending
@Sci-fiLine ... Don't get me wrong. I'm still going to watch your videos. You asked for opinions. The story was great except for the ending. Don't let my critique discourage you.
That sound like Spoke in Starship enterprise about the mating, i have wrote my own story in 1992 cause she represent my passion and so i did. In this Varithian species as a commander, Zara have a condition she couldn't control till she done, So Zara need help to regain control once it done. unlikely in Star-Trek commander T'Pol they relation continues with Tucker. ..in my storyline as TIME GUARDIANS with 3 main characters, this wouldn't be allowded in extreme condition, but in the main ship we can control where to go at any time, story within and out work of duty is not a problem. nobody need to know the intimacy in the crews even it have a problem. In my story i'm an Supreme High Commander as well two female for the job it need, We've are 10 personnal crews ready for anything
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I like happy endings and stories with emotion. I think most people do. Too many people walk around with broken hearts for me to want to read about it. The story narration was good, and the plot held together, but I would very much have preferred see a 'Lets work this out together' moment at the end.
@@boatingman11 Thank you for sharing your opinion, this is the first time I shared a story on this channel that didn't have a happy ending and you are right, it would have been better to have a happy ending
@Sci-fiLine ... Don't get me wrong. I'm still going to watch your videos. You asked for opinions. The story was great except for the ending. Don't let my critique discourage you.
@@boatingman11 Thank you very much, I agree with you
That sound like Spoke in Starship enterprise about the mating, i have wrote my own story in 1992 cause she represent my passion and so i did. In this Varithian species as a commander, Zara have a condition she couldn't control till she done, So Zara need help to regain control once it done. unlikely in Star-Trek commander T'Pol they relation continues with Tucker. ..in my storyline as TIME GUARDIANS with 3 main characters, this wouldn't be allowded in extreme condition, but in the main ship we can control where to go at any time, story within and out work of duty is not a problem. nobody need to know the intimacy in the crews even it have a problem.
In my story i'm an Supreme High Commander as well two female for the job it need, We've are 10 personnal crews ready for anything
Isn't it wonderful that we think and write about the same things at different times?
I love Zara
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Uh, it was mating season. So, there should be a baby.
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What are your thoughts on the story?
Palpable
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