I love how this movie feels so much more darker and there are moments where it almost genuinly feels dystopian, good job man! I miss old funny hound but his rewritten personality is still amazing!
Wow! I have a lot to say! I am impressed, but more importantly I am satisfied. "Simple is better!" The moment I heard those words I knew I was in for a treat! It's true! I watched part one again to refresh my memory and I've gotta say, it's even better than I remember. There are things I will nitpick but overall it's incredible! First off. I love Hound. He is such an amazing and interesting character. I hated him in TLK and this rewrite made him my favourite. In the actual movie, they hinted at the Autobots being more agitated than before, but it was never explored, while in this rewrite you put it right in the center focus which ups the stakes a lot more. The action sounds more creative than in the actual movie and I'm sure it would look great on screen. Also your voice acting has improved and the dialogue between the Decepticons keeps the style of Bay (slow talking Decepticons and threatening background music). I have some nitpicks and questions though. Why did you decide to use Six-Shot? I think he looks too complicated for a live-action movie seeing as he has six modes. Why not use another Combaticon? Drift's arc kind of comes out of nowhere when you take into account his role in AOE (he wasn't conflicted about being a former Decepticon). Also I think there is too little action. From Act I to the middle of Act II we barely have any action. I personally don't have a problem with this, but I don't think it will translate well on screen, as it will give the movie a slow pace. But I could be wrong, so take this with a grain of salt. Overall fantastic work! This rewrite gives the movie a feeling of urgency without beating you over the head with it. Every character is interesting and well developed, the story is tighter and more cohesive, the action feels a lot more creative and most of all, is engaging. As I said with part one, you can have an incredible story, but if the movie doesn't hook you into it, then it failed to do it's job. This rewrite works! Will it translate well to the big screen? Maybe, but most likely yes! Can't wait for Act III
First off, six shot is an interesting character for me because using these different alt modes can make for some pretty interesting action in the final act. I might not use all of them, but I’m setting up certain plot points to potentially use them later. Will I use all of them, probably not. As for Drifts inner conflict. In the two movies his in, he’s not that interesting overall. But there is potential! He’s a triple changer, he’s a former decepticon, he has honor and respect for each of his team members. But Michael Bay does not know how to utilize those elements. He abandons half of those elements in the Last Knight. Giving Drift this inner conflict allows his character to become more interesting. Also, there will be, in my opinion, a great pay off for Drift in the final act. The same thing goes for Crosshairs, Ultra Magnus, Sideswipe, and Nemesis(Optimus) Prime. As far as the action goes I’m pushing towards the final act. You’ll see😉 Dude, thank you for the feedback on both of these episodes, I appreciate it and you so much. But at the end of the day, I’m just a young, half experienced filmmaker just trying to have some fun🙂 Thank you
You deserve to be in the writers room for the new tf trilogy. This is amazing! I've been watching the series so far, and I have to admit... This is so much better! This is a film that is worth my 10 bucks lol
This wasn"t supposed to be the last film it was rebooted because thi film failed a lot at zhe box office, but this rewrie is amazing, way better than the original, keep it up ! Good work!
Well even if the trailer presented it that way they anaunced 16 more movies, tlk just failed so much they had to reboot it🤣 But you version is way better. I would have prefered this in the cinema.(sorry if my english is bad btw. It's not my first language)
Even though it makes sense to have Warpath, I would’ve replaced him with both Cliffjumper and Brawn, though despite their might they’re ultimately killed by Thundercracker. Cliffjumper would be the first to fall before Thundercracker was able to use flight and speed against Brawn, which would ultimately end in Brawn dying to the hands of Thundercracker, though this is where the ‘Con would seem to begin questioning his actions before transforming and flying off towards Megatron. Also, what’s the alt mode that you used for Sideswipe? It looks pretty interesting for an alt mode for Sideswipe.
I would have love to see Bumblebee and Drift reconcile and make amends at Lockdown’s separate ship before it got shot by Galvatron’s Vehicons. Drift tells Bee about Knucklehead and Ratchet. Drift tells Bee that Ratchet’s death will not be in vain.
@@nathanhills336you should do one where the stunticons replace The KSI troops and add warpath and mirage that way we can get more screen time for both; but it’s my opinion really and it’s fine if you don’t wanna
Is this version of Transformers: The Last Knight rated R? Because I’m doing a Transformers: The Last Knight rewrite too! And mine will be rated R for language and violence and definitely earn it with tons of blood and Cade, Sqweeks, Cogman, and Viviane saying “F***” - Cade is the only character who will say it twice, but Viviane, Sqweeks, and Cogman will only say it once.
8:17 I actually love that Color Scheme! I would've gone with something like Dark Blue and Purple color scheme from the Chinese Transformers Online Game released a while after TLK, but I think Gray and red would do for now.
I love the color scheme as well. And the photos are just there for someone to easily visualize the story without thinking but you can definitely give a different look to any of the characters
@@nathanhills336 Since Transformers Online showed up, I've been in love with the Purple replacing the red (Except the slash mark on Prime's head) and the blue being dark. It actually made me think "why didn't they use this color scheme in the movie! It's just too badass!" Yet I fully understand how terrible the original movie was. But Lemme be honest here. if I had some sort of CGI or animation platform, I would've been able to make this into a flat-out movie. Using some soundtracks from Superultramegaa, PrimeProductions and more. And yes, I will indeed Give credit to your script if I was to make that into a flat-out movie. Keep up the amazing work BTW!
@@nathanhills336 Also, for the fight between the autobots and Nemesis prime, it would've at least been a great Idea to Add the last two minutes and Thirty-eight seconds of Ben Affleck's Batman Theme by Hans Zimmer just to show How much Evil Nemesis Prime Truly has in this re-write. He's basically the Darth Vader of this re-write. That music combined with the aggression, hatred, anger and Darkness of Nemesis Prime, would make him an Absolutely Badass and scary Villain.
swindle appeared in the tf1 but not as a combiner he was gonna appear in tf4 and tlk as a combiner (people thought the vw bus dreadbot turned into was gonna be swindle), breakdown appeared in the rotf also not a combiner, he was gonna appear in aoe as a combiner, motormaster was gonna appear in aoe as a combiner but was cut, before the aoe super bowl came out people thought the freightliner truck galvatron turned into aoe was gonna be either nemesis prime, ultra magnus (because of the blue lights), scourge (looking like rid 2001 version), or motormaster (there was concept art of motormaster turning into the freightliner truck galvatron turned into in aoe) sunstreaker, ultra magnus, and blitwzing was gonna appear in tf4 when thundercracker's studio series toy came out it's said that thundercracker was gonna appear in dotm cliffjumper was gonna appear in tf4 and tf5 but was cut warpath was gonna appear in tf4 but was cut mirage/dino is still alive people thought after seeing aoe wheelie died because brains survived sentinel prime killing ironhide is why ironhide couldn't appear in transformers prime wheeljack/que's death was originally mirage/dino's death
There is really no need for them in this rewrite. If I were to put them into the whole movie, they would not gave much to do. They might have a cameo in act 3
@@nathanhills336 Maybe they like join in the end ? I just want a proper way to have the Dinobots in even if it's a cameo . The way TLK handled it was alright at first but then later on they just disappeared . And lemme guess in this rewrite of yours they're still in hong kong?
Awesome rewrite so far! You have a lot of potential! I know someone who is right now in the works of making the first ever TF live action fan film. Lots of awesome TF fans are working on it around the globe. It's going to be huge! If you are maybe interested in working on this project as well I could hook you up with the director of it. I am sure he'll be more than happy if you join seeing as you have so many great ideas! :) Just write me if you are interested! ;)
@@nathanhills336 Sadly not personally, however two members of the team have one. There is also a FB Fanpage: m.facebook.com/pages/category/Movie/Transformers-Rise-of-Unicron-267106393475612/ for the movie already if that would help you. :) However, I am sure that he’ll send you some materials from the movie if you ask him to see what it is all about!
Hey again! Just checking in to see if you have problems with contacting him, because he hasn't received an e-mail from you yet. Btw. he had a look at your rewrite series as well and absolutely loved it! ;)
what i disliked about dotm were sentinel prime betraying the autobots, along with killing ironhide, skids and mudflap, the autobots getting exiled, and wheeljack/que's death what i disliked about aoe were drift being a triple changer, ratchet and leadfoot's deaths, and how all the aoe decepticons were created, also roadbuster is still alive, topspin appeared in tlk but had leadfoot's head and was called volleybot
how did crosshairs know about the deaths of jazz and ironhide, also jetfire, and the arcee sisters died in rotf, jolt died in the comics between rotf and dotm, wheeljack/que was also killed in dotm
@@harrishyatt6283 Yes. I feel as if they should be debriefed on what had happened in their absence, especially when it comes to the losses they have suffered.
Areee and Chromia have been dead since Revenge of the Fallen. But I was thinking beside our main group of Autobots, the audience can decide who is still living going off of the Bayverse timeline of course.
It’s the kind of thing where they are shot and never seen again in the films. You have to forgive me because I never read the comics. Then again, the audience can make up there own minds who’s dead or not, depending on the Bayverse timeline.
In this, it was Sunstreaker who died disguised as Sideswipe due to Sideswipe leaving Earth in secret shortly after the events of DOTM. It’s a big part of his arc in part 4 of the rewrite.
@@nathanhills336 That's good to know, and I enjoy the first 3 parts, can't wait for the finale soon. And speaking of Rewriting Transformers, have you seen Phoenix Studios Rewrites of Transformers 1, 2, & 3?
@@Jadinite-2006 That guy is great! I haven’t watched his rewrite for the 3rd one yet but I’ll get around to it. He’s one of my favorite creators when it comes to rewrites
@@nathanhills336 He Was My Favourite As A Kid. I’ve Been Enjoying Your Rewrite BTW, Haven’t Finished It But I Will Soon. It’s Partially Motivated Me To Make My Rewrite Of The Transformers Series But Keep Up The Good Work!
@@Thomas-zu1wq Awesome! Optimus Prime has been my personal favorite since I was 7 to the point that I have been practicing his voice since then. Surprisingly, I’m not finished with the rewrite, I have one more part to complete. I’ve been taking a break from it to focus on school and the re-edit of The Rise of Skywalker I’m doing. I’m so happy you’re enjoying it though and proud that I have been able to motivate you. You seem like a new viewer, I’m glad you’re here!
Ultra Magnus is an interesting character
Some characters carries a burden
I love how this movie feels so much more darker and there are moments where it almost genuinly feels dystopian, good job man! I miss old funny hound but his rewritten personality is still amazing!
Love it!! Don't think about the few likes and views, people will always find your videos. JUST keep going, it will pay out in the long run.
I agreed
Can’t wait for Part 3
Wow!
I have a lot to say!
I am impressed, but more importantly I am satisfied.
"Simple is better!"
The moment I heard those words I knew I was in for a treat! It's true!
I watched part one again to refresh my memory and I've gotta say, it's even better than I remember. There are things I will nitpick but overall it's incredible!
First off. I love Hound. He is such an amazing and interesting character. I hated him in TLK and this rewrite made him my favourite.
In the actual movie, they hinted at the Autobots being more agitated than before, but it was never explored, while in this rewrite you put it right in the center focus which ups the stakes a lot more.
The action sounds more creative than in the actual movie and I'm sure it would look great on screen.
Also your voice acting has improved and the dialogue between the Decepticons keeps the style of Bay (slow talking Decepticons and threatening background music).
I have some nitpicks and questions though.
Why did you decide to use Six-Shot? I think he looks too complicated for a live-action movie seeing as he has six modes. Why not use another Combaticon?
Drift's arc kind of comes out of nowhere when you take into account his role in AOE (he wasn't conflicted about being a former Decepticon).
Also I think there is too little action. From Act I to the middle of Act II we barely have any action. I personally don't have a problem with this, but I don't think it will translate well on screen, as it will give the movie a slow pace. But I could be wrong, so take this with a grain of salt.
Overall fantastic work!
This rewrite gives the movie a feeling of urgency without beating you over the head with it. Every character is interesting and well developed, the story is tighter and more cohesive, the action feels a lot more creative and most of all, is engaging.
As I said with part one, you can have an incredible story, but if the movie doesn't hook you into it, then it failed to do it's job. This rewrite works!
Will it translate well to the big screen? Maybe, but most likely yes!
Can't wait for Act III
First off, six shot is an interesting character for me because using these different alt modes can make for some pretty interesting action in the final act. I might not use all of them, but I’m setting up certain plot points to potentially use them later. Will I use all of them, probably not. As for Drifts inner conflict. In the two movies his in, he’s not that interesting overall. But there is potential! He’s a triple changer, he’s a former decepticon, he has honor and respect for each of his team members. But Michael Bay does not know how to utilize those elements. He abandons half of those elements in the Last Knight. Giving Drift this inner conflict allows his character to become more interesting. Also, there will be, in my opinion, a great pay off for Drift in the final act. The same thing goes for Crosshairs, Ultra Magnus, Sideswipe, and Nemesis(Optimus) Prime. As far as the action goes I’m pushing towards the final act. You’ll see😉 Dude, thank you for the feedback on both of these episodes, I appreciate it and you so much. But at the end of the day, I’m just a young, half experienced filmmaker just trying to have some fun🙂 Thank you
Hound is the new Ironhide
@@linepenciloffice4007 Hound is more of his own character in this one, but I can see why you think that!
haha nice star wars rebels and vader's references at the end man. absolutely love the rewrite! cant wait for part 3.
You deserve to be in the writers room for the new tf trilogy. This is amazing! I've been watching the series so far, and I have to admit... This is so much better! This is a film that is worth my 10 bucks lol
Yes nice job man can’t wait for act 3!!!!!!
This wasn"t supposed to be the last film it was rebooted because thi film failed a lot at zhe box office, but this rewrie is amazing, way better than the original, keep it up ! Good work!
Patrik Vizvári the trailers presented the movie in that way. At least I remember it in that way.
Well even if the trailer presented it that way they anaunced 16 more movies, tlk just failed so much they had to reboot it🤣
But you version is way better. I would have prefered this in the cinema.(sorry if my english is bad btw. It's not my first language)
They announced a whole cinematic universe. But yes, expect the next part to tie off the series in a satisfying way!
@@nathanhills336 I'm sure it will be good
This rewriting story arc has a potential to be a 3 hours runtime such as Avengers: Endgame
Sometimes shorter is better.
Yes, I am aiming for a 2 hour and 30 minute runtime
@@_somestuff 2 hours and 30 mintues are the usual runtimes
@@nathanhills336 mostly
This is awesome
Super Robotnik thanks dude! I greatly appreciate it
Even though it makes sense to have Warpath, I would’ve replaced him with both Cliffjumper and Brawn, though despite their might they’re ultimately killed by Thundercracker. Cliffjumper would be the first to fall before Thundercracker was able to use flight and speed against Brawn, which would ultimately end in Brawn dying to the hands of Thundercracker, though this is where the ‘Con would seem to begin questioning his actions before transforming and flying off towards Megatron. Also, what’s the alt mode that you used for Sideswipe? It looks pretty interesting for an alt mode for Sideswipe.
Can’t wait till part 3. I love this
Me too
No matter which path what Nathan will write we just have to be patient and waited out
It is the right that Hound should be the one leading the Autobots
Awesome! Can't wait for part 3!
From blue to black I love it
Nemesis Prime
Sideswipe is Alive? And Ultra Magnus is Here and the Autobots that were with them are Dead (Prowl, Sunstreaker, Trailbreaker and others) Oh my god.
Not sure how you feel about it but yes! I’m working on part 3 as I type this! Hope you are looking forward to it.
@@nathanhills336 Looking forward to it
I would have love to see Bumblebee and Drift reconcile and make amends at Lockdown’s separate ship before it got shot by Galvatron’s Vehicons. Drift tells Bee about Knucklehead and Ratchet. Drift tells Bee that Ratchet’s death will not be in vain.
That would be better placed in a Age of Extinction rewrite.
@@nathanhills336 That makes sense.
@@nathanhills336you should do one where the stunticons replace The KSI troops and add warpath and mirage that way we can get more screen time for both; but it’s my opinion really and it’s fine if you don’t wanna
7:36 - 7:39 nice Transformers G1 movie reference!
Is this version of Transformers: The Last Knight rated R? Because I’m doing a Transformers: The Last Knight rewrite too! And mine will be rated R for language and violence and definitely earn it with tons of blood and Cade, Sqweeks, Cogman, and Viviane saying “F***” - Cade is the only character who will say it twice, but Viviane, Sqweeks, and Cogman will only say it once.
8:17 I actually love that Color Scheme! I would've gone with something like Dark Blue and Purple color scheme from the Chinese Transformers Online Game released a while after TLK, but I think Gray and red would do for now.
I love the color scheme as well. And the photos are just there for someone to easily visualize the story without thinking but you can definitely give a different look to any of the characters
@@nathanhills336 Since Transformers Online showed up, I've been in love with the Purple replacing the red (Except the slash mark on Prime's head) and the blue being dark. It actually made me think "why didn't they use this color scheme in the movie! It's just too badass!" Yet I fully understand how terrible the original movie was. But Lemme be honest here. if I had some sort of CGI or animation platform, I would've been able to make this into a flat-out movie. Using some soundtracks from Superultramegaa, PrimeProductions and more. And yes, I will indeed Give credit to your script if I was to make that into a flat-out movie. Keep up the amazing work BTW!
I think you should try to make that a reality dude! If you ever want to do that, be sure to tell me, I would love to watch it.
@@nathanhills336 Also, for the fight between the autobots and Nemesis prime, it would've at least been a great Idea to Add the last two minutes and Thirty-eight seconds of Ben Affleck's Batman Theme by Hans Zimmer just to show How much Evil Nemesis Prime Truly has in this re-write. He's basically the Darth Vader of this re-write. That music combined with the aggression, hatred, anger and Darkness of Nemesis Prime, would make him an Absolutely Badass and scary Villain.
There’s the final fight between Nemesis Prime and the Autobots in Act 3. With a special guest fighter towards the end.
Do more please!
swindle appeared in the tf1 but not as a combiner he was gonna appear in tf4 and tlk as a combiner (people thought the vw bus dreadbot turned into was gonna be swindle), breakdown appeared in the rotf also not a combiner, he was gonna appear in aoe as a combiner, motormaster was gonna appear in aoe as a combiner but was cut, before the aoe super bowl came out people thought the freightliner truck galvatron turned into aoe was gonna be either nemesis prime, ultra magnus (because of the blue lights), scourge (looking like rid 2001 version), or motormaster (there was concept art of motormaster turning into the freightliner truck galvatron turned into in aoe)
sunstreaker, ultra magnus, and blitwzing was gonna appear in tf4
when thundercracker's studio series toy came out it's said that thundercracker was gonna appear in dotm
cliffjumper was gonna appear in tf4 and tf5 but was cut
warpath was gonna appear in tf4 but was cut
mirage/dino is still alive
people thought after seeing aoe wheelie died because brains survived
sentinel prime killing ironhide is why ironhide couldn't appear in transformers prime
wheeljack/que's death was originally mirage/dino's death
So one question where are the dinobots?
There is really no need for them in this rewrite. If I were to put them into the whole movie, they would not gave much to do. They might have a cameo in act 3
@@nathanhills336 Maybe they like join in the end ? I just want a proper way to have the Dinobots in even if it's a cameo . The way TLK handled it was alright at first but then later on they just disappeared .
And lemme guess in this rewrite of yours they're still in hong kong?
you should do a tmnt 2014 rewrite
I’m not too big on Tmnt. I only do rewrites and re-edits on things I’m passionate about. Thanks for the suggestion though!
I kinda wish you added prowl and blaster to ultra Magnus and sideswipes group and maybe have warpath survived
Awesome rewrite so far! You have a lot of potential! I know someone who is right now in the works of making the first ever TF live action fan film. Lots of awesome TF fans are working on it around the globe.
It's going to be huge! If you are maybe interested in working on this project as well I could hook you up with the director of it. I am sure he'll be more than happy if you join seeing as you have so many great ideas! :)
Just write me if you are interested! ;)
Thank you dude, I appreciate it! That does sound interesting and I would love to talk with the director!
@@nathanhills336 Awesome! Just write him under the e-mail address: tfriseofunicron@gmail.com and he will surely respond! :)
@@thatrandomtechguy4385 does your friend have a TH-cam channel of his own? I would love to check it out!
@@nathanhills336 Sadly not personally, however two members of the team have one. There is also a FB Fanpage: m.facebook.com/pages/category/Movie/Transformers-Rise-of-Unicron-267106393475612/ for the movie already if that would help you. :)
However, I am sure that he’ll send you some materials from the movie if you ask him to see what it is all about!
Hey again! Just checking in to see if you have problems with contacting him, because he hasn't received an e-mail from you yet. Btw. he had a look at your rewrite series as well and absolutely loved it! ;)
what i disliked about dotm were sentinel prime betraying the autobots, along with killing ironhide, skids and mudflap, the autobots getting exiled, and wheeljack/que's death
what i disliked about aoe were drift being a triple changer, ratchet and leadfoot's deaths, and how all the aoe decepticons were created, also roadbuster is still alive, topspin appeared in tlk but had leadfoot's head and was called volleybot
how did crosshairs know about the deaths of jazz and ironhide, also jetfire, and the arcee sisters died in rotf, jolt died in the comics between rotf and dotm, wheeljack/que was also killed in dotm
It’s pretty safe to assume that the new arrivals such as Hound, Drift, and Crosshairs were informed of their deaths once they arrived on Earth.
@@nathanhills336 they were also informed about the deaths of jolt and wheeljack/que
@@harrishyatt6283 Yes. I feel as if they should be debriefed on what had happened in their absence, especially when it comes to the losses they have suffered.
Surviving autobots include sideswipe,arcee,chromia,mirage and a few others
Areee and Chromia have been dead since Revenge of the Fallen. But I was thinking beside our main group of Autobots, the audience can decide who is still living going off of the Bayverse timeline of course.
@@nathanhills336 i would disargee the comics say otherwise and i did see chromia hide and arcee was shot just once,in the stomach at that.
It’s the kind of thing where they are shot and never seen again in the films. You have to forgive me because I never read the comics. Then again, the audience can make up there own minds who’s dead or not, depending on the Bayverse timeline.
At least Hound didn’t die
Epic
the aoe topps europle collector cards revealed sideswipe was killed
In this, it was Sunstreaker who died disguised as Sideswipe due to Sideswipe leaving Earth in secret shortly after the events of DOTM. It’s a big part of his arc in part 4 of the rewrite.
Oh, I get Bayverse's (Rewritten) Version of Six-Shot. XD
Is there a Bayverse six shot I don’t know about?
@@nathanhills336 No, I meant your version tho.
@@Jadinite-2006 ohh okay, I get ya! I’m actually writing some really cool stuff for him for part 4!
@@nathanhills336 That's good to know, and I enjoy the first 3 parts, can't wait for the finale soon. And speaking of Rewriting Transformers, have you seen Phoenix Studios Rewrites of Transformers 1, 2, & 3?
@@Jadinite-2006 That guy is great! I haven’t watched his rewrite for the 3rd one yet but I’ll get around to it. He’s one of my favorite creators when it comes to rewrites
Why kill warpath off 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
Yay Sideswipe Isn’t Dead.
Sideswipe is awesome!
@@nathanhills336 He Was My Favourite As A Kid. I’ve Been Enjoying Your Rewrite BTW, Haven’t Finished It But I Will Soon. It’s Partially Motivated Me To Make My Rewrite Of The Transformers Series But Keep Up The Good Work!
@@Thomas-zu1wq Awesome! Optimus Prime has been my personal favorite since I was 7 to the point that I have been practicing his voice since then. Surprisingly, I’m not finished with the rewrite, I have one more part to complete. I’ve been taking a break from it to focus on school and the re-edit of The Rise of Skywalker I’m doing. I’m so happy you’re enjoying it though and proud that I have been able to motivate you. You seem like a new viewer, I’m glad you’re here!
@@nathanhills336 Well Whenever You Have Time To Make It, School’s Important, Rise Of Skywalker............Eh
Yeah, The Rise of Skywalker is a film I’ve been waiting to re-edit for a while now. I’m creating new story, VFX, dialogue, character arcs, etc