good work, edit your work by reading backwards, not to be a nim nose but I caught gender changes on Zara He and She are very close together, the brain is lazy, It will slide past something just written, that is why reading backwards kicks it in the rump and makes it take a closer rump. Keep it up
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good work, edit your work by reading backwards, not to be a nim nose but I caught gender changes on Zara He and She are very close together, the brain is lazy, It will slide past something just written, that is why reading backwards kicks it in the rump and makes it take a closer rump. Keep it up