THIS Common App Essay Got Her Into Every School She Applied To!!!

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 21 ธ.ค. 2024

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  • @elevatedschool
    @elevatedschool  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    In total, our team has edited more than 7000+ college essays and helped hundreds of seniors from around the world gain more than 600+ acceptances to top 20 schools. If you’d like your college essays professionally edited, we’d be honored to help!
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    • @kiritokazuto1434
      @kiritokazuto1434 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      How could I submit my essay so you could review it?

  • @gedeonbelayneh1328
    @gedeonbelayneh1328 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +49

    Hey, I visited your website and saw your pricing for professional review of one’s essay. I wish I could afford any of that but given that 1$ is now equivalent to 117 Ethiopian Birr: there is no way neither I nor my family can afford it. If you are giving away free edits, please take me into account. Much love and respect Kevin.

    • @flourish1
      @flourish1 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Email them! I think I remember them talking about equity for students who can’t afford it. Also check out college essay guys matchlighters program.

    • @bloop809
      @bloop809 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      Same here really 😭 I cant afford it cuz $1= LKR 300 and thts a lot in my country

    • @judykhaledmostafa6001
      @judykhaledmostafa6001 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Same here!

    • @MohammadaminYarahmadi-v1u
      @MohammadaminYarahmadi-v1u 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      Same here! I am from Iran and 1$ is equal to 600000 IRR now and my country is faced with massive inflation and we have by far the lowest valued currency in the world. Please help me!

    • @orissigra
      @orissigra 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      ​@@MohammadaminYarahmadi-v1u Hope ur doing well

  • @Edits.Editing
    @Edits.Editing 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I’ve been watching your videos a lot! They helped me so much to plan out my Highschool years, thank you so much!!!

  • @Pluviophile-x5x
    @Pluviophile-x5x 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    "My dear virtual little siblings" is a phrase we can hear only from your videos 🌟

  • @Vence.
    @Vence. 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Would love a video on transfer admissions/transfer essay writing. Especially when an application has both a why transfer personal statement and why us supplement

  • @JanaAbuelem
    @JanaAbuelem 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I love this positive energy!

  • @pastry.024
    @pastry.024 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Hey can you tell me what kind of honors I should have, because I only have school and regional ones. What should I do to increase my reach?

  • @xyxyxyxcollegeapps
    @xyxyxyxcollegeapps 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    hey! just a question which topic seems like a better topic for my common app, 1-being the organising committee (volunteer) head for my school's model UN. I have a lot of scenarios to involve and how it impacted others in those 3 days of conference.( i can also involve me being house captain in my school)
    2- my passion for fashion and how my class i and hosted a bake and make sale making rakhis( indian thing) and donated the money we raised etc.. talking ab my passion and me leading this as well as what i took away from it.
    Also looking forward to sign up for ur essay reviewing once the topic is decided lol im just indecisive right now.I would love some advice on which seems better

    • @xyxyxyxcollegeapps
      @xyxyxyxcollegeapps 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      hey would love a reply before i submit my essay for ur review.

    • @mayuhmetal
      @mayuhmetal หลายเดือนก่อน

      number 2 seems more unique!

  • @jacquelinebecker9131
    @jacquelinebecker9131 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Agree 100% with your critique those two paragraphs were trite and fake.

  • @solaryikes4360
    @solaryikes4360 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Great video, as always, and energy provided.
    Quick question: Are we allowed to create a fictional story for our college essay?

  • @BPrashantMehto
    @BPrashantMehto 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Should I apply to multiple EA or REA? Does it affect my application and colleges know if i applied to multiple schools?

  • @mukhammadjumaboev8577
    @mukhammadjumaboev8577 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Is the “Write Your Way Into College” by Jeffrey Yu ‘23 still available?

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yes! Visit our linktree!

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      linktr.ee/elevatedschool

  • @randomperson1626
    @randomperson1626 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Please make a video about how to get into WashU!

  • @EmmanuelleDIBY
    @EmmanuelleDIBY 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hey Kev I need your help. I know you do it to earn more money but I really can't afford my dad is not willing to pay and it's really overwhelming to go trough university application as an international student. I hope u understand it and would help me thank you ❤

  • @saltinecrackers8762
    @saltinecrackers8762 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    KEVIN! HELP A FELLOW RESTAURANT KID OUT!
    Is writing about my experience at the restaurant too common? If so, any ideas? I'm in dire need of your help.

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      It can totally work! Just really try to consider what is unique/different about you working in this particular restaurant since many other kids will write about a similar experience. For instance, my friend who also got into Yale wrote about working in her Chinese restaurant but focused on entrepreneurship and talked about all the change she made to the menu, pricing, etc. to improve her family's business!

    • @saltinecrackers8762
      @saltinecrackers8762 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@elevatedschool Thank you so much Kevin! Keep up the good content!

  • @MiriamLevenson
    @MiriamLevenson 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    i just found out one of you went to ezra stiles--you def know my dad lol!

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      yes I do! Tell Marc I said hi!!