Is The Tuba Hiding?

After publishing my old music composition of Where is the Tuba I decided I would try and see how I could improve the piece and my understanding of other instruments.
Try the interactive tutorial, or download the Sheet music here: musescore.com/user/55104753/s...

[@minemaster3157]

This is a pretty well written score, I see you fixed the weird notation that was present in your previous composition. I think the way you used dynamics really helped to give the piece more suspense up until the climax which felt like it should be in the action scene of a movie. Sounds good!

[@wywyman7338]

Now this is good

[@minemaster3157]

I would recommend getting rid of the rests at the beginning and instead having a pickup note