Technical Writing Examples to Inspire You

[@Curleymctell]

12:51 mark
Wordy: The payment to which a subcontractor is entitled should be made promptly so that in the event of a subsequent contractual dispute(,) we([,] not needed) as general contractors, may not be held in default of our contract by virtue of nonpayment. (39 words)
Concise: Pay subordinates promptly. Then, if a contractual dispute occurs, we cannot be held in default of our contract because of nonpayment. (20 words)
Asperger's: Nonpayment contractual default preempted by prompt payment. (7 words) Feel free to add the words 'during dispute' between default and preempted. (9 words max)
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[@ALCRAN2010]

Prompt payment to subcontractors upholds the general contractor's contractual obligations in any dispute. (13)

[@The12thSeahorse]

Nothing is more powerful and satisfying then the mastery of technical writing ✍️.

[@erichoffman9140]

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[@marcodeleon7047]

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[@williamrowley9198]

Quick correction: Elsevier is the publisher of the journal article you discuss. The name of the journal is in the upper left of the document: The Journal of Environmental Sciences (JES).

[@tomostojanovic1172]

great info. Leonardo's last name is pronounced similar to da vinchi

[@BoringStreamer]

vid starts at 6:28

[@engrazam00]

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[@khantechacademy4871]

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[@innocentemmanuel7351]

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[@paulolatunji5278]

thank you