2 simple paraphrasing tricks - how to paraphrase ielts writing task 2
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In this video, I will show you 2 simple tricks ANYONE can use to write a band 7 IELTS introduction paragraph. These 2 tricks helped me get a Band 7 in my real test. They are super easy to use. You can master them as well.
I will use the writing task 2 questions below to show you what these 2 tricks are and how to use them.
1. Since most information about culture and history can be found on the Internet, museums are not needed anymore. Do you agree or disagree?
2. Some people think that children should be punished if they commit a crime. Other people believe that their parents are the ones that should be punished. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
"Around the world there has been increasing cultural similarities in recent times than ever before, this may be because the world is becoming more receptive to different cultures and beliefs. In my opinion this is a positive development"
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Children facing academic, social and commercial pressures. Causes and solutions
-some academic, social and commercial activities that make children feel pressure. There are some reasons why this is happening and steps to tackle them
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In recent times, there is been a resemblance in cultures from different parts of the world.I believe this is due to advent of technologies and increase in world tourism .
It is a positive trend which would help to maintain good relationships.
There are so many similarities can be found all over the world than ever before. I think traveling is the main reason is for this and in this essay i will come up with evidence to support why this is a positive trend.
Hi, you forgot to mention "culture" in your first sentence. Also, you need to add "that": ... *that* can be found...
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The akin between the cultures around the society is increasing than ever before. it is a positive development as it promote peace in the society
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There is a tendency around the world to have similarities with each other. This essay might discuss some reasons about the change and why is a positive movement to the earth.
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Cultures around the world seem to become more familiar than ever before.As people travel more and more parts of the world , they get to experience about the cultural aspects of countries all over the globe. It is certainly a positive attitude since people gain more knowledge and can respect each other's religion.
Hi, "familiar" doesn't mean the same as "similar". Try "alike'.
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It is irrefutable that these days , cultures are similar and it can be seen more common among people everwhere.This is happening for many reasons , mainly people are curious and have an interest to explore them.However,i strongly believe that seeking abd practising new culture would give a way to unite people.
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Compared to the past, there are now increasing similarities among cultures in different parts of the world.
Hi, there are no errors but 'compared to' may be better than 'compared with' in this context: books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=compared+to+the+past%2Ccompared+with+the+past%2C&year_start=1800&year_end=2019&corpus=en-2019&smoothing=3
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@@LilieIELTS By the way, I have read somewhere that 'compared to' is used for dissimilar things while 'compared with' is used for similar things. Wishing you infinite success in your endeavors!
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The similarities between the cultures around the world is growing more than ever before. The possible reason could be the inclination towards adopting a different culture. To my of thinking, it is a positive change.
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In recent years, there has been ever increasing cultural similarities among countries relative to the past. This is probably due to the fact that people are more receptive to other cultures’ values and traditions. I hold the view that it is a good development as it will unite the world to form a more meaningful bonding.
You did a good job in terms of paraphrasing. Just delete 'relative to the past'.
Worldwide cultural activities have become almost the same than it is in the past. I personally believe this is a great change as it will bring more development and cooperation between nations.
It is true that there is a growing number of culture in many countries' have been becoming show more similarity than ever before. I personally agree with these due to people are getting more attractive to others culture .
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There are many similarities with cultures around the world. This is happening because of the increase in migration that causes a mixture of traditions.
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It is universally accepted that the culture seems familiar in all nation nowdays .I strongly believe that it is positive change for the development
Around the globe, there are more similarities in cultural beliefs than ever before. Maybe one of the reasons is that, because of the technologies, for example, social media, we can easily adopt the cultures of other countries by watching them online. I think this is a positive development because we can transmit cultural ideas in just a few minutes of our time.
In the contemporary era,cultural similarities is widely seen in most countries of the world.The reason behind this event has several positive and negatives.This will be explained in further paragraphs
There is cultural similarity around the globe than in the past.
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Cultures worldwide are increasingly becoming more alike than they have ever been in the past. What's going on? What is your opinion on whether this is a good or bad change?
Around the the world, cultures has now becomed more similar than it was before. Thank you for this video.
... have now become...
Has now become...Not becomed? Am I correct?
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In these world cultures have now become more similar than it was long ago
Cultures across the globe starting to look a like which wasn't a case. What is the reason? Do you think whether it is good or bad thing? Can we say it like that?
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A huge similarities are observed in terms of culture globally due to people studying aboard or go for a trip and programs like cultural exchange shows
It is often argued that museums are not required to acquire historical as well as cultural Information as masses can get easily via internet .Co vessels,I opine that unlike places online information is way much better and I will articulate notions in forthcoming paragraphs
There are many cultures around the globe which has now become homogeneous compared to before. In my view, it's a great way of positive growth in people's thoughts.
It is certainly true that world wide there are a number of similarities with regard to culture now than ever before.
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Nowadays technology made a lot easier too access over the pictures of historical and cultural sites. While, deu to high cost and difficulty to get tickets museum is losing its popularity. I partially agree with this statement and provide my own relevant example.
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Nowadays we can observe the similarities between the cultural believes around the world, which has never seen in past eras. According to my opinion it due to influence of social media and other platforms which has helped traditons to reach to everyone and it is a huge positive for humanity.
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There have been more similarities than ever before in terms of cultres across the globe. I believe that this is a positive advancement
It's better to be concise. How about: globally, there have been more cultural similarities than ever before?
Presently the cultural of around the world are becoming now more familiar than the before!!
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Try this: cultures around the world are becoming more alike now than ever before.
In recent years, there have been more similarities increasing between cultures all around the globe than ever in the past.
In my opinion, it is completely a positive development, and its reasons will be articulated in upcoming paragraphs along with the conclusion.
In recent years, there have been more similarities among cultures around the globe than ever before.
In recent years, there are similarities among cultures worldwide than has ever been. Reasons for this will be discussed alongside my opinion on whether it's a good practice or not.
Hi, you forgot the words "more" and "there": There are MORE similarities among cultures worldwide than THERE have ever been.
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Compared to the past, there are more and more similarities between the worldwide cultures. This may be due to the growths of tourism and the internet. I believe this is a positive sign since it strengthen the bonds between people.
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Cultural similarities are becoming more evidently observed around the globe than they were before.
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It is believed that the world cultures share more similarities than they used to be because of the growing of the Internet. I think this wide spread phenomenon would benefit intercultural working environment.
It can be seen that similar culture becoming more common in many counties than before.
... similar cultureS ARE becoming ...
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Since from the last nowadays trends are in all around the world are becoming more common. In this essay we will discuss about the common culture and the environment of the world.
there is much similarities between cultures over the world than before
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There *are increasing similarities among* cultures...
Is my approach an acceptable way of paraphrasing the statement given in the video ?
Similarity of cultures around nations are increasing rapidly.
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Nowadays, worldwide similarity between different cultures is increasing. Globalization and rise of internet are most plausible reasons behind this prevailing phenomenon. However, in my perception it has negative consequences,in terms of loss of culture and traditions.
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Around the world there are cultures similar to the other cultrical . Do you supposes positive or negative development?
In recent years, cultural similarities have been increasing in various countries. It is in my opinion that this is a positive development because people are beginning to accept different cultures in their regions.
Hi, "various countries" don't mean the same as "around the world". You don't need to change every single word. If you're not sure how to rewrite a phrase, it's okay to use the original wording.
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Local cultures surrounding us become more globalized and more synchronized with foreign cultures than past. is it better?
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Compared with the past time, there are more similarities in cultures around the world.
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compared with the past (not 'the past time').......among cultures (not 'in'.....)
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It is believed that culture around the globe are becoming more alike than ever before the question is, is it positive or negative development.
It has recently been observed that there is a similarity of cultures across the globe.I believe fast modes of travel and internet are the two predominant factors behind the cultural homogeneity and certainly it is a negative development as it will adversely affect the tourism and economy of many nations.
There hve been observed an extensive alikeness among various cultures around the earth recently. (and then further info related to question). Is my answer fine?
There is no denying the fact that there is a significant growing in the similarties among the cultures around the world. While it is commonly held belif that it is a negative trend, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider it as an unhelpful trend that may lead to negative consequenses.
It is said that Cultures among the globe are becoming same than ever before, in my point of view this is positive development because similar cultures lead to world connected with each other and people understanding norms well if they will go to foreign countries.
... are becoming MORE ALIKE than....
Cultural understanding around the globe are showing vast similarities now a days ,to my view bonding with different culture can lead to better outcome in our society
Cultures of countries around the world are sharing more similarities than ever before.
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Cultures around the world are...
Thanks for sharing, kindly help me assess my paraphrasing to the question at d end of the video.
Cultural activities globally, now have the same things in common than in the past.
Is this good?
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Hi, try this: cultures globally have more similarities now than in the past.
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In the contemporary era, people are being habitual to adopt numerous culture than the past. This positive aspect show the similarity in culture of different countries which help to maintain good bonding between develop and development countries.
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more and more similarity among the cultures throughout the world are occuring.In this essay i will discuss the reason of it and its relevance.
At around of us, similarity in cluture is increasing globally.This improvement does not seen before.Dut to globalisation it may cause of this similarity,In my opinion this thaught will define as a bright future ahead.
Cultural similarities are increasing globally.
There is a growing similarities among diverse cultural values across countries
It is highly witnessed that more similarity is being found in cultural context throughout the world than in the past. I personally opine this trend as a positive development and the prominent reason behind it may be considered advancement in technology.
Hi, your grammar is good. But by using 'cultural context', you changed the meaning of the original sentence. Also, similariTIES.
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Hi, miss lilie. This is my example please correct me if its check or not: In recent years, there are increasing of cultural similarities around the world than it is before. Thank you☺️
Hi, if you want to use "than", you need to add "more": there are increasingly MORE cultural similarities around the world THAN THERE WERE before.
There should be an incline alike culture around the earth which was not found previously. Is it correct?
I'm afraid that your paraphrase doesn't work.
@@LilieIELTS It can be argued that cultures around the world are seemed to be more alike than in the past.
in the contemporary era, the cultural activitis are being alike between the countries from different part of world.
There is a change in culture which become much more similar around the world.
Nowadays, it is common to witness that similarities between variety of cultures are only increasing. In my opinion, benefits of this process conterbalance the negative sides and in this essay I will explain why.
Nowadays, it is common to witness that similarities among world cultures are increasing. (I don't think "it is common to witness" is necessary.)
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There is a similarity of cultures across the world which has become highly common than ever before.
Someone tell me if that's correct
Recently, there be similarities in cultural activities around the globe. This era of technology, such as internet contributes to the cultural diversity, am in support of the positivity that this has brought, by creating a bond between developed and undeveloped country.
Recently, there have been more cultural similarities around the globe.
Cultural activities are mostly same alover the gloabal, when compare with past.
Shall i write this way
In recent years, cultural have been changing around the world. The reason behind is that people follow there tradition. According to my view there is caused by positive growth.
Hi Lilie, could I paraphrase as below?
It is believed that cultural differences around the world are becoming smaller compared with the past.
Compared to.....
Nowadays people are following similar culture throughout the world.what may be the cause?whether this change is causing positive or negative impact?
Similarities between cultures of the world are increasing than ever before.
Globalization could be the main reason behind this trend since it is the key factor at minimizing the distance between countries. In my opinion, i think it is a positive development because it could bring unity within the people around the globe.
To use "than", you need to add "more". There are increasingly MORE similarities among world cultures THAN ever before.
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Which accient is this?
Today there is a huge similarity between countries and it is more developing compare to the past!❤
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There are more similarities among world cultures today compared to the past.
There will be increasing more similarities among cultures in the future all over the world than past
We can pharaphase like using in the future?
A mixture of cultures is becoming a phenomenon nowadays. One reason is due to migration which I believe will have a positive impact on everybody.
It is currently still becoming more common in cultural stereotypes comparing to previous one.
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Some people believe that cultural similarities have significantly increased from the past. This can be due to the increased usage of social media and rising interests in film industry.
There is a belief that cultural activities are trending to be the same than before. I think this development is occurring because people are imitating other cultures.
In modern times, there are increasing similarities among cultures in the different parts of the world. This phenomenon is attributed to the advent of advanced technologies and the rise in global tourism. I believe that this trend is positive as it fosters relationships and facilitates the acquisition of knowledge
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Cultural Throughout a word are becoming more hassling do you think it is good or bad expansion?
Try this: world cultures are becoming more alike.
In recent years , there are so many similarities in cultural activities throughout the world. In my personal view this consequences creating good relationship among the people world wide.
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Hi, 'so many' and 'cultural activities' are not accurate paraphrases. There are INCREASING/MORE AND MORE similarities AMONG WORLD CULTURES. Hope it helps.