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  • @AzriRi-ll8jx
    @AzriRi-ll8jx 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +44

    She's not telling you the synonyms. She's just pointing out alternatives. These are sentence connectors and even if some are synonymous and some are not, you can still use them interchangeably. That's the purpose of teaching sentence connectors. It helps you upgrade your ordinary vocabulary for sentence connectors and replace them with better ones.

    • @Caterpillar_1q
      @Caterpillar_1q 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Yess

    • @NotnoobsterX
      @NotnoobsterX 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

      It is obvious she is not saying the synonyms or antonyms

  • @Catofborealvalley
    @Catofborealvalley ปีที่แล้ว +1690

    “In my opinion, therefore I am!” - Descartes

  • @GenjiSlasher
    @GenjiSlasher 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +293

    Moreover: "In addition, it is worth noting that...".
    Nevertheless: "Notwithstanding" or "In spite of that".
    In my opinion: "Based on my personal perspective" or "From my vantage point".
    Therefore: "Henceforth, "As a result" or "In consequence".
    In addition: "On top of that"
    However: "Nonetheless"
    Plzzz like this took me ages 😭😭😭

    • @SaradhaSaradha-gg7rn
      @SaradhaSaradha-gg7rn 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ❤❤❤❤❤❤

    • @orangeleaf36
      @orangeleaf36 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      dang i've been switching nonetheless and nevertheless

    • @beingme5158
      @beingme5158 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Awesome

    • @jacktreloar8284
      @jacktreloar8284 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I don’t think on top of that is a very good switch. It works, but it loses the affect as it switches to colloquialism. Henceforth is also a bit here and there, not really a synonym, similar enough to make sense, but not similar enough to be considered a synonym from my point of view.

    • @mrsmurferson384
      @mrsmurferson384 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Likes me come back later

  • @mysterygirl2881
    @mysterygirl2881 ปีที่แล้ว +440

    "Also" and "moreover" are not synonyms. "As well" is a better equivalent for "also".

    • @shahedsosuke
      @shahedsosuke ปีที่แล้ว +48

      But Moreover is more formal than as well in an essay

    • @pras10_acoustician85
      @pras10_acoustician85 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      No actually that's not right. Also and moreover are correct, for "too", "as well" should be used

    • @muskanpathan4219
      @muskanpathan4219 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Yes In my opinion “Moreover” is match with “in addition"

    • @mysterygirl2881
      @mysterygirl2881 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@muskanpathan4219 I was thinking the same, but I did not know how to explain it.

    • @muskanpathan4219
      @muskanpathan4219 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@mysterygirl2881 ❤️🤝

  • @serbianwarrior4876
    @serbianwarrior4876 ปีที่แล้ว +53

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    • @Tenzinforeal
      @Tenzinforeal ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Bruh!💀

    • @MadinaNematjonova-of4lk
      @MadinaNematjonova-of4lk 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Where are you from

    • @oc1anking956
      @oc1anking956 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      In my opinion, in no meaning of offense, it is unlikely that this person has taught you everything you need for IGCSE English. Moreover, I do not see how this has taught you university-level english.
      I TRIED TO USE THE WORDS OK?

  • @CalicoAura
    @CalicoAura หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I’ve been taught to try not to say “I think” or “in my opinion” writing an essay. If the point of an essay is to convince something, it’s a term that tends to take away from how confident you sound, and weakens the overall claim. Usually you can just state something like a fact, even if it is an opinion. Give it some explanation and your good, improves the overall tone.
    Yes, “In my opinion” can be a good alternative to “I think,” but just keep in mind that a third, and often clearer alternative is just removing it entirely ;)

  • @mufflescat
    @mufflescat ปีที่แล้ว +47

    Writing an essay can be a daunting task, especially if it's something that is long and complex. It requires a lot of research and organization in order to pull off a successful and effective piece. There are several steps one must take in order to write a successful essay. The first step is to conduct thorough research on the topic at hand. This means gathering various sources and perspectives that relate to the topic and delving into them to gain a more comprehensive understanding of it. Secondly, creating an outline for the essay is essential to ensure you stay on track and keep your focus sharp throughout the writing process. The outline should include the main points that will be discussed as well as any supporting evidence or arguments that will be used to back these points up. Additionally, it's important to use proper grammar and syntax in order to make the essay clear and concise. Lastly, it's important to proofread and edit the essay once it is complete to ensure that all the points are articulated properly. This can involve rewriting sentences, adding additional information, or removing irrelevant elements. Writing an essay is not a simple task, but it can be accomplished with precision and care. With the right steps and processes in place, anyone can effectively craft a comprehensive and well-thought-out essay.

    • @kloud11
      @kloud11 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      Doesn’t seem like writing this essay of a comment was very daunting

    • @mufflescat
      @mufflescat ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@kloud11 LOL

    • @osamabinballin5369
      @osamabinballin5369 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Chatgpt

    • @ahmedessa1364
      @ahmedessa1364 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You should follow this advice instead of pulling the essay from an AI-generated source

    • @Rabia.Fatima
      @Rabia.Fatima ปีที่แล้ว

      I think you're a literature teacher or student 😅😊

  • @adityamishra6931
    @adityamishra6931 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    That's some really good advice from you !
    I appreciate that✍🏻🙏🏻
    Keep going 👊🏻!

  • @harshalpatil8693
    @harshalpatil8693 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    In my opinion I want to go school now 😅

  • @alex2245
    @alex2245 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Moreover is equivalent to 'besides'
    , not to 'also'. This latter is synonim of 'as well'.

  • @marilu8763
    @marilu8763 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    More shorts like this please 🥺❤️❤️

  • @Oil_Yummers
    @Oil_Yummers ปีที่แล้ว

    "Moaore, Nevedeless, In my opinion, Dearfour, In additieen, and Howewear"
    No disrespect btw your voice does sound nice, so keep it up

  • @mondayconfidence700
    @mondayconfidence700 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Thanks for making me acquiring more knowledge.
    Am greatfull ❤🙏.

  • @Wind2000channel
    @Wind2000channel หลายเดือนก่อน

    It's even easier to change spelling and phonetics

  • @cottonclouds5514
    @cottonclouds5514 2 ปีที่แล้ว +845

    I agree, but the words "and" and "but" should occasionally be used in the middle of a sentence, since they're common words. Otherwise the essay will have too many long words and that will just make it worse.

    • @cndkfotxihebfiejgf
      @cndkfotxihebfiejgf ปีที่แล้ว +44

      Instead of using many ‘ands’ or commas in a sentence, I would a semi colon because it is similar to and

    • @AL-fi2us
      @AL-fi2us ปีที่แล้ว +18

      ​​@@cndkfotxihebfiejgf yeah after using 'and' twice I would also use semicolon to keep the sentences together.

    • @allinonevideosforyou
      @allinonevideosforyou ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @rosalynodame2109
      @rosalynodame2109 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      I think she's trying to tell us how to use them at the beginning of a paragraph

    • @atiyarafi8206
      @atiyarafi8206 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      That’s what I wanted to tell too
      Create new method to disturbance

  • @pmamunc
    @pmamunc ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Amazing handwriting 😮

  • @LisaS1
    @LisaS1 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Great video! Thanks!

    • @LKLogic
      @LKLogic  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      You're welcome!

  • @izzybizzyluvs
    @izzybizzyluvs 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    ok, even when i was in 5th grade my teacher said NEVER use "in my opinion" on opinion essays bc your trying to get them to do something, it's not just you listing your opinion

  • @precioushamilton1310
    @precioushamilton1310 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Wow that's awesome 👍❤🎉

  • @riffatshahzad8776
    @riffatshahzad8776 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    So beautiful 😍 explanation

  • @JointedStudios
    @JointedStudios 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    "In my opinion, something is behind me."

  • @drarvi4
    @drarvi4 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    When you need to write a 1000 word essay and you only have 943

  • @athirav4496
    @athirav4496 2 ปีที่แล้ว +157

    Also - moreover
    Anyway - nevertheless
    And - in addition
    But- however

    • @YourRich-Friend
      @YourRich-Friend ปีที่แล้ว +24

      Beautiful - the person reading this

  • @WhatTheactualf-wy7fr
    @WhatTheactualf-wy7fr 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Yeah!!!! Now I can drive a porsche!!!

  • @arjumandvillagelife
    @arjumandvillagelife ปีที่แล้ว

    Helpful😍😍❤❤❤
    Love ❤ from Gilgit Baltistsn

  • @TezemayFn
    @TezemayFn 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    ✔️ and
    X in addition

  • @ClaxyDaxy899
    @ClaxyDaxy899 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    WE MAKING IT OUT OF 2ND GRADE 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥

  • @Lineman8595
    @Lineman8595 หลายเดือนก่อน

    As a writer, this can actually help you out a lot.

  • @shalev441
    @shalev441 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    In my humble opinion>>>

  • @CalebBourigault
    @CalebBourigault 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    "I think thats wood"
    "In my opinion thats wood"
    Two completely different things💀

  • @Ambarrabma
    @Ambarrabma 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Fish in addition chips is one of my favourite meals. therefore cool. Nevertheless the last time I had fish in addition chips was moreover more than a year ago.

  • @nickihanson914
    @nickihanson914 ปีที่แล้ว

    That's a good idea to use an essay with the full sentences about what does it mean for us. I guess I should say "Moreover, I was officially informed that I would be entitled to." Or even say "However, I am sure that you understand the circumstances of being an emotional shock to leave the message." "Nevertheless it is my sincerely to request for your kind assistance to be considered as the candidate for this role." "In my opinion, you should be able to stay with your own family or friends with you." "In addition, I am satisfied that you will remain on your side for the good times of your journey." "Therefore, I sentence you in life imprisonment. These sentences are running currently." (Depends on what numbers of days, months or years in prison) I can use the sentences to use this correctly, especially as an English lesson. Thank you for taking the time with me.

  • @shellysaini-wr7tr
    @shellysaini-wr7tr 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I appreciate you 😊😊

  • @simpleTheGuy
    @simpleTheGuy ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank You miss, you help me strengthen my vocabulary. I'm a foreigner.

    • @nixie8275
      @nixie8275 ปีที่แล้ว

      Moreover --> Furthermore
      Nevertheless --> Regardless
      In my opinion --> I believe
      Therefore --> Consequently
      In addition --> Plus (its a formal word)
      However --> Albeit

  • @pilaram573
    @pilaram573 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hey i like that ,moreover in my opinion english is already tough for me therefore i m unable to use these words in my sentences 😅😅 however keep growing up in addition thank you.😊😊

  • @Lovexoxo1
    @Lovexoxo1 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    "I think there is a cat over there."
    Nope
    "In my opinion there is a cat over there." 💀💀

  • @dreamyvibes-nv8xm
    @dreamyvibes-nv8xm ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Also = Moreover
    Anyway = Nevertheless
    I think = In my opinion
    So = Therefore
    And = In addition
    But = However

  • @GoDxSUPERxEDIT
    @GoDxSUPERxEDIT 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Tips for essay ❌ Tips for hard ✔️

    • @NathanacAdemicConsultant
      @NathanacAdemicConsultant 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your essay. Can we connect?

    • @NathanacAdemicConsultant
      @NathanacAdemicConsultant 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your essay. Can we connect?

  • @Saidaxadxon
    @Saidaxadxon 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    That gives almost the same meaning in Essays that wouldn't rise your school unless you can explain your ideas clearly in essays

  • @julitacaparas4223
    @julitacaparas4223 2 ปีที่แล้ว +140

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  • @mehedihasrifat
    @mehedihasrifat 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Also = Moreover
    Anyway = Nevertheless
    And = In addition
    But = However

  • @QnotK
    @QnotK ปีที่แล้ว

    I've read a lot of band 9 sample essays and these simple words were used. Your words should suit ur context, that's the point

  • @ananyadutta1154
    @ananyadutta1154 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I think your calligraphy is beautiful.

    • @LKLogic
      @LKLogic  ปีที่แล้ว

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    • @isshia
      @isshia ปีที่แล้ว

      That's what I noticed as well 😊

  • @Alejandroso31
    @Alejandroso31 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    I love how everyone is complaining in the comments when the vídeo literally says "Tips for essay"
    Y'know, those texts that need to be formal

  • @qbert8695
    @qbert8695 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Despite -> Whatsoever

  • @iqbalimrit7612
    @iqbalimrit7612 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very nice. Thank you for sharing this

  • @CourtneyDaniels-r5n
    @CourtneyDaniels-r5n 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Different way to say it.... smart 👊🧑‍🎓👍👍

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    @didyouknow5523 ปีที่แล้ว +1

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      @sehaj-x2v ปีที่แล้ว +2

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    • @_.Elizabeth._125
      @_.Elizabeth._125 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      there is now though

  • @EnglishSmartLearningResources
    @EnglishSmartLearningResources 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

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    @Era-b5f 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

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  • @namdorichannel
    @namdorichannel ปีที่แล้ว

    You and i,
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  • @amigo2762
    @amigo2762 ปีที่แล้ว

    Also - Moreover
    Anyway - Nevertheless
    I think - In my opinion
    So - Therefore
    And - In addition
    But - However

  • @deborahgayu6363
    @deborahgayu6363 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

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  • @EmransEnglishAcademy
    @EmransEnglishAcademy 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

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  • @reyplata7119
    @reyplata7119 2 ปีที่แล้ว +67

    Informative.👍

    • @nicdrew101
      @nicdrew101 ปีที่แล้ว

      informative - lots of information 😂

  • @Jonny-cg7wz
    @Jonny-cg7wz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

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  • @Fadli9000
    @Fadli9000 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love that pen

  • @adepunaresh7671
    @adepunaresh7671 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Also=moreover
    Anyway=nevertheless
    I think =My opinion
    So=therefore
    And = in addition
    But =However

  • @TeguhNoorZaman-uc1xs
    @TeguhNoorZaman-uc1xs ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @JoyfulSaturnPlanet-ok3si
    @JoyfulSaturnPlanet-ok3si 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

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    @Aspirant_hub24 ปีที่แล้ว

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      @nixie8275 ปีที่แล้ว

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    @vijithviju3390 ปีที่แล้ว

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    @BestCola-g9c ปีที่แล้ว

    Good job girl. I learnt something new

  • @Average_pz_player
    @Average_pz_player 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thanks I can do my essay now!

  • @bashirsab4482
    @bashirsab4482 ปีที่แล้ว +3

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  • @Viodapeo
    @Viodapeo 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Yes, I think so, but I want to eat and also drink because I think I am hungry and thirsty. ❌
    Yes, in my opinion therefore, however I want to eat in addition moreover drink because in my opinion I am hungry in addition thirsty. ✔️

  • @prabhaschandrabagdi1651
    @prabhaschandrabagdi1651 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Nevertheless = Inspite of
    Anyway= However
    Is it right ma'am ?
    Please reply

    • @omniafadol1199
      @omniafadol1199 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      However means but too🤡✔️

    • @Shrek_spear
      @Shrek_spear ปีที่แล้ว

      Anyway - changing the topic do discuss something else
      However - describing something extra or some extra info about something

  • @angeltamanna9077
    @angeltamanna9077 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thx sister I learn new thing. keep it up sister 😃

  • @rosalynodame2109
    @rosalynodame2109 ปีที่แล้ว

    Beautiful handwriting

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    @mamadykourouma8231 ปีที่แล้ว

    I like your video

  • @BaldwinFelio
    @BaldwinFelio 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    "I think" to "In my own perspective"

  • @FrictionHeat143
    @FrictionHeat143 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I have a banana. I moreover have grapes

  • @川添宮古
    @川添宮古 ปีที่แล้ว

    Also - moreover
    Anyway - nevertheless
    I think - in my opinion
    So - therefore
    And - in addition
    But - however

  • @Learnenglish002
    @Learnenglish002 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I am inviting all of you to learn English with me.😊

  • @SupremeUltimate
    @SupremeUltimate ปีที่แล้ว

    ❌️ Also, Moreover ✅️
    ❌️ Anyway, Nevertheless ✅️
    ❌️ I think, In my opinion ✅️
    ❌️ So, Therefore ✅️
    ❌️ And, In addition ✅️
    ❌️ But, However ✅️

  • @ดรุณีเตจ๊ะสา
    @ดรุณีเตจ๊ะสา ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks so much.

  • @abdulwasaalhakimi1915
    @abdulwasaalhakimi1915 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great content!
    Thanks a lot!

  • @SakshamSrivastava123
    @SakshamSrivastava123 ปีที่แล้ว

    If 'And' comes at the starting of the 'Sentence',then 'In addition' is fine. But if it is coming in the between of the sentence then 'and' is better.

  • @priyaldedhia1370
    @priyaldedhia1370 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks for the video

    • @LKLogic
      @LKLogic  ปีที่แล้ว

      ❤️

  • @kiritoyt_2223
    @kiritoyt_2223 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I love you therefore much:)

  • @neoomega9811
    @neoomega9811 ปีที่แล้ว

    I think - I believe that - I assume that - i suppose - from my outlook/perspective/viewpoint/opinion

  • @WantBadtime
    @WantBadtime 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thanks! I got a 94% on my college essay.

  • @Coral_pepe
    @Coral_pepe ปีที่แล้ว

    Luv ur voice ❤

  • @anujsharma6448
    @anujsharma6448 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Like : along the lines of
    About : In regards to
    Although: in spite of the fact that
    Now : At the present time
    For : for the purpose of
    Because: due to the fact that
    Many : A large percentage of
    Today : as of this date
    Except: with the exception of
    Conclusion: taking everything into account...

  • @paolobragantini2991
    @paolobragantini2991 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Useful!

  • @alik.al.1500
    @alik.al.1500 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Awesome 👌

    • @LKLogic
      @LKLogic  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thank you

  • @raularcella6856
    @raularcella6856 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thanks, that very useful!

  • @ayannamcclendon3049
    @ayannamcclendon3049 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you!🎉

  • @YassaAbdElshahed
    @YassaAbdElshahed ปีที่แล้ว

    Great!

  • @rachaellove8498
    @rachaellove8498 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    So true

  • @Rosalia26422
    @Rosalia26422 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great words 😊

  • @keertankohli9158
    @keertankohli9158 ปีที่แล้ว

    I think, you should show how to use them interchangeably by putting them into some sentences.

  • @martinpalacin719
    @martinpalacin719 ปีที่แล้ว

    A brillian contribution, thanks for this video!

  • @AndrewSdio-n5f
    @AndrewSdio-n5f ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you ma'am ❤❤😊

  • @LucyMbang
    @LucyMbang หลายเดือนก่อน

    I like this

  • @oniludeolajumoke5590
    @oniludeolajumoke5590 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank u ❤❤

  • @YarafFF
    @YarafFF ปีที่แล้ว

    Thats also to much useful for speaking

  • @angiekpop2607
    @angiekpop2607 ปีที่แล้ว

    I think everything else is fine except for “In my opinion” When I was in high school and took AP literature, it was engraved in my memory of the teacher in class telling everyone to never write “In my opinion” especially depending on the type of essay written that is evidence based, your opinion does not count. Everything else is fine though

    • @realsstudios8153
      @realsstudios8153 ปีที่แล้ว

      You can write it in letters and articles which are directed writings but not in narratives, descriptives or any other creative writings

  • @ดรุณีเตจ๊ะสา
    @ดรุณีเตจ๊ะสา 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I appreciate it.

  • @LoneScout-bq7dk
    @LoneScout-bq7dk 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Double plus good 👍