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"ALL THE GODS ARE DEAD - ACT TWO" - A WARHAMMER 40K HORROR STORY - MATURE AUDIENCES ONLY

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  • "All the Gods are Dead - Act Two - Legionarius"
    Written and Performed by A Vox in the Void
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    / @avoxinthevoid
    WARNING* This is not safe for work. It features a Grimdark setting full of violence and adult themes.
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    Solomon walks with the enemy on its march of pain in an ongoing bid for survival.
    Featuring the incredible music of Winterblood
    / winterblood78
    This is the first tale I have written for the channel so please be kind! It was a lot of fun and I look forward to concluding the story in the near future
    Vox
    #warhammerhorror
    #avoxinthevoid
    #slaanesh
    #horrorstories
    #warhammer40k

ความคิดเห็น • 229

  • @grunty144
    @grunty144 2 ปีที่แล้ว +203

    Oh man this is so good. When the guard showed up I could feel the shock and surprise and my mouth widened for a second! I know this is a grimdark story but I couldn't help but cheer on the guard in my head! But alas, you stay so true to the lore and there's little chance they'd ever win against a greater deamon, I can also see the changes now in solomon as his character develops, although I think I know where it's going, and it isn't towards the emperors light. Can't wait for the next part.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      That was the response I was hoping for! I'm glad it translated that way. Halfway through writing the third part now so you'll just have to wait and see where this tale goes 👍

    • @Angelof236
      @Angelof236 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      when the tiger striped sentinel blew up I lost all hope

    • @louditalian1962
      @louditalian1962 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      BS. The guard kill those filthy things all the time.

    • @jacobdarling1524
      @jacobdarling1524 ปีที่แล้ว

      There’s something very satisfying/cathartic about listening to the music of heretics getting purged by the Guard.

  • @ksrknwht300klls
    @ksrknwht300klls 2 ปีที่แล้ว +157

    I am now wondering how many like Solomon are "loyal" servants of the Emperor in the battalion

    • @spottedslash4256
      @spottedslash4256 2 ปีที่แล้ว +33

      Quite literally hiding in there armor. Those eye sockets in their helmets, windows to the Madness.

    • @xavis_dad
      @xavis_dad ปีที่แล้ว +13

      It's probably dudes like this who end up becoming high ranking Inquisitors. Dude is pretty resilient to the taint of the Warp. Slanesh anyway.

    • @Mikesulli90
      @Mikesulli90 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@xavis_dad considering it ends with him continuing to march with cultists after reminiscing about how pleasurable it felt to murder an imperial guardsman after taking the bait of a demon near the start of the first chapter, I don't think he's resistant to anything here.

  • @Saphintosh
    @Saphintosh 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    "This was no militia outfit... This... Was the Guard!" *Cheers and frenetically stumps the ground with lasgun's cross*

  • @PayYourTick
    @PayYourTick ปีที่แล้ว +83

    Honestly mate that battle is better written and narrated that likely any BL audiobook I’ve ever heard, you’re a genuine gift to this community, Thankyou.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +15

      I loved writing that battle scene. Thankyou for the kind message!

    • @PayYourTick
      @PayYourTick ปีที่แล้ว +7

      @@AVoxintheVoid my pleasure man, we all appreciate your interaction with fans too. Have a good one.

    • @soulsmoke01
      @soulsmoke01 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Indeed

  • @Ironbattlemace
    @Ironbattlemace ปีที่แล้ว +57

    Holy shit. Just 5/5.
    This captures Slaneesh ultra good. Best damn writing and narration job in years.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I am totally humbled by this message. Thankyou so much my friend. Hope you enjoy part three!

  • @omegavon
    @omegavon 2 ปีที่แล้ว +83

    The Absolute constant state terror Solomon feels witnessing all of this, and his inherent cowardice compounding him to survive while also I belive driving him mad and slowly corrupting him. Not to mention the first person he killed was a guardsman. Yeah he's on his way to the warp. Thank you soo much for such great work , really transports you into 40k horror.

    • @geeljire9247
      @geeljire9247 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It was a corrupted guardsman tho, wasn't it?

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Nope, regular my friend

    • @geeljire9247
      @geeljire9247 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@AVoxintheVoid I didn't reach that part when i commented, i was thinking of the first episode

    • @MNM-lq9te
      @MNM-lq9te ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@geeljire9247 well yes he did kill a corrupted guardsmen in the first ep, but he really didn't kill him he stumbled and triped on his own guts and fell on the blade solomon was holding. So more or less aided suicide

  • @ElPorpoise
    @ElPorpoise 2 ปีที่แล้ว +151

    My lord, how are you this on point with Chaos/Slannesh? This is some of the best Slannesh representation I’ve ever read! Great work!

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +23

      It's a worry right? 😜

    • @MandoMTL
      @MandoMTL 2 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      Let us not ask questions. ;)

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      @@MandoMTL best not to...

    • @CloudParadox-is1jc
      @CloudParadox-is1jc ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Almost as if... he's corrupted by chaos

  • @callumglen1934
    @callumglen1934 2 ปีที่แล้ว +51

    We need more of this level when having audiobooks on chaos

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      I am dedicated to bringing some chaos fun into people's lives!

  • @slippytrippy8122
    @slippytrippy8122 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Damn, you actually made the Guard sound terrifying! That was fresh - I loved the distinction you made between militia and Guard. Loved the series, you deserve support. Part II really hit hard compared to the others imo

  • @nodopamine6243
    @nodopamine6243 2 ปีที่แล้ว +39

    Amazing work. I don’t understand why you are not bigger. This beats out Audible any day.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Really appreciate this message James. I'm just happy to have listeners like yourself

    • @lolwtfbbq111
      @lolwtfbbq111 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Agreed. This is so dark and hopeless 😭

  • @MrFredstt
    @MrFredstt 2 ปีที่แล้ว +51

    These 2 parts have been some of the greatest depictions of Slaaneshi daemons. Great work Vox! I think I'll have to re-listen to this come Halloween

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Means a lot to me friend. I'm glad you're digging my take on chaos

  • @brooklynkeith2877
    @brooklynkeith2877 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    I listened to this 3 times in a row everything is so detailed i didnt want to miss anything, its like im right there with Solomon..... im worried he might be liking the twisted ecstacy Slannesh provides too much to come back, his sanity may be to far gone especially since his first body was a guardsman. Then again *All The Gods Are Dead* ... im hyped for part lll for sure.

  • @jinpachibobochan3532
    @jinpachibobochan3532 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    "Desperation spread like a quick-acting nerve gas"
    I love this channel cuz the descriptions are so creative! It gives the scene more life and thus makes it more enjoyable to listen to. The narrator also has the perfect voice for Warhammer audiobooks, sounding like some veteran guardsmen, telling grimdark stories.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'll take that as a double compliment as I wrote and narrated this story 😎 cheers boss!!

  • @Faus4us
    @Faus4us ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I was sent here by a commenter from Balder's latest Slaanesh video. I had to subscribe. Great work brother.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thankyou so much! Glad you found your way here brother!

  • @KillTeamHungary
    @KillTeamHungary 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Few more of these and you will not need us anymore.
    Great job Paul!

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Cheers brother Hungary! I'll always need dudes like you my friend

  • @maxnewton5502
    @maxnewton5502 2 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    How do you not have more subscribers, the quality of your content is amazing

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      That's really kind of you Max. I think the TH-cam Algorithm doesn't like me very much but I appreciate everyone who has made it here so far!
      Vox

  • @jacobdarling1524
    @jacobdarling1524 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    This was horrific. In a good way! I have never seen Slaanesh and it’s followers in a more terrifying light. Well done.

  • @Kroggnagch
    @Kroggnagch 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Y'know, on one hand, the Maidens of Excess are quite alluring. On the other hand, is a crab claw.

  • @InsectSpray
    @InsectSpray 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    I was going to ask who wrote this, but then I read the description. Well done! This is fantastic! I am very much an Imperial fanboy but I am quite happy they didn't win the engagement in the forest and deprive me of this wonderous writing. How very hedonisticly slaneshi of me...

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thankyou very much! I'm having a lot of fun telling this story. I thought I'd pepper in some hope along the way...just to snatch it away again 😎

  • @mcchicken1849
    @mcchicken1849 2 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    You really do a great job of describing action scenes. Played out like a movie in my head, very well done, can't wait for part 3! Interesting to see the characters progression from the start of the first episode to the end of this one, can see (what I at least assume to be) the corrupting powers of Chaos taking its effect on him.

  • @TheSorrowOfTheReaper
    @TheSorrowOfTheReaper ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I loved how visceral you described the action scenes with the Guard suddenly appearing and poor Solomon slowly succumbing to Chaos... looking forward to part 3!

  • @davebowman9000
    @davebowman9000 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Me, when the Painter disrobes: Oh, wow, you're really going there, uh?
    *Dude paints a painting*
    Me, embarrased: Eh...that's what I call playing with expectations

  • @milesaway3422
    @milesaway3422 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    THIS IS SO DARK AND SOOOOOOO GOOD

  • @Nyctonaut
    @Nyctonaut 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Just noticed this one is an original. It's absolutely amazing.
    I'm a listener to many different creepasta narration channels and other horror channels for years and years. I also do narration myself from time to time. I'm a massive lifelong horror fan and recently becoming obsessed with 40k.
    And i do have to say this series is one of the most engaging and well written stories I've listened to in a long time. Great work. Just finished part 2 and am about to lay down and start part 3.
    Really, fantastic job, my friend. Obviously keep up your amazing narrations, but also, DONT STOP WRITTING!

  • @highchaplain0786
    @highchaplain0786 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    One of the best stories so far Vox!

  • @user-pe7vq8ul5o
    @user-pe7vq8ul5o 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    this is really good ....the maturity gives a clear description of the grim drack of the 40k future

  • @baz5521
    @baz5521 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Nice one
    Brilliant looking forward to part 3

  • @Dino5011
    @Dino5011 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Stellar work! Really impressive how concistent the extraordinary quality of your work is.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thankyou so much Dino! Can't wait to show you part three!

  • @SawyerKnight
    @SawyerKnight 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    The escalation of your voice with the action is so enthralling.

  • @randomdontbanme3154
    @randomdontbanme3154 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Here we go!

  • @davebowman9000
    @davebowman9000 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    This is a beautiful work of art! When you get to a 100k followers, you should definitely submit something to the Black Library. Loved every second of it!

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Thanks David! That should be my challenge for sure.

    • @lolwtfbbq111
      @lolwtfbbq111 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Agreed. Personally, I think black library doesn't do enough horror stories.

  • @pseudomastix2916
    @pseudomastix2916 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Finally, the wait was killing me.

  • @kocoffgames4144
    @kocoffgames4144 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Too bad the guards lost the attack. This battle was extremely well written, the way you manage to color the scene is really impressive. On to part 3 !

  • @SonOfTegz
    @SonOfTegz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I’ll be a bit less broad with my compliments this time: the choice of focus on the gore and barbarism is perfect enough to push your mind to grotesque thoughts but not outright disgusting in its imagery, not to mention every action of Solomon feels so real, you can understand his thoughts his actions, how his body is running on instinct while his mind hides away behind the iron mask. It’s so perfect in its choice of description, the right stuff so you know where you are and what the place is but not to much to spoil the image it creates in your mind. This whole series is just so there, I can’t say I’ve found a single issue with it it just feels so enveloping.

  • @teddycush55
    @teddycush55 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Bro your action scene was unbelievable. Gripped me so intensely and the background sound adds so much depth.

  • @roymcroberts8683
    @roymcroberts8683 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Man I love it. You never fail to crush it every time. By the end of the story every time I'm on the edge of my chair.

  • @Kenny1dayatime
    @Kenny1dayatime 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You really are fantastic at this. The pace of this was so well done, honestly it's probably the best short story/series I've every listen too mate. Bloody top job.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      You are truly too kind Kenny. I'm super glad you enjoy my writing. This has definitely given me the taste for it going forward. 🤘

  • @thesaviorofsouls5210
    @thesaviorofsouls5210 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Loved the mental images you gave me with the artist section, and of course incredibly well written and told as a whole as always!

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว

      Thankyou my friend. I had a lot of fun writing that scene.

  • @zazz69ed
    @zazz69ed ปีที่แล้ว

    The tale takes us further down the rabbit hole of this man's break with who he is now and who he was and who he shall be... Am loving every narration !!! I am off to listen to act 3 now.

  • @greatamazinga
    @greatamazinga 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Extraordinary work so far!! Love how much passion you put into your work!!

  • @Bjornbroder1
    @Bjornbroder1 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Looking forward to this. I like how it's on a Sunday.

  • @chrismennega3042
    @chrismennega3042 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    at this point hes just a play thing for slanesh whos probably savouring his slow desent into madness

  • @KnifeCursed
    @KnifeCursed 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Absolutely excellent story so far! I loved every moment of it.

  • @brentreimer6411
    @brentreimer6411 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Good work, Vox. You're very good at immersing the audience.

  • @GabrielChristtiane
    @GabrielChristtiane ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Damn!! I finally find a time to continue on your work when i chill with painting... This was great! The battle part give me a real goosebumps! You are growing so quick brother! Great work

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thanks Gabriel! Glad you enjoyed it brother!

  • @LilGinjaMassive
    @LilGinjaMassive 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Yes. Now This Is 40K. Great Narration of a Great Narrative.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Many thanks boss! Glad you enjoyed my tale. Third part coming by next weekend

  • @johnnyblaze4053
    @johnnyblaze4053 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I didn't know what to expect but I know good doesn't begin to describe your talent and passion

  • @edgarmackenzie1789
    @edgarmackenzie1789 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    These are too dam good can't wait for the next part

  • @p1nkishninja
    @p1nkishninja 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I've never played Warhammer, nor know much about it, but this is sick. Like awesome

  • @CJ-uf6xl
    @CJ-uf6xl 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Man, I'm excited for this!

  • @intboom
    @intboom ปีที่แล้ว

    This is great. So many people throughout history have ended up being swept up into army after army out of necessity

  • @chucktailord1235
    @chucktailord1235 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I was really hoping they would save him. but alas... thus is the world of the grim dark. I admit, I don't know much about the 40k universe. but this is a great audio peice even for those that dont know much about the universe.

  • @hislightness
    @hislightness 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    What a masterpiece of descriptive story telling

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thankyou so much, I can't wait to get part three to you!

  • @3_Star_Belt
    @3_Star_Belt 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Bravo! Got pulled in so deep, that I actually felt some disappointment when it was over :D
    Very much looking forward to the next part!
    Do you have a patreon or paypal account where one could show some appreciation?

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Many thanks hunter. The third part is about halfway through the writing process at the moment. If you look on my channels art at the top of the page you'll find a PayPal link. I really appreciate the support and generosity
      Vox

  • @kortonstillpeak2388
    @kortonstillpeak2388 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You haven’t missed yet Vox! Can't wait for the next one

  • @kronanthekonqueror2979
    @kronanthekonqueror2979 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Quality stuff man. Really damn good 😍

  • @nix-cipher
    @nix-cipher 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    OMG this was fkn awesome!!
    Pure 🔥

  • @julianspeed7322
    @julianspeed7322 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Yet more fantastic work, looking forward to the next part!

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Many thanks Julian, I'm glad you're enjoying my series!

  • @shouryajitbhattacharya2900
    @shouryajitbhattacharya2900 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Oh ho ho, Vox knocks it out of the park yet again

  • @brentfu1119
    @brentfu1119 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is gorgeous work!

  • @MrDrDeaGood
    @MrDrDeaGood 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I see a fantastic tale unfolding…. Farm owner loses everything but his life to the horrors of the warp….. to then make it through nightmares of untold horror that would have a greater Demon of The blood god blush
    To rise up and single handed turn the tide of battle and attain victory for the AllFather… 😀 or that might just be a story in my own mind lolol
    Such a pleasure is listening to each new chapter so excited for more. Only complaint is having to wait for more after each content drop I’d love a 2 hour chapter drop 🙏🏻

  • @richjohn2497
    @richjohn2497 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Truly amazing! This is 40k to me! You are very talented brother

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thankyou so much Rich! I absolutely loved writing this tale and trying to put to words what 40k means to me also. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well!

  • @Keddeadkedemption
    @Keddeadkedemption 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Amazing work. I'm hooked

  • @nicholasgraveline7384
    @nicholasgraveline7384 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sweet Emperor. The delicious horrors I have born witness to.

  • @texasallstar6969
    @texasallstar6969 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Is this not from warhammer 40k horror stories? It's perfection and better than many of the books I've read. An I had read a fuck ton hundreds.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Yeah this is my own story 🙂

  • @philipscott2025
    @philipscott2025 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Send for the black templars.

  • @adamgriffiths4022
    @adamgriffiths4022 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Brilliant, cheers for doing this.

  • @blacksuite1
    @blacksuite1 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Love the story and your voice! Keep up the good work.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thankyou very much, I'll certainly keep it up if people like yourself keep listening! 👍

  • @BlackRaptor77
    @BlackRaptor77 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Dude i keep listening to the 3 vids because I'm a fresh face in warhammer and I was hoping to find a narrative look at a demonic incursion. Also as a novice writer I'm super impressed with this short story.

  • @connorriggs1518
    @connorriggs1518 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Well I missed the release but at least I can watch it before bead

  • @ditmarvanbelle1061
    @ditmarvanbelle1061 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Stellar work!

  • @informitas0117
    @informitas0117 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It's ironic Slaanesh receives so little love, glad this exist to remedy that.

  • @ishiwatari8327
    @ishiwatari8327 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    insanely good!

  • @worldwar1flyingace645
    @worldwar1flyingace645 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Another masterpiece. That battle gave me chills!

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yes! Mission accomplished!

  • @morgs456
    @morgs456 ปีที่แล้ว

    I can't wait for the grey knights to show up
    Awesome. Thank you mate

  • @MandoMTL
    @MandoMTL 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Giggidy.

  • @ansinexum9999
    @ansinexum9999 ปีที่แล้ว

    For all the gods being dead, there is a lot of talk about chaos gods 🤣
    10/10 story I'm excited to continue 🤗

  • @Knights_Oath
    @Knights_Oath ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This part of the story is why I never went on Tumblr when it existed. My eyes would have never been the same.

  • @Chipotlespice
    @Chipotlespice ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Damn, the slow descent into corruption is chilling.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I hope you enjoy the final part!

  • @archangelofstories5565
    @archangelofstories5565 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I cannot get over the battle near the end, the efficiency of the guard, quickly disintegrating into fear versus the ecstatic brutality of the cultists and Demons. This is how I always imagined Slanneshi Demons fighting, not with bloodthirsty rage like Khornate Demons but with elegance and grace. A truly amazing battle description Vox

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Wow.. thankyou so much for sending me this message. Means a lot to know people enjoy my writing and share my opinions on how certain units and daemons should fight

    • @archangelofstories5565
      @archangelofstories5565 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@AVoxintheVoid I've always had my own view on how Chaos Demons fight. Khornate Demons would be blood crazed bezerkers, Nurgle Demons would be slow and deliberate like Death itself, Tzeentch Demons would be cunning sorcerers and Slanneshi Demons would be just like this, fast, majestic and brutal, as if they were dancing more than fighting. I won't lie when I say that this story has helped inspire me to get back into writing and the fight has given me inspiration in regards to how to write a battle description

    • @archangelofstories5565
      @archangelofstories5565 ปีที่แล้ว

      I keep coming back to this series and every time I feel pride and horror with the battle at the end. Still one of the best 40k battle descriptions I've ever heard

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm glad you enjoyed listening to the battle as much as I loved writing it boss!

  • @TAttila84
    @TAttila84 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This will be gooood!

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hope you enjoyed it!

    • @TAttila84
      @TAttila84 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@AVoxintheVoid I enjoyed it a lot, this depraved cruelty and corruption is the true essence of Slaneesh, and you wrote and narrated it perfectly. Thanks for the quality content again!

  • @jessezondlewski2597
    @jessezondlewski2597 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Vox you have truly captured the true horror of the 40k universe, the savage bloodletting of an uncaring universe. Your voice has given me inspiration for an encounter in my wrath and glory campaign.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's amazing. I would love to hear how it goes!

    • @jessezondlewski2597
      @jessezondlewski2597 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@AVoxintheVoid I will keep you posted, the sessions are few and far between. I was thinking if maybe having another imperial citizen in a similar situation to Solomon, and how the party will react to him.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@jessezondlewski2597 definitely keep me posted! Sounds really interesting!

  • @robertschuitema6242
    @robertschuitema6242 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    A m a z i n g 0_o !!!!

  • @christianwarrior3169
    @christianwarrior3169 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Just finished the first part I'm pumped asf

  • @ChaoticVoicesofAndreas
    @ChaoticVoicesofAndreas ปีที่แล้ว +1

    My feelings throughout: Oh no, OH YES, OH NOOO.

  • @seelenverkaufer4861
    @seelenverkaufer4861 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    YES! YES! I've been waiting for this depraved story

  • @quanguy8624
    @quanguy8624 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Something about his strytelling I'm thinking vox is in cahoots with slaanesh I cant stop listening😮

  • @natedog5308
    @natedog5308 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Yes!!!! Love it almost makes me wanna join chaos 👀

  • @sugarjumper45
    @sugarjumper45 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    im gonna call this writing style Pickman's Novel...cause holy fuck this is some horrifically vivid prose. yet it is captivating in its repulsion.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I'm going to take that as a huge compliment Sam

    • @sugarjumper45
      @sugarjumper45 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@AVoxintheVoid oh a gigantic compliment. Like emperor class Titan sized compliment

  • @azreanaibrahim2721
    @azreanaibrahim2721 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Oh! Well done sir!

  • @TheKaos8
    @TheKaos8 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great work!!!
    I realy feel sorry for the guy. Even if he would throw down his weapon and surrender, he would only be burned as a heretic. As the inquisitorial saying goes: "Innocence proves nothing!"
    Although you hardly cant call him innocent any more after killing a guardsman. Even if done in self defence.

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I'm glad my writing has elicited such a response. I wanted people to initially hate the character but begin to question how they would react in the same situation. I think a lot of people would be surprised...thankyou again!

    • @TheKaos8
      @TheKaos8 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@AVoxintheVoid You did a great job with that.
      I probably would not have mustered the strengh to go through that ordeal for seven days, like Solomon did.
      In a way his cowardice turned out to be a virtue as it kept him going till he got a chance to redeem himself.
      May he rest at the Emperors side.

  • @kayvaanmcsharrowkyn6901
    @kayvaanmcsharrowkyn6901 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    SOO EPIC ! LOVING THIS STORY MY BROTEIN SHAKE!!
    CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT INSTALLMENT OK AWESOMENESS!!

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      The third and final part is online my friend! Hope you enjoy the finale

  • @CJ-uf6xl
    @CJ-uf6xl 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Absolutely brilliant!

  • @Angelof236
    @Angelof236 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It's a grand party until a flare goes up.

  • @lite165
    @lite165 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great work

  • @STONE___
    @STONE___ 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    you represent slanesh too good... maybe too good +AVE IMPERATOR+

  • @socalghia
    @socalghia ปีที่แล้ว

    The worst part is getting to my next site and having to pause it.

  • @lay-hannowway8943
    @lay-hannowway8943 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Real enjoyed this and am hoping for a part 3 😉👍

    • @AVoxintheVoid
      @AVoxintheVoid  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Oh it's coming! Finished writing it yesterday so I will be recording it this week 🙂

    • @lay-hannowway8943
      @lay-hannowway8943 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@AVoxintheVoid you legend 😁👍

  • @picketytwin
    @picketytwin 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    beautiful ecstatic

  • @attemptedunkindness3632
    @attemptedunkindness3632 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    **Tries to imagine a 40k Universe with all the gods being dead, begins hyperventilating.**
    W-what is this? Did I just witness a half-Aeldari female Astartes that was also a Votanni Genestealer all along request that Guilliman "beam 'us' up!(singular/plural hivemind self-description)"!?!?
    ...I finally understand why Horus did what he did, and the need for Chaos...