This video is quite a bit better than average. It has a more original story, and uses some of the usual tropes fairly well. The voicing is excellent, and there did not seem to be any of the usual vocabulary flaws. There are a few minor plot-holes, but they are well disguised. The conclusion is a bit too long and preachy, but, on the whole, the story is reasonably good from beginning to end. Keep up the good work.
This video is quite a bit better than average. It has a more original story, and uses some of the usual tropes fairly well. The voicing is excellent, and there did not seem to be any of the usual vocabulary flaws. There are a few minor plot-holes, but they are well disguised. The conclusion is a bit too long and preachy, but, on the whole, the story is reasonably good from beginning to end. Keep up the good work.