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You did really well with this story. Anakin was the perfect master for Rey. And that Nikto Jedi was the perfect person to find her. All around one great video you created.
Anything would nearly be better than the garbage character that Disney slapped together. Disney has only made a small amount of good developed characters and end up making so many of them one dimensional or a complete Mary Sue. Personally I don’t care what sex/race/species a character might but besides the fact they’re a well developed character that we as the audience are able to watch them go through trials and tribulations that they must overcome to slowly gain the knowledge/power/insight needed to continue to advance themselves (or the story) within the story along with main/support characters having an actual arc that we can watch them grow through their personal issues as characters to become the best versions of themselves. The first 4-6 episodes of The Clone Wars animated series Ahsoka showed all of her shortcomings but kept at it and kept bettering herself as the series went on. She quickly became one of my favorite characters within the SWU. Then in Rebels they continued to show how she developed over the years and now in Ahsoka we’re getting Filoni to fill in many of the gaps through the flashback scenes to help us understand what she actually went through during the clone wars. It truly is sad that Ray Stevenson passed away because he has done such a great job as his character and I honestly hope his family grants them the ability to make a deep fake/cgi of his character so they can continue his story. If they allow it then Disney should pay the family for the rights to use his likeness at whatever they all agree with.
Seems kind of likely if clone wars 2003 was Canon. Palpatine was shooting off at the mouth the entire time "how dare you; I will not be bullied; I'd like to speak to your manager" type stuff
It's so nice to have Star Wars fan content that actually treats Rey with some decency and respect instead the devil or a Mary Sue. Thank you for this! This is why you're my favorite Star Wars TH-camr.
I’d argue she is a Mary Sue, due to how poorly she’s written into everything around her. She herself is a pretty well written and likeable character, but it just feels like everything else in the narrative, including opposition, is willing her to win.
I see what you mean but I always saw her as the victim of being a plot device. After the first movie she was less a character and more just a body to move the plot along. She could have been so much cooler than she was allowed to be and to this day it annoys the hell out of me@@Shay96
Loved this one. Having Rey and Anakin feeding off of each other to make them both better was a great idea. I imagine Anakin was close to unlocking his full potential in this.
What if during the clone wars dooku abandoned Sidious, leaving the separatist council and grievous in charge while he travelled to the ruins and homes of other force factions (nightsisters, baran do etc) to create a new, better force faction. When he returns order 66 has just been executed and he joins the rebellion with his droid army, maybe training a new order of force sensitives.
This is really well written and true to what would happen had Rey been born earlier somehow. I didn’t mind Rey in the Sequels and look forward to more stories with her to fill in the gaps and beyond. I’m viewing this as a AU/What If on her. Really loved the dynamic between the her and Anakin. Love the call backs to Numa and other stories too. Very well written.
Hey dawg don’t ever stop with these. I’ve listened to one or two every work shift for like 2 weeks and it helps the hours fly by. Great storyteller my friend
Man... Rey could've been so much more. This alone is better than what we got in the Sequels, just as a concept. 0:24 That's... hella dark. Like, man, why kill her, could've just left and had her raise the kid, not take the kid away and kill her 😅 typical Palpatine
This has got to be one of your best what if videos yet. Thank you for acknowledging the sequels rather than ignoring them. I already loved Rey as a character, and you made me love her even more.
Rather he managed to make Rey not a Mary Sue but someone who actually faces challenges and even suffers at times. She learns her powers through years of training as a Jedi with the chosen one as her master instead of spontaneously manifesting absurd power without training. And you know she actually learns lightsaber dueling and becomes one of the most proficient duelists instead of having fights with choreography so bad that they have to use cgi to edit out weapons from the enemies because they would have struck down the “main character”.
I never thought someone could make me love Rey as a character, but by the FORCE, you've DONE IT! I love your version of Rey! So true to who she's supposed to be while expanding on her character and making her into someone you can love and root for!!
Up until a certain point, the story of this video was pretty much the same as within the sequels except for Rey becoming a Jedi. I will say that Pente seems to tell the story better for a TH-cam video as of now.
39:25 I can see it now - COUNT DOOKU! Anakin asked calmly, MY POWERS HAVE INCREASED BY A MAGNITUDE OF TEN! COME OUT COME OUT WHEREVER YOU ARE! *Dooku shaking in utter fear behind a box, Sidious watching amusedly, and Rey on the floor laughing.*
Oooh, I really liked this one! Especially them both feeding off of the other and making the other try to be the best Jedi they could be. And Anakins genuine sadness at Mace dying and his journey to make up for it. Also, Rey just always being there for him and becoming family. That was amazing. I feel like this one could be made into an actual fanfiction.
I thought you say you didn’t change anything about Ray you changed everything about Ray. You showed she needed to be trained to use the force, and couldn’t even use it on a rudimentary level without basic instruction from Yoda. Once taught she had a certain affinity for the dark side, and you showed she had to be trained to use a lightsaber. She didn’t just pick it up and immediately know how to use it. You did a better job writing the character of Ray then Disney did.
You know, I can't say that Rey is one of my favorite characters, that honor would have to belong to Ahsoka. Still, I don't necessarily think she was a bad character either. The first fifteen minutes where she appears in The Force Awakens especially were some of the most well executed introduction scenes for a new character that I really enjoyed. What I think held her back was bad storytelling and bad writing. I will still enjoy those movies despite those flaws, but yeah, I prefer retellings like this that not only stay true to the characters, but give them a better, more heartfelt and inspiring story. Thank you again for that.
what if Rey was Anakin's little sister? When the Jedi find Anakin, they also find his sister Rey Skywalker who is 4 years old to Anakin's 9. She was a result of Shmi being made to 'attend to another customer' - who may or may not be Palpatine. Anakin is an overprotective big brother who adores his sister and she him. When Anakin is freed, Shmi insists on him taking Rey with him to prevent her from becoming another slave. The council are more willing to accept Rey than Anakin, who is very protective of her. Rey has a vision of 'Mister Qui-Gon' being hurt by a 'Bad Man with a Pointy Head, and a red sword with two ends' (Maul), so in response the Council agrees to send another Jedi to Naboo. Qui-Gon is saved but is almost fatally injured. As a result of his near death experience he realizes that he has hurt Obi-Wan with his insistence to train Anakin so agrees to continue training Obi-Wan until he is ready. Anakin and Rey are brought into the Order, with Anakin joining the Pre-Padawan classes under Kelleren Beck and Rey with the Younglings under Yoda, where she eventually befriends a young Ahsoka who becomes a little sister figure for her. Eventually Anakin becomes Qui-Gon's padawan at 12, and later Rey becomes Obi-Wan's when she is 12. By the time of Attack of the Clones, Anakin is 19 while Rey is 14. thoughts?
Honestly I liked this version of Ray much better than the Ray we got in the movies. Just purely because she actually has a dark side and it’s not forced. Pun not intended.
This is the proper use of a character whose potential in the movies was brutally squandered. Also this was the best way to give rey the skywalker name without it being industrial level cringe.
This is hands-down one of the best stories you've written, it makes me wish that somehow Rey and Anakin could've met in canon too. I already liked the sequels, but stories like these give me a greater appreciation when I realize what themes and ideas were payed forward in them that I wasn't aware of or didn't notice before. It is kinda disappointing to scroll down and see comments saying stuff like you wrote Rey better than Disney did when you said yourself that you didn't even change her character for this, just when she appeared in the timelines. It feels like people will take whatever excuse they can to dunk on the sequels, earned or not.
Okay the story was very good I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back and make a part 2 to it also keep up the good work and May the force be with you
What if Plo Koon or another Jedi escaped order 66, jumping into hyperspace with a damaged ship and crash-landing either on Earth or the Chiss Ascendancy.
To be fair, there are two major aspects of character writing that make a Mary-Su. As an individual, Rey is flawed and overall well written. What lets her down in the writing is how everything else responds to her. From character interactions to events, it feels like everything is pushing her along for success without any chance of failure. She herself is a well written character, but everything else does her a complete disservice by making her into a Mary-Su.
This is not the "Rey skywalker" I wanted 😂 Edit: I was joking at first cuz she was his apprentice. He actually made her Rey skywalker... But it's welcomed
Thank you so much for this! I was thinking about what if Anakin trained Rey. They have a great dynamic, and I like that they helped/supported each other in an emotional capacity which both characters really needed. I always figured Anakin and Rey would get along well. Her confrontation with Palpatine was really good, I like this version of it much better. Her and Anakin standing against Sidious together was awesome. I know that you don't usually do Sequel character what ifs but when you do I genuinely enjoy them. Loved to see more down the line with Rey, Finn, Poe or even Hux and Phasma what ifs. Leia Organa what if she became chancellor despite the galaxy knowing her connection to Vader. Hell get obscure and do what if Kaydel was Ben Solo sister (especially since the actress was Carrie Fisher's daughter I think that would be special.) Can't wait for the next one. Again thanks for this it really made my day.
Great episode, i never saw the sequela but I like how Rey was written. Especially at the end how she saved Anakin from becoming vader. The only thing missing was a double bladed lighsaber.
What if Luke found Dagan Gera post ROTJ? Basically, Luke, searching for Jedi artifacts, finds Dagan and frees him instead of Cal years earlier, The two ways this could go is. 1.Dagan still falls to the dark, and Luke has to fight him and Rayvis like Cal did Or the more interesting of the 2 imo Dagan stays in the light and joins Luke’s Jedi order, perhaps he could become Luke’s battle master or master of the order. And maybe when Ben falls to the dark Dagan could tell Luke about Tanalorr so Luke has a reason to hope and him go there instead of Luke exiling himself. To regroup and rebuild so they can save Ben and fight snoke/palpatine
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I like Rey's character, too and I don't think it was written badly. It was one of the good parts of the sequels. Specifically, I like her warmth and her good heart, which prevented her from falling to the dark side. :) Thank you for this cool story, I enjoyed it a lot!
What if Darth Vader somehow went back in time through the world between worlds when Anakin was a kid and either looked after him from a distance or trained himself or made a third faction in the clone wars or took over the with during the clone wars
Love your stories. Not sure of your aspirations but you have a talent and have put the work into honing your craft.... It's impressive. I love how you quickly illustrate intimate dynamics between characters. My question is with Dathan. Wasn't he a clone of the Sith Eternal? I'm a little cloudy on when Palpy gained access to Exegol and the Sith Eternal. I haven't read all the legends but I've never heard this depicted version of Dathan and Miramar. Perhaps it's an overlap and there are two versions of their histories. Where did you glean this backstory? Pure fiction or was there a book or comic? Again, fantastic story. Personal favorite.
I like the way you did rey in this I know you said not much have been changed character wise but i like the fact she was brought in like anakin that was my main problem with the sequels nice job as always
its amazing how fanfictions can give us infinitely more compelling stories with Disneywars characters. man, what *could* have been with the sequel trilogy... makes me depressed every time. gud story, as to be expected from you, fun to listen to; I liked this one.
If we are not thinking out of Spite, Rey probably does have a very Impressive potential considering her bloodline. I would say maybe it is between Ashoka and Yoda at best.. Although, It could be higher or different however I am not aware. Still, I believe that with the Sequels the main flaw was the issues with choreography being quite off and inconsistency. It is true that Rey's power in those films is a bit absurd even when you consider that Luke Skywalker definitely was very strong with little training, the difference was that his potential definitely surpassed Yodas as he was Anakin's Direct Son.. As well as the fact that Luke at least had a BIT of training... I could be wrong but I believe this is why people seem to Despise the Sequels or at the very least find them mediocre.
@@TexasNationalist1836adopted as a Skywalker. Tbh, I always thought that was implied in Rise of Skywalker. Rey has always shown a sense of wanting to belong since TFA and her interaction with the OT characters like Han Solo, Luke, Chewbacca, and Leia makes it seems like they want to take her in as one of their own.
"What if Vader and Dooku and Maul Fought Sideous and Grevious" I know there would have to be some time travl shinaigans but Id be cursious on the fight
What if Jaina Solo Fel From Star Wars From Expanded Universe aka The EU went to the Portal and Meet Rey From Disney's Star Wars Sequel Films to fight a Lightsaber Duel.
This is possibly my favorite story so far. I absolutely loved it. Not going to lie I would to see both Anakin and Rey both turn and both be the best badass sith I know they could be. Maybe that could be a story for another day thanks for the happy ending
i accept this version of rey's character. and it's cool that she is written in the prequel era, as anakin's apprentice. wasn't even expecting this until i saw the title.
Nice! What if Tulak Horde and his army re-emerged during the clone wars? What if Tulak Horde Trained Anikin? What if Tulak Horde re-emerged on Mandalor? +50min vids are your best work
I personally feel that the jedi instructors would actually try to have rey learn from 2 so that she wouldn’t keep using the jab in a fit of rage and unknowingly the beginning steps of form 7
this is my favorite story you have done so far. i like the character rey to and daisy ridley did an awesome job with the material she was giving. i found in a video about how stars wars was always about a skywalker vs a palpatine and i like how in sequels it was reverse a palpatine in the light and skywalker in the dark. while i think the sequels could have been written better i really like rey also i know this probably wont happen but could you do a what if about both rey and anakin as sith i just that would be so cool because i want to see a sith anakin and i would love to se a sith rey overtake her grandfather and become more powerful
Trying to imagine what a starfighter engine that uses spark plugs would look like.... Well, it's StarWars, certainly not out of context or possibility.
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The whole Anakin and Padme adopting Rey is just like Ashoka being adopted by Anakin and Padme
It is impressive that you have proven that there are redeeming factors about certain characters.
You did really well with this story. Anakin was the perfect master for Rey. And that Nikto Jedi was the perfect person to find her. All around one great video you created.
I think this is the best writing reys character ever got
The best thing about this is that this Ray will be better written than in the one in sequels.
Watched it, and so true. Still some...not great things in the writing, but still a hundred times better
That's quite a low bar.
@@adaptivekalman"Rey was trained by a skilled force user" basically makes anything better than Disney's catastrophe.
Anything would nearly be better than the garbage character that Disney slapped together. Disney has only made a small amount of good developed characters and end up making so many of them one dimensional or a complete Mary Sue. Personally I don’t care what sex/race/species a character might but besides the fact they’re a well developed character that we as the audience are able to watch them go through trials and tribulations that they must overcome to slowly gain the knowledge/power/insight needed to continue to advance themselves (or the story) within the story along with main/support characters having an actual arc that we can watch them grow through their personal issues as characters to become the best versions of themselves. The first 4-6 episodes of The Clone Wars animated series Ahsoka showed all of her shortcomings but kept at it and kept bettering herself as the series went on. She quickly became one of my favorite characters within the SWU. Then in Rebels they continued to show how she developed over the years and now in Ahsoka we’re getting Filoni to fill in many of the gaps through the flashback scenes to help us understand what she actually went through during the clone wars. It truly is sad that Ray Stevenson passed away because he has done such a great job as his character and I honestly hope his family grants them the ability to make a deep fake/cgi of his character so they can continue his story. If they allow it then Disney should pay the family for the rights to use his likeness at whatever they all agree with.
@@jeremyk.6456 Ya, everything you said is so right
What if Grievous accidentally (out of spite) killed Palpatine out of anger when capturing him on Coruscant?
I wanna like your comment but then it won’t be at 66
@@Legopandaproductions799, one time I actually didn’t add a comment when it was exactly 66🙂
@@Legopandaproductions799it’s not 66 anymore…
Sadly
Seems kind of likely if clone wars 2003 was Canon. Palpatine was shooting off at the mouth the entire time "how dare you; I will not be bullied; I'd like to speak to your manager" type stuff
What a sweet story.
Funniest line tho was “Ashoka couldn’t keep up because Grevious ran away and Obi wan had one lizard.
Loved this! Love how you build off of her struggles as a child in the sequels and translate it to this era. Good stuff my friend
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hello there. i love your videos and you watching PPSW as well is a suprise to be sure but a welcome one
I love your vids to bud
Hey, I didn’t know you and PPWS were friends
@@lottieparish1715Collab and work together very much, they do. Good friends, they are.
It's so nice to have Star Wars fan content that actually treats Rey with some decency and respect instead the devil or a Mary Sue. Thank you for this! This is why you're my favorite Star Wars TH-camr.
That's the difference between someone trying to make a good work and someone thinking they're a better writer than they are
I’d argue she is a Mary Sue, due to how poorly she’s written into everything around her. She herself is a pretty well written and likeable character, but it just feels like everything else in the narrative, including opposition, is willing her to win.
Pente patrol did a better job than Jar Jar Abrams and Roundhead Johnson.
I see what you mean but I always saw her as the victim of being a plot device. After the first movie she was less a character and more just a body to move the plot along.
She could have been so much cooler than she was allowed to be and to this day it annoys the hell out of me@@Shay96
Loved this one. Having Rey and Anakin feeding off of each other to make them both better was a great idea. I imagine Anakin was close to unlocking his full potential in this.
Anakin is basically her dad
@@aranha6285Techincally the young dad, since they were close to each other's age range, but hey, it turned out better for them. :3
@@aranha6285 more like older brother
I don't have words anymore to express how beautifully you wrote this one. Thanks for making these stories.
What if during the clone wars dooku abandoned Sidious, leaving the separatist council and grievous in charge while he travelled to the ruins and homes of other force factions (nightsisters, baran do etc) to create a new, better force faction. When he returns order 66 has just been executed and he joins the rebellion with his droid army, maybe training a new order of force sensitives.
That sounds like an interesting idea! Maybe Dooku had visions about rise of the Empire and decided leave in order to prepare for the inevitable.
I like it
This is really well written and true to what would happen had Rey been born earlier somehow. I didn’t mind Rey in the Sequels and look forward to more stories with her to fill in the gaps and beyond. I’m viewing this as a AU/What If on her.
Really loved the dynamic between the her and Anakin. Love the call backs to Numa and other stories too. Very well written.
Hey dawg don’t ever stop with these. I’ve listened to one or two every work shift for like 2 weeks and it helps the hours fly by. Great storyteller my friend
Man... Rey could've been so much more. This alone is better than what we got in the Sequels, just as a concept.
0:24
That's... hella dark. Like, man, why kill her, could've just left and had her raise the kid, not take the kid away and kill her 😅 typical Palpatine
Ray deserved this character development better than what she was originally given, great story idea
What if when Dooku told Obi-Wan that the senate was under the control of a sith, he mentioned it to the council?
Obi wan actually did mention it to the council, just off screen
Thanks! I had no idea! But, what if they actually did something about it?
@@CosmicMercury56 if I had to guess Pente has probably made a video where this happens, if I remember correctly this was a more recent video in fact.
@@Greengoogamingactually it was on screen! At the end of attack of the clones. Yoda brushes it off as a lie
how about what if the jedi concil wasnt so stuck into politics
This has got to be one of your best what if videos yet. Thank you for acknowledging the sequels rather than ignoring them. I already loved Rey as a character, and you made me love her even more.
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@@eveofinprov2600 mate, Ray has no story line, what are you doing here agreeing him
Rather he managed to make Rey not a Mary Sue but someone who actually faces challenges and even suffers at times. She learns her powers through years of training as a Jedi with the chosen one as her master instead of spontaneously manifesting absurd power without training. And you know she actually learns lightsaber dueling and becomes one of the most proficient duelists instead of having fights with choreography so bad that they have to use cgi to edit out weapons from the enemies because they would have struck down the “main character”.
14:20 I️ like how you included that reaching out sequel reference.
What if Satele Shan was a member of the prequel jedi high council especially in her prime, who would she take or be assigned as her padawan?
What if Satele trained Anakin?
I never thought someone could make me love Rey as a character, but by the FORCE, you've DONE IT! I love your version of Rey! So true to who she's supposed to be while expanding on her character and making her into someone you can love and root for!!
I loved how Rey grew into a Jedi and balancing lightvand dark. Taking out gramps was great 👍 👌 🙌
To be honest, I have been waiting to hear such a story for a long time. Finally, Rey has turned from a Mary Sue into a Good Character.
@marikam2998 I agree finally a real character and depth for her
@@dianesinger9729 Oh My Yoda, this true. I hope there will be a continuation of this story in the future.
Up until a certain point, the story of this video was pretty much the same as within the sequels except for Rey becoming a Jedi. I will say that Pente seems to tell the story better for a TH-cam video as of now.
39:25 I can see it now - COUNT DOOKU! Anakin asked calmly, MY POWERS HAVE INCREASED BY A MAGNITUDE OF TEN! COME OUT COME OUT WHEREVER YOU ARE! *Dooku shaking in utter fear behind a box, Sidious watching amusedly, and Rey on the floor laughing.*
Oooh, I really liked this one! Especially them both feeding off of the other and making the other try to be the best Jedi they could be. And Anakins genuine sadness at Mace dying and his journey to make up for it. Also, Rey just always being there for him and becoming family. That was amazing. I feel like this one could be made into an actual fanfiction.
I thought you say you didn’t change anything about Ray you changed everything about Ray. You showed she needed to be trained to use the force, and couldn’t even use it on a rudimentary level without basic instruction from Yoda. Once taught she had a certain affinity for the dark side, and you showed she had to be trained to use a lightsaber. She didn’t just pick it up and immediately know how to use it.
You did a better job writing the character of Ray then Disney did.
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You know, I can't say that Rey is one of my favorite characters, that honor would have to belong to Ahsoka. Still, I don't necessarily think she was a bad character either. The first fifteen minutes where she appears in The Force Awakens especially were some of the most well executed introduction scenes for a new character that I really enjoyed. What I think held her back was bad storytelling and bad writing. I will still enjoy those movies despite those flaws, but yeah, I prefer retellings like this that not only stay true to the characters, but give them a better, more heartfelt and inspiring story. Thank you again for that.
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what if Rey was Anakin's little sister?
When the Jedi find Anakin, they also find his sister Rey Skywalker who is 4 years old to Anakin's 9. She was a result of Shmi being made to 'attend to another customer' - who may or may not be Palpatine.
Anakin is an overprotective big brother who adores his sister and she him. When Anakin is freed, Shmi insists on him taking Rey with him to prevent her from becoming another slave.
The council are more willing to accept Rey than Anakin, who is very protective of her.
Rey has a vision of 'Mister Qui-Gon' being hurt by a 'Bad Man with a Pointy Head, and a red sword with two ends' (Maul), so in response the Council agrees to send another Jedi to Naboo. Qui-Gon is saved but is almost fatally injured. As a result of his near death experience he realizes that he has hurt Obi-Wan with his insistence to train Anakin so agrees to continue training Obi-Wan until he is ready.
Anakin and Rey are brought into the Order, with Anakin joining the Pre-Padawan classes under Kelleren Beck and Rey with the Younglings under Yoda, where she eventually befriends a young Ahsoka who becomes a little sister figure for her.
Eventually Anakin becomes Qui-Gon's padawan at 12, and later Rey becomes Obi-Wan's when she is 12.
By the time of Attack of the Clones, Anakin is 19 while Rey is 14.
thoughts?
Now this Rey is a fantastic character!
Well written and well done, you never disappoint
Honestly I liked this version of Ray much better than the Ray we got in the movies. Just purely because she actually has a dark side and it’s not forced. Pun not intended.
Plus, she also has a personality and grows as an individual
A fantastic story, thank you for continuing to bring us sequel what if content.
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How to change Rey from a publicly hated Jedi to a publicly loved one. Amazing writing!!
Now that's a better story than Disney came up with.
Fair, but really that is quite a low bar to pass
I love it! The way everything came together is perfect
This is the proper use of a character whose potential in the movies was brutally squandered. Also this was the best way to give rey the skywalker name without it being industrial level cringe.
This is hands-down one of the best stories you've written, it makes me wish that somehow Rey and Anakin could've met in canon too. I already liked the sequels, but stories like these give me a greater appreciation when I realize what themes and ideas were payed forward in them that I wasn't aware of or didn't notice before. It is kinda disappointing to scroll down and see comments saying stuff like you wrote Rey better than Disney did when you said yourself that you didn't even change her character for this, just when she appeared in the timelines. It feels like people will take whatever excuse they can to dunk on the sequels, earned or not.
Okay the story was very good I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back and make a part 2 to it also keep up the good work and May the force be with you
My friend you just give rey a far better story than disney every could😮🥹
With the finale coming up on Ahsoka here’s a grand idea; What if Ezra and Sabine fell in love??
What if Plo Koon or another Jedi escaped order 66, jumping into hyperspace with a damaged ship and crash-landing either on Earth or the Chiss Ascendancy.
To be fair, there are two major aspects of character writing that make a Mary-Su. As an individual, Rey is flawed and overall well written. What lets her down in the writing is how everything else responds to her. From character interactions to events, it feels like everything is pushing her along for success without any chance of failure. She herself is a well written character, but everything else does her a complete disservice by making her into a Mary-Su.
I stomach Rey because of my love of StarWars but you do have me viewing her differently than before. I might even grow to like her.
This was a very good story. I think did an awesome job with this one. Thank you. 😊
I can’t believe this but you turned something I despise into something that I loved great job👍
This is not the "Rey skywalker" I wanted 😂
Edit: I was joking at first cuz she was his apprentice. He actually made her Rey skywalker...
But it's welcomed
Yep I love this version of Rey what a great story ❤
"What if" Sabine Wren discovered that she was Force-Sensitive at the same time Ezra did in the SW: Rebels series.
only half way through this but I love all the little 4th wall breaks lol!
Thank you so much for this! I was thinking about what if Anakin trained Rey. They have a great dynamic, and I like that they helped/supported each other in an emotional capacity which both characters really needed. I always figured Anakin and Rey would get along well.
Her confrontation with Palpatine was really good, I like this version of it much better. Her and Anakin standing against Sidious together was awesome.
I know that you don't usually do Sequel character what ifs but when you do I genuinely enjoy them. Loved to see more down the line with Rey, Finn, Poe or even Hux and Phasma what ifs. Leia Organa what if she became chancellor despite the galaxy knowing her connection to Vader. Hell get obscure and do what if Kaydel was Ben Solo sister (especially since the actress was Carrie Fisher's daughter I think that would be special.)
Can't wait for the next one. Again thanks for this it really made my day.
This is one of my favorite what ifs of yours!
Great episode, i never saw the sequela but I like how Rey was written. Especially at the end how she saved Anakin from becoming vader. The only thing missing was a double bladed lighsaber.
What an amazing story. I was apprehensive at first but man how you laid it out was absolutely amazing. Your best one ive seen yet.
It's funny to see how easily Rey could've been such a likable character if she was just better written
AND was a man
@@Chemical_Argentumbut why a men?
I literally shed a tear for the first minutes of the video.
What if Luke found Dagan Gera post ROTJ?
Basically, Luke, searching for Jedi artifacts, finds Dagan and frees him instead of Cal years earlier, The two ways this could go is.
1.Dagan still falls to the dark, and Luke has to fight him and Rayvis like Cal did
Or the more interesting of the 2 imo
Dagan stays in the light and joins Luke’s Jedi order, perhaps he could become Luke’s battle master or master of the order. And maybe when Ben falls to the dark Dagan could tell Luke about Tanalorr so Luke has a reason to hope and him go there instead of Luke exiling himself. To regroup and rebuild so they can save Ben and fight snoke/palpatine
This should have been a movie
DUDE YOU ALMOST HAVE 90 000K SUBS i've been here since 4 thousend subs hope you get the 100k soon thx for the nice entertainment for the last what 1/5 years.
You made Rey a much more relatable character than Disney did.
I like Rey's character, too and I don't think it was written badly. It was one of the good parts of the sequels. Specifically, I like her warmth and her good heart, which prevented her from falling to the dark side. :) Thank you for this cool story, I enjoyed it a lot!
This 1 hour story tells more story and is better written than all of the sequels combined.
What if Darth Vader somehow went back in time through the world between worlds when Anakin was a kid and either looked after him from a distance or trained himself or made a third faction in the clone wars or took over the with during the clone wars
Almost Darth Vader shattered galaxy on fanfiction n et.
Beautiful and well written.
Love your stories. Not sure of your aspirations but you have a talent and have put the work into honing your craft.... It's impressive. I love how you quickly illustrate intimate dynamics between characters.
My question is with Dathan. Wasn't he a clone of the Sith Eternal? I'm a little cloudy on when Palpy gained access to Exegol and the Sith Eternal. I haven't read all the legends but I've never heard this depicted version of Dathan and Miramar. Perhaps it's an overlap and there are two versions of their histories. Where did you glean this backstory? Pure fiction or was there a book or comic?
Again, fantastic story. Personal favorite.
I like the way you did rey in this I know you said not much have been changed character wise but i like the fact she was brought in like anakin that was my main problem with the sequels nice job as always
its amazing how fanfictions can give us infinitely more compelling stories with Disneywars characters.
man, what *could* have been with the sequel trilogy... makes me depressed every time.
gud story, as to be expected from you, fun to listen to; I liked this one.
If we are not thinking out of Spite, Rey probably does have a very Impressive potential considering her bloodline.
I would say maybe it is between Ashoka and Yoda at best.. Although, It could be higher or different however I am not aware.
Still, I believe that with the Sequels the main flaw was the issues with choreography being quite off and inconsistency. It is true that Rey's power in those films is a bit absurd even when you consider that Luke Skywalker definitely was very strong with little training, the difference was that his potential definitely surpassed Yodas as he was Anakin's Direct Son.. As well as the fact that Luke at least had a BIT of training...
I could be wrong but I believe this is why people seem to Despise the Sequels or at the very least find them mediocre.
This is my favorite Pente what if. A face full of force lightning, ha
I just like how Pente just jump in defending Ray a few times I find it funny I never watch the sequel so I have no opinion on them
Anakin - you ever hear the tragedy of Darth Plagueis the wise
Rey - no
Anakin - ironic really your grandpa told me it the other day
😉😳🤣
Lol
Thanks for this man you made the sequels more errelivent your the best
Even though Rey is already a Skywalker
This makes her a Skywalker even more
She is not a skywalker she is a palpatine
@@TexasNationalist1836adopted as a Skywalker.
Tbh, I always thought that was implied in Rise of Skywalker. Rey has always shown a sense of wanting to belong since TFA and her interaction with the OT characters like Han Solo, Luke, Chewbacca, and Leia makes it seems like they want to take her in as one of their own.
"What if Vader and Dooku and Maul Fought Sideous and Grevious" I know there would have to be some time travl shinaigans but Id be cursious on the fight
Love seeing more of Rey!
32:48 you can’t use force lightning if you have not been hit by it and she would not be strong enough
I love how the entire video Pente is just trying justify Rey being a good character
Two seconds in, I'd immediately give this movie a chance
Beautiful story. Your the man. But I am sad you skipped over Mortis. I could only imagine what the Ones would say about the Anakin and Rey duo.
I swear you can make me like any character if you just set their story during the prequils.
Bro this would upgrade the sequels so darn muchhhhh
What if Jaina Solo Fel From Star Wars From Expanded Universe aka The EU went to the Portal and Meet Rey From Disney's Star Wars Sequel Films to fight a Lightsaber Duel.
This is possibly my favorite story so far. I absolutely loved it. Not going to lie I would to see both Anakin and Rey both turn and both be the best badass sith I know they could be. Maybe that could be a story for another day thanks for the happy ending
Still got some amazing content my friend. Appreciate ya 🙌🏻
"What if" the Jedi discovered that the Sith temple under their own on Coruscant was corrupting them?
What if Ben Kenobi was Obi Wans Twin?
Happy 300th what if 🎉🎉
great video i loved it
That was One of you best ones Young ever did 👌👌
Oh sorry „you ever did „
What if Mother Talzin finished her living force ritual?
Now this is how Rey’s story should have been wrote in the sequels , Pente’s story’s are so much better 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
i accept this version of rey's character. and it's cool that she is written in the prequel era, as anakin's apprentice. wasn't even expecting this until i saw the title.
Great STORY Young Man .
A way make ray good
This was fantastic. I love it
You made a good story, period.
Nice!
What if Tulak Horde and his army re-emerged during the clone wars?
What if Tulak Horde Trained Anikin?
What if Tulak Horde re-emerged on Mandalor?
+50min vids are your best work
Dude! I loved this video. I already watched 5 times. You are the best!
I personally feel that the jedi instructors would actually try to have rey learn from 2 so that she wouldn’t keep using the jab in a fit of rage and unknowingly the beginning steps of form 7
this is my favorite story you have done so far. i like the character rey to and daisy ridley did an awesome job with the material she was giving. i found in a video about how stars wars was always about a skywalker vs a palpatine and i like how in sequels it was reverse a palpatine in the light and skywalker in the dark. while i think the sequels could have been written better i really like rey also i know this probably wont happen but could you do a what if about both rey and anakin as sith i just that would be so cool because i want to see a sith anakin and i would love to se a sith rey overtake her grandfather and become more powerful
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Trying to imagine what a starfighter engine that uses spark plugs would look like....
Well, it's StarWars, certainly not out of context or possibility.
This might be an odd one but what if Rey had fallen for anakin?
May an alternate reality?
The age gap between Rey and Palpatine makes him being her grandfather actually realistic
Attempt 10 of what if The Skywalker twins, Mara Jade and Galen Marek all joined forcing in a new hope
Noice as always Pente!
Day: 9: What if Talzin raised Maul?