Merno, Universe 13's Rogue Angel | Dragon Ball Super Kai | COMPLETE STORY

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  • The FULL STORY of the Rogue Angel of Universe 13!
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    Anno Domini Beats - Dark Tranquility
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    Andrew Langdon - On The Hunt
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  • @MondoCool
    @MondoCool  4 ปีที่แล้ว +233

    Addendum #2: Looks like continuation mentioned below was NOT made by the original author. I spoke with @watamoto5 and confirmed he has nothing to do with the chapters made after this video.
    Addendum: Looks like this story has been continued since this video :D
    I'll haven't looked into it but a vague glance, but I'll be continuing it once there is a sufficient amount done.
    Vodkaer was changed to Merno because the former was a little too on the nose with the alcohol pun for English readers. The author has expressed his approval at this change. There is also a translation where his name is Wokka (a play on another brand). Merno/Mirno is a toss to "Smirnoff".

    • @dburna21
      @dburna21 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @MondoCool that's not ultra instinct. Its mastered ssb evolution. Already seen these. Goku comes back with master ui and still lose.

    • @MondoCool
      @MondoCool  4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Thanks for the info man, I'll look into it and post corrections. Once I get multiple confirmation.

    • @nnyse1984
      @nnyse1984 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@dburna21 definitely ssb evolution

    • @dburna21
      @dburna21 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@MondoCool just check out the exclusive, no problem just clearing up. I'm really up on this manga and a real dragonball head lol😅
      Thing about it is......I think vegeta is gonna be the one to take this match. He's surpassed an angel (in this manga) merno just wanna have fun at full power as an angel before being erased because the Angels are forbidden to do that in any crisis. The rules doesn't bend for him, but being that he suppose to been wiped out with the whole universe 13 he's having a good time at full power with goku and vegeta, which Angel's are forbidden to do by the way. He pushed them to their limits to get him to his full power to defeat him (Merno).
      What whis was tryna do.....

    • @herostorm4384
      @herostorm4384 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I could make up an alcohol pun name that might (just might) work: its voedkra

  • @Tokouv
    @Tokouv 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1149

    I love how Vegeta basically gets the spotlight for half of the manga

    • @maxstone2380
      @maxstone2380 4 ปีที่แล้ว +53

      Same, my favourite character is hands down Vegeta.

    • @animebagelnims2333
      @animebagelnims2333 4 ปีที่แล้ว +29

      same. I've always wanted vegeta to get some love lol

    • @phantomslayer8855
      @phantomslayer8855 4 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      he's basically the second main character fan boys and girls

    • @carlosreid51
      @carlosreid51 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      are the Saiyan stronger than the gods of destruction and beerus at this point fully

    • @FinalKamehameha44
      @FinalKamehameha44 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      RIGHT

  • @DanPantzig
    @DanPantzig 4 ปีที่แล้ว +157

    Honestly I thought this was the natural progression after the TOP. In the beginning of the arc they made it seem like the angels and GP were super aloof about mortals, so it makes sense that there would be one willing to use their power for funsies. I liked it, and I hope there's an actual end to it.

  • @btcodm5035
    @btcodm5035 4 ปีที่แล้ว +609

    The plot is actually amazing because the villain is both good and bad

    • @goldenking874
      @goldenking874 4 ปีที่แล้ว +34

      tomoei kazuya those are the best kinds of villains

    • @btcodm5035
      @btcodm5035 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@goldenking874 you said it

    • @user-kj6cf7wf3f
      @user-kj6cf7wf3f 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      He's not good hes just not evil

    • @aragaminightmare9527
      @aragaminightmare9527 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@user-kj6cf7wf3f so he's neutral

    • @budgiecat2885
      @budgiecat2885 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@goldenking874 Yeah watch Gundam War in the Pocket and Legend of Galactic Heroes. Its why those are so good

  • @abdulrahiimm3587
    @abdulrahiimm3587 3 ปีที่แล้ว +192

    Vegeta: *Trains with the Grand Priest*
    Goku: *Trains with the Omni King*
    Vegeta: *For f*ck sake Kakarot*

    • @KZ-ui5yo
      @KZ-ui5yo 3 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Just when Vegeta thought he finally got Soo much Stronger, Goku met a 3rd Zeno and He Trained Him

    • @kingz_chris6684
      @kingz_chris6684 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      ikr

    • @VioleBaamGrace5
      @VioleBaamGrace5 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Grand Priest never was interested in Vegeta only in Goku though.

    • @Nikolai2i
      @Nikolai2i 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      It’s Sage Xeno 😅 that’s really cool concept.

  • @joshkincannon1071
    @joshkincannon1071 4 ปีที่แล้ว +171

    I love how you made this a 50 minute vid telling as much of the story as possible every other channel I've found with there own videos about this Manga are dragged out through three plus 15 minute videos not to mention that Tech star rambles side notes through every video he ever makes dragging out short mangas into 5 segment videos I'll definitely be following your channel from now on :D thanks man awesome job

    • @JaysonPL
      @JaysonPL 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      were can I find this storyline?

    • @jonham7213
      @jonham7213 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      The continuation story of this on UnrealEntGaming is painfully long and dragged out. The storyline here and storytelling is high quality. You could go listen to some of the new Merno vids and compare to this one. @mondo cool is def leagues beyond his colleagues. Though I do appreciate that they are all supporting fan manga creators.

  • @unknownwarrior9775
    @unknownwarrior9775 4 ปีที่แล้ว +317

    This channel is severely underrated.

    • @Ecb23
      @Ecb23 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Unknown Worrior I really is

    • @avataryangchenbl9706
      @avataryangchenbl9706 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      No statement was ever more true !

  • @bowiesensei5574
    @bowiesensei5574 3 ปีที่แล้ว +188

    Fans out here making better arcs than the official canon

    • @azzafathelrahman470
      @azzafathelrahman470 3 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      Cap, idk why everyone hates super. This manga has so many contridictions, didn't the omni king say that only that the evil angel get him out of that dimension.

    • @daith_izumi
      @daith_izumi 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Moro arc but putting aside that end bit with the whole Ultra Instinct Goku gigantic spirit thing...

    • @sodokami6347
      @sodokami6347 3 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      @@azzafathelrahman470 no cap here all truth

    • @user-fy1nq3nf1q
      @user-fy1nq3nf1q 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@azzafathelrahman470 less than super lol
      Super just recycles two movies as arcs, and the top was a waste. Same for the future trunks arc just killing every single one of the survivors

    • @alexcasillas4508
      @alexcasillas4508 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      @@azzafathelrahman470 God ki means nothing, Goku’s extra stupid, Jiren boring, Goku gives Moro a senzu bean, Frieza just trains 4 month to match god forms, Moro looking like cell
      I don’t hate super but I get why people don’t like it. Also Goku learned to use portals like Merno uses to leave that dimension.

  • @JerelyBrowne
    @JerelyBrowne 4 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    Bro this was amazing. I haven't been this excited about the dbz universe since, well... DBZ lol.
    The stakes were real, the power scaling made sense, the villan was cool, the action was sick! Damn I need this in movie form now.

  • @prabalkamra7763
    @prabalkamra7763 4 ปีที่แล้ว +56

    I really really love this channel how you dub all things and add sound effects with perfect voice dub and sound effects that what makes you perfect this is why I love this and addicted to it

  • @yamano7527
    @yamano7527 4 ปีที่แล้ว +333

    Hmm, strange.... When they erase universes, they don't usually erase the angels, just the universes and the GoDs...

    • @riadgashi1
      @riadgashi1 4 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      @@chrisrussell7965 that's what I think too : )

    • @yngsharky2088
      @yngsharky2088 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

      He broke the angel rules and had to be a erased but since his universe can’t go without an angel than the rest of it was erased

    • @JohnnyYeTaecanUktena
      @JohnnyYeTaecanUktena 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I still want to know how he escaped from being erased

    • @JohnnyYeTaecanUktena
      @JohnnyYeTaecanUktena 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      i still want to know how he escaped from being erased

    • @jcdenton9338
      @jcdenton9338 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      I am guessing they were evil or the same reason that erased those universes erased the angels as well

  • @CAOVCorp2
    @CAOVCorp2 4 ปีที่แล้ว +357

    GOD THIS WAS SO AMAZING. MERNO IS HANDS DOWN THE BEST FAN MADE CHARACTER. DEFINITELY NEED A CANON CHARACTER LIKE HIM IN DBS

    • @JibberishGold
      @JibberishGold 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      yeah i agree this video is awesome

    • @CavemanTribe
      @CavemanTribe 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      jibberish gold no it’s not.

    • @ifyouknowyouknow6604
      @ifyouknowyouknow6604 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      jibberish gold no it’s not.

    • @Grten
      @Grten 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      jibberish gold no it’s not.

    • @danielp.6890
      @danielp.6890 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      jibberish gold no it's not.

  • @drsiqunt7389
    @drsiqunt7389 4 ปีที่แล้ว +38

    This was soooooo good, had me thinking there was gonna be a gogeta fusion at the end there haha. This is definitely one of my favorite one of your voice overs

  • @furiousxf
    @furiousxf 4 ปีที่แล้ว +167

    There must be another chapter because when I was reading the last one after he self-destructed they showed him over there where the Omni king

    • @cookingasandwich4289
      @cookingasandwich4289 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I know what you’re talking about that was the final chapter

    • @agae19
      @agae19 4 ปีที่แล้ว +21

      Well the author ended it on a cliffhanger 😂👍🏼

    • @furiousxf
      @furiousxf 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Avi Ghost I couldn’t deal if it was a cliffhanger

    • @agae19
      @agae19 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@furiousxf yes I know 🥺

    • @mr.patriotjol
      @mr.patriotjol 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Matt Rosado do you have a link to it?

  • @sephtakamura3647
    @sephtakamura3647 4 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    finally the moment i see super buu and frieza insulting, interacting and helping each other 😂😂

  • @jonham7213
    @jonham7213 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I love your storytelling style. Just straight storyline, good reading, music, sound effects… I wish you guys could do all of the fan manga complete stories. UEG took like 4 hours to read this same story. You gotta know I really appreciate you guys and your intentional lack of filler words in your storytelling

  • @craigmclendon3706
    @craigmclendon3706 4 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    This story was amazingly awesome, I was on the edge when Goku arrived talking to Vegeta in front of Merno similar to the Namak Saga, awesomeness

  • @aragaminightmare9527
    @aragaminightmare9527 4 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    From the way Merno acts, he's got to be classified as Chaotic Neutral.

  • @zaneakamatsu1912
    @zaneakamatsu1912 4 ปีที่แล้ว +55

    "Sipping his tea".
    Merno = Godly.

    • @Zakiour
      @Zakiour 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I thought his name was

  • @UndergroundTacticZ21
    @UndergroundTacticZ21 4 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    This should become cannon ! Hes some kind of anti hero/villain. Please people like this video and share it all over the world that it can reach toriyama so he makes this cannon!

  • @KevinThePengWIN
    @KevinThePengWIN 4 ปีที่แล้ว +334

    I wish this was canon. 😔

  • @Balance.Positivity
    @Balance.Positivity 3 ปีที่แล้ว +32

    Note I found out vegeta didn't actually get ui he just got an even stronger version of blue also you could see his eyes didn't have the ui design unlike goku

  • @Yashahiro_
    @Yashahiro_ 4 ปีที่แล้ว +53

    He’s like a child that just wants to play

  • @milleezy
    @milleezy 4 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    That was absolutely brilliant. He’s such a great villian

    • @hourless1211
      @hourless1211 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      He's not a villian he never done anything bad really. He's was the antagonist. Someone that gets in the way of the protagonist. He is a good guy that was hurt really really bad to the point he went crazy and rebeled. I can see where he's coming from I wish was just turned human instead of erased.

    • @milleezy
      @milleezy 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@hourless1211 kidnapping someone and threading to kill you is definitely wrong friend, forcing someone to fight you... that’s also wrong. Just because you’ve been through things in your life doesn’t give you the right to accost someone. If you cut me off on the highway, I pull up on you and grab your baby out of the car, then tell you the only way to get them back is by fighting me, am I not a bad guy?

    • @hourless1211
      @hourless1211 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@milleezy his universe, everything he knew, and himself was erased, remember being erased is worse than death there's no after life. His existence is literally a crime, he made threats true but he didn't even try to kill anyone they was just threats to force Goku and vageta to surpasse their limits again. By dragon ball standers he's a good guy. He even put everyone somewhere safe if he was telling the truth. He could if killed if he wanted to but he never did.

  • @Distinguished_Djentlemen
    @Distinguished_Djentlemen 4 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    Nobody:
    Vegeta: Instant transmission/portals Goku is getting very selfish.

  • @abnwil3873
    @abnwil3873 4 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    22:27 am i the only one who laughed my ass out when seeing Yamcha standing there as a "fighter"

  • @bannerturtoise1219
    @bannerturtoise1219 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Man, these fananga are awesome. The Super Buu twist was actually surprising, Vegeta getting Ultra Instinct was cool, and Goku learning to make portals after fighting those that can do it feels like the next stage progression of his Instant Transmission.

  • @maheshrawat6256
    @maheshrawat6256 4 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    Man love your videos and you are doing really great

  • @goldenking874
    @goldenking874 4 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    I could only hope the actual dragon ball super is this intriguing when it returns

    • @budgiecat2885
      @budgiecat2885 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      These fan mangas (this, R&R, Absalon, DBM, Deliverance, Devastation etc) have definitely upped their game in the near 20 year wake of DBZ so much now that even that Super has arrived, unfortunately parts of it dont seem to hold up to the writing.

    • @DisgorgeX
      @DisgorgeX 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      You been reading the manga? The current arc is super good, new issue drops tomorrow. I've been loving it and can't wait to see it animated.

    • @budgiecat2885
      @budgiecat2885 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@DisgorgeX I watched a few TH-cam narration summaries/ review of it and based on what I saw it doesnt look or sound as interesting as this fan manga Merno arc, or that other dark angels / wife of Grand Priest fan manga story. The only thing I noticed that seemed cool was Vegeta's remorse on him killing Nameks long ago when he used to be evil. Thats cool because that shows he has gone through more character progression. If only Super would do that for the other characters now too. Are Goten and Trunks still toddlers? wtf

    • @mikekoski1450
      @mikekoski1450 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Oi!! NO WATCHING ANIME OR MANGA YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO BE KILLING ENDEAVOR!!!

  • @baconcadet2532
    @baconcadet2532 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    “Hit me with y’all your might” Welp you pressed the “Cell botton”
    *VEGETA F I N A L F L A S H*

  • @wallsoul3351
    @wallsoul3351 4 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    It’s actually weird to see buu do something so smart

  • @zerokuro9497
    @zerokuro9497 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I love how Vegeta just get's thrown around by the grand priest lmao

  • @platinum7753
    @platinum7753 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Man, this was a very good read! I really enjoyed it! This was as well as a very interesting manga.

  • @BrianAwesome
    @BrianAwesome 4 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    In every absorbtion story of Buu absorbing Gotenks and Gohan, Buu should remember that the Saiyans had tails...So buu could regrow them thus giving him a tail, & sumhow bypassing the "pure blooded saiyan rule", and Buu achieving his own version of Great Ape and SSJ4.

    • @Kingpuddinbowl
      @Kingpuddinbowl 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Something I never considered, terrifying

    • @BrianAwesome
      @BrianAwesome 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Mondo Cool, your thoughts?

    • @budgiecat2885
      @budgiecat2885 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      That would still require growing an actual Saiyan tale not a fake buu one and also requiring an outside individual to calm him down to sentient thought so he could transform from Super Saiyan great ape Buu to SSJ4 Buu

    • @BrianAwesome
      @BrianAwesome 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@budgiecat2885 Unless Buu's too damn magical, to have the ravige ape side overide his personality...

    • @budgiecat2885
      @budgiecat2885 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@BrianAwesome I guess...but remember: that fat kai was enough to override kid Buu's personality changing him into Fat Buu

  • @DirkLasermaster
    @DirkLasermaster 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much for... simplifying the dialogue. I tried reading this a while back, and the literal paragraphs of dialogue in every speech bubble made it really hard to keep my interest! Props to you haha

  • @scorpionjc09
    @scorpionjc09 4 ปีที่แล้ว +83

    When people dont realize that the old man is an old zeno
    🤔 hmm

    • @rjones476
      @rjones476 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I don't think anyone came to any conclusion but its an old zeno...

    • @kushdeepsingh2306
      @kushdeepsingh2306 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I noticed that

    • @charger9912
      @charger9912 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I noticed from the start🤣

    • @F______________________M
      @F______________________M 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Zeno that looks like that god of destruction in tournament of power

    • @trolltroll8718
      @trolltroll8718 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yes

  • @dirceusantos7308
    @dirceusantos7308 4 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    23:00 this is the problem of every fan manga.
    Tien =shaft
    yamcha=shaft/humiliated
    krilin=praised
    Roshi=wanked
    Piccolo= does something then, shaft
    Goten= fusion
    Trunks= fusion
    Chiaotzu= nobody remembers him.
    Gohan= relevant after a few zenkai's somehow
    Fan manga/super. Goku and vegeta with vegeta having more prominence with the plot and goku just being there cause why not

    • @CarpetFootball
      @CarpetFootball 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Dirceu Santos You just basic summed up this fan manga in a nut shell. 🤦🏾 nobody else got any screen time they were actually just for the sake of it. Goku was barely in it he came at the back end with MUI and learning how to do portals let’s face Goku was just fan-service. Frieza was just there. In the end there was really no need for anyone other then Vegeta and the angles to be in this manga.

    • @dirceusantos7308
      @dirceusantos7308 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@CarpetFootball Glad to see I am not alone in that regard. Most comments section seem to be ok with this model of making fan manga.
      That I stop saying anything not wanting to ruin their fun.
      It just became too predictable

    • @CarpetFootball
      @CarpetFootball 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Dirceu Santos No your right I completely agree. I mean at the beginning the story had me intrigued but then it just became a predictable dragon ball arc. I mean people say they don’t want just Goku always getting the spotlight they want other characters as getting their moments as well. That’s a massive lie they just don’t want anyone else who isn’t Vegeta to be getting the spotlight, you noticed it too right the Z fighters didn’t even have a lot of screen time yet nobody complains, but when it’s Goku everybody throws a fit. That’s what this whole manga was Vegeta’s own arc where literally nobody else was relevant that’s the reason everyone in the comment section see no faults in it yet will criticise Toriyama for wanking off Goku🤦🏾. Sure in dbz arc Goku does get the spot light but everyone helps him in a huge way and they all get a fair amount of screen time and it gives other characters a chance to shine like in tournament of power. This whole fan manga was just one big let down how you gonna bring in every Z fighters make it seem like they’ll help in the final boss battle just for them to be absorbed by Buu should’ve made them train with whis. And what was the whole point of Goku even joining the final battle. People got pissed off when he got ultra instinct and learnt that portal ability yet in the end what was the point.
      I’ve rambled on for long sorry😅😂

    • @jamescadet4450
      @jamescadet4450 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@CarpetFootball everything you said was exactly what I’m thinking. 🤦🏽‍♂️

    • @pitter5497
      @pitter5497 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      What did you want? Krillin, Tien and Yamcha going toe to toe with an angel?

  • @samarijohnson1595
    @samarijohnson1595 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This manga made me feel emotions for these characters. That hasn’t happened since the OG Dragon Ball Z. Of course, Super was good in its own right. But, something about this struck a chord with my childhood in a weird/good way. It has Ernie gives be Frieza/Cell vibes. As destructive as Frieza. But, elegant and sophisticated like Perfect Cell. Just truly astonishing.

  • @iGoVroomVroom
    @iGoVroomVroom 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Merno is basically Hisoka. Training a fighter with huge potential because they want the challenge.

    • @sodokami6347
      @sodokami6347 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I knew he reminded me of someone....

  • @ChromaticVanity
    @ChromaticVanity 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Freedom of emotions is chaos for human beings. We can channel them in any way we can, but we still cannot control them. This is why perfection is a different word than the way we really live

  • @theegyptianconservativevie6903
    @theegyptianconservativevie6903 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Amazing!!! Now that is how you do Dragon Ball! I wish he would have utilized more of Super Buu, but it was a genius idea to have him absorb the rest of the Z Fighters! Great work. And you just gained one more subscriber. Bravo!

  • @sirel7345
    @sirel7345 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    The old mans zeno I can’t tell under that beard you can see the stripes on his face to i think he just wants to play around

  • @alfredthreats2905
    @alfredthreats2905 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The Merno Arc was by far the best arc that was ever made and to see you narrate this is amazing

  • @HittingBandy
    @HittingBandy 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Videl as Mirno gets Pan: "Hmm, where'd that come from?"
    Videl seeing Mirno giving a crying Pan back: *"I'LL KILL THAT BITCH WHO MADE MY BABY CRY"*

  • @xenophagia
    @xenophagia 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I love that Vegeta got to shine in this.

  • @felixthescholarlytitan4437
    @felixthescholarlytitan4437 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Having seen the more recent chapters of this story, it’s quite shocking just how different Merno’s personality is here compared to later.

    • @pariahazul8653
      @pariahazul8653 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Right. Now, he’s just plain evil

    • @Itsnobigdeal420
      @Itsnobigdeal420 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I guess you can argue that since merno is so close to his final plan he’s just stopped playing around now but yeah I agree

    • @halochampion342
      @halochampion342 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      the recent chapters were created by unrealentgaming, not the original creator who made this manga

  • @sideways_chip_eater6420
    @sideways_chip_eater6420 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    character: *does anything*
    merno: *bonjour*

  • @michaelking7874
    @michaelking7874 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This was worth the time this could really be an interesting series

  • @Izaiah3333
    @Izaiah3333 4 ปีที่แล้ว +53

    He littearly was just toying with them he didnt even use his powers like that

  • @larrylarson6946
    @larrylarson6946 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    "Your existence is unexceptable"

  • @spaghettimaster9368
    @spaghettimaster9368 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This is twice now that Vegeta has had people come on to him for achieving a godly state. First Goku Black and now Merno, gods have some weird kinks.

  • @x.gusher.x7324
    @x.gusher.x7324 4 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    😍This was just perfection👏
    When is part 2

  • @t.t.g4777
    @t.t.g4777 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    It took me 5 days just to understand what he meant by “The more you learn the less you know”😅

  • @legendary_Jay93
    @legendary_Jay93 4 ปีที่แล้ว +74

    They Need To Make Merno Cannon I Actually Like Him & The Story Was Tight

    • @techwizpc4484
      @techwizpc4484 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      True. It's barely an inconvenience.

    • @potas8
      @potas8 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      please no

    • @legendary_Jay93
      @legendary_Jay93 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@potas8 Why Not?

    • @potas8
      @potas8 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@legendary_Jay93 because it looks like it was maded by a kid?
      or someone who doesnt understand the basics of how to introduce a character in a story?
      *at least the traces are very good, very good INDEED*

    • @Kokoism
      @Kokoism 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Jermaine Hightower if they do they need to rewrite this story because there is so many issues like how the grand priest cannot teleport but his son can? Even goku can instant transmission that is just stupid that he has to travel with whis lol and Merno got erased with his universe even tho the angels during the tournament of power didn’t get erased... but if he was made into a character by DBS writers then that would be awesome, they just need to rewrite the story.

  • @Zerum69
    @Zerum69 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    Love how Vegeta was the main character until Goku just comes along using mastered ultra instinct+portals...
    Jeez Goku is such a cheat, always learning the op techniques before everyone else

    • @Blazingle
      @Blazingle 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Even after that Goku sits in the background while Vegeta and the angel fights

    • @CarpetFootball
      @CarpetFootball 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Zerum Nobody else but Vegeta was relevant to this story 🤦🏾 and your only getting annoyed with Goku getting a new move😂

    • @jamescadet4450
      @jamescadet4450 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@CarpetFootball Basically Vegeta fans in a nutshell.

  • @nanio.6772
    @nanio.6772 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Vegeta power comes from anger but he was able to unlock Ultra Instinct as it required peace.
    Goku power comes from peace and love but also can be triggered through anger.
    It's like yin and yang, darkness in light and light in darkness

  • @bigfuturenick
    @bigfuturenick 4 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    Vegeta a real G "warrior" he turned down the Angel on more power. He only want to rely on his power. Dude is my fuking hero.

    • @budgiecat2885
      @budgiecat2885 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      He learned his lesson from the Babidi incident....

    • @Goated876
      @Goated876 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@budgiecat2885 LMAO

  • @ayusharyan3312
    @ayusharyan3312 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    The retired old man is zeno. I can see him

  • @anthonydavis191
    @anthonydavis191 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This is a Cliffhanger, this really got me right here

  • @thisfreakingguy3833
    @thisfreakingguy3833 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    So glad I found a guy that can tell a story without saying as to where as to what as to how as to if and any other as to filler words in every sentence.....

  • @CarnivoreCapers
    @CarnivoreCapers 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I'm not sure if it is because I am drunk or what. But that video was freaking awesome. Especially the end. Mondo Cool keep this going dude I love it. Even old farts like me like Dragon Ball. Keep it going mate.

  • @andrematthee1053
    @andrematthee1053 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    The whole Vegeta trying to overcome Goku is getting old....

  • @awaizalimughal3597
    @awaizalimughal3597 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    SIMPLY AMAZING....!!! I really love the story & the buildup for the characters.

  • @disturbedguts8253
    @disturbedguts8253 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Me bored and don't know what to do watches the video was so God that I watched another time

  • @jacksteel3464
    @jacksteel3464 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    This was great

  • @TheAcadianGuy
    @TheAcadianGuy 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Sad that we are left with a cliffhanger for this fan manga.

  • @TrinityOnline
    @TrinityOnline 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Please do more of such full story coverage. This is the best on TH-cam I have ever seen. +1 like and subbed.

  • @RIPx86
    @RIPx86 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is the single greatest Fan made story of dragonball. Way better than anything in Super

  • @Omegadeemen
    @Omegadeemen 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    interesting stuff
    art was great, off from toriyama but i could see the inspiration.
    loved the narration
    Merno(?) pretty chill bro
    only gripes would have to be shoe-horning the other characters in
    having Vegeta go UI in lieu of him wanting to go on his own path
    -and the path he and Goku took in achieving it were minuses imo

  • @isaacsamuel7517
    @isaacsamuel7517 4 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    After Zamasu arc, broly movie, hearts in dbh, merno is the design that is in the story flow though it's fiction, I feel better than Moro arc...

    • @mazkeraid4039
      @mazkeraid4039 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Wait 'til that arc finishes and come back to compare which is which.

    • @isaacsamuel7517
      @isaacsamuel7517 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@mazkeraid4039 no bro, Moro arc doesn't feel DBZ, it just feels boring.
      Because think about it, he is just another villian that needs to be defeated.
      Whereas Zamasu or hearts wanted to change the principalities and powers themselves so does merno. Depowering the Omni king, an entity that destroys worlds for fun....this concept of new gods or overpowering Omni king That's new and that is why fans like it, it has never happened so in other stories. Where as moro is just a story like marvel or DC...... The faster they finish the arc the better I would say, but when have they ever taken my opinion.
      They already had the 4 Kai's and grand Kai overthem, but brought in the supreme Kai and now there's a grand supreme Kai who has gone evil, the power scaling level the story has put the characters is ultra Instinct Goku fighting at multi verse level warriors surpassing gods of destruction and near angels. Gogeta Vs broly supposedly powerful than jiren....
      Although the series needs to notch down their level to make it look like DBZ, they also have pushed it far in power levels. This fan manga for example is balancing out the story in the way it needs to be done. Some of theses fan manga are very good at it, makes me wonder why the makers of DBs can't think this simple and we'll.
      Merno is one person though.
      Just think of this hearts brings his team back, Zamasu gets a team with broly, and some guys like shallo...

    • @ifyouknowyouknow6604
      @ifyouknowyouknow6604 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Isaac Samuel they’re are many things wrong with what u have said. Nothing about dbs feels like dbz. If u can tell me in dbz when they had the feeling of overthrowing gods then I’ll accept. Also you miss the entire point of the Moro arc. It is an arc for character development in power and possibly (not seen yet) mindset. And also Moro arc is doing exactly what ur complaining about power scales being so far off now. It is trying to be more technical instead of constant power boost eg vegeta learning how to use energy properly so that he can utilise more. Also ur point of bringing down power levels is dumb but oh well and this manga is enjoyable yes but isn’t balanced well. For both goku and vegeta learn how to go ui by will after this in 21 chapters and making them both insanely strong throwing the power scales(what u were complaining about) to far out. Only two Ui can match the strongest angel below the grand priest which means db would reach close to its end.
      The fact you think this is done better than normal dbs manga is actually so bizarre since every problem u said about it is in this manga. So ur point doesn’t make sense. And this is the problem with some. Just cause u like a character doesn’t mean the arc is insanely good. It was enjoyable but only due to the new fan made character but once u pay attention to the actually story writing it is less balanced than dbs. So I don’t understand ur point.
      Yes he was a good character but this manga has already shown so many problems with it.
      Moro is actually close to what db enemies used to be which were characters with weird abilities showing that they are trying to bring back the og feeling with out down scaling characters power levels.
      This arc literally has done everything ur saying this one does and better. There is a reason why fan made is more enjoyable for a set period of time and that’s because it’s more straight to the point but that’s y they r fan made, cause after this where do they go if they are hitting the pinnacle of the shows power levels. Fan made doesn’t think about longevity of the show and only thinks about what the fans constantly want. If dragon ball was done like this goku and vegeta would probably have like 20 different forms. Also you mostly likely forget about this fan made in a year or so showing that it isn’t memorable ( don’t say u won’t cause db absalon has a more interesting story and yet people forgot about it)
      So tbh ur point isn’t well structured. It’s just you nitpicking and comparing the best of this fan made manga to the worst of the current dbs arc.
      Also power scales are fine since in dbs when did it make a difference? They make sure that a planet being blown up is still a big deal.(also jiern is stronger than broly)so there is no need to bring down power scales cause it’s not Pokemon.

    • @ifyouknowyouknow6604
      @ifyouknowyouknow6604 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Isaac Samuel also zamatsu and hearts are both villains that need to be defeated tf. Yes they both challenged the way of the universe but unlike the new fan made character they weren’t doing it for the fun of it. They ended up exactly how Moro feels to u. Another villain. Tbh u actually r just stating stuff that doesn’t make sense. Hearts was a terrible villain and zamasu had potential but squandered it on his egotistical plan of making everything in his image. This led to that arc being dog 💩 and exactly how ur describing Moro.
      At this point are u sure u have read from db to dbs cause I’m doubting u with what ur saying.
      The fact you are stating this really either shows u don’t pay attention to stuff or u aren’t taking in what’s actually happening in manga

    • @isaacsamuel7517
      @isaacsamuel7517 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@ifyouknowyouknow6604 now that they have produced this story I am not saying this arc should be discarded...Probably using gogeta blue or mui Goku to defeat Moro.
      Moro is comparable to janemba final form a villian to be defeated.
      Zamasu and hearts though are seen as villians aren't. Because think about it they wanted to overthrow the Omni king who destroys entire universes for no reason. And most fans agree to this though Omni king isn't portrayed as villian. The author of dragon ball is aware of theses facts. They will probably use it in future...
      It is good in a way they scaled down the threat level in Moro's arc.
      But if you feel the series would reach its end level if they brought in say a character like mui vegito who could be as strong as angels. I don't think mui vegito could match grand priest, again it's in the authors hands. And I don't see it would take the series to its pinnacle end.
      Anyway my point is compare dB Moro arc to superman or batman or marvel. It looks like the same hero's Vs villian story conflict.
      But if say there are different teams such as hearts team (cumber, kamin, oren, lags), Fu's team with meta cooler, Zamasu's team(broly, shallot, merno, Android 21), Z fighters, Moro's team, frieza's force, etc.....all searching for super dragon balls scattered through the universe revealing zalama and yamoshi or even higher powers of the multiverses on the waysuxh as the creator light.. It moves the story from this level to the next with some new concepts for example: searching the super dragon balls in the universe coming across frieza's home planet winta facing the acrosians or more races through the galaxy.. can you see how much further it can be taken.
      The current concept of characters put under power check such as Omni overseen by grand priest above whis above bills above Goku...
      While Omni king is a destroyer and the gods of destructions are so, their powers were checked by hearts, or zamasu or fan manga merno and such independent characters seems to be better I felt... Now if Omni king were like the grand Kai it's a different story but it's not the case.
      One concept is that the angels are actually evil except 1 from the 13th like merno and have a grander scheme.
      Another is future Zeni is a actually Omni Zamasu. Theses concepts will do great I feel.
      The story which I say would make sense because the series is called dragon ball which is about dragon balls and the dragon, so teams searching the super dragon balls would make sense. it not Goku adventure or vegeta adventures or Saiyan adventures.
      More over they should call it Super Dragon Ball Z or Dragon Ball Z something because the Japanese's kanji for super is hard to grasp by people around the world but the word dragon ball z was known.
      Along the way they got to have one episode of cross over with one punch man. Just imagine...

  • @pokeball699
    @pokeball699 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The Bulma's capsule joke earned you a subscriber👍

  • @GeraldPUR
    @GeraldPUR 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Enjoyed all from start to finish thnks bunch!

  • @artachi3046
    @artachi3046 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    When i first saw this i Felt like this make more sence then the anime.

  • @NotSL0TH17
    @NotSL0TH17 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Best stories ever. Love your videos

  • @brandongarcia4838
    @brandongarcia4838 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Super and Co needs to step their game up. Fans are producing stories far better than what Super has come out with. Like hire these guys and start stepping out the box. This also felt alot more Z and the character developments where done very well.

  • @cameronweston1038
    @cameronweston1038 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great work man. Love you you told the story with all the sound effects. Felt like i was watching an actual Episode.

  • @smushilad8324
    @smushilad8324 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Why is Merno such a fun antagonist? I love it

  • @Jodipo
    @Jodipo 4 ปีที่แล้ว +58

    First of all, I loved this fan-manga and Merno has become one of my favorite Dragon Ball fan characters. Now into my two questions:
    1) Is the story over, in hiatus or still going?
    2) Can you check out the fan-manga Dragon Ball Ex Apocalypto, it's pretty good.

    • @MondoCool
      @MondoCool  4 ปีที่แล้ว +28

      Yes, atm Dragon Ball Super Kai is not an ongoing series, but the author has taken note of its recent popularity, so I wouldn't be surprised to see it continue sometime.
      I've heard of it, but it's been awhile since I read it - I'll check it out :D

    • @carlosreid51
      @carlosreid51 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MondoCool coo, video the Saiyans should be far stronger than god of destruction and Beerus maybe

    • @dekendraeharris5965
      @dekendraeharris5965 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Mondo Cool sup 😎

    • @budgiecat2885
      @budgiecat2885 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MondoCool He should contact Toriyama

  • @goldbat4healing105
    @goldbat4healing105 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    GP said all Angles must remain neutral but from what I think,
    merno is chaotic neutral.

  • @cliffclapfn94
    @cliffclapfn94 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Good job

  • @shady8045
    @shady8045 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    that portal move is very unique, I feel like angels spamming the same move over and over again is kinda uncharacteristic though tbh.

  • @marcusruth6612
    @marcusruth6612 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I personally have found almost all the spin offs of the real thing absolutely suck, BUT this has had me interested from beginning to end. Well done. Thank you for giving Vegeta some light. finally

    • @budgiecat2885
      @budgiecat2885 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Dragonball Multiverse is p good.
      Also for focusing entirely on humor slice of life, Dragon Ball R&R is really good.
      Super Dragonball Heroes anime/game story is awkward and seemingly rushed overall but has its moments.
      There's also a good one shot of Cabba/Caulifla and Kale that is pretty new forget its name. Made by some Wolf guy. Takes place like 3 or 4 years after ToP and Cabba is no longer scrubby looking.

  • @jayet7095
    @jayet7095 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Love the way you portray the story bro

  • @vanilla6287
    @vanilla6287 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    First one to be here and loved the episode bro! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :)

  • @jamessowles1699
    @jamessowles1699 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Remember when he was tilling vegetta how portals worked so goko should be able put every thing back. I would say they got a gift out of that fight. Well goko did. The one thing worry about goko he may become more powerful then the angles. They may view him to be threat one day. The don't fight because there power

    • @Zulfar-bd9tc
      @Zulfar-bd9tc 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It's Goku not Goko.

    • @devinowens8721
      @devinowens8721 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Dude plz spell Goku once. All that "goko" was physically painful to read from over cringing. The show has been around for 30 yrs bro. His name's almost an onamonapeoa. Meaning it's spelt how it sounds

    • @jamessowles1699
      @jamessowles1699 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@devinowens8721 lol get over it

    • @devinowens8721
      @devinowens8721 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@jamessowles1699 I'm honestly not trying to offend but damn bro. Misspelling an iconic (and only 4 letter) name like Goku a lot was agonizing to read. It's probably just me tho I'm sorta a dick

    • @devinowens8721
      @devinowens8721 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Kenzita v beurden thank you for your brilliant input stranger

  • @yourboi7778
    @yourboi7778 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    OH NO LORD POPO HAS TAKEN OVER THIS CHANNEL

  • @SKYLlN3
    @SKYLlN3 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I must say this manga is on another level , excellent edit and narration Mondo , I really enjoyed this video more than anything and its 1 of my best videos in TH-cam so far, got my respect ^^

  • @chopp115
    @chopp115 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is sooo good the way you animate the Manga, you the real goat 🐐

  • @daimionhollins528
    @daimionhollins528 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Not bad, at all! Felt alot like watching a who bunch of episodes rolled into one. It was hard to predict Merno's true intentions or his motives. Good stuff, but odd.

  • @skin1388
    @skin1388 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Loved that vegeta had his time!! Much needed

  • @MotoMotoMED
    @MotoMotoMED 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Vegeta took "If you fuck with me ima make sure you touch everything" to a whole new level😂

  • @mikebar42
    @mikebar42 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Grand minister of funny walks ::waddle's away like Charlie Chaplin::

  • @lordweeb1903
    @lordweeb1903 4 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    When goku becomes doctor strange 😂

    • @kushkush1481
      @kushkush1481 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Not funny at all

    • @Itsnobigdeal420
      @Itsnobigdeal420 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Radical Max merno I’ve come to bargain

    • @sponge3943
      @sponge3943 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Its not funny but good try

    • @sketchydude8431
      @sketchydude8431 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@kushkush1481 hes not wrong though, almost the same way Steven strange did it.

  • @TyGoGetum
    @TyGoGetum 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Thank you for putting it all together!! Hey.. Since you know a guy that translates, do you know a guy that does dbz sfx?

    • @MondoCool
      @MondoCool  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      unfortunately not -_-

  • @rayenharchay821
    @rayenharchay821 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you soo much man!

  • @thephenomenalalphaspider1451
    @thephenomenalalphaspider1451 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Man the narrator is awesome and the sound effects completely makes it feels like watching an actual anime (in my opinion). Awesome just pure awesomeness.

  • @yungblade7
    @yungblade7 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I love this manga if only aKira Toriyama would make dragonball more violent like it was in the frieza saga.

    • @EduSanjuan777
      @EduSanjuan777 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Times changed. Now you can't do that kind of thing without parents souing Toei. They are trying to brand DB for the new generaion of kids. And they are not like we were. This is not the 90s anymore. Sadly.

    • @yungblade7
      @yungblade7 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@EduSanjuan777 anime isn't for kids though I remember naruto & bleach had a lot of blood and that show was major targeted for teens 13 + back in the mid 2000s now everyone is soft. Tbh kids are watching porn / having cell phones at an earlier age than we ever did I dont see why the censorship now

    • @JeromeADavis
      @JeromeADavis 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@EduSanjuan777 Violence is marketed to kids all the time.

    • @EduSanjuan777
      @EduSanjuan777 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@JeromeADavis Nowadays not like it was on the 90's and late 80's. Remember things like Fist of The north star. Old Dragon Ball. Kinnikuman.They would never allow that on tv now.

    • @yungblade7
      @yungblade7 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@EduSanjuan777 exactly

  • @sabahatfatima1415
    @sabahatfatima1415 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Mondo: "And yamcha has.......his crabomelleteonricetechniqie technique"
    I letirally laughed my head off

  • @twiceremoved7339
    @twiceremoved7339 ปีที่แล้ว

    You did this in under 12 hours. Thank god.

  • @pinktanukiii
    @pinktanukiii 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Merno and Vegeta just started playing Pokémon at the end but they're the Pokémon