Hey everyone, thanks so much for watching! I just want to quickly apologize for not uploading for the past month or so. I'm *planning* on doing way more uploads now that I have more free time. Also, if ya'll are interested, here are a few other plot points that I wanted to include that I cut out of the video cause it was getting too long: - The FBI will dig into Aunt May’s past, here we’ll learn more about how she was widowed. - We’ll learn a little bit more about Uncle Ben and how he died. - Aunt May tells Happy about this which causes him to sympathize more with Peter. (Becomes paternal figure for Peter in this film) - Peter tells happy that his ideal "normal" life is just being with MJ and going to college. - Happy writes Peter an outstanding letter of recommendation to MIT and is essentially the reason as to why Peter even got in. - Peter realizes this at the end of the film, where Happy is already dead. - The stuff with Electro and Doc Ock is purposefully unresolved so their arcs can continue with a live-action Spiderverse film. If I had to pick a director, I'd go with Sam Raimi :P
great pitch and i like that daredevil gets more of a role... although all i want is mcu peter parker to mention uncle ben, BY NAME... and mention how important he was in peter's life.
Thanks! And yes, I completley agree with you in that it's about time Uncle Ben gets brought up. I meant to mention him in the video, but that's definitely something I want brought up. Especially, how the death of Uncle Ben has affected Aunt May cause I feel like May got completely shafted in Far from Home.
Amazing video and some fantastic decisions were made.I loved you usage of Norman Osborne and how you established Ned's eventual downfall. My version of the film would focus restrictly on the identity crisis storyline saving the Multiverse story for the end credits and for either a Spider-Man 4 or Doctor Strange:Into The Multiverse Of Madness. The film would have two villians which both follow the mcu film tradition of having villians which have never appeared on the big screen before. The villians would be Kraven The Hunter and Chameleon. The Chameleon would disguise himself as Spider-Man and comit crimes to worsen Peter's reputation and chance of freedom meanwhile Kraven would target Peter's friends and family. The film would be essentially be a thriller with Kraven and Chameleon been unsettling unpredictable. Additionally I would add Daredevil into the mix to help Peter clear his name aswell to help Peter relief his stress and train him up to fight Kraven. Daredevil's abilities would also be able to be used to help distinguish the Chameleon. The plot of my version is very basic and is similar to your version.Peter would been on the run and would be trying to balance out his time as Peter and Spider-Man to seal his identity and prove his innocence.An additional part of the story I would add would be themes of isolation and personal connections.Peter would eventually start becoming more distant from others would then lead to Peter coming to a near death experience by Kraven and only been hardly been saved by Daredevil.This is so that we can see the growth of Daredevil from Season 3 and use his experience from his arc to further Peter as a character.From this film, Peter would learn the value of himself and decides to never turn his down the great responsibility of been Spider-Man. Although I would hate for this to happen but if Kraven killed Daredevil it would be such a painful and unexpected death which would put Kraven high on the radar for hatable villians. That's all for the actual movie as I haven't thought for an actual logical conclusion to the story. For the Multiverse end credit scene it wouldn't actually have any depth but rather it would juat be fan service overload which generates mystery and confusion for a future sequel. I would start the scene by having electro in a comic accurate design randomly attack the city. During this fight, Andrew Garfeild's Spider-Man would randomly swoop in to help. Tom Holland Spider-Man would actually start attacking Andrew believing he's Chameleon. Andrew would also comment on how Electro looks very different.Then Suddenly Doc Ock and Green Goblin (Willem Devoe) would appear aswell. The situation looks bleak for both Spider-Men until the classic Sam Raimi Spider-Man plays and Tobey Maguire swings in to assist. All 3 Spider-Men fight united to take on each villian individually. Tobey fights Electro as Electro can't disable his webs as his web shooting is natural Andrew Fights Goblin as he's fought a version of him before Tom Foghts Doc Ock because of he's the most agile. After the fight has concluded, the classic pointing meme like what Spider-Verse did would happen without making it feel unnatural as Tom as just spent weeks fighting a man who used his identity as his own so he would obviously be suspicious. Doctor Strange would appear and with no explanation or context tells the Spider-Men to come with him.
Yooo nice I love your inclusion of the Chameleon and Kraven. I love how you tied them into your story and the themes; I especially like the Chameleon and how Daredevil kinda acts like a counter to him since he can sense him. And I agree with you putting the spiderverse stuff in the end credits, that's one of the things I wanted to prioritize cause I feel like it would be rushed if it just happened in this movie; I think it's best to save it for a separate live action Spiderverse movie (preferably directed by Sam Raimi hehe). Anyway, great ideas man and thanks for watching the video, I appreciate it :D
Flash as Norman Osborne's son? Your brain is so big. I really loved this! Personally I feel really hesitant about the idea of bringing back Alfred Molina's Doc Ock because I think that making him the villain again would ruin his arc in SM2, but you really make it work here with his different motivation here! Also, I can't lie, I'd be totally stoked seeing an interaction between Molina's Doc Ock and Tom's Spider-Man. What would happen to Doc Ock at the end here? If he's staying in this universe to try to find his wife, is he still gonna have the, ah.... giant robot arms? I think having Normon Osborne being the one to initiate the multiverse plot is a good call, especially the part where he's not being played by Willem Dafoe, because I feel that would definitely overcomplicate things. Do you have any actor you imagine as MCU Norman? And if Flash is Norman's son, would he have a more Harry Osborne character arc or comic Flash Thompson character arc? Honestly there's so many interesting ways that the MCU could take that, especially the aspect of having Spider-Man's most iconic villain's son being a huge Spider-Man fan. I can just imagine a potential huge character moment for Flash being him standing between his father and his hero as Norman's attacking Spider-Man, maybe with Peter's mask torn ro reveal half his face for extra drama points. I really like this as the intro to Hobgoblin Ned! Some of my favorite pieces of media are media that grows as their audiences grow, and having Peter's closest friend breaking it off with him and being set up as a villain would do wonders for shifting MCU Spider-Man into a more mature character. Also! The Parker Luck! We really don't see much Classic Parker Luck in Homecoming or Far From Home, and having an array of bad things happen to Peter in this movie would help make up for that. So many complaints about MCU Spider-Man are regarding the seeming lack of bad consequences for his actions, and I feel like you really had that in mind when making this pitch, especially regarding the fates of Ned and Happy. Also also, thank you for relegating Andrew and Tobey's Spideys to aftercredit cameos, I definitely agree that this movie should focus more on Tom's Spidey than overstuffing it with fan service (with the exception of Daredevil fan service, because I'm a Daredevil fan and it's been two years and I demand to be served SOMETHING). So excellent call making Daredevil the bigger character than Doctor Strange here, because they really do need to work on tying Peter back down to street-level vigilante stuff as oppose to cosmic events. Also I am shamelessly Daredevil-biased. Oh! And I love the cute animation of your avatar writing in the corner! It's a fun little touch and the writing motion is super smooth. Great job!
AAAA You're too kind 🥺 but thank you lolll. I was actually super nervous to make this video since I know ppl are pretty critical of Spiderman, and this video is just solely my ideas. Sooo I very much appreciate and am relieved u liked it xP And yeah I think making Flash Osborn's son will be a good way of keeping the character in later Spidey films whilst explaining why his parents are so neglectful to him (and it'll explain why he's super rich hehe). If I were to fancast a Norman Osborn I'd think I'd pick either Irrfan Khan or Bob Odenkirk. Idk for sure though that's just off the top of my head 😂. I think I would try to mix both Flash's and Harry's arc though. I don't think Flash should also become green goblin cause that might seem repetitive; so, I think like you said, there should be some interesting conflict with him and his father since Flash is a die-hard Spidey fan. I think I would have Doc Ock's arc continue and end in a live action Spiderverse movie; I would love another interaction between him and an older Tobey Maguire. I'd like to think his arc would end peacefully where he rekindles his love with his wife and dismantles his robot tentacle things lol. And yesssss I totally agree with you in that I love content where the characters grow alongside the audience. I feel like Ned didn't really get much development in FFH, so I think this is a good opportunity to learn a lot about his history whilst tearing his relationship apart with Peter. I also kinda want to bring up Uncle Ben and what specifically happened to him. And I think it'd be cool to see how that exactly affected Aunt May. Then Happy can learn about that as well which will cause him to take a more fatherly role for Peter! And yeah, I soooo hope that they don't end up cramming Spiderverse into this movie. It deserves to have its own standalone film with proper buildup so I made sure to just make it a post credits thing xP. I also don't like the idea of Doctor Strange being an Iron Man replacement because I don't think Spiderman needs another mentor (at least not another superhero mentor) imo. And I think since Dr. Strange has really overpowered abilities, it would ruin a lot of tension and stakes for Spiderman. So I think it's best to just have Dr. Strange be a minor supporting role in the first act 😁. Lastly, I think Daredevil having a more prominent role just makes more sense to me, cause like you said, they're both street level heroes, or at least they should be hehe. And I'm glad you like the animation!! I'm also super happy with how it turned out xP. Thanks for watching and commenting your thoughts ^_^
I thought I was the only one who thought that "Flash" in the series should've been Harry Osborn all along. He wasn't the right type of bully to be Eugene Thompson. I could never buy that version of 'Flash' to join the army out of high school, let alone become Agent Venom. Speaking of 'friends turned villain', I think that they could set up Liz as a future Vulture. She gets 'dusted', her father doesn't, she and her mother come back to find out that he died in prison (either by violence or by just broken heart), and of course she blames Spider-Man for putting him in prison to begin with... finding out that he's Peter Parker, her friend, is just the straw that breaks that camel's back. Could make for a very unsettling reveal during a Sinister Six fight.
@@tfly999 Ooo Liz as a new vulture? That's a super cool idea, especially about her dad dying in prison during the blip and her blaming Peter! Now I want to see that adapted hehe
@@Machuw Question: why MIT for Peter & MJ & not Brooklyn State University like the comics? Also I have an idea for the 2nd MCU Spider-man trilogy Involving MJ becoming either the Black Cat or SpiderWoman just so MJ can actually help Peter rather then sitting on the sidelines worrying about him
Yeah, definitely a lot of potential and ideas, so hopefully the movie turns out good! And thanks for watching the video anyway even though you're not much of a fan of these movies, I appreciate it :)
I really want Daredevil in this movie. I Want Daredevil to help Spider man. I want this to be a Spider man and Daredevil team up film that would be great.
Bro your Idea was so damn amazing that l would love to see you rewrite and shape the dceu in your own image. Like this was truly a blast and the way you developed peters character and tried to let the others characters go through a nice character arc is purely genius. Please make a whole series on these pitches. Damn your talented and we need more minds of creativity like you. Keep it up and you just earned a new sub, again amazing stuff!
Yo thanks bro, I'm so glad you enjoyed the video! It means a lot! And yes, I'm planning on doing WAY more of these in the future like Flash, Batman, Black Panther, etc. :)
Wow, this was super creative. Really well-done video, I think this might be your best video... ever? I loved all the creative decisions you made with the character and added more consequences to the film. I like that you didn't ruin Doc Ock's arc, and the fact that he has to fight Peter isn't really up to him doesn't ruin anything. I like the use of Flash, and how you tied him back into the film. I also read your extra notes in the comments, and I love that you included Uncle Ben in this film and gave a little something for Aunt May to do in this film because she was hardly a character in Far From Home.
Hey everyone, thanks so much for watching! I just want to quickly apologize for not uploading for the past month or so. I'm *planning* on doing way more uploads now that I have more free time. Also, if ya'll are interested, here are a few other plot points that I wanted to include that I cut out of the video cause it was getting too long:
- The FBI will dig into Aunt May’s past, here we’ll learn more about how she was widowed.
- We’ll learn a little bit more about Uncle Ben and how he died.
- Aunt May tells Happy about this which causes him to sympathize more with Peter. (Becomes paternal figure for Peter in this film)
- Peter tells happy that his ideal "normal" life is just being with MJ and going to college.
- Happy writes Peter an outstanding letter of recommendation to MIT and is essentially the reason as to why Peter even got in.
- Peter realizes this at the end of the film, where Happy is already dead.
- The stuff with Electro and Doc Ock is purposefully unresolved so their arcs can continue with a live-action Spiderverse film. If I had to pick a director, I'd go with Sam Raimi :P
great pitch and i like that daredevil gets more of a role... although all i want is mcu peter parker to mention uncle ben, BY NAME... and mention how important he was in peter's life.
Thanks! And yes, I completley agree with you in that it's about time Uncle Ben gets brought up. I meant to mention him in the video, but that's definitely something I want brought up. Especially, how the death of Uncle Ben has affected Aunt May cause I feel like May got completely shafted in Far from Home.
Amazing video and some fantastic decisions were made.I loved you usage of Norman Osborne and how you established Ned's eventual downfall.
My version of the film would focus restrictly on the identity crisis storyline saving the Multiverse story for the end credits and for either a Spider-Man 4 or Doctor Strange:Into The Multiverse Of Madness. The film would have two villians which both follow the mcu film tradition of having villians which have never appeared on the big screen before. The villians would be Kraven The Hunter and Chameleon. The Chameleon would disguise himself as Spider-Man and comit crimes to worsen Peter's reputation and chance of freedom meanwhile Kraven would target Peter's friends and family. The film would be essentially be a thriller with Kraven and Chameleon been unsettling unpredictable. Additionally I would add Daredevil into the mix to help Peter clear his name aswell to help Peter relief his stress and train him up to fight Kraven. Daredevil's abilities would also be able to be used to help distinguish the Chameleon.
The plot of my version is very basic and is similar to your version.Peter would been on the run and would be trying to balance out his time as Peter and Spider-Man to seal his identity and prove his innocence.An additional part of the story I would add would be themes of isolation and personal connections.Peter would eventually start becoming more distant from others would then lead to Peter coming to a near death experience by Kraven and only been hardly been saved by Daredevil.This is so that we can see the growth of Daredevil from Season 3 and use his experience from his arc to further Peter as a character.From this film, Peter would learn the value of himself and decides to never turn his down the great responsibility of been Spider-Man.
Although I would hate for this to happen but if Kraven killed Daredevil it would be such a painful and unexpected death which would put Kraven high on the radar for hatable villians. That's all for the actual movie as I haven't thought for an actual logical conclusion to the story.
For the Multiverse end credit scene it wouldn't actually have any depth but rather it would juat be fan service overload which generates mystery and confusion for a future sequel. I would start the scene by having electro in a comic accurate design randomly attack the city. During this fight, Andrew Garfeild's Spider-Man would randomly swoop in to help. Tom Holland Spider-Man would actually start attacking Andrew believing he's Chameleon. Andrew would also comment on how Electro looks very different.Then Suddenly Doc Ock and Green Goblin (Willem Devoe) would appear aswell. The situation looks bleak for both Spider-Men until the classic Sam Raimi Spider-Man plays and Tobey Maguire swings in to assist.
All 3 Spider-Men fight united to take on each villian individually.
Tobey fights Electro as Electro can't disable his webs as his web shooting is natural
Andrew Fights Goblin as he's fought a version of him before
Tom Foghts Doc Ock because of he's the most agile.
After the fight has concluded, the classic pointing meme like what Spider-Verse did would happen without making it feel unnatural as Tom as just spent weeks fighting a man who used his identity as his own so he would obviously be suspicious.
Doctor Strange would appear and with no explanation or context tells the Spider-Men to come with him.
Yooo nice I love your inclusion of the Chameleon and Kraven. I love how you tied them into your story and the themes; I especially like the Chameleon and how Daredevil kinda acts like a counter to him since he can sense him.
And I agree with you putting the spiderverse stuff in the end credits, that's one of the things I wanted to prioritize cause I feel like it would be rushed if it just happened in this movie; I think it's best to save it for a separate live action Spiderverse movie (preferably directed by Sam Raimi hehe). Anyway, great ideas man and thanks for watching the video, I appreciate it :D
Flash as Norman Osborne's son? Your brain is so big.
I really loved this! Personally I feel really hesitant about the idea of bringing back Alfred Molina's Doc Ock because I think that making him the villain again would ruin his arc in SM2, but you really make it work here with his different motivation here! Also, I can't lie, I'd be totally stoked seeing an interaction between Molina's Doc Ock and Tom's Spider-Man. What would happen to Doc Ock at the end here? If he's staying in this universe to try to find his wife, is he still gonna have the, ah.... giant robot arms?
I think having Normon Osborne being the one to initiate the multiverse plot is a good call, especially the part where he's not being played by Willem Dafoe, because I feel that would definitely overcomplicate things. Do you have any actor you imagine as MCU Norman? And if Flash is Norman's son, would he have a more Harry Osborne character arc or comic Flash Thompson character arc? Honestly there's so many interesting ways that the MCU could take that, especially the aspect of having Spider-Man's most iconic villain's son being a huge Spider-Man fan. I can just imagine a potential huge character moment for Flash being him standing between his father and his hero as Norman's attacking Spider-Man, maybe with Peter's mask torn ro reveal half his face for extra drama points.
I really like this as the intro to Hobgoblin Ned! Some of my favorite pieces of media are media that grows as their audiences grow, and having Peter's closest friend breaking it off with him and being set up as a villain would do wonders for shifting MCU Spider-Man into a more mature character. Also! The Parker Luck! We really don't see much Classic Parker Luck in Homecoming or Far From Home, and having an array of bad things happen to Peter in this movie would help make up for that. So many complaints about MCU Spider-Man are regarding the seeming lack of bad consequences for his actions, and I feel like you really had that in mind when making this pitch, especially regarding the fates of Ned and Happy.
Also also, thank you for relegating Andrew and Tobey's Spideys to aftercredit cameos, I definitely agree that this movie should focus more on Tom's Spidey than overstuffing it with fan service (with the exception of Daredevil fan service, because I'm a Daredevil fan and it's been two years and I demand to be served SOMETHING).
So excellent call making Daredevil the bigger character than Doctor Strange here, because they really do need to work on tying Peter back down to street-level vigilante stuff as oppose to cosmic events. Also I am shamelessly Daredevil-biased.
Oh! And I love the cute animation of your avatar writing in the corner! It's a fun little touch and the writing motion is super smooth.
Great job!
AAAA You're too kind 🥺 but thank you lolll. I was actually super nervous to make this video since I know ppl are pretty critical of Spiderman, and this video is just solely my ideas. Sooo I very much appreciate and am relieved u liked it xP
And yeah I think making Flash Osborn's son will be a good way of keeping the character in later Spidey films whilst explaining why his parents are so neglectful to him (and it'll explain why he's super rich hehe). If I were to fancast a Norman Osborn I'd think I'd pick either Irrfan Khan or Bob Odenkirk. Idk for sure though that's just off the top of my head 😂. I think I would try to mix both Flash's and Harry's arc though. I don't think Flash should also become green goblin cause that might seem repetitive; so, I think like you said, there should be some interesting conflict with him and his father since Flash is a die-hard Spidey fan.
I think I would have Doc Ock's arc continue and end in a live action Spiderverse movie; I would love another interaction between him and an older Tobey Maguire. I'd like to think his arc would end peacefully where he rekindles his love with his wife and dismantles his robot tentacle things lol.
And yesssss I totally agree with you in that I love content where the characters grow alongside the audience. I feel like Ned didn't really get much development in FFH, so I think this is a good opportunity to learn a lot about his history whilst tearing his relationship apart with Peter.
I also kinda want to bring up Uncle Ben and what specifically happened to him. And I think it'd be cool to see how that exactly affected Aunt May. Then Happy can learn about that as well which will cause him to take a more fatherly role for Peter!
And yeah, I soooo hope that they don't end up cramming Spiderverse into this movie. It deserves to have its own standalone film with proper buildup so I made sure to just make it a post credits thing xP.
I also don't like the idea of Doctor Strange being an Iron Man replacement because I don't think Spiderman needs another mentor (at least not another superhero mentor) imo. And I think since Dr. Strange has really overpowered abilities, it would ruin a lot of tension and stakes for Spiderman. So I think it's best to just have Dr. Strange be a minor supporting role in the first act 😁. Lastly, I think Daredevil having a more prominent role just makes more sense to me, cause like you said, they're both street level heroes, or at least they should be hehe.
And I'm glad you like the animation!! I'm also super happy with how it turned out xP. Thanks for watching and commenting your thoughts ^_^
I thought I was the only one who thought that "Flash" in the series should've been Harry Osborn all along. He wasn't the right type of bully to be Eugene Thompson. I could never buy that version of 'Flash' to join the army out of high school, let alone become Agent Venom.
Speaking of 'friends turned villain', I think that they could set up Liz as a future Vulture. She gets 'dusted', her father doesn't, she and her mother come back to find out that he died in prison (either by violence or by just broken heart), and of course she blames Spider-Man for putting him in prison to begin with... finding out that he's Peter Parker, her friend, is just the straw that breaks that camel's back. Could make for a very unsettling reveal during a Sinister Six fight.
@@tfly999 Ooo Liz as a new vulture? That's a super cool idea, especially about her dad dying in prison during the blip and her blaming Peter! Now I want to see that adapted hehe
@@Machuw
Question: why MIT for Peter & MJ & not
Brooklyn State University like the comics?
Also I have an idea for the 2nd MCU Spider-man trilogy Involving MJ becoming either the Black Cat or SpiderWoman just so MJ can actually help Peter rather then sitting on the sidelines worrying about him
@@Machuw
Question: would you have Flash become Agent Venom in a Future movie & if so how would you do it?
The Flash Thompson being the son or stepson of Osborne really stood out as both awesome and realistic!
Thanks! Glad you liked that idea :)
i like spider man but i never have been a huge fan but this movie has great potential!
Yeah, definitely a lot of potential and ideas, so hopefully the movie turns out good! And thanks for watching the video anyway even though you're not much of a fan of these movies, I appreciate it :)
@@Machuw btw you're rewrite is awesome i see you put much work in you're videos and you make me very entertained!
@@darthbullymaguire2072 Thanks dude that means a lot! These videos do take me a lot of time to make so comments like yours make it worth it! :D
I know it’s been a year but I wish this was in the movie
Haha thanks! It's fun seeing my version of it and the real one play out on screen :)
@@Machuw Can you make a pitch for mcu spiderman 4 Please
I really want Daredevil in this movie. I Want Daredevil to help Spider man. I want this to be a Spider man and Daredevil team up film that would be great.
Yeah, crossing my fingers that he's in the film!
@@Machuw totally.✌✌👍👍✌
Bro your Idea was so damn amazing that l would love to see you rewrite and shape the dceu in your own image. Like this was truly a blast and the way you developed peters character and tried to let the others characters go through a nice character arc is purely genius. Please make a whole series on these pitches. Damn your talented and we need more minds of creativity like you. Keep it up and you just earned a new sub, again amazing stuff!
Yo thanks bro, I'm so glad you enjoyed the video! It means a lot! And yes, I'm planning on doing WAY more of these in the future like Flash, Batman, Black Panther, etc. :)
Wow, this was super creative. Really well-done video, I think this might be your best video... ever? I loved all the creative decisions you made with the character and added more consequences to the film. I like that you didn't ruin Doc Ock's arc, and the fact that he has to fight Peter isn't really up to him doesn't ruin anything. I like the use of Flash, and how you tied him back into the film. I also read your extra notes in the comments, and I love that you included Uncle Ben in this film and gave a little something for Aunt May to do in this film because she was hardly a character in Far From Home.
Thanks bruh, I put a lot of time into making this so this means a lot :)
Great vid, Tobey is my Spider-Man though ♥️
Thank you, and yes, Tobey's Spiderman is eternally iconic 😁
shocker is in it? sold
Hehe yup. Glad to see some Shocker appreciation
mid as fuck
Good video, Ty for making it
Thanks! This video is a personal favorite of mine so I'm glad you liked it! :D