You've got a pretty good presentation here Jordan. The intro grabbed my attention, the transitions between video topics added some variety, and the discussion kept a good balance between positives and negatives. I'd suggest adding a few more sound effects during the more lengthy chats, as it seems the visual presentation tends to overshadow the audio presentation at points. Other than that though, I'd say you're certainly improving upon past projects.
Thank you, Doc! That really means a lot! I was considering on adding background music, but I didn't really like what I selected. Still, what would you have in mind?
Background music can be helpful, but may not be necessary in this case. I'd say that if you're putting a good deal more effort into the visuals, then perhaps you can add a quick sound effect whenever you're switching to a new scene. Or maybe when your character is switching expressions, there are certain sounds one can use to help emphasize a comedic moment. The more recent "TF2 Analysis" videos are a good example of this set up. At any rate, these are only suggestions for you to try, and it's really up to you on whether you enjoy having them in or not.
0:23 YES! FINALLY SOMEONE GETS THE REFERENCE IN THE TITLE! THANK YOU! 9:52 😳 golden boy? Is that golden fox? As a wonderbolt? 9:59 SAPPHIRE TO?!? 10:15 that epic pic yo.
I liked this episode though I didnt like the fact that the conflict didnt really effect the larger community which would be the entire Wonderbolts academy in this case like the other map episodes I felt like that was a big miss
"Highway to the Danger Zone!!! Gonna take you right into the danger zone! High way to the danger zooooonnee!" Lol. Love Kenny Loggins hehe. Anyway, good job with the review, although I do wish you would have briefly touched upon the Angel Wings character since she was another Make a Wish OC. Yeah I ship Sky Vapor too and went nuts in their cameo for Parental Glideance.
You've got a pretty good presentation here Jordan. The intro grabbed my attention, the transitions between video topics added some variety, and the discussion kept a good balance between positives and negatives. I'd suggest adding a few more sound effects during the more lengthy chats, as it seems the visual presentation tends to overshadow the audio presentation at points. Other than that though, I'd say you're certainly improving upon past projects.
Thank you, Doc! That really means a lot!
I was considering on adding background music, but I didn't really like what I selected. Still, what would you have in mind?
Background music can be helpful, but may not be necessary in this case. I'd say that if you're putting a good deal more effort into the visuals, then perhaps you can add a quick sound effect whenever you're switching to a new scene. Or maybe when your character is switching expressions, there are certain sounds one can use to help emphasize a comedic moment. The more recent "TF2 Analysis" videos are a good example of this set up. At any rate, these are only suggestions for you to try, and it's really up to you on whether you enjoy having them in or not.
DRWolf001 Thanks, Doc! It means a lot to me!
0:23 YES! FINALLY SOMEONE GETS THE REFERENCE IN THE TITLE! THANK YOU!
9:52 😳 golden boy? Is that golden fox? As a wonderbolt?
9:59 SAPPHIRE TO?!?
10:15 that epic pic yo.
I liked this episode though I didnt like the fact that the conflict didnt really effect the larger community which would be the entire Wonderbolts academy in this case like the other map episodes I felt like that was a big miss
Hmm... That is an interesting idea. In my opinion, I like that the conflict was self-contained.
great review :) looking forward to the next one
The Yu-Gi-Oh Brony Thanks, Yugi!
"Highway to the Danger Zone!!! Gonna take you right into the danger zone! High way to the danger zooooonnee!" Lol. Love Kenny Loggins hehe.
Anyway, good job with the review, although I do wish you would have briefly touched upon the Angel Wings character since she was another Make a Wish OC.
Yeah I ship Sky Vapor too and went nuts in their cameo for Parental Glideance.
Zodia195 Thanks! Though, for the characters, I wanted to focus on the characters that were focused on in the episode.
that was a well written review. well done
Aqua-Marine UK Thanks!
Your thoughts on top bolt was done well plus your OC looks good in a wonder bolt uniform.
This turned out great!
Omni Viewer Thanks!
Oooooh....the sweet sweet electric guitar chords of danger zone.
Nice job
The Second Opinion Thanks!
nice one :)
Anna madsen Thank you!
You had to hate on Attack of the Clones again didn`t you? Well good review anyways. Attack of the Clones was awesome though. Read my defence review.
john logan Sorry, buddy. It was the only comparison that came to mind. ^^;
awesome video! :D
takutanuva taio Thanks!
lol Im here because of Daylover