I like to imagine there was one species, not part of the council, that heard the news of war with humanity and said, "Aww shit, here we go again," before closing all their borders until the storm passed.
@@rhondatrout1360 Humans agree on very few things. But in the face of extraterrestrial competition? We'd stop fighting each other until we made absolutely sure that the rest of the universe acknowledged and accepted that nobody messes with humans, except *other* humans.
@@Random_Chiroptera That's a frequently misused quote. In context, Sun Tzu is talking about avoiding being a one trick pony because you become predictable. The more relevant point that his rules in that chapter lead to is "The five elements (water, fire, wood, metal, earth) are not always equally predominant; the four seasons make way for each other in turn. There are short days and long; the moon has its periods of waning and waxing."
@@epicwinning completely agree with you, you have to be soo high to get a message of peace and love out a story about humanity being like the supreme warrior race
I like your posts. For this reason, am posting a very rough draft of a PART ONE of a Series that is not placed in the Future, but in the world we fjnd ourselves in here in 2024. Title: MOST UNLIKELY ALLIES- "B'ron looked out at the furying storm outside. The thunder was deafening, and at times, the lightning seemed to go horizontal as it strobed up the surrounding houses with blinding staccato blue light. "Blue?" he thought, "Lightning is supposed to flash white ! Then there was the rain; it too was racing horizontally. Again, he observed that the rain was moving North to South even though the wind was blasting East to West! Then came a near-by thunderous, earth-shaking tremor and a loud "CRACK" and a Blue bolt lanced at a power pole 10 meters down the street. The lights in his rental glickered in protest then died. At this point he locked his front door, turned on his emergency backup generator. shambling to his basement woodworking shop, he got back to work on an Oak Bo staff. He listened to hear what seemed to be footsteps outside which were followed by what sounded like someone's fist battering his front door ! Racing to his livingroom, he was greeted by the sight of a splintered hole in his front door. Still grasping the Oak Bo he had been working on, he assumed the defensive GARDE stance. As he got close to the door, he noticed that a bloody clenched hand was wedged into the hole. Shifting his grip to a Parade de Coupe de Figure a Gauche with hus Bo, he quickly opened the door. What he saw made him hesitate mid-strike. There in the dark, silhouetted by a blue flash was a rain-drenched figure; a closer blue flash and he saw a humanoid woman not quite two meters tall. The figure was wearing what seemed to be blasted and singed azure body armor ? Her short silvery hair was touseled, and her eyes blinked horizontally ! He dropped his Bo as she began falling forward into his arms. With the woman in his arms, he looks up to see across the street a three meter tall figure that abdorbs all light that strucks it. The figure projects an intense sense of FEAR. Bron gently placed the humanoid woman on the floor and gripps his Bo. Controlling his inner FEAR as he approaches THE ICE OF DEATH with a Parde de Coup de Flanc. Afterall, FEAR is Temporary, while Regret is Permanent; even after one who has felt the Touch of ICE ! DEATH hesitates; his confidence shaken. This being, this Human stands between himself and his Target Marianne Libere- Heir Apparent to Galactic House Libere. Why ? This kill is not of concern to this Human. It is not relevant to Earthers. B'ron holds a Stick which harbors a weak Gaia Signature; no other energy source. The Human does not have any armor, no metal; yet he approaches THE ICE of three Galaxies without hesitation ! Why ? How ? This ludicrously matched pair are so focused on each other; neither sees the awakened Lady Marianne raising an energy pistol. She aims THROUGH the Human and at the assassin. All Gakacticers know their weapons while deadly to each other have no affect on these CLASS 15 DEATHWORLDERS. Marianne Fires. To the suprise of herself and ICE, B'ron's body hit by her energy burst erupts into flame as it absorbs all the energy of her shot. Marianne and ICE gasp as they watch B'ron being consumed by the shot. His Bo, however, is not affected. ? ICE drops his sniper rifle, runs towards B'ron, and pulls out hix MEDI-KIT. He sees Marianne lining up a shot on him which he ignores to attend to B'ron. Marianne now hesitates. She runs up acriss from ICE and delloys her own MEDI-KIT. As Marianne and ICE look into each other's eyes their hands touch. In a blindingly bright Blue instant, they are both thrown backward. Their ears and eyes sense the arrival of locs, BLACK-AND-WHITES sirens pounding the storm's wet night air which is punctuated by the Red and Blue strobing of emergency lights. Maruanne and ICE side-by-side, shoulder-to-shoulder ghey melt into the shadows. An ambulance trundles the deeply fried B'ron to a hospital emergency room Looking at each other the fighting aliens think NOW WHAT ?" More to follow if you are intrigued. If not, that is what THE TRASH is for .. .. ..
@@kennethluedtkejr1903 I am a novice Wordsmythe with many other frustrations. Thank you for your patience. Next installment soon. Might have to get my own channel though. Next tale has an incident occur wherein a squidgy old Galactic translation unit "gets it wrong" and the drunk alien hears the Galactic equivalent of "flying loaf of bread " when his drunk new Human friend really says "Float an Air Biscuit" .
How did the humans fighting a guerilla warfare on the ground suddenly start threatening the core worlds at 7:08. It was like MAGIC! Commandos and snipers magically transported off the battlefield to spaceships threatening the core worlds in a *snap* of the fingers. Kind of like Thanos I guess?
What? Have you never done some guerillia fighting deep in enemy terretory without relying on practicly all the aspects that enable this tactic in the first place, while simultaniousl advancing AND stretching the supplylines that usually shrink when the frontline moves closer?
@@jameswatson5277 that is true but they need to put longer pauses in at the end of sentences, time skips, paragraphs and chapters. other wise it runs together and its like whiplash on your brain, thinking uh WTF?
Well done! I really like the voice actor / narrator. His tone is very nice, precise and the emotional buildup through reading its simply perfect. Im definetly will be working on my own audiobooks and looking forward publishing threm with you guys.
Story is still about 20th century warfare. 21st century drones, many drones, swarms of drones. Hard to hide from them. You should add drone war in your stories.
I'm sorry the best stories about humans are the funny ones like humans will bond with any creature or humans will make pets out of any creature or humans are crazy, those are the best stories not that they're so much faster and stronger than we are that kind of getting really old
Absolutely.. have you heard the stories about coffee being toxic to all but the humans or the one where humans help a quantum species with medical pandemic 😂
Its interesting how these AI stories say a lot without actually saying anything lol they dont give much definate details. Its very generic and basic. But still interesting.
I love a good sci-fi human stomp as much as the next person. But humanity needs some advantage and in this one they didn't actually have any they were all contrived like gorilla warfare doesn't win a war it will bleed resources but it doesn't win a war. And it really becomes hard when you have as was stated to the beginning massive strategic vulnerabilities massively outnumbered and massively technologically behind. Any one of those three should be easily dealt with if you aren't also dealing with the other two but if you are outgunned outnumbered and outflanked then unless you have magic you're not going to gorilla warfare that shit like you can kill some of their stuff but a lot of this was just like hand wavy and that's boring. No it's possible that farther in cuz I only made it about 40% in before he just got boring or even more boring to the point that it just wasn't fun. But yeah you got to earn the stomping and not just we're humans so we never give up because ants never give up either but you know raid still kills them.
Exactly. I entertain myself by having Language Models create stories for me and the few times I shared a good one with people I had to edit it first, otherwise, you can tell it doesn't feel natural and somethings don't make sense. Here's a question, if I wrote the prompt and edited the story "AI" spits out, how much of the story is mine and how much is AI's? Is it 50/50? 40/60? 75/25?
I like to imagine there was one species, not part of the council, that heard the news of war with humanity and said, "Aww shit, here we go again," before closing all their borders until the storm passed.
Yeah. If only we were as tough as we make ourselves out to be. If we were, there would be no more "sightings" and "abductions". :P
@@rhondatrout1360we didn’t get to the top of the food chain on earth for no reason gangy
@@rhondatrout1360 Humans agree on very few things. But in the face of extraterrestrial competition? We'd stop fighting each other until we made absolutely sure that the rest of the universe acknowledged and accepted that nobody messes with humans, except *other* humans.
We have always, and will always, need a clear enemy to unite us, like in WW1 and 2.
Honestly. Humanity is good at one thing at it's war.
Yeah, if the Aliens in this story shouldn’t have started it, you start it we end it! 😤
Humanity are the ultimate death worlders.
It's our species's favorite sport. It has rules and leagues just like any other sport
Kills me every time I hear "guerilla warfare" used like it's some kind of magical fighting style that guarantees victory of every battle.
Especially in space. Like oh let me just run off half a lightyear to the nearest cover, you don't see me though I'm not here.
Asteroids
"Do not repeat the tactics which have gained you one victory, but let your methods be regulated by the infinite variety of circumstances."
Sun Tzu
@@Random_Chiroptera That's a frequently misused quote. In context, Sun Tzu is talking about avoiding being a one trick pony because you become predictable. The more relevant point that his rules in that chapter lead to is "The five elements (water, fire, wood, metal, earth) are not always equally predominant; the four seasons make way for each other in turn. There are short days and long; the moon has its periods of waning and waxing."
@SmokePoppa
Except I'm not misusing it. Your understanding is just pedestrian.
We had Sun Tzu, the aliens had computers.
this and human still kept that war crime stuff in the storage
It’s not a war crime the first time~
@kato12435 as a Canadian and knowing the history. This couldn't be truer xD there's a first for everything xD
Half of war is terrifying your enemy. The other half is killing them.
"War crimes" 😂 we use such silly words to describe the things we fear
“They’re about to learn why humans play chess not checkers”
But humans invented and play both.
This story shows how humanity should come together and what we could achieve not war bur exploration and to heal our earth, Together.
Agree hopefully we can find aliens where we all humans can be racist to and steal their world for us
This story was explicity about war...
@@epicwinning completely agree with you, you have to be soo high to get a message of peace and love out a story about humanity being like the supreme warrior race
That is a running theme in these stories.
Tell a human it can't be done or that it is impossible that is all it takes
Hold My Beer: Intergalactic Edition
Did that alien just say no balls?
A very enjoyable story, well done to the writer and a very good reading too.
The aliens should be glad they didn't hear ' hold my beer '
Under rated comment.
this guy got the most intresting stories for some reason
I like your posts. For this reason, am posting a very rough draft of a PART ONE of a Series that is not placed in the Future, but in the world we fjnd ourselves in here in 2024. Title: MOST UNLIKELY ALLIES- "B'ron looked out at the furying storm outside. The thunder was deafening, and at times, the lightning seemed to go horizontal as it strobed up the surrounding houses with blinding staccato blue light. "Blue?" he thought, "Lightning is supposed to flash white ! Then there was the rain; it too was racing horizontally. Again, he observed that the rain was moving North to South even though the wind was blasting East to West!
Then came a near-by thunderous, earth-shaking tremor and a loud "CRACK" and a Blue bolt lanced at a power pole 10 meters down the street. The lights in his rental glickered in protest then died. At this point he locked his front door, turned on his emergency backup generator. shambling to his basement woodworking shop, he got back to work on an Oak Bo staff.
He listened to hear what seemed to be footsteps outside which were followed by what sounded like someone's fist battering his front door ! Racing to his livingroom, he was greeted by the sight of a splintered hole in his front door. Still grasping the Oak Bo he had been working on, he assumed the defensive GARDE stance. As he got close to the door, he noticed that a bloody clenched hand was wedged into the hole. Shifting his grip to a Parade de Coupe de Figure a Gauche with hus Bo, he quickly opened the door. What he saw made him hesitate mid-strike. There in the dark, silhouetted by a blue flash was a rain-drenched figure; a closer blue flash and he saw a humanoid woman not quite two meters tall. The figure was wearing what seemed to be blasted and singed azure body armor ? Her short silvery hair was touseled, and her eyes blinked horizontally ! He dropped his Bo as she began falling forward into his arms.
With the woman in his arms, he looks up to see across the street a three meter tall figure that abdorbs all light that strucks it. The figure projects an intense sense of FEAR. Bron gently placed the humanoid woman on the floor and gripps his Bo. Controlling his inner FEAR as he approaches THE ICE OF DEATH with a Parde de Coup de Flanc. Afterall, FEAR is Temporary, while Regret is Permanent; even after one who has felt the Touch of ICE !
DEATH hesitates; his confidence shaken. This being, this Human stands between himself and his Target Marianne Libere- Heir Apparent to Galactic House Libere. Why ? This kill is not of concern to this Human. It is not relevant to Earthers. B'ron holds a Stick which harbors a weak Gaia Signature; no other energy source. The Human does not have any armor, no metal; yet he approaches THE ICE of three Galaxies without hesitation !
Why ?
How ?
This ludicrously matched pair are so focused on each other; neither sees the awakened Lady Marianne raising an energy pistol. She aims THROUGH the Human and at the assassin. All Gakacticers know their weapons while deadly to each other have no affect on these CLASS 15 DEATHWORLDERS.
Marianne Fires. To the suprise of herself and ICE, B'ron's body hit by her energy burst erupts into flame as it absorbs all the energy of her shot.
Marianne and ICE gasp as they watch B'ron being consumed by the shot. His Bo, however, is not affected.
?
ICE drops his sniper rifle, runs towards B'ron, and pulls out hix MEDI-KIT. He sees Marianne lining up a shot on him which he ignores to attend to B'ron. Marianne now hesitates. She runs up acriss from ICE and delloys her own MEDI-KIT.
As Marianne and ICE look into each other's eyes their hands touch. In a blindingly bright Blue instant, they are both thrown backward.
Their ears and eyes sense the arrival of locs, BLACK-AND-WHITES sirens pounding the storm's wet night air which is punctuated by the Red and Blue strobing of emergency lights.
Maruanne and ICE side-by-side, shoulder-to-shoulder ghey melt into the shadows.
An ambulance trundles the deeply fried B'ron to a hospital emergency room
Looking at each other the fighting aliens think NOW WHAT ?"
More to follow if you are intrigued. If not, that is what THE TRASH is for .. .. ..
It won't be very nice if you leave us well me hanging. I liked what you showed in that sample of writing. Of course, it's only what I think.
@@kennethluedtkejr1903 I am a novice Wordsmythe with many other frustrations. Thank you for your patience. Next installment soon.
Might have to get my own channel though. Next tale has an incident occur wherein a squidgy old Galactic translation unit "gets it wrong" and the drunk alien hears the Galactic equivalent of "flying loaf of bread " when his drunk new Human friend really says "Float an Air Biscuit" .
LOL! "It was a dark and stormy night."
But seriously, that was a good beginning.
How did the humans fighting a guerilla warfare on the ground suddenly start threatening the core worlds at 7:08. It was like MAGIC! Commandos and snipers magically transported off the battlefield to spaceships threatening the core worlds in a *snap* of the fingers. Kind of like Thanos I guess?
I get what your saying but you have to think its twenty something minutes long they can only put so much in or it would be a couple hours long.
@@jameswatson5277 yeah.....but it should still make sense and have a cohesive plot line one can logically follow.
@@ericr.palmer8200 true
What? Have you never done some guerillia fighting deep in enemy terretory without relying on practicly all the aspects that enable this tactic in the first place, while simultaniousl advancing AND stretching the supplylines that usually shrink when the frontline moves closer?
@@jameswatson5277 that is true but they need to put longer pauses in at the end of sentences, time skips, paragraphs and chapters. other wise it runs together and its like whiplash on your brain, thinking uh WTF?
If we could all work together, we would be terrifying.
Well done! I really like the voice actor / narrator. His tone is very nice, precise and the emotional buildup through reading its simply perfect. Im definetly will be working on my own audiobooks and looking forward publishing threm with you guys.
It's an ai voice 🤡
We gave the other species PTSD from the “Fine, I’ll handle it” 😂
This is how i imagine human propaganda in an alien war
Enjoyable, thank you. UKUK
Galactic council: why won’t you die
Earth: LEEEERROOOYYY JENNKKKINNNS 🤪
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
Story is still about 20th century warfare. 21st century drones, many drones, swarms of drones. Hard to hide from them. You should add drone war in your stories.
14:00 why is Oscar Isaac there
I'm sorry the best stories about humans are the funny ones like humans will bond with any creature or humans will make pets out of any creature or humans are crazy, those are the best stories not that they're so much faster and stronger than we are that kind of getting really old
Absolutely.. have you heard the stories about coffee being toxic to all but the humans or the one where humans help a quantum species with medical pandemic 😂
I'm sorry have you ever heard of Disney? They have tons of friendly funny stories like that you should look into it
+1 shield 🛡
Now i can sleep, thanks😊
I would like to think human culture is the professor of war.
2:05 “When someone doesn’t respect our borders…”
*trump runs in*
“WE BUILD A WALL”
The current military has what’s called psy-ops which is psychological operations
Well. Geneva convention was only active on earth so... ... ...
2 star at best
Its interesting how these AI stories say a lot without actually saying anything lol they dont give much definate details. Its very generic and basic. But still interesting.
I love a good sci-fi human stomp as much as the next person. But humanity needs some advantage and in this one they didn't actually have any they were all contrived like gorilla warfare doesn't win a war it will bleed resources but it doesn't win a war. And it really becomes hard when you have as was stated to the beginning massive strategic vulnerabilities massively outnumbered and massively technologically behind. Any one of those three should be easily dealt with if you aren't also dealing with the other two but if you are outgunned outnumbered and outflanked then unless you have magic you're not going to gorilla warfare that shit like you can kill some of their stuff but a lot of this was just like hand wavy and that's boring. No it's possible that farther in cuz I only made it about 40% in before he just got boring or even more boring to the point that it just wasn't fun. But yeah you got to earn the stomping and not just we're humans so we never give up because ants never give up either but you know raid still kills them.
gets a bit repetitive, please edit the AI-generated story before posting it.
Exactly. I entertain myself by having Language Models create stories for me and the few times I shared a good one with people I had to edit it first, otherwise, you can tell it doesn't feel natural and somethings don't make sense.
Here's a question, if I wrote the prompt and edited the story "AI" spits out, how much of the story is mine and how much is AI's? Is it 50/50? 40/60? 75/25?
Weird. There are only a small handsful of countries who seem togive half a crap about their borders these days.
We shouldn't have borders between our own race to begin with. Greed and audacity created borders.
Bad writing
Repetitive and boring
You mistyped AI.