ฝัง
- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 20 ส.ค. 2024
- * 100% unofficial and in no way endorsed by Games Workshop. I do not claim any intellectual property owned by Games Workshop Ltd.*
If you are new to the Warhammer 40k franchise, check it out here: www.warhammer....
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
In the wake of brutal chaos Uprisings on Kalidar Prime, an imperial manufactorum in Segmentum Pacificus, the remaining company-contingent of Lamenters await the incoming retribution fleet, unable to escape the planet following the destruction of their battle-barge by Chaos suicide-craft. Striking before it arrives, a warband of Iron Warriors engages the Lamenters force in the remaining Imperial bunker system under the munifactorums.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is part 1 or the trailer of a multi-part series on the 3rd Company of the Lamenters chapter.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Thank you so much for the amazing people willing to help me on this momentous journey!
@GabrielChristtiane / gabrielchristtiane
@pontus517 : www.artstation...
Also many thanks to @LegioSymphonica for giving me the time of day to answer my pesky email ;)
This and all of my 40k projects are inspired by amazing animations such as Astartes, The Raptor, The Awakening, The Faith, Walking Dread, The Exodite and many, many others. Thank you to all these talented people for making the community a better place!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is my second proper project in the realm of 40k, and I am not a professional. However, as a big fan of the franchise and an aspiring amateur in 3D design, any and all feedback to this film are greatly appreciated!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
My Arstation: www.artstation... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Made using Blender, Davinci Resolve Studio, Substance Painter, Soundly and Audacity. All the modelling, animating, texturing, rigging, cutting and sound designing was done solely by me. As an amateur, I make no profit whatsoever off of these animations.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Music:
Tension Clocks - Negativist
Tension Music - Soundridemusic
The Rumbling - Rok Nardin
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
100% unofficial and in no way endorsed by Games Workshop.© Copyright Games Workshop Limited 2024. GW, Games Workshop, BL Publishing, Black Library, Forge World, Citadel, White Dwarf, The Horus Heresy, The Horus Heresy Eye logo, Space Marine, 40K, Warhammer, Warhammer Digital, Warhammer 40,000, the ‘Aquila’ Double-headed Eagle logo, Warhammer Age of Sigmar, Battletome, Stormcast Eternals, and all associated logos, illustrations, images, names, creatures, races, vehicles, locations, weapons, characters, and the distinctive likenesses thereof, are either ® or TM, and/or © Games Workshop Limited, variably registered around the world. All Rights Reserved.
That lamenter medic failed his perception roll hard to get snuck up on by a god damn dread.
They're Lamenters, if it wasn't a dread it'd be a meteor full of Orks landing straight on his head. Unlucky is how they roll
@@Gabryal77Bars
Come on let the lamentors live. They’ve been through enough.
@@joshuadelgado1286 That might be asking a bit much....
Look i got them scheduled after this, so in theory some of them could survive.
FOR THOSE WE CHERISH!
We die in glory!
Fuck yeah, lamenters!
Oh fuck, it's the unlucky boys
😊🙂🙁😰
@@dranoelarios4788 💀
“Emperor, Sanguinius, we try our best, we save your people, we love you, so please answer, WHAT HAVE WE DONE TO DESERVE THIS FATE😭😭😭😭😭😭….” Lamenters TTS
1:13 typical Lamenters *"LUCK"*
Never gets old ( ◜‿◝ )
Amazing work! In terms of improvements, I'd suggest trying to make things feel heavier, for example when the guy holding a heavy machine gun stood on the dead body for leverage, the gun and step felt too light. Also a section to improve upon would be just making movements flow smoother, there were multiple instances of animations that felt stiff. Still amazing work and I hope to see more from you!
Hey mate, great feedback! And yeah, weight is one of the many things I'm still working on, I'm still relatively new to the animating side of things, so I still have a long way to go ;)
@@Wolphenyoure on the golden path brother, i'd just add specifically the sound for the weight and bolters seem like they should be heavy stumpy BLASTS instead of like a small caliber shoota
@@Wolphen Also about feedback - i think the powerpack on the marine armor is a bit thin, or too long, i cant explain why, but this look unfamiliar. If put this to the side - look very interesting and i hope you will succeed
Literally every fan animation has used specific shots from Astartes - use the principles, not just the exact carbon copy of technique. This one is even paced the exact same.
relax mate.. astartes is the epitomy of fan animation
step 1: observation
step 2: mimicry
step 3: improvement
Hey mate, your absolutely right 😂. Even though I only borrowed 2 shots from astartes, he was my main inspiration to start doing this, and I watched his animation so many times there's bound to be similarities. Either way though, I hope to find my own style as I get better with each animation and that you can still enjoy it for what it is :D
Make your own?
minus the polish and fluid movements -
FOR THOSE WE CHERRISH, WE DIE IN GLORY!
The Dread: "Oh look, an apothecary! Can we keep it?"
It's a nice and amazing start.
Do it as you feel better and more comfy. Just, keep, improving!!!
Iron warriors are likely the only Chaos legion/warband to have dreadnoughts instead of those abominable Helbrutes. That or the Thousand Sons.
Haven’t the lamented suffered enough?
Jokes aside though, great animation. Exited to see the other parts.
great job massive improvement to you last work. keep it up.
@@campingcake Thanks mate :D
C&D incoming in 5..4..3..2
The Lamenters really can't catch a break, huh?
I just hope one of them survives this.
Lamenters is the pure grimdark chapter
so... this is what job applications in animation look like these days :D
Eh... still got a long way to go lol but I appreciate the compliment xD
I love it, great Animation concept and with time it become a great addition to the 40k fandom
For those we cherish we die in Glory.
I really love the sound design. This was great to watch
Cheers mate!
The Dread just joinked him
it may not be official ,but damn is it good to see content on my sad taxi boys
Really good lot of talent on display
For those we cherish, we die in glory!!!
Insane
Nah, the devastater using his brothers dead corpse as a step was a jackass lol.
That aside, its nice to know there are still those who retain the passion of making fan animations despite GWs policy. You have another subscriber brother, lets hope the lamenters can atleast survive this incursion atleast..
Love it!
"They can't take the life from us! The cannot take the light from uuus!! FOR THOSE WE CHERIIIIISH! WE DIE IN GLOOOOOOOOORY!!!!!"
Imagine having a Dreadnought sneak on you
Hopefully the Lamenters will have more health than a Dungeons and Dragons Wizard this time.
This video is beyond awesome. It's Wolphen! Truly next-level content!
1:03 that's some weird body angle lmao
Bill the Heretic for the cost of these artisan Heavy Bolter rounds.
Looks promising. Well done. Lamenters need to have their story told 😁
The only issue is that bolts are supposed to be caseless and the "casing" is melted off when firing so there shouldn't be anything ejected when firing
I see 40k I click 40k
Incredible works, beautiful 👍
i see you did a few cool references as well ( kill the heretic on the bolt casing is one )
Was hoping someone would notice that! Cheers mate ;D
Are those Lamenters?!?!?$ 🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏
In the Grim Darkness of the Far Future... Iron Warriors seem to prosper as the main antagonist! Woot! In your face, space coyotes!!
Great video
Honestly, this looks REALLY good. The animation’s a bit janky in a few parts but that’s probably gonna be fixed in post.
Thanks mate, since the animating for the actual film isn't being worked on yet, I hope to improve all the animations until then, so post editing of that sort won't be needed ;D
@@Wolphen try not to overwork yourself my dude, we'll all be happy no matter what the result is.
Ooo another banger of a 40k fan film to add to the can't wait to watch playlist
Oouuuf Fighting against a chaos dreadnought
I didn't see any World Eaters. I will take your skull for my lord khorne. BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!!
Good animation. Like the lamenters, love the iron warriors. It's a bit stiff. Only one thing I didn't like is the Lamenter putting his foot on his dead battle brother.
Still Loving Your Work.
Cheers mate! Will you be playing Space Marine 2 when it comes out?
@@Wolphen Probably.
I wont lie, this animation is very very cool and I like it, but suggestion: try to make things feel weighted, I'd suggest rewatching an animation you've made and seeing if it, to you, looks weighted, if not, add more frames of movement so it looks like it's moving 'slower' and is 'heavier'.
Yeah, good advice that's something I noticed too lol. I'll definitely work on that for part 1 :D
The unluckiest marines get some time to shine...
My one criticism would be the bolters look like regular machine guns. They fire shells as big as a can of soup, personally i sould gjve them a touch more of a kick
While yes theyre automatic, each shell fired should have a weight to it imo
IT"S LAMENTING TIME!
Astartes: "PURGE THE UNCLEAN-"
Me trying to enjoy my spaghetti dinner on his shoulder: ... 🏁
Face the judgement of Iron!
Fuck yeah Iron Warriors!
Ye filthy heretic...
I won't be surprised when this gets the letter of death from GW.
They can't do that if I just close my email account 😂
F for the apothecary
Was that a Iron Warriors dreadnought in the end when the apothecary got attacked?
Yup!
@@Wolphen yeah the only reason I noticed was the security stripes
RAAAAH LAMENTERS LIVE 🔥🔥🦅
Looks great!
Keep up the good work!
Great Work!^^
How that Apothecary let a dreadnought sneak up on him?!?!
Those things shake ground with each step…
Perhaps the apothecary is hard of hearing 😅
we will watch your career with great interest
I have only my life to give.
But I give it gladly.
For in His service.
Non die in vain.
So for those I cherish.
I die, in glory.
Not Ultramarines 10/10
Lamenters ∞/∞
Keep it up man, dont be afraid to spend longer on even shorter clips ❤ we love the realism, you know how it is :)
Recoil and small details is whats brushed over in todays media so focus on that id say the true fans will always support you
Great animation and I’m excited for the finished product. Only thing is I’d say you should make the bolters feel heavier
Thanks mate! Do you mean the sound or the recoil/feel of the bolters?
Poor Lamentors. And was that an Iron Warrior dread?
Games workshop gonna have a ball with this🫠
I hope not 😂
It will be awesome !!
Astartes vibes, I love it
I love it. Well done.
Frag, when that dreadnought turned the corner I freaked...
Welp see u in warhammer plus mate
🚧 Weakness is a choice...! 🚧
Bro how did you not hear the Dreadnaught?!?!?!
My man was hard of hearing ya know
In before Wolphen gets abducted at 2am by Games Workshop and his internet presence scrubbed
I'll pass on that one, thanks
looks good
на маленьком дредноуте я покакал 🗿⚰️
IRON WITHIN!
Iron without!
Дредноут подкрался к апотекарию XD
FOR THOSE WE CHERISH WE DIE IN GLORY!!!!!!!!!!
The Apothecary would have had a Battle Brother with him, and they both would have heard a Dreadnaught way before it turned the corner, they aren't made for sneaking.
Yeah it was a bit of a stretch for cinematic pruposes, there won't be anyhting like that in the actual film ( I hope ;D)
I realize you tried really hard, but this is more funny than epic.
Can't wait to see GW immediately cease and desist this.
lesss fuckin gooooo!!!
Yessss😍😍
Whatever you do, don't let GW take you down bro.
the models look good but all the movements are kind of Janky - you should either get a mocap suit to get some natural animations to work with and build a base of knowledge from - or just buy some basic animation assets of walking running shooting guns and same deal build your knowledge editing and playing with those.
Hey mate, thanks for the comment! I'm still quite new to the animation side of things, so I have a lot to learn on that front, as you pointed out. Unfortuntley,, as an amateur, I can't afford a mocap suit and movement libraries just don't transfer well onto Astartes. But yes, movemments are one of my points of focus - hope you enjoyed watching nonetheless!
The video looks great, but why did a shooting brother place his foot on the body of a fallen brother? I think it's weird that a loyal Astartes could be so disrespectful.
Thanks! Yeah, that is something I hadn't realized or thought about too much. I hope I can avoid details like that for the actual film!
Another proof positive that GW doesn't have the legal ability to snuff out fan animations
Google If fan animations are legal. Spoiler: they arent.
Где примарисы?
Очень неумелое подражание "астартес" . Я огорчен. 😢
Астартес это коммерческий проект. Это хобби. Успокойся
Каеф
also its dark as f**k bro cant see s**t - dont use darkness to cover up bad animation or models - make sure the audience can see whats going on
Hey, thanks for the feedback, but I am a little confused on this one. None of the people (including myself) who I talked to after watching the animation seemed to have issues with the lighting - heck, some said the scenes were too bright for 40k! If you are referring to the apothecary scene at the end, where the dread is somewhat obscured, that was unfortunately unavoidable, as my relatively weak PC couldnt handle any more lights in that scene, meaning it was a bit darker than I wanted it to be. Cheers!
Astartes is better…
It sure is ;)
I fucking hate GW
Fan made, fan made... Such fans, that don't even know that bolter is semi-auto rifle...
Hey mate, just wanted to point out bolters are cannonically confirmed to have 3 modes of fire - Full auto included, (the 3 modes being single shot, burst and of course full auto). Anyway, hope you still enjoyed!
@@Wolphen ah, ok. Did not knew that. Still rely on older codexes. Thank you.
To be honest, the animations are very weak. After Astartes, this animation looks very weak..
Astartes is a commercial project. This is hobby
Hey I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the animation. As I have stated a few times before, this is my second real project in 3D animation... ever. So yeah, I have quite the way to go to achieve any level of professionalism in these films. As such, I dont claim to be or even try to be on the God Tier level of Astartes. This is genuinely just an attempt to make something cool and entertaining for the 40k community. Hope you can value it for what it is :)
Astartes PS2 release. 🤣🤣🤣
It's a hobby, not a commercial product, silly.
Coming spring 2035, to YOUR local store. Only 3.99!
Very shitty, astartes much more better
Hey, sorry to hear you didn't like the animation. Even though I wasn't aiming at replicating his level of expertise and talent, as I am relatively new to the 3D space, I would still appreciate any feedback you can give me to improve even more!
Calm down, nobody owes you anything. It's just a hobby. Don't act like arrogant King. You are not in that position.