I really wanted them to point out that the fleet that so easily defeated them was just a bunch of basic explorer ships. Earth's military fleet is made up of unimaginable warships.
I agree. Just because they are equipped to deal with the Empire they still should have contacted the military as the Empire started a WAR. With the explorer ships dominating the military may have only sent a single ship even if they just sat back and watch, laughing at the enemy's folly.
Why repeat the same lines so many times? Is it an school assignment to use certain amount of words in a story? Like, make a story with 2000 words and than you repeat sentences 12 times to fulfill the task.
There are a lot of us that still plot out our stories and pound them out on a keyboard. Some better, some worse. But we take pride in doing it ourselves. ❤ You just won't find them here.
'AI' writing programs still lack the ability to create individual characters and flesh them out with personal stories and histories. This isn't the direction 'ai' should be headed in the 1st place. Personally, I wish they would ALL get shut down
This is the exact same story that has been published over and over again, cut and paste phrases, sentences and whole paragraphs and then repeat, repeat and repeat again and again. The entire story reeks of AI. "Write a 3000 character story about how superior the human race is to a bunch of aliens..."
The sun is not a star. If you haven't already heard this story, you'll definitely enjoy this one. A refreshing story read by an actual writer, as you can hear the pages being turned.
@@andrewbignell9342 I'm sorry to shatter your illusions but the sun definitely qualifies as a star. The astronomical definition reads: "Star: any massive self-luminous celestial body of gas that shines by radiation derived from its internal energy sources." To be more specific, the Sun is classified as a G-type main-sequence star (G2V), informally called a yellow dwarf
@@hrafnatyr9794 I'm not talking about the celestial body, I'm asking if you had listened to the story called that. "The sun is not a star" it's a Lovecraft inspired tale of an astronaut that is recruited by NASA/USAF? Well anyways they're up there to harness the plasma of the sun and it goes horribly wrong.
why the repeat of the same rhetoric and bravado?? The narration is animated and really would be better if it were actually read by a living person. So lame and so typical of all these 'sci fi' writings. Its getting very, very old!!!
Sorry, you screwed up this story, tge human fleet moved into unknown and uncharted space. The Alien fleet did not recognize them, yet we're able to communicate with them, yet the Aliens had always considered humans as primitive?????
Second time this channel's AI chat bot has repeated the entire first chapter. This channel is not worth listening to. Sorry, but you really need a real person to do narration. Chatbots are worthless and don't even know when they make a mistake like repeating a chapter or sentence. Chris
I get so pissed when I read the condescending comments here. being a writer myself, I know how much work it is to write a story. so when you write your downright vile comments think about how you are hurting the creator of this story and your comments are not helping anything.
This whole story sounds and feels like as an AI wrote it. The repetitions and choice of certain words proof that. NO human writes like that, even my 10 year old daughter can write better stories.
I have to agree, AI mispronounced words, makes misplaced pauses making it a very annoying storyline. AI is not yet perfect and may never be. @@HeikeWiener
Best to read the story by a human, NOT by AI because AI mispronounced words and ads pauses between words at inappropriate places. It may be good at writing stories but a human person can do a lot better at pronouncing words in any given context, AI may never be able to recognize that fact.
I really wanted them to point out that the fleet that so easily defeated them was just a bunch of basic explorer ships. Earth's military fleet is made up of unimaginable warships.
I agree. Just because they are equipped to deal with the Empire they still should have contacted the military as the Empire started a WAR. With the explorer ships dominating the military may have only sent a single ship even if they just sat back and watch, laughing at the enemy's folly.
Look up Human Space Carrier. It's a ten minute story. One of my favorites.
Why repeat the same lines so many times?
Is it an school assignment to use certain amount of words in a story? Like, make a story with 2000 words and than you repeat sentences 12 times to fulfill the task.
Is it lack of imagination or writing ability the reason for repeating the same lines and ruining what otherwise would be a good story?
“Human ships moved with precision” imagine ships from a Galactic Empire… not moving precisely. Oh boy 😂
Before you post reread it so you don't repeat the same thing.
Choose the better of the two and use one not both.
I miss the days when people actually wrote stuff...
There are a lot of us that still plot out our stories and pound them out on a keyboard. Some better, some worse. But we take pride in doing it ourselves. ❤ You just won't find them here.
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why keep repeating the same thing may be a good story but not on repeat
'AI' writing programs still lack the ability to create individual characters and flesh them out with personal stories and histories. This isn't the direction 'ai' should be headed in the 1st place. Personally, I wish they would ALL get shut down
Are all these part of the same larger story?
This is the exact same story that has been published over and over again, cut and paste phrases, sentences and whole paragraphs and then repeat, repeat and repeat again and again. The entire story reeks of AI. "Write a 3000 character story about how superior the human race is to a bunch of aliens..."
The sun is not a star. If you haven't already heard this story, you'll definitely enjoy this one. A refreshing story read by an actual writer, as you can hear the pages being turned.
@@andrewbignell9342 I'm sorry to shatter your illusions but the sun definitely qualifies as a star.
The astronomical definition reads:
"Star: any massive self-luminous celestial body of gas that shines by radiation derived from its internal energy sources."
To be more specific, the Sun is classified as a G-type main-sequence star (G2V), informally called a yellow dwarf
@@hrafnatyr9794 I'm not talking about the celestial body, I'm asking if you had listened to the story called that. "The sun is not a star" it's a Lovecraft inspired tale of an astronaut that is recruited by NASA/USAF? Well anyways they're up there to harness the plasma of the sun and it goes horribly wrong.
AI generated, way too many of them
That's shebs.
why the repeat of the same rhetoric and bravado?? The narration is animated and really would be better if it were actually read by a living person. So lame and so typical of all these 'sci fi' writings. Its getting very, very old!!!
Keeps repeating itself, the empire lost, and if they try to attack earth, the empire would be destroyed, completely.
Sorry, you screwed up this story, tge human fleet moved into unknown and uncharted space. The Alien fleet did not recognize them, yet we're able to communicate with them, yet the Aliens had always considered humans as primitive?????
Second time this channel's AI chat bot has repeated the entire first chapter. This channel is not worth listening to. Sorry, but you really need a real person to do narration. Chatbots are worthless and don't even know when they make a mistake like repeating a chapter or sentence. Chris
Repeated things to the point it gets boring
i'm not half way through & i'm loosing interest already. your presentation is like a stuck record on repeat. is this AI rubbish?
Another repeat. Ugh.
The story is the same dubed by A.I. bland voice, can't you people write your own stories or are you to lazy???
this is a i b s at its best
Stupid AI.
I get so pissed when I read the condescending comments here. being a writer myself, I know how much work it is to write a story. so when you write your downright vile comments think about how you are hurting the creator of this story and your comments are not helping anything.
This whole story sounds and feels like as an AI wrote it. The repetitions and choice of certain words proof that. NO human writes like that, even my 10 year old daughter can write better stories.
I have to agree, AI mispronounced words, makes misplaced pauses making it a very annoying storyline.
AI is not yet perfect and may never be. @@HeikeWiener
Best to read the story by a human, NOT by AI because AI mispronounced words and ads pauses between words at inappropriate places. It may be good at writing stories but a human person can do a lot better at pronouncing words in any given context, AI may never be able to recognize that fact.
@@RickH-v2g It is not good at writing, or narrating, or even captioning.