A good story about what two people can do if they have trust and faith in each other along with the trust of the people of the country or world. now for part about what happen now that there is pace with in her world. (Mississippi gulf Coast, USA).
When you said "The End" I simply shook my head and said "No it is not." You allowed the tension to build. That was awesome how you put it together. Then you chopped the story leaving this NOT a story. Every story has to have a Resolution. That was left empty in the air. "Chosen Husband?" You never brought that to fruition. You never finished with the Conflict. You never showed them Married. You called him a Consort. He was that up until the final battle. After that he was her Partner and Husband Elect. Oh well. I'm going to utilize TH-cam's ability to not recommend this channel again. That's it.
A good story about what two people can do if they have trust and faith in each other along with the trust of the people of the country or world. now for part about what happen now that there is pace with in her world. (Mississippi gulf Coast, USA).
When you said "The End" I simply shook my head and said "No it is not." You allowed the tension to build. That was awesome how you put it together. Then you chopped the story leaving this NOT a story. Every story has to have a Resolution. That was left empty in the air. "Chosen Husband?" You never brought that to fruition. You never finished with the Conflict. You never showed them Married. You called him a Consort. He was that up until the final battle. After that he was her Partner and Husband Elect. Oh well. I'm going to utilize TH-cam's ability to not recommend this channel again. That's it.