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Too many inconstincies! At least it has an ending, unlike so many of these!

Over 19 minutes of words without intrigue.

“ Battle hardened body “ ………. Uhm, yes it shows. 😂😂😂😂😂Yummy. And every earth mechanic can fix everything. Yes ???🤔🤔

It might. Have been a good story if you would just stop changing the peoples appearance over and over and over again

You know, if you're going to tell a story you should at get the people that you're talking about the right color the right color hair and everything.

A good story.

Need to find a better computer voice, too many run-ins and over laps and sentences running together. Something like this, much better.

I loved this story and the AI, which like other commenters said added to the emotional input. The fact that Teeny, Tinni, two's, Tiny, etc. brought a snicker to my lips. I'd like to follow John and Tony's travel through life solving unsolvable problems making their planets better places. ***** 😊

I was about to leave the story until i saw the AI move, That makes a difference in the story. Thank You

When you said "The End" I simply shook my head and said "No it is not." You allowed the tension to build. That was awesome how you put it together. Then you chopped the story leaving this NOT a story. Every story has to have a Resolution. That was left empty in the air. "Chosen Husband?" You never brought that to fruition. You never finished with the Conflict. You never showed them Married. You called him a Consort. He was that up until the final battle. After that he was her Partner and Husband Elect. Oh well. I'm going to utilize TH-cam's ability to not recommend this channel again. That's it.

I would recommend listening to it fully before posting. I'm still enjoying it, buuuuuut there are some typos. Just lettin' ya know. -=80)

Amazing beings. She is dressed for a tropical dinner, sitting on snow and rocks, and she doesn't even have goosebumps.

Fake

Fake

Who ever the animator is they must be something special in the game world, why I guess most are looking at other things so I won't spoil the magic.

Love the AI you used, makes the story more interesting and keeps ones attention. Her being hot helps! The story was really good to!

That was a very nice story! Well done!

More of the Caldwell History. I wonder how her brother is doing. It would be helpful to start tagging Caldwell in the description.

A good story about what two people can do if they have trust and faith in each other along with the trust of the people of the country or world. now for part about what happen now that there is pace with in her world. (Mississippi gulf Coast, USA).

It's a good story but, the A.I. sux...

This was a nice story. It seems like it’s building upon Previous stories. Have you uploaded other stories that led to this one? I’ve subscribed to your channel previously so I’ve liked other stories of yours. Thanks for uploading this. 😊

“Fear is a choice a prison of your own choice let it go” Buddhist like

The story was fine, although it really didn't go fully into the bond, or romance itself. It made it sound more like a close friendship than anything else. Tbh, I would get rid of the "End of Story" part at the end. It sounds really naff and mega cheesy!

Very good story hope you will make some more about this

So....where's the 'Now Everything's Out of Control' part? I detest title's which don't truly describe the story. Thumb's Down for that....

I enjoyed the AI at the beginning of the story and the flow of the story. I hope you increase the AI through a full story.

The AI voice on this made it unbearable to listen to. The start and stutter speech pattern and the insistence of announcing new chapters every 45 seconds or so.

Subbed. I would suggest that if you are going to use this boiee, try to slow it down a tad, it is a bit too fast. I would also suggest, that in whatever audio editor you use, expand the pauses between senrences a tiny bit. As it is, the senrences are flying by so quick, it is hard to concentrate on the sentences.

Do away with the chapter titles and just get on with the stories besides the chapters are too short.