PhD Personal Statement Editing and Feedback // How to improve a personal statement for grad school

แชร์
ฝัง
  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 21 ธ.ค. 2024

ความคิดเห็น •

  • @gauravnainwal5026
    @gauravnainwal5026 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I think this was a very good video since you actually acted like someone on a selection panel looking for specific skills in a candidate so that they stand out from others. Your previous videos were like lectures (in a good sense) and this was like an actual examination of what your viewers understood from them.

    • @oxford_phd
      @oxford_phd  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks Gaurav! That's a nice analogy :)

    • @gauravnainwal5026
      @gauravnainwal5026 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@oxford_phd You're welcome, Hira. I messaged you on insta for some advice on PhD applications. Do you check your messages there? I'm happy to contact you elsewhere if that's more convenient.

    • @humasafdar4815
      @humasafdar4815 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ur insta I'd hira please share it

  • @oxford_phd
    @oxford_phd  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Chapters:
    00:03:58 This candidate does not give enough detail
    00:08:32 This candidate did not answer the actual question
    00:10:50 This candidate does not elaborate research projects
    00:14:50 This candidate is not memorable
    00:18:44 This candidate doesn't mention skills
    If you would like me to help you with interview preparation or personal statement writing, please message me on Twitter or Instagram:
    twitter.com/oxford_juggler
    instagram.com/oxford_juggler/

  • @avnishmishra1534
    @avnishmishra1534 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What an Analysis looking forward ⏩ with discussion with You

  • @basyirahzulkifli1622
    @basyirahzulkifli1622 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Keep the inner critics coming, we need it!

  • @fatimaishtiaq8422
    @fatimaishtiaq8422 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Great Hira... MashaAllah ❤️

  • @goldogwolly
    @goldogwolly 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is a super insightful and practical video! One small question though--in each section, the task instructions say to write around 200 words, but I feel that if they added all the info you advised it'd be massively over length? In that case what you would advise to keep in?

  • @translationcenter437
    @translationcenter437 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Informative video. Thanks a lot.
    Jamil

  • @arnaing6647
    @arnaing6647 ปีที่แล้ว

    very good explanation. super insightful.

  • @modhis.alotibi3270
    @modhis.alotibi3270 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great effort❤️, we want a lot from this

  • @natenauman6559
    @natenauman6559 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    this was very thorough and super helpful!

    • @oxford_phd
      @oxford_phd  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much, glad you find it helpful! :)

    • @veerendrakumar
      @veerendrakumar 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@oxford_phd You are just amazing...

  • @jubsology
    @jubsology 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    My Takeaways:
    1. Add MORE details of your work.
    2. Question every sentence and its justifications
    3. Structure the statement
    4. Show, Don't tell.

  • @VictorSSama
    @VictorSSama 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Need more of this!!!

    • @oxford_phd
      @oxford_phd  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Will do more for sure!

  • @nusratjahan5281
    @nusratjahan5281 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello Hira, thanks for such explanation. This video has been very helpful for me. I am intended to apply for PhD degree this year and need a sop review. I would like to know if you do sop review voluntarily.

  • @Jalal_Ud_Din
    @Jalal_Ud_Din 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Waw mashallah ❤️ very helpful video

  • @emmayu9264
    @emmayu9264 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks a lot! this really helps me a lot!!!

    • @oxford_phd
      @oxford_phd  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm so glad, Emma!

  • @fatimaa-q6f
    @fatimaa-q6f หลายเดือนก่อน

    You r amazing

  • @humasafdar4815
    @humasafdar4815 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Requirement for phd m.phil or masters form pakistan

  • @JessicaKatescreaminglife
    @JessicaKatescreaminglife 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi, Hira! I would love for you to edit my personal statement for my PhD program! I will check out in the link in your description :)

    • @oxford_phd
      @oxford_phd  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hiya! Happy to help, send me a message on twitter @oxford_juggler

  • @naheedyousafkhan
    @naheedyousafkhan ปีที่แล้ว

    Dear I tried contacting you via twitter but i am unable to message you directly as my account is not blue ticked !...kindly let me know how i can approach you please. i need help regarding personal statement