"Fixing" your ART

Giving some feedback on art submitted in my Discord! from the perspective of a Feature Story artist (currently at DreamWorks)
Submit your drawing on the discord if you ever want to get feedback in one of these videos!
Link: / discord
Thank you to everyone for submitted and you can follow the artists who i was referencing here!
1. Pi
IG: @tylar_jones
2. Alex
IG: @avilaartwork
3. Emily
IG: emilytheartist98
Follow me!
Twitch.tv/danielmtal
IG: Daniel.m.tal

[@BotsandMagic]

"Just cheat everything, nothing really matters" 2024 mood for sure!

[@Sunnydayson]

Love it! Lol

[@maddievicky]

This is absolutely the cutest thing ever... I love how don't tear down their art and instead enhance the story they're telling through simple details

[@NatchBox]

Great critique as always! Both constructive and encouraging

[@ducktaledudette]

As an aspiring storyboard artist, this was SO HELPFUL!!

[@toniapereyra9390]

just stumbled across your page, you are so underrated, i learned a lot!!

[@TallerdelGato]

Great video, the best way to improve is based on critique. Also, love your artstyle.

[@iamjustjoshing]

this is great stuff! I love watching videos like these, and seeing the way you construct a scene is really helpful!

[@DanielMtal]

Thanks!! im really glad you found it helpful. i was hoping to provide a different perspective with the more "story" type drawings.

[@moonybreado]

I absolutely adore your art!

[@Andre35is]

Nice video. Thank u. U can Draw brother... I am on my learning adventure, as a graphic designer it was a bit easy for me to learn cutout animation, but still was a hustle to know how to really animate them because of my lack of the basics of figure drawing and animation principles, now studyin Richard Williamns, then michael hampton, then the art of perspective, etc your video really espires me to keep going.

[@Pomer134]

Oh I like your stile❤ I still can't decide which one way of improving my art i enjoy more, but I think that the cartoon stile is so cool and interesting

[@christopherchang00]

great video!, subscribed after watching this video. it really helps seeing long form drawovers.

[@eugenevasylenko1238]

This video is goopin with great advice!

[@BotsandMagic]

Seriously though great advice and great video!

[@8thPlaceDave]

Excellent work

[@haleyrose8903]

love watching videos like this! Super informative!

[@brandi598]

please more vids like these!!! i love critique videos they put me in a motivated headspace to rework my art. thank you for doing these 💓💓💓

[@deetee33]

I really love this video, pls more

[@jifish]

just found ur channel and i absolutely love ur stuff

[@magicalnarwhal2]

so good Daniel

[@Beastmoded]

Amazing video! Learnt a lot *subscribes*, look forward to your next video:) take care

[@inkylids9488]

Really great storytelling tips! These past months my mentor has taught me a lot about the kind of specificity you're highlighting here, and how seemingly small changes can elevate intrigue and the general story quality. Thanks for this!

[@SirPerolino]

Very nice video :3

[@jaxk2268]

Wow your art is superb.. well add me as a new subscriber

[@JustinLocklear-sv4vp]

I try using the discord link but it’s expired I really want you to “fix”. Y art lol how do I submit

[@DanielMtal]

oh sorry I updated the link!

[@JustinLocklear-sv4vp]

Oh I already found it lol@@DanielMtal