I like your approach to critique. I like that you say “this is how I would do it” and “this is how I envision it” you don’t tell someone that that’s how it should be done, just how you would approach it, and how it reads to you. Kind of just running with the blueprint they gave you and expanding on it in a technical way.
Exactly! I’ve seen so much people “fixing” art by just redrawing it and being like: “THIS IS HOW IT SHOULD BE DONE, THERE, IT LOOKS ACTUALLY GOOD NOW. IT WAS UGLY BEFORE!” And that’s not fixing or being a good critic. I love the way she actually teaches about anatomy while still staying in the same style as the original creator!❤
thank you so much jackie thats my art ! 😭 i also used a canvas texture png and put it on a multiply layer to give it that traditional texture vs digital !
I think a middle ground between her design and the og would have gone the hardest. I like how she added structure to the shape of the woman's face, but I wish it had been kept with as little detail.
Agreed! I do question if that was fully OPs intention, though as to _me_ it almost didnt seem stylized enough for that to be the intentional vibe. Also, because they submitted their art to be "fixed" by her, I think it is fair to assume they would want to go a bit more realistic than what they had? But yeah, the vibes of that piece were already very nice :'D
Thank you so much for touching up my work! I love the way you pushed my wicked witch character with the silhouette and shape exaggerations😊 Also very excited for the upcoming Japan trip
This is the perfect type of critique. You are not being rude or mean, you are very kind and giving great advice from your expertise! Love watching these vids :D
Imagine the other way around. A man sayin she shouldn’t have such a big chest at that age. Everyone is individual. I don’t like those comparisons but here it kinda fits…
Yeah I actually don't agree with her here. I've seen guys with wispy thin hair who are starting to bald in their early 20s and I thought that was maybe what the artist was going for in that piece. Adding all the extra hair was unnecessary imo.
@@giftofthewild6665 the guy looks like he's bolding. If it was intentional, I'm sure the original author wouldn't be upset over this correction, and would only take into consideration other tips. However, if the character is not supposed to be balding, then it's a valid critique. I once met a young artist who made a fanart of someone else's OC and made her entirely bold just because they didn't know how to draw hair. Nothing wrong with bold women, sure, but if you're making all your characters bold or balding just because you can't draw hair, then it's a skill issue you should strive to fix
Also it could just be big forehead. I imagine someone could submit their self portrait and she would say it's wrong coz they don't have conventionally pretty features lol
Same. On its own, it's really good, but as I say to myself and other artists, we're only as good as we allow ourselves to be because we can always improve on "perfection." (No such thing, as I say)
nah, I think you did a very good, respectful change is the last one! it still has the same feel and style, but its pushed much more. If I were the artist, I would love that.
This series is so so helpful! As an intermediate artist I still have much to learn fundamentally and technique wise an the way you go in and not only adjust the drawing it’s clear you’re sharing helpful knowledge on top of it ☺️ thank you
I love these videos! Even though it is not my art, it helps me think differently while I'm drawing, I mostly absorb more of the character design tips, because that's what I'm really focusing on improving right know, but it's really nice to see anatomy tips as well. I enjoy a lot watching these videos and it made me happy that this one is longer! Thanks for sharing your knowledge :)
I looove these videos but I feel like most of the anatomical corrections you give only apply to conventionally pretty and skinny characters I would love to see a video focused on anatomical corrections or tips for different body types more on the realistic side rather than cartoon style. Anyways love the video❤❤❤
What part exactly of the tips you think applies to conventionally attractive or skinny characters? It was literally advice on lighting, contrast, composition/c. Design and basic anatomy. You can apply it to every face and every body. Just because the piece looks better than before, it doesnt mean it's conventionally attractive
@@michaillazarou when she corrects the "anatomy" of the characters. I'm not referring to the more cartoon stylized correction I'm referring to when she corrects the "anatomy" of a realistic portrait or illustration.
@@claudiaamengualmateo6989 i’m sorry, i get what you’re trying to say, but can i have a specific example from the video? like a comment she makes or a specific art piece you think was anatomically fine before
I dont even draw but your videos are just so nice, you give great specific advice which are very clear to understand and make perfect sense, thank you!!
12:56, my brother in christ, I'm 19 and that guy in the drawing (before you fixed the hairline) has a way better hairline than I do 😭. My forehead is the size of France, omg
not so sure how i feel about the last one, but i really liked the others!! its insane how much of a difference lighting makes to the overall piece, especially for the second one!! i found it very interesting how you added purple tones into the grey skin, normally i use purple for shading but you used it for the skin tones itself, i might have to try that!
12:54 as someone with a big friggin forehead, this hurt my soul lol Noo jk, the video was amazing!! I think i learned something, ans as someone that doesnt draw that much its really cool to learn about lighting/anatomy once in a while And besides that, i just really love "fixing art videos"
I love how she doesn't "correct"(Is that how you tell it? Sorry, english is not my first languaje.) the art style of the person like how mostly Art teacher's would do. She just show how she would do the details of the art, and not the entire piece. Its honestly so lovely.❤
Hey Jackie! Love your content. I saw your Japan mentoring trip a few days ago and I'm a young artist going into the design/art business in just one year. Unfortunately it was not fitting for me to join this year, but if you're doing it in the future I'd love to go! Are you planning to do any more of these trips in the future?
love the first one but i’m sad you got rid of her tummy and not perky boobs, feels like a projection of your body image ideals and i think you could have achieved a posture adjustment without doing that
this is the first video of hers ive seen and i love her aproach but does she ever just fix the art techniques without making the character more conventionally attractive ?:)
Hey, is there any way for me to submit some if my art for you to critique? I need better advice because im still getting used to drawing electronically, and incould really use some guidance on some techniques, and such.
In the last drawing, I don't think the upper lip was a lip at all. I think her mouth was agape in shock that there was a frog on her head. Either way, other than that, you def improved it.
I also drew an art and how can I submit my art so you can fix it, I also need guidance, I am looking forward to learn and improv my skills. Please respond it’s my dream.
Personally I like the 2nd one you worked on, though it’s a bit too light. Just seemed the original was based at night. The problem I have the most is that you change the vibes on the first and third. Like the angle on the lady loses the passion, instead of her head thrown up and to the side, she is then just in side profile, and changing the physique that can be found in the world to the more standard comic boy physique. Beautiful edit on the guy in the red shirt but you really seem to prefer western standards. lol the way you got the witch and so ran with her 😂 what if she was more formal? What if she liked more simple designs? lol more like they’re distant cousins with the original, completely different series in different styles 😂 awesome witch but first one belonged in samurai jack and the other in a much more modern series. Fun though. The last was cool thought again different styles completely 😅
What patreon subscription do we need to have our art evaluated? I really want to see my art on one of these but I don’t have enough money for the 70$ subscription…
I'm getting discord to send you a art piece, and once you see it it's meant to have no eyes and nose, I've been an artist since I was 2 or 3 now I am 10 Sad edit: discord won't work even with my fake age😢
I'm getting discord to send you a art piece, and once you see it it's meant to have no eyes and nose, I've been an artist since I was 2 or 3 now I am 10
I think it's funny how in the last piece you touched up everything- except the frog
all hail the immortal frog who escaped Jackies clutches/j
the frog had no notes
Hes perfect
The frog is a masterpiece
Why fix what’s already perfect?
The frog is perfect the way he is
I like your approach to critique. I like that you say “this is how I would do it” and “this is how I envision it” you don’t tell someone that that’s how it should be done, just how you would approach it, and how it reads to you. Kind of just running with the blueprint they gave you and expanding on it in a technical way.
Exactly! I’ve seen so much people “fixing” art by just redrawing it and being like: “THIS IS HOW IT SHOULD BE DONE, THERE, IT LOOKS ACTUALLY GOOD NOW. IT WAS UGLY BEFORE!” And that’s not fixing or being a good critic. I love the way she actually teaches about anatomy while still staying in the same style as the original creator!❤
Cant wait for jackie to constructively and kindly shred people’s art
Caseoh spitting facts lol
Ok but like W PFP‼️‼️‼️‼️
thank you so much jackie thats my art ! 😭 i also used a canvas texture png and put it on a multiply layer to give it that traditional texture vs digital !
Thank uuu!
I loved your drawing! Was so beautiful ❤
@@JackieDroujko😊
I really liked the jazz drawing before, the lack of structure to me was really illustrative of how jazz feels to me ✨
I think a middle ground between her design and the og would have gone the hardest. I like how she added structure to the shape of the woman's face, but I wish it had been kept with as little detail.
I mean that's how art is. All subjective. She's bringing it more towards her style and towards what she likes more.
Agreed! I do question if that was fully OPs intention, though as to _me_ it almost didnt seem stylized enough for that to be the intentional vibe. Also, because they submitted their art to be "fixed" by her, I think it is fair to assume they would want to go a bit more realistic than what they had? But yeah, the vibes of that piece were already very nice :'D
Thank you so much for touching up my work! I love the way you pushed my wicked witch character with the silhouette and shape exaggerations😊 Also very excited for the upcoming Japan trip
12:56 [crying as someone who has hairloss issues even before they hit 30s]
Yeah I’m 24 and I have really bad balding because of genetics but oh well
I'm 20 and my hairline is wayyy worse than the drawing
same
like, wtf, plenty of people start balding in high school - ya don't have to flex your good hairline this hard, not everyone's as privileged
lmaooo same tho same and im a teenage girl bro 😭
To be fair she said she fixed it because he deserved it which means you deserve to not be losing your hair either
Ii love how the whole video was less like "here's how can i fix your art" and more like "how would i do this art according to my knowledge"
This is the perfect type of critique. You are not being rude or mean, you are very kind and giving great advice from your expertise! Love watching these vids :D
hey some of us are balding and that's okay
"he shouldn't be this bald at this age" 😞
Imagine the other way around. A man sayin she shouldn’t have such a big chest at that age.
Everyone is individual.
I don’t like those comparisons but here it kinda fits…
Yeah I actually don't agree with her here. I've seen guys with wispy thin hair who are starting to bald in their early 20s and I thought that was maybe what the artist was going for in that piece. Adding all the extra hair was unnecessary imo.
@@giftofthewild6665 the guy looks like he's bolding. If it was intentional, I'm sure the original author wouldn't be upset over this correction, and would only take into consideration other tips. However, if the character is not supposed to be balding, then it's a valid critique. I once met a young artist who made a fanart of someone else's OC and made her entirely bold just because they didn't know how to draw hair. Nothing wrong with bold women, sure, but if you're making all your characters bold or balding just because you can't draw hair, then it's a skill issue you should strive to fix
Also it could just be big forehead.
I imagine someone could submit their self portrait and she would say it's wrong coz they don't have conventionally pretty features lol
@@PersonOnTheInternetz Yeahhh that’s not a good comparison. Children should not be drawn with enlarged chests anyways. I get your point though!
I LOVE your input on the witch design ❤ such a great example on how to push the design for storytelling.
19:03 We can really tell that your strengths are in cartoony character deigns here lmaoo
I think im in love with jerryblossom’s piece; I’d love to see their updated/improved version!
Same. On its own, it's really good, but as I say to myself and other artists, we're only as good as we allow ourselves to be because we can always improve on "perfection." (No such thing, as I say)
nah, I think you did a very good, respectful change is the last one! it still has the same feel and style, but its pushed much more. If I were the artist, I would love that.
This series is so so helpful! As an intermediate artist I still have much to learn fundamentally and technique wise an the way you go in and not only adjust the drawing it’s clear you’re sharing helpful knowledge on top of it ☺️ thank you
It's amazing how you can always come up with so many ideas and ways to improve that I never would've thought of 🥰
Me trying to shrink my neck size to have a more masculine neck to shoulder ratio
REALLLLLLL
I love these videos! Even though it is not my art, it helps me think differently while I'm drawing, I mostly absorb more of the character design tips, because that's what I'm really focusing on improving right know, but it's really nice to see anatomy tips as well. I enjoy a lot watching these videos and it made me happy that this one is longer! Thanks for sharing your knowledge :)
Its amazing how fixing small detail's make such a big difference
I looove these videos but I feel like most of the anatomical corrections you give only apply to conventionally pretty and skinny characters I would love to see a video focused on anatomical corrections or tips for different body types more on the realistic side rather than cartoon style. Anyways love the video❤❤❤
i was thinking the same!!!
What part exactly of the tips you think applies to conventionally attractive or skinny characters? It was literally advice on lighting, contrast, composition/c. Design and basic anatomy. You can apply it to every face and every body. Just because the piece looks better than before, it doesnt mean it's conventionally attractive
@@michaillazarou when she corrects the "anatomy" of the characters. I'm not referring to the more cartoon stylized correction I'm referring to when she corrects the "anatomy" of a realistic portrait or illustration.
This is such a stupid comment.
@@claudiaamengualmateo6989 i’m sorry, i get what you’re trying to say, but can i have a specific example from the video? like a comment she makes or a specific art piece you think was anatomically fine before
I dont even draw but your videos are just so nice, you give great specific advice which are very clear to understand and make perfect sense, thank you!!
15:55 was my favorite to watch, wow 😭🩷
The third one is so gorgeous, I would definitely put that up in my home
you've really taught me to really enjoy drawing characters and explore shapes in designs! thank you for your content
4:00 why you gotta hate on my low hanging boobs 😕
I LOVE THIS!!! Such a relaxing and educational video! Super fun and playful
The second piece and the final piece had particularly great improvements!
i was waiting for you to fix that first girl's skull but it's okay. another banger by jackie droujko
Balding?? I've had that high hairline since I was a kid lmao 😭
This makes me feel like I’m in art school again in a super positive way! I hated draw-overs then but I looove them now! Thanks for the nostalgia!! 🤩💖
justice for big foreheads lmao 🥲
My forehead is huge too, I’m united with this drawing
I'm so mad i can't join the group tour 😭 That sounds soooo much fun! So much you could learn and see 😍
12:56, my brother in christ, I'm 19 and that guy in the drawing (before you fixed the hairline) has a way better hairline than I do 😭. My forehead is the size of France, omg
Your videos are the best. Thankyou for the motivation!
I can tell that your eyes are more experienced than mine by how shocked I am when you do the before and after😂
you snapped on that witch redesign wow!
not so sure how i feel about the last one, but i really liked the others!! its insane how much of a difference lighting makes to the overall piece, especially for the second one!! i found it very interesting how you added purple tones into the grey skin, normally i use purple for shading but you used it for the skin tones itself, i might have to try that!
I think the last one didn't have a big upper lip but it was like an open mouth haha, still cool vid!
It's always great to see someone really talented at their craft. I enjoyed watching you improve those art pieces!
I love the adrenaline I got when the pace picked up as she was editing the witch
12:54 as someone with a big friggin forehead, this hurt my soul lol
Noo jk, the video was amazing!! I think i learned something, ans as someone that doesnt draw that much its really cool to learn about lighting/anatomy once in a while
And besides that, i just really love "fixing art videos"
the roast in the thumbnail is crazy omg 💀
Great video btw
My favorite series please continue to do more!
YES ANOTHER VID LIKE THIS
you’re my favorite artist!
Yesss, been waiting for this! I wish one day I'd be brave enough to submit my art 😂 but nice work! Your videos are always fantastic!
I love how she doesn't "correct"(Is that how you tell it? Sorry, english is not my first languaje.) the art style of the person like how mostly Art teacher's would do. She just show how she would do the details of the art, and not the entire piece. Its honestly so lovely.❤
You are so amazing, how easy it is for you to add a 💫zest💫 to each of these works! Love it so much!
I like your videos so much you are really good at teaching
i love your microphone 😭😭😭
I can barely make stick people look good but I love these videos so much!
Make this a series!! 🙏🏽💖
Hey Jackie! Love your content. I saw your Japan mentoring trip a few days ago and I'm a young artist going into the design/art business in just one year. Unfortunately it was not fitting for me to join this year, but if you're doing it in the future I'd love to go! Are you planning to do any more of these trips in the future?
that's great to hear! not sure if i'll do them again, i suggest keeping an eye on my instagram stories, that's where i always make accouncements!
@@JackieDroujko oh okay! I already follow you on there hehe. Thank you for responding!
I literally love these videos….. please don’t stop
love the first one but i’m sad you got rid of her tummy and not perky boobs, feels like a projection of your body image ideals and i think you could have achieved a posture adjustment without doing that
She didn't change the stomach just the way she was posing. Also she’s helping beginner artists, begging er artists make these mistakes
With anatomy
I don't draw, I don't illustrate and I barely know how to hold a pen, but as a random video that popped up in my recommended section, I love it!
Your art is incredible! 👏
this is the first video of hers ive seen and i love her aproach but does she ever just fix the art techniques without making the character more conventionally attractive ?:)
This is the first time I want to see the process not the results (right after spray arts)
Someone needs to send this woman a piece of art that's so good it has nothing to be fixed in to see her reaction
HOBIE MIC HOBIE MIC HOBIE MIC AAAAAA
Hey, is there any way for me to submit some if my art for you to critique? I need better advice because im still getting used to drawing electronically, and incould really use some guidance on some techniques, and such.
I need that jazz painting as a wallpaper. Is there any place i could find it without the face cam?
Highlighting the eyes was unwise
omg you saved my monday when i saw this videooooo
In the last drawing, I don't think the upper lip was a lip at all. I think her mouth was agape in shock that there was a frog on her head. Either way, other than that, you def improved it.
I also drew an art and how can I submit my art so you can fix it, I also need guidance, I am looking forward to learn and improv my skills. Please respond it’s my dream.
I like the hat, but the purple feels like a little too much color imo. A lighter gray gradient might look better.
I love how she doesn’t do the “drawing the piece in my own style instead and call it fixed” but genuinely critiques it on a respectful manner
I WANNA GO TO JAPAN WITH YOUUUU AND THE GROUPPP BUT IM JUST 16 😭😭😭😭
The second draw was an INCREDIBLE change!!!
How would one submit art to her? Would it have to be through discord? If so what the discord?
You get her server through Patreon but it’s really expensive
@@Valerie_8038 thank you !
Yall how do I join the discord pls tell me
Is this in the 4th fixing ur art video?
Personally I like the 2nd one you worked on, though it’s a bit too light. Just seemed the original was based at night. The problem I have the most is that you change the vibes on the first and third. Like the angle on the lady loses the passion, instead of her head thrown up and to the side, she is then just in side profile, and changing the physique that can be found in the world to the more standard comic boy physique. Beautiful edit on the guy in the red shirt but you really seem to prefer western standards. lol the way you got the witch and so ran with her 😂 what if she was more formal? What if she liked more simple designs? lol more like they’re distant cousins with the original, completely different series in different styles 😂 awesome witch but first one belonged in samurai jack and the other in a much more modern series. Fun though. The last was cool thought again different styles completely 😅
A person cant be balding without being exposed
Very Nice ✍️
Love!
Another great round of constructive criticism :)
Mother dearest is back to give her constructive criticism 😭😭
love your smile
it's fabulous...
Does M4ngo have a social? It’s not linked in your bio
I love love love you🤍🤍🤍🤗
What patreon subscription do we need to have our art evaluated? I really want to see my art on one of these but I don’t have enough money for the 70$ subscription…
20 SECONDS AGO IS CRAZY
How do i get get you to see my art and it be featured in this type video like where are they submitted
You get access to my discord after subscribing to my patreon, then you can submit!
woooo!!!
How do you submit art to this?
Is your discord a petreon thing?
My hairline at age 16: 🏃♂️💨
Brand new drinking game: Every time she says "a little bit" take a sip. (You will die)
Guys does someone knows how to join her discord server?
Hey Jackie, I wanted to know how can I send my artwork to you for maybe a critics if you wanted :)
You can send it through my patreon discord!
@JackieDroujko so it mean I should be a patreon member?
Wh9s the og artist?
I would submit an art but I don’t have discord lol
I'm getting discord to send you a art piece, and once you see it it's meant to have no eyes and nose, I've been an artist since I was 2 or 3 now I am 10
Sad edit: discord won't work even with my fake age😢
looooove
Cute!
I'm getting discord to send you a art piece, and once you see it it's meant to have no eyes and nose, I've been an artist since I was 2 or 3 now I am 10
I would like to join your Discord and submit my art but I can't find the link
You have to join my patreon to join the discord!
@@JackieDroujko okay, I'll be sure to do that when I can afford it 😁