HELLO CHIPA CHUPAS!! Some things were changed to fit the story more, so -- if you'd like to see the cut scenes watch: th-cam.com/video/RRjgIjv1oW0/w-d-xo.html
I love when animators do this kinda stuff like with 600 strikes I personally imagined it as odysseus's men as ghosts coming from the depths and attacking poseidon then I saw a animator did that exact thing
@@SkyRaccthat isn't to unbelievable, it's believed in Greek Mythology that those that die at sea have their souls lost ing the River Styx, so they basically can't fully move on.
The lighting is everything not many pay attention to that element. She so damn pretty. The way she panicked when ody took the challenge without any hesitation then she realized he's here somewhere. Antinuous looks cool too.
Oh shit, so Odysseus was there to witness her issue the challenge, which to me is a good touch. Also, she saw him in the crowd and recognized him immediately, but he ran away and hid because he still needed the element of surprise on the suitors and can't have his presence revealed yet? That's fucking awesome! What about all the emotions she felt when she found that cloak? Or how he felt when he had to hide when all he'd want to do is be with her at that moment? And that's just the storytelling aspect of this animatic. Love the lighting, the expressions, the backgrounds, the character designs, just all of the above honestly. AND HOW WERE YOU THAT FAST AND THAT GOOD?
Yeah in the original story he was still disguised, but the only person who recognized him was his dog in the story and he won the challenge before killing all the suitors
Okay okay there’s some things I wanna give special attention to. I first think your animation and choreography is getting better. I liked how pen danced when announcing the challenge. Antinous looks-wow-not sure I’ll be able to handle hold them down lol. The shot of the axes was one of the smoothest animatic I’ve ever seen. Also her face when she thinks she spotted ody. And ody being weirdly attractive to me when he’s perching in the rafters (?). 10/10
I love how you included elements of the original story in this animatic as well. Like how Ody was there when she issued the challenge, and then she saw him in the crowd and kinda recognized him. I love how you draw her eyes as well. Very shrewd but also kind.
You made her rightfully gorgeous and you clearly made her more matured from the beginning where you had her having the memory of Ody!!! Gods I love that you have her lower canines that protruded during her pondering, really showing that her analyzation is her weapon and ugh!!! Having her sense and glance Ody then chasing after him only to find his cloak?! Cruel and gorgeous genius!!! It gave her reassurance but also the ability to get her head back in the game! I'm obsessed!!!
Penelope is so beautiful. The introduction is so sad because it really shows the longing. She's dreaming of him like he's dreaming of her. Even though her dreams are relatively more positive and hopeful than his.
I LOVE how she spun around when she sang "And rule with me as his king." It's so beautifully animated I don't know how you do it. PS : The 12 axes popping up was like the cleanest animation EVER EDIT 1 : Can we just appreciate Antonius's design EDIT 2 : Also I LOVE how you interpreted the "shoot through twelve axes cleanly." I always just imagined them shooting through the handles like Merida did with the arrow shooting through the other arrow. Also I love Penelope's dress. HONESTLY, I JUST LOVE THE ENTIRE THING! IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL!!! ❤❤❤
3:03 something about him just looming over everyone watching everything go down is very funny, and Penelope's expressions are so well done! It's amazing!
This is absolutely gorgeous. My jaw literally dropped when I saw how beautiful and ethereal you drew Penelope, plus the lighting?? So incredible. Definitely my favorite Penelope design ever. Great work 🫶🫶
Omg!! this is so good!! ( I am internally screaming!!!! Because of how much I like it!!) The way the new parts of the animatic is woven in to the rest to fit the flow in a way I could not imagine, but the impact it has through storytelling impress me/very fun to try to analyse, and breathtakingly beutyfull! Like the first animatic was already amazing, so to see the way this one is diffrent but still just as true to the song
The first scene of her and Ody being lovely dovey only to wake up to him hot being there hurts damn so much. Penelope is so pretty, the lighting really highlights her perfectly. The backgrounds are cool as well :D ALSO THAT TWELVE AXEZ PART WAS INCREDIBLE OMG, THE TRANSITIONS AHH. ALSO I love how the arrows look like they're being shot at Penelope, considering her feelings and the suitor's feelings towards her (she'd rather die than marry any on them and the suitors only see her as a prize to be won). AND HER LIGHTING UP WHEN SHE SAW ODY AHHH. Also the gold lines on her back was gorgeous.
your art is so beautiful. i love the colors and glowing lighting. i also love how you illustrated Penelope's emotions and how she noticed/chased Odysseus in the crowd. It's also great how you showed Antinious shoving his way in front of Penelope
I love how even is such a crowded room she was able to pick out Odysseus even with how much he’s changed. It’s such a nice touch. Plus, the colors and lighting make it such a masterpiece!
Your lighting is absolutely fantastic! The way the purple moonlight hit Penelope, and then it shifts to a warm afternoon glow? MAGNIFIQUE. Utterly striking and emotive. And how fast and fierce you show Penelope as? OOH. That's the Spartan that Odysseus fell in love with. Brilliant!
This is absolutely gorgeous, from the colours and lighting to Penelope’s design and the little details in light purple like her earrings. Not to mention the camera work especially with the axes at 1:57. And then there’s Odysseus seemingly sitting above them and looking down at everyone. I don’t have the words to describe how much I love this animatic. (Also, thanks for the subtitles at the bottom)
IM ON A DIET BUT YOU KEEP FUCKING COOKING 💯💯💯💯 as always this is incredible, and I LOVE the shot of Ody up in the rafters!! The pose is awesome and also totally makes sense for him hunting down the suitors in the darkness
I love the detail of Penelope sitting behind the axes because then even if any of the suitors COULD string the bow and make a clean shot through the axes (very unlikely already because of the strength needed to not only string the bow but to draw it as well) they would be hitting her
AGHH I love your take where Penelope actually notices Odysseus and chases after him, only to his his cloak, proving his husband is here, her prayers have been answers but yet she remains waiting 😭😭😿‼️ HUHUHU I LOVE THISSS
WOOO PENELOPE LOOKS SO BEAUTIFUL AND FIERCE!! I adore the use of lighting, and how highlights are used!! It makes this all look so stunning-I especially love 1:55 and 2:03 for the axes and twirl. And then Penelope chasing after Odysseus!! Finding his cloak!! And him in the ceiling watching her!!! AHHHH!!! 💕💕💕💕
I don't know if anyone is going to be able to top u as my favorite. And that's including some of my favorite animators like gwendy who used the demo. I think your art syle was on point for this song. And you're Penelope is my favorite, out of even Jays vision. So maybe I'm biased on this?❤
HELLO CHIPA CHUPAS!! Some things were changed to fit the story more, so --
if you'd like to see the cut scenes watch: th-cam.com/video/RRjgIjv1oW0/w-d-xo.html
HECK YEAH A FULL BEAUTIFUL ANIMATION *AND* BONUS SCENES!! WE’RE EATING GOOD TONIGHT!!
you and your color choices >>>> i don’t think anyone in the world gets color like you get color
Odysseus is hiding in the shadows like, "That's my Queen..."
Needed to lock in and not yet fold because of the suitors
The idea that she noticed him in the crowd and her hopes surged (also aligning with the music swelling) gave me chills.
It also referenced the actual story of the odyssey where ody hid himself as an old man with help from athena
I love when animators do this kinda stuff like with 600 strikes I personally imagined it as odysseus's men as ghosts coming from the depths and attacking poseidon then I saw a animator did that exact thing
@@SkyRaccthat isn't to unbelievable, it's believed in Greek Mythology that those that die at sea have their souls lost ing the River Styx, so they basically can't fully move on.
@@michaelgillespie9112 exactly it's such a cool way to see it come to live in an animatic.
Ody over there planning a massacre
He’s a little quirky when his wife chases him thru packs of suitors
The lighting is everything not many pay attention to that element. She so damn pretty. The way she panicked when ody took the challenge without any hesitation then she realized he's here somewhere. Antinuous looks cool too.
OOOOH THE MAID WHO BETRAYED HER BY TELLING THE SUITORS WHAT PENELOPE WAS DOING AT NIGHT!!! WHAT A NICE DETAIL
YAHHH!!
where?
0:30
I knew it!
Not me thinking that was odysseus 😅
Oh shit, so Odysseus was there to witness her issue the challenge, which to me is a good touch. Also, she saw him in the crowd and recognized him immediately, but he ran away and hid because he still needed the element of surprise on the suitors and can't have his presence revealed yet? That's fucking awesome! What about all the emotions she felt when she found that cloak? Or how he felt when he had to hide when all he'd want to do is be with her at that moment?
And that's just the storytelling aspect of this animatic. Love the lighting, the expressions, the backgrounds, the character designs, just all of the above honestly.
AND HOW WERE YOU THAT FAST AND THAT GOOD?
OHMYGOD thank you! I treasure comments like these
@@sharkieepuff
Yeah in the original story he was still disguised, but the only person who recognized him was his dog in the story and he won the challenge before killing all the suitors
@@protege6383the dog, the nanny, and probably Peneloppe. Also Telemachus was in the loop
The fandom be BUILT DIFFERENT 🔥🔥🗣🔥🔥🗣🔥🗣🗣
THAT ADDITION OF HER FINDING HIS CLOAK OMG YES YES YES THIS IS PERFECTION
Penelope omgs😢😢😢
I just imagine Aphrodite just being there in the background with gods and goddesses playing instruments for this mood-
After what she was saying about Odysseus, she doesn’t deserve to play it. Though maybe she changed her opinion after Athena won the god games
I literally started sobbing when she started chasing after him, omg I'm not stable enough for this
Okay okay there’s some things I wanna give special attention to. I first think your animation and choreography is getting better. I liked how pen danced when announcing the challenge. Antinous looks-wow-not sure I’ll be able to handle hold them down lol. The shot of the axes was one of the smoothest animatic I’ve ever seen. Also her face when she thinks she spotted ody. And ody being weirdly attractive to me when he’s perching in the rafters (?). 10/10
LMAO the last part! Also thank you, when you look at your art for so long, you start to wonder if you're even improving. So that's nice to hear!!
@@sharkieepuffoh I FEEL that! I’m the biggest hater of my art. Keep going you got some real talent❤
When I saw that this was fully colored, I gasped and celebrated in victory.
AHH!! Sharkie you did amazing here!! Love your extra lighting details, always!!
Not Odysseus stalking her from the ceiling 💀
"sorry bbg i'll talk to u later THESE GUYS GOTTA DIE."
@sharkieepuff JSKJHAJS
He is making sure that she is out of the way so he can focus on his prey
I love how you included elements of the original story in this animatic as well. Like how Ody was there when she issued the challenge, and then she saw him in the crowd and kinda recognized him. I love how you draw her eyes as well. Very shrewd but also kind.
This is one of the prettiest animatics of "The Challenge" I've seen.
AHHHH THIS IS SO GOOD, I LOVE THAT SHE RECOGNIZES ODYSSEUS ON VIBES. CLEVER QUEEN
GAHH YOU ARE A LIGHTING GOD THIS IS BEUATIFULL
You made her rightfully gorgeous and you clearly made her more matured from the beginning where you had her having the memory of Ody!!!
Gods I love that you have her lower canines that protruded during her pondering, really showing that her analyzation is her weapon and ugh!!!
Having her sense and glance Ody then chasing after him only to find his cloak?! Cruel and gorgeous genius!!!
It gave her reassurance but also the ability to get her head back in the game!
I'm obsessed!!!
Penelope is so beautiful. The introduction is so sad because it really shows the longing. She's dreaming of him like he's dreaming of her. Even though her dreams are relatively more positive and hopeful than his.
I LOVE how she spun around when she sang "And rule with me as his king."
It's so beautifully animated I don't know how you do it.
PS :
The 12 axes popping up was like the cleanest animation EVER
EDIT 1 : Can we just appreciate Antonius's design
EDIT 2 : Also I LOVE how you interpreted the "shoot through twelve axes cleanly." I always just imagined them shooting through the handles like Merida did with the arrow shooting through the other arrow. Also I love Penelope's dress. HONESTLY, I JUST LOVE THE ENTIRE THING! IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL!!!
❤❤❤
3:03 something about him just looming over everyone watching everything go down is very funny, and Penelope's expressions are so well done! It's amazing!
I love Penelope and purple being her color in most animatics Ive seen for the most lart🫶🏾✨
This is absolutely gorgeous. My jaw literally dropped when I saw how beautiful and ethereal you drew Penelope, plus the lighting?? So incredible. Definitely my favorite Penelope design ever. Great work 🫶🫶
I think this might be my new favorite also that bit at the end where she's chasing after him
Oh I'm sorry who told you that you were allowed to make me cry? Her running after Ody was what did it for me 😭😭😭😭
3:03 is so creepy
𝓘𝓽 𝔀𝓪𝓼 𝓱𝓸𝓽
Just Penelope’s gremlin of a husband planning a massacre while hiding under a table lol
Yess, Ody looks like some kind of shadow creature "waiting" for his time to strike.
Gorgeous!! I love the arrows flying at Penelope - that’s how I imagined those lines too!! Thank you!
On a completely different note-
I LOVE YOUR PENELOPE DESIGN SO PRETTYYYY
THANK U ;D
@@sharkieepuff ofc
Omg!! this is so good!! ( I am internally screaming!!!! Because of how much I like it!!) The way the new parts of the animatic is woven in to the rest to fit the flow in a way I could not imagine, but the impact it has through storytelling impress me/very fun to try to analyse, and breathtakingly beutyfull! Like the first animatic was already amazing, so to see the way this one is diffrent but still just as true to the song
oh my gosh thank you! I love it when people analyze my work. this is a beautiful comment!
The colors, the smooth animation, the backgrounds, it's beautiful❤ this is one of the best animatics I've seen yet 👏 ✨️
0:53 omg the background art is BEAUTIFUL
The first scene of her and Ody being lovely dovey only to wake up to him hot being there hurts damn so much.
Penelope is so pretty, the lighting really highlights her perfectly. The backgrounds are cool as well :D
ALSO THAT TWELVE AXEZ PART WAS INCREDIBLE OMG, THE TRANSITIONS AHH. ALSO I love how the arrows look like they're being shot at Penelope, considering her feelings and the suitor's feelings towards her (she'd rather die than marry any on them and the suitors only see her as a prize to be won). AND HER LIGHTING UP WHEN SHE SAW ODY AHHH.
Also the gold lines on her back was gorgeous.
THANK UUUU
Oh goodness! I love this. The colors are so vibrant and pretty and I love the lighting!
Incredibly fairy dad approved!
*squeals in excitement and joy*
your art is so beautiful. i love the colors and glowing lighting. i also love how you illustrated Penelope's emotions and how she noticed/chased Odysseus in the crowd. It's also great how you showed Antinious shoving his way in front of Penelope
This is, by far, one of the most ethereal and elegant animatics I have ever seen in the EPIC community.
It suits Penelope so well! I love it!
AH THE GLOW THE BLUE ITS SO BEAUTIFUL 😭 A BEAUTIFUL ANIMATIC 🩷👏🏽
I love it!!! Pure diamond so vibrant so shiny so magnificent ate nd left no crumbs love it!!
Beautiful animatic, the colors and everything are just wow keep up the good work 👍🏻
I love how even is such a crowded room she was able to pick out Odysseus even with how much he’s changed. It’s such a nice touch. Plus, the colors and lighting make it such a masterpiece!
you are so fast
this looks beautiful as always
I love how penelope sees odysseus and chases after him
Your lighting is absolutely fantastic! The way the purple moonlight hit Penelope, and then it shifts to a warm afternoon glow? MAGNIFIQUE. Utterly striking and emotive. And how fast and fierce you show Penelope as? OOH. That's the Spartan that Odysseus fell in love with. Brilliant!
Ody hiding in the beginning listen is such a good detail and the art and the axes is so peak
HELP THIS IS GENUINELY STUNNING!! THE ART IS AMAZING AND THE LIGHTING??? SHDYSUWT IT'S SO PRETTY
This is absolutely gorgeous, from the colours and lighting to Penelope’s design and the little details in light purple like her earrings. Not to mention the camera work especially with the axes at 1:57. And then there’s Odysseus seemingly sitting above them and looking down at everyone. I don’t have the words to describe how much I love this animatic. (Also, thanks for the subtitles at the bottom)
HOW DARE TH-cam HIDE THIS FROM ME
BUT SERIOUSLY IM SO HAPPY YOU MADE A FULL ONE! YOUR ART COMBINE WITH THE SONG IS PERFECT:DD
I mean this as an absolute compliment to both your artstyle/skills and character design: This Penelope gives me gender envy :3
I absolutely adore the colors in this one. It just feels so warm and portrays the emotions so well
This is BEAUTIFUL. The designs, the expressions, Penelope catching a glimpse of Ody and chasing after him, it was all incredible
I love penny also this is GORGEOUS
It’s so pretty well done 🎉 Love the design and the storyline, that Ody is almost there 😊
OMG the colours are so pretty. LOVE Penelope's design and her just catching a look at him as the beggar is a great detail.
The idea that Penelope saw him in the crowd ABSOLUTELY devastates me by the way this animatic is BEAUTIFUL
i love myth accurate details in animatics i love this dearly this is my favorite
This is so well done! Just all of the elements blending together!! You've matched it so well to the song, thank you!!!
Ody being chased by Penelope is so touching. She knew it was him. Can't wait for your next work. I bearly handled this.
The way you use light and motion for your animations is just so whimsical and toe curlingly good 😩
OMFG THIS IS MAJESTIC. THANK YOU FOR EXISTING AND BLESSING MY EYES 😻😳
IM ON A DIET BUT YOU KEEP FUCKING COOKING 💯💯💯💯 as always this is incredible, and I LOVE the shot of Ody up in the rafters!! The pose is awesome and also totally makes sense for him hunting down the suitors in the darkness
HER SEEING HIM
I absolutely love your use of color and highlights. As much as I love uncolored sketches, the colors just give everything so much life and emotion,
HOW IS THIS NOT MORE POPULAR?? THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AWESTRIKING
Probably the most beautiful animatic for this song!
UR SO FAST OMG AAA AND U ALWAYS MAKE THE BEST ANIMATICS LIKE THE LIGHTING AND EXPRESSIONS?? PENELOPE IS SO GORGEOUS TOO
This is amazing! The transitions are so smooth and the colours are perfect!!
THIS IS SO GOOD, OMG?!
This is possbily one of the most beautiful animatic I've seen
Sharkiee shall forever deliver the most eye burning beautiful animatics
I LOVE THE WAY YOU DRAW THEIR EYES ITS SO PERFECT
I love the detail of Penelope sitting behind the axes because then even if any of the suitors COULD string the bow and make a clean shot through the axes (very unlikely already because of the strength needed to not only string the bow but to draw it as well) they would be hitting her
OH MY GOSH EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS GORGEOUS! THE LIGHTING. THE CHARACTER DESIGN. THE COLORS! YOU DID AMAZING!❤
I just love your use of colors they are bright and i love it
Can't wait to see "Odysseus" made
Also, the way the artist makes eyes is so nice!
The way you play with colors are so 🔥!!!
I fucking love how you use colours and lighting in your animatics! Great work😊
that opening sequence was gorgeous
THIS IS STUNNING AHHH MY HEART💜💜💜💜
OMG THE ART? THE COLORS?! EVERYTHING IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
AGHH I love your take where Penelope actually notices Odysseus and chases after him, only to his his cloak, proving his husband is here, her prayers have been answers but yet she remains waiting 😭😭😿‼️ HUHUHU I LOVE THISSS
YESS! Tysm
Holy crap the quality! Why am I only just now finding you at the end of epic? This is amazing
THE COLOURS ARE EVERYTHING IT SETS THE MOOD SO WELL AAA THIS IS SO LOVELY OMG
TGE WAY U DRAW PENELOPE IS SO PRETTYI LOVE THIS ANIMATIC SM
This was super good!! Except I burst out laughing when he was just up in rafters it caught me off guard😆
this is.. beautiful.. i couldnt explain much but WOW..
Good god this community works insanely fast! You have done an amazing job and should be damn proud of yourself!
the colors are SOOO PRETTYYYYYYY ahhhhhhhh
WOOO PENELOPE LOOKS SO BEAUTIFUL AND FIERCE!! I adore the use of lighting, and how highlights are used!! It makes this all look so stunning-I especially love 1:55 and 2:03 for the axes and twirl. And then Penelope chasing after Odysseus!! Finding his cloak!! And him in the ceiling watching her!!! AHHHH!!! 💕💕💕💕
Damn- now THIS is the good stuff.. awesome work :)
Wowow another banger animatic! Absolutely adore your use of colour and lighting!
Awwww poor Penelope :( she misses her husband so much 💔😢 *hugs Penelope* you did amazing work on this I like the beginning of it ❤✨
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL OMG IM LITERALLY CRYING
I don't know if anyone is going to be able to top u as my favorite. And that's including some of my favorite animators like gwendy who used the demo.
I think your art syle was on point for this song. And you're Penelope is my favorite, out of even Jays vision. So maybe I'm biased on this?❤
this is so pretty >:D the lighting is super cool
God damn, this coloring is beautiful.
Him above them all was such a fun shot!
OMG PEN RUSHING TO ODY WHILE THEY MOVE THROUGH THE CROWD AUGHH
The reveal of the 12 axes was so beautifully animated.
THIS IS SO PRETTY OH MY GOODNESS
I love the colours😍😍
I think the most fun part about this song is looking forward to see where the animators are gonna put/hide Odysseus
wait wait 3:30 that is such an interesting detail😮
also, super beautiful art style