Its very refreshing to hear Necron Lore that is NOT word by word read from the Codex. Even most of the bigger Channels of 40k Lore are just reading the Texts from the Books, thats quite boring in my Opinion. Good Job m8 👍
Hrm. Tell you what. If you cut down on the "um," "err," "uhh," "yeah," and other such filler language. Be a bit more careful with the spacing between statements - as it is the flow of the information that you are giving gets horribly interrupted due to the random, long pauses. The last thing to watch for is smacking your lips. As a sound it destroys the flow. Those are the only issues, really, that you have in your videos. Really it boils down to a bit of proofreading of your script, and a small bit of editing. The average 20m video can take upwards of 10-15 hours to edit, and that's for someone that has been doing lore videos for almost 9 years. All of that said - Your video itself is tied together extremely well. You have a great voice for this sort of video, your video quality is great, and your image selection is excellent. You, also, seem to do a great job with editing. The only issues that I see that will keep you from popping off as a channel, and jumping up to 6 digit subscription numbers, is the flow of your voice work.
I figure once those are fixed, or it seems you're more comfortable, I'll pin the channel with the list of LoreTubers in a few subreddits and other groups. For now will wait, subscribe myself, and see if you stick around. No offense - just the reality. Most start up channels don't stick it out. Personally think you've a good thing going, but hey.
@@malavadofilms can't help it - that's the absolute worst habbit that people get into when speaking. It severely hurts the flow of speech, and unfortunately it makes many people unable to take an individual seriously as a source of information.
I would highly recommend writing out an actual script and reading it out loud a few times before recording. It currently sounde like you're speaking extemporaneously, which does not flow well in a recording. You pause and seem like you've lost your place or your train of thought here and there. Having a practiced script will help with this. Also, if you're chasing the algorithm, eliminate cursing in these early videos.
Got recommended this channel through the algorithm. Subscribed. Love the Necron lore, keep it going
Its very refreshing to hear Necron Lore that is NOT word by word read from the Codex.
Even most of the bigger Channels of 40k Lore are just reading the Texts from the Books, thats quite boring in my Opinion.
Good Job m8 👍
Not many lore videos on flayed ones, especially as they apply to tabletop. Keep going :)
What im hearing is "Throw the adeptus mechanicus and the iron hands at them" cuz in this case the flesh is weak
I would definitely watch a video about the war in heaven
Hrm. Tell you what. If you cut down on the "um," "err," "uhh," "yeah," and other such filler language. Be a bit more careful with the spacing between statements - as it is the flow of the information that you are giving gets horribly interrupted due to the random, long pauses. The last thing to watch for is smacking your lips. As a sound it destroys the flow.
Those are the only issues, really, that you have in your videos. Really it boils down to a bit of proofreading of your script, and a small bit of editing. The average 20m video can take upwards of 10-15 hours to edit, and that's for someone that has been doing lore videos for almost 9 years.
All of that said - Your video itself is tied together extremely well. You have a great voice for this sort of video, your video quality is great, and your image selection is excellent. You, also, seem to do a great job with editing. The only issues that I see that will keep you from popping off as a channel, and jumping up to 6 digit subscription numbers, is the flow of your voice work.
I figure once those are fixed, or it seems you're more comfortable, I'll pin the channel with the list of LoreTubers in a few subreddits and other groups. For now will wait, subscribe myself, and see if you stick around. No offense - just the reality. Most start up channels don't stick it out. Personally think you've a good thing going, but hey.
you ruined the video for me m8 wtf now I can't stop thinking about it
@@malavadofilms can't help it - that's the absolute worst habbit that people get into when speaking. It severely hurts the flow of speech, and unfortunately it makes many people unable to take an individual seriously as a source of information.
Nice Topic but i wish you had a little script prepared
Love me some Necron Lore.
I would highly recommend writing out an actual script and reading it out loud a few times before recording.
It currently sounde like you're speaking extemporaneously, which does not flow well in a recording. You pause and seem like you've lost your place or your train of thought here and there. Having a practiced script will help with this.
Also, if you're chasing the algorithm, eliminate cursing in these early videos.
DO A FLIP!